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Blend A - Bon Appetit S (TV Size ver)

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Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
不能再咕咕
Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

Easy
01:12:511 (4,5,1) - 这flow太直了打起来不太舒服 最好做一点弧度
01:16:458 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这一段spacing不对 突然从0.7x变成0.8x了

Normal
00:32:247 (1) - 这里开始的一段小间距在低难度可以接受的吗？我不太确定哦 最好还是保持1.0x吧 sv那么高离那么近 新手绝对疯狂打早

Hard
01:01:359 (4) - 这里应该加个circle做三连跟vocal 和00:48:629 (2,3,4) - 保持一致
01:12:116 (2) - 这个拉长成一个3/4 slider节奏会比较好吧

Insane
OD7吧 这个diff的难度OD8有点夸张
00:53:070 (2) - 放在00:53:168 (3) - 的下面或者右下？现在这位置打起来感觉挺不自然的
01:05:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不太喜欢这里的表现方式 感觉就类似Hard那样4个1/2 slider小间距能体现出音乐停顿会比较好 比如4个滑条首尾相接就挺好的
01:11:195 (4) - 这突然一个1/6折返感觉很坑 瞬间弹断combo 01:10:932 (3,4) - 间距再小一点吧

Expert
00:44:879 (1) - 这头上怎么想都漏了个音效 加个soft finish吧 其他diff一起
00:53:168 (3,1) - 这两个滑条感觉视觉间距太小了 不太好看 考虑稍微离远一点
00:59:879 (1) - 这个头上和前面一样也来个whistle吧 或者加个soft finish应该也挺好听的 改的话把其他diff也改了
01:05:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 同Insane

美丽 call me back
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Shima Rin
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Shima Rin
我看了一下 好几个set

Karen should be the first to rank! Plz ganbare! ;)
_handholding
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Joined April 2014
_handholding

Expert
  1. 00:11:326 (3) - This style of slider doesn't fit in fit the rest of the map structurall . I recommend to make it a normal curve instead as it would also compliment 00:11:524 (4) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9414145
  2. 00:25:438 (3) - what do you think about styling your section a bit like this? I feel like it helps with reading and looks slightly more pleasing aesthetically https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9414173 ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9414173
    what do you think?
  3. 00:33:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can't you use a different rhythm here? 00:32:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nicely fit the vocals, so using a different rhythm for 00:33:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to show some contrast would better reflect the song imho
  4. 00:32:247 - Also I think soft whistle for this section fit the sliders nicely
  5. Some streams in the chorus such as 01:00:175 (2,3,4,5,6,1) and 01:12:708 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - feel like they should be spaced more like 00:41:228 (2,3,4,5,6) -
  6. 01:18:037 (1,2,3) - P for punch? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9414270 I can't sliderart...
[]w~
Rizia
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Rizia
top
00:09:649 (2) - 前面幾個一直都是放右邊的 突然出現在左邊比較不順手 接上後面的也是
00:19:616 (1,1,1,1,2) - 放最盡頭有點極端

hell
其實沒什麼可以提的
Karen
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Topic Starter
Karen

Zero__wind wrote:

Normal
00:32:247 (1) - 这里开始的一段小间距在低难度可以接受的吗？我不太确定哦 最好还是保持1.0x吧 sv那么高离那么近 新手绝对疯狂打早 这里只有1/1节奏 如果ds太大就看起来很散乱，不过我加到了0.8，我觉得不是最低难度的话变一下ds是没问题的
其他都改了

Kisses wrote:

Expert
  1. 00:25:438 (3) - what do you think about styling your section a bit like this? I feel like it helps with reading and looks slightly more pleasing aesthetically https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9414173 ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9414173 good idea
    what do you think?
  2. 00:33:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can't you use a different rhythm here? 00:32:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nicely fit the vocals, so using a different rhythm for 00:33:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to show some contrast would better reflect the song imho actually i'm not following vocals here, 00:32:642 (3,6,3,6) - these sliders are for the snares, the vocals and other background sound are too messy so i want to follow one track only
  3. 00:32:247 - Also I think soft whistle for this section fit the sliders nicely i like the current hitsound more o.o
  4. Some streams in the chorus such as 01:00:175 (2,3,4,5,6,1) and 01:12:708 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - feel like they should be spaced more like 00:41:228 (2,3,4,5,6) - music is different, 01:00:175 (2,3,4,5,6,1) and 01:12:708 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - the increasing spacing emphasizes the following downbeats like 01:00:668 (1) - but 00:41:721 (1) - this one doesn't need that imo o.o
[]w~

Rizia wrote:

top
00:09:649 (2) - 前面幾個一直都是放右邊的 突然出現在左邊比較不順手 接上後面的也是 嗯
00:19:616 (1,1,1,1,2) - 放最盡頭有點極端 后面全是放在最角落，我喜欢这种极端的感觉

hell
其實沒什麼可以提的

thanks for mods!
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
Good to go.
_handholding
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_handholding
Normal
I feel like turning 00:16:063 (6) or 00:16:458 (1) into 2 circles would have a much nicer fit as it would break up the continuous amount of sliders

00:37:774 (4) - ^ because both the head and tail are so strong

00:59:090 (1,2) - minor thing, but blanket?

OD 4 for better spread between easy and hard

Hard
00:06:195 (2) - I would say delete this. It doesn't feel part of the rhythm 00:06:392 (3,4,5) . The fact it's not hitsounded makes doubly sure as well. Delete it and try it without and see if you like it

01:05:405 (1,2) - what do you think of this rhythm https://pastebin.com/K4VLcgdv ? The lower object density reflects the slowdown better imo

Insane
00:06:195 (1) - Same as Hard
[]whole set looks cool tbh ~
Karen
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Topic Starter
Karen

Kisses wrote:

Hard
01:05:405 (1,2) - what do you think of this rhythm https://pastebin.com/K4VLcgdv ? The lower object density reflects the slowdown better imo where is the pic? and the density is already low enough imo o.o
fixed other things
_handholding
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_handholding
sorry i forgot to link, the rhythm was https://i.imgur.com/zOeB1OE.png or https://i.imgur.com/oFM4Kb5.png

let me know if you like them or not and I'll rebubble ~
Rizia
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Rizia
no video?
Karen
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Topic Starter
Karen

Kisses wrote:

sorry i forgot to link, the rhythm was https://i.imgur.com/zOeB1OE.png or https://i.imgur.com/oFM4Kb5.png

let me know if you like them or not and I'll rebubble ~
i'd like to keep the current rhythm because 01:05:800 - 01:06:590 - they are strong as well, it would be weird if they are on slider tails imo

Rizia wrote:

no video?
不想加了
_handholding
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_handholding
:aobathinking:
Rizia
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Rizia
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Karen
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Karen
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Kaifin
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Kaifin
cute as hell
Bariton
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Bariton
gratz!
Mint
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Mint
cool bg
gratz!
Garden
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shuang
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>no video
ok

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Doyak
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Hi Karen, I think you need to use "TVサイズver" here, as it's officially announced on the website, so we consider it officially released. I wonder if you have any reason not to use it in the first place.

Left
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Left
have to wait 1 more week

sigh
Doyak
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Not much time left, I'll disqualify this for the time being.
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Hinatsuru Ai
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Hinatsuru Ai
The map itself is fast and I could barely follow.... But nonetheless good practice map for high bpm

Only would appreciate it if BPM was tuned down a little

Thanks!
Ideal
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Ideal

Shiina x Sorata wrote:

The map itself is fast and I could barely follow.... But nonetheless good practice map for high bpm

Only would appreciate it if BPM was tuned down a little

Thanks!
thats not how song timing works
Shurelia
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I like kaho
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Gratz!
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