Beren wrote:

lol

inaba-tan wrote:

May I make a taiko map?

wcx19911123 wrote:

from in-game pm

[General]
there are 2 .osb files in the song folder , delete them all and do a full submit , cuz there are no sb in this map
tags没啥问题，不过每个tag之间只能一个空格，注意下
offset is different in Easy diff , make timing the same in all diffs
I suggest use a silenced sliderslide.wav , sliders are kinda too noisy
还有就是kiai time最好是白线开始和白线结束，如果kiai喷泉的话倒是可以红线或者蓝线结束kiai

[Easy]
01:26:703 (4) - change to a circle at 01:26:703 and a sldier from 01:27:015 to 01:27:640 ? follow vocal better
01:42:797 - 这 break太长了吧。。感觉可以挑几个小节map一下
02:20:453 (1) - end at 02:22:640 ?

[Normal]
01:12:328 (1) - 因为前后几个slider都是只repeat一次的，所以这个slider有点confusing，试着换个方向让最后一次repeat的方向对着下一个note会好很多
01:42:953 - break还是感觉太长了。。
02:21:391 (1) - spinner too short.. end at 02:22:641 ?
02:29:672 (5,6) - 两个短repeat slider在一起但是repeat次数不同。。感觉会confusing

[Hard]
HD+1/2 OD+1
01:06:234 (6,7) - 有点碰到了，感觉不好看orz
01:07:328 (9) - delete?
01:39:359 (10,11,1) - 感觉slider从01:39:359到01:39:672，然后后面跟两个circle好点
02:41:703 (4,5) - ctrl+r，flow好点

[Insane]
OD-1
00:17:797 (2,3,4) - 叠更好点？
00:41:547 (6) - newcombo，间距突然变大了
01:41:703 (8) - ctrl+r，然后挪点位置让前后两个spaicng差不多
02:12:172 (9,1) - 换下newcombo，感觉这里有点跳
02:20:141 (14,1) - 换newcombo，而且我感觉最后叠一个1/2有点坑爹orz
02:42:641 (16,17) - 略坑爹。。

that's all
very nice map

inaba-tan wrote:

finish \:D/

y u c a wrote:

hi
sorry im late T.T

Easy

please add finish same as insane

Normal

please add finish same as insane

00:22:641 (6) - new combo
00:23:109 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:984 (5) - new combo
01:04:984 (6) - new combo
01:05:609 (1) - remove new combo


Hard

please add finish same as insane

Insane

00:22:641 (4) - add DEFAULTfinish
00:26:547 (2) - stack with (11)?

SPOILER

00:32:641 (1) - add default finish
00:42:641 (2) - ^
01:02:641 (4) - ^
01:12:641 (4) - ^
01:22:641 (1) - ^
01:27:641 (1) - ^
01:32:641 (2) - ^
01:57:641 (1) - ^
02:02:641 (7) - ^
02:22:641 (2) - ^
02:27:641 (5) - ^
02:32:641 (5) - ^
02:36:098 (7) - touch hp bar?
02:37:641 (5) - add default finish

加油~~~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

Easy

盡量將距離控制在0.78x~0.82x
00:15:609 (5) - 向右移動1格
00:24:984 (4) - 向上移動1格
01:17:484 (1) - 沒有跟前面的(5)重疊
01:18:734 (2) - 向下移動1格
01:33:266 (2) - 向上移動1格
01:38:266 (2) - 很好奇這個位置的歌詞怎麼被消音www
01:41:391 (5) - 跟前面的(3)開始位置重疊；另外要不要將拍子改成這樣子：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/185945
02:10:141 (3,4) - 用正常距離 ?

Normal

00:12:172 (1) - 這樣的開頭會不會比較好?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/185948
00:42:641 (2) - 這個circle可以後慮Nc
00:43:578 (5) - 在00:44:203結束的話，結尾可以放HitSound，拍子感也比較好
00:48:578 (4) - ^ ；另外開始點可以放clap
01:02:172 (1) - 跟00:12:172同樣情況
01:13:109 (3) - 用正常距離
01:14:984 (6) - 我不懂日文和歌詞，不過只算拍子的話，這個位置NC比01:16:234好
01:15:297 (7) - 用正常距離
02:02:016 (5) - 與前面(2)重疊；雖然是這樣說，兩個水平Slider重疊我覺得不容易看，最好就搬到別處
02:02:953 (1) - 這部份的Slider可以0.5/0.75倍速度
02:33:578 (5) - 要麼跟(6)平行，不然這樣畫不好看
02:37:641 (1) - 結尾finlish? 話說我之前沒留意過HitSound，有需要的話，在所有難度中與這個情況相同的位置都加上finlish（簡單來說，就是Kiai開始後第1條長白線）
02:40:453 (2) - clap

Hard

00:12:172 (1) - 多餘的note，刪掉；是說幾個難度都在這位置開始，是有特別原因?? 我個人覺得在白線上開始比較好
題外話一下，我mod這張圖的時候，覺得這難度跟Paradise Cage的eveless' Hard難度挺相似0.0

我的規定是8分鐘內，所以ins我就跳過了

不錯的圖，Good Nice

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi 因為草莓好像不會mod太鼓 所以我來幫忙 呵呵

iinaba's taiko:

SPOILER

00:02:250 (X) - 加個note d
00:02:328 (3) - k
00:47:562 (3) - 刪除
00:47:640 (1) - K
00:53:422 (5) - 刪除k
00:54:984 (1,1) - 位置交換
01:27:328 (1) - D
02:04:984 (X) - 加個note d
02:05:141 (10) - D
02:17:719 (2) - 刪除

Good luck!

Strawberry wrote:

request in our modque~><
AWESOME map and i love this song~~
:( 怎么没早点给我看到这张图 （这样也许能抢到一个GD?lol

mod in irc

19:19 <Strawberry> : 好鬼畜lol
19:19 <grasscarp> : .....是啊不知不觉就这么难了
19:19 <grasscarp> : 而且再简单的话就没有5星了
19:21 <Strawberry> : BG和note颜色有点近 不过可能因为我没有载video的原因
19:21 <grasscarp> : 我看看
19:22 <grasscarp> : 是的..红色我换掉
19:22 <Strawberry> : 恩
19:23 <Strawberry> : 00:12:641 - nc
19:24 <grasscarp> : i?
19:24 <Strawberry> : 00:12:641 (4) -
19:24 <grasscarp> : ...这会不会太快了...才刚第四个note
19:25 <grasscarp> : 而且这种重音很多...
19:25 <Strawberry> : 恩不想改就无视
19:26 <Strawberry> : 00:23:734 (1) -
19:26 <Strawberry> : 之前都是2个长白线nc 这里变一个了？
19:26 <Strawberry> : 如果这里改密的话后面也统一00:24:984 (6) - nc
19:27 <grasscarp> : `...我都是听重音或者跳换的
19:27 <grasscarp> : 原来这样..
19:27 <Strawberry> : 恩
19:27 <Strawberry> : 我的建议是
19:27 <Strawberry> : 00:23:734 (1) - 这里不用改
19:28 <Strawberry> : 00:24:984 (6) - nc
19:28 <grasscarp> : 恩我改了
19:28 <Strawberry> : 00:26:234 (1) - nc去掉
19:28 <Strawberry> : 00:27:484 (5) - nc
19:28 <Strawberry> : 00:31:234 (5) - nc
19:28 <grasscarp> : ok
19:29 <Strawberry> : 00:34:047 和00:36:547 (4) - 感觉nc一下比较好 lol 不过不改也不影响啦
19:29 <Strawberry> : （我不是很习惯nc隔很长lol
19:30 <grasscarp> : ..原来如此
19:30 <grasscarp> : 我有的时候十几了也不NC...觉得这样很爽........
19:30 <Strawberry> : 因为你这里用了nc00:41:547 (1) - 所以建议00:39:203 (6) - 也nc
19:31 <grasscarp> : 00:41:547 (1) - 这个我nc去掉好了
19:31 <Strawberry> : :O 我觉得那个nc蛮有助于读谱的
19:32 <grasscarp> : ..说的也是
19:32 <grasscarp> : 那我把那个6nc了
19:32 <Strawberry> : 恩
19:33 <Strawberry> : 00:44:359 (1) - 这个nc 挪到
19:33 <Strawberry> : 00:45:141 (3) -
19:33 <Strawberry> : 或者00:44:828 (2) -
19:34 <Strawberry> : 00:46:078 (1) - 挪到
19:34 <Strawberry> : 00:46:391 (3) -
19:35 <Strawberry> : 00:52:641 (9) - nc?
19:35 <Strawberry> : （先揪nc啦 因为这个比较死
19:36 <grasscarp> : 好了改好了
19:36 <Strawberry> : 01:06:078 (5) - nc
19:37 <Strawberry> : 01:09:516 (1) - nc移到01:08:734 (7) - 比较合适
19:38 <grasscarp> : 01:11:234 (7) - 我再加个好了
19:38 <grasscarp> : 啊看错了
19:38 <Strawberry> : 恩
19:38 <Strawberry> : 所以就可以吧01:12:172 (1) - 移到
19:38 <Strawberry> : 01:12:641 (4) -
19:38 <Strawberry> : 01:13:734 (7) - 可以+
19:39 <Strawberry> : 噗贴错了
19:39 <Strawberry> : 01:11:234 -
19:39 <Strawberry> : 这个
19:39 <Strawberry> : 01:31:547 (6) - nc
19:40 <Strawberry> : ~~~~~~~~~andy老大帮你mod taiko咯
19:40 <Strawberry> : 01:33:734 (1) - nc移到01:33:891 (2) - ？
19:41 <grasscarp> : ...忙不过来了
19:41 <Strawberry> : 01:36:078 (1) - 移到
19:41 <Strawberry> : 01:36:391 (4) - ？
19:41 <Strawberry> : 没关系慢慢来
19:41 <Strawberry> : 这里快 挑完nc就满了
19:41 <Strawberry> : *慢
19:42 <grasscarp> : 恩 好了
19:42 <Strawberry> : 01:38:891 (9) - nc
19:42 <Strawberry> : 01:41:391 (7) - nc
19:42 <Strawberry> : 好好听的歌lol
19:43 <grasscarp> : 真的么:D
19:43 <grasscarp> : 01:42:641 (5) - 按前面的话这个也要nc么
19:43 <Strawberry> : 恩~
19:44 <Strawberry> : 最后一个note了 无所谓啦 我是不在意 如果怕有人挑出来改掉也没关系
19:44 <Strawberry> : 01:54:828 (1) - nc移到
19:44 <Strawberry> : 01:55:141 (2) -
19:44 <Strawberry> : 01:58:578 (1) - 移到
19:44 <Strawberry> : 01:58:891 (2) -
19:46 <Strawberry> : 02:14:203 (1) - 移到
19:46 <Strawberry> : 02:13:891 (9) -
19:46 <Strawberry> : 02:16:391 (4) - nc
19:47 <Strawberry> : 02:18:891 (4) - 建议加个nc
19:48 <Strawberry> : 然后后面的stream
19:48 <grasscarp> : 去掉最后两个ｎｏｔｅ比较好么．．．
19:48 <Strawberry> : 建议前面7个成一组
19:49 <grasscarp> : 恩
19:49 <Strawberry> : 02:20:141 (1,2,3) - 单开一组
19:49 <Strawberry> : 中间的那个del
19:49 <grasscarp> : ..中间的note删掉么
19:49 <grasscarp> : 以前是那样的
19:49 <Strawberry> : 不是02:20:141 (1,2,3) - 中间的删掉
19:49 <Strawberry> : 02:20:062 -
19:49 <Strawberry> : 这只
19:50 <grasscarp> : 这只删掉?
19:50 <grasscarp> : 啊感觉好好
19:50 <Strawberry> : 然后关于02:20:141 (1,2,3) - 的摆位感觉ctrl+J一下然后摆到x:376 y:304就很合适了
19:51 <Strawberry> : 于是这个02:20:453 (1) - nc就可以删掉~
19:51 <Strawberry> : 02:21:391 (7) - 新开个nc~
19:51 <Strawberry> : 02:22:328 (1) - nc移到02:22:641 (2) -
19:51 <Strawberry> : 已经5个diff了:O 不然真想做个GD lol
19:52 <grasscarp> : 0v0
19:52 <Strawberry> : 02:42:016 (8) - nc
19:52 <Strawberry> : 02:42:562 (15,16,17,18) -
19:53 <Strawberry> : 删掉15
19:53 <Strawberry> : 后面处理方式和上面2:20那里差不多就行
19:53 <grasscarp> : 我想结尾和那里不一样..
19:53 <Strawberry> : (两分多钟就1k400w 好送分><
19:54 <grasscarp> : ...是啊就是挺难的
19:54 <Strawberry> : 诶我有个梗
19:54 <Strawberry> : 不过用不用就是你的了
19:54 <grasscarp> : 好啊哪得
19:54 <Strawberry> : 关于最后一个串
19:55 <grasscarp> : 什么样呢
19:56 <Strawberry> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/188232
19:57 <Strawberry> : 不过分可能就少送点咯lol
19:57 <Strawberry> : 或者之前的串这样摆
19:57 <Strawberry> : lol
19:57 <grasscarp> : 我看看
19:59 <Strawberry> : ~
19:59 <Strawberry> : 然后我看看铺面
19:59 <grasscarp> : 这是多少的ＤＳ
20:00 <Strawberry> : 好像是1.2~1.3那样子
20:00 <grasscarp> : 怎么截图？
20:00 <Strawberry> : shift+F12
20:02 <grasscarp> : 我打打看吧最后的
20:03 <Strawberry> : 00:30:922 (4) - 移到x,80,y,88?
20:03 <Strawberry> : 00:26:234 (1) - 和8叠上?
20:04 <Strawberry> : 00:25:297 (8) -
20:05 <Strawberry> : 00:37:016 (8) - 尾部的锚点移动到x:32 y:184?
20:06 <Strawberry> : 这样看和00:36:703 (5) - 才是在同一直线上
20:06 <Strawberry> : 后面的9也跟着动过去
20:07 <Strawberry> : 00:42:016 (4) - 左上一格
20:08 <Strawberry> : 01:11:703 (8,9) - 同37秒的地方
20:08 <Strawberry> : 01:13:578 (6) - 和01:12:484 (3) - 叠上？
20:10 <Strawberry> : 02:03:891 (4) - 移到352 256？
20:11 <Strawberry> : 看起来更像圆弧
20:12 <Strawberry> : 没别的问题了
20:13 <grasscarp> : 我正在慢慢改
20:13 <Strawberry> : 恩hard的nc你可以参照着I的改
20:13 <Strawberry> : nazi起来太麻烦了><
20:14 <grasscarp> : ...恩 好的
20:16 <Strawberry> : hard: 02:31:391 (9,10,11,1,2) - 这几个斜率统一一下？
20:16 <Strawberry> : 02:33:266 (4,8) - 4尾叠8首
20:17 <Strawberry> : 00:29:984 (1) - 可以考虑叠一下00:29:047 (2) - ？
20:19 <Strawberry> : 00:39:516 (7) - x:88 y:224? 和456组成一个梯形？
20:19 <Strawberry> : 00:39:203 (5) - x152 y104
20:19 <Strawberry> : 00:39:359 (6) - x152 y184
20:19 <Strawberry> : 刚好ds都是整1.0
20:19 <Strawberry> : lol

虽然我kd很少，但是strawberry's star 8th is deserved!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request if u ignore any of my suggestions, please tell me a reason why u ignored it so that i can learn from this in the future.
General:
combo colors need to be the same for 1 mapset


Easy:
00:40:141(4,5) - make these sliders nicer
00:47:641(1,2) - *nazi* 1 grid left
00:48:891(3) - like this? http://puu.sh/9oRP
02:00:141(5) - NC
02:05:453(3) - add another repeat

Normal:
00:25:609(2,3) - make these symmetrical
00:45:453(8) - NC if u ignore this make the previous note a NC
01:34:672(6) - NC
01:40:453(6) - same as 00:45:453
02:34:672(6) - NC

Hard:
01:20:141(6) - stack it properly
01:33:744(6) - NC
01:40:141(7) - ^

Insane:
02:38:578(8) - i suggest that u move this somewhere else. it doesnt look nice if there's a stream of circles under a slider

this is the best i can do. GL

phoon wrote:

Hi ~ grasscarp

From yuineee & phoon's modding queue


He forgot the request of I am sorry Mod　TT
I will Mod, although it was late...

It is a proposal altogether :3

General
How about adding one combo color?


Easy
Fine!

Normal
Fine!

Hard
>>00:18:422 (4) - How about using arrangement as shown in >>00:17:484(1, 2)?
>>00:38:734 (x) - add note

Insane
>>00:25:609 (5) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

>>00:48:734 (5) - a few is arranged downward
>>01:12:641 (1) - remove clap
>>01:15:766 (1) - remove NC
>>01:22:016 (9) - add NC
>>02:21:391 (10) - ^
>>02:23:891 (7) - ^
>>02:28:891 (10) - ^
>>02:33:891 (10) - ^
>>02:38:891 (9) - ^

marshall_racer wrote:

Artist is "Sakine Meiko"
For Artist/Title change stuff, check this -> viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443&start=0

btw, I love both, mapset and song <3

tennen baka yuyuko wrote:

nice song!

inaba-tan wrote:

ｐｌｚ更新～

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]
- The solo BG size is currently 1079*768, plz resize it to 4:3, i.e. 1024*768
- tag inaba tan inaba-tan in ALL diff

[inaba's Taiko]
- you must follow other diff's inherited time section (red line), that is 00:02:641, Remove all other red lines
00:22:328 - try k k here to fit the vocal
00:34:828 - I feel an accent here to try to add a finish here
00:52:797 - try K k d?
01:21:859 - ddd?
01:52:486 - Unsnapped circle
02:21:859 - start kkkk here
02:35:764 - Unsnapped circle
02:36:389 - Unsnapped circle

nice diff in overall, if you can use more 1/2 instead of 1/4 to emphasize the melody that would be perfect : D

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]
- The solo BG size is currently 1079*768, plz resize it to 4:3, i.e. 1024*768
- tag inaba tan inaba-tan in ALL diff

[inaba's Taiko]
- you must follow other diff's inherited time section (red line), that is 00:02:641, Remove all other red lines
00:22:328 - try k k here to fit the vocal
00:34:828 - I feel an accent here to try to add a finish here
00:52:797 - try K k d?
01:21:859 - ddd?
01:52:486 - Unsnapped circle
02:21:859 - start kkkk here
02:35:764 - Unsnapped circle
02:36:389 - Unsnapped circle

nice diff in overall, if you can use more 1/2 instead of 1/4 to emphasize the melody that would be perfect : D

23:37 <Roddie> : Hi
23:37 <Roddie> : i have a couple of questions to ask
23:37 <grasscarp> : hi roddie
23:37 <Roddie> : about this map you have
23:37  *Roddie is editing (Meiko - E? Aa, Sou.)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38550]
23:38 <grasscarp> : 0.0
23:38 <Roddie> : you do know that there is a 2nd timing section on the taiko diff right?
23:38 <Roddie> : and you don't have a 2nd timing section on the rest of the diffs...
23:38 <grasscarp> : ....eh, in fact i dont know about this.
23:39 <grasscarp> : Taiko diff is made by other person,maybe i could tell him.
23:39 <grasscarp> : ..or i could change it by myself.
23:39 <Roddie> : well, you can only use another timing section if there is a bpm change of the song or if one part of the song has a beat off and a timing section is 
23:39 <Roddie> : needed
23:40 <grasscarp> : So i should make the red line of taiko be same as solo diffs?
23:40 <Roddie> : NO!
23:41 <grasscarp> : :o
23:41 <Roddie> : i deleted the 2nd red line
23:41 <Roddie> : and the tempo is fine
23:41 <Roddie> : it's following along the beat
23:41 <Roddie> : so one red line is okay :P
23:41 <grasscarp> : = =ok,i see
23:42 <Roddie> : tell the guy who made the taiko about the timing
23:42 <Roddie> : and tell him a 2nd timing section is not needed
23:42 <grasscarp> : OK,I know how to deal with this....
23:42 <Roddie> : good :)

1. 00:42:250-It's odd seeing the kiai time starting off here. Please remove it.
2. 01:32:250-^
3. 02:21:312-^

1. There are a couple of issues with the background:
   
   
   1. I get the song is originally sung by Miku Hatsune but hearing that the song is sung by Meiko, a background of Miku Hatsune is not needed for this song.
   2. The background is suggestive. I don't think your map would get ranked because of the background. ):

SPOILER

• 02:25:141 (3)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

1. 02:24:672-Perhaps it's best to put a new combo here?
2. 02:29:828-^
3. 02:42:641 (7)-Hm... How about removing this note and replace with a 1/2 slider? Starting from 02:42:641 and end it on 02:42:719.

1. 02:37:953 (1)-A Big Kat is not needed in my opinion. Remove the finish.

1. 01:27:328 (3)-Stack this properly on the end point of the previous slider.
2. 02:03:641 (1)-How about using the distance snap, space this out and have it align with the end point of the previous slider. Some thing like this. In my opinion, it's the best way to go!
3. 02:42:641 (5)-^Pretty much the same thing.

1. How about making the circle size a bit larger? xD
2. 01:31:234 (5, 1)-Stack these properly on the end point of the previous slider.
3. 02:16:859 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11)-I don't think 1/4 streams would be fitting on this part of the song. ): Consider remapping something else.

1. The offset is different from each difficulty,you should fix this.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:22:641 (1) - Some design thing here.Probably just make the second point of the slider to the middle of slider?I think that is more beautiful like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 00:34:828 (x) - This place is quite strong,so I think you shouldn't skip a note here.You should emphasize it instead.
   3. 00:36:703 (4) - I feel really strange about the rhythm here because there is nothing to support the this.I mean there are no drum sound/vocal etc.
   4. 00:52:016 (6) - Same as 00:22:641.
   5. 01:02:641 (1) - ^
   6. 02:41:391 (6) - I think you need to add a new combo here to fit your combo pattern.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (2) - Please remove the whistle from "whole" slider,just add it on the first and the end of the slider.Just want to point out that would make a noisy sound if you just add it to whole slider.
   2. 01:38:266 (2) - I think you should remove the whistle and turn the volume to 5% here to fit the music.
   3. 02:05:453 (3) - Same as 00:28:734.
   4. 02:07:953 (1) - ^
   5. 02:12:953 (1) - ^ (Please check this carefully,I won't point this out again)

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 for consistent with OD.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:21:234 (3) - I don't think that it is suitable to put a long slider becuase I can saw you mostly put 1/1 and 1/2 in this part.So i recommend to change it to 1/1 or 1/2.
   2. 01:31:547 (4) - Why the spacing is different between (1.2)- and(3)?At least I can't find a reason that you need to do.
   3. 02:21:391 (1) - A spinner didn't fit the music here because the vocal is still singing.I assume that spinner is for the music of protraction.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:51:078 (2) - I think you are missing a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit your hitclap pattern.
   2. 02:32:641 (2) - Probably change this to normal hitsound with 50% volume to fit the music much perfect.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:12:641 (2) - (bad gameplay) Be honest, this speed change can casues a really bad gameplay because the vocal didn't 'speed' up yet.So it will cause a miss if the player is careless and remember this is a Hard diff.It shouldn't be like that.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:641 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing here,please fix that because this kind of spacing may make confused to player.
   2. 00:13:734 (1) - And then add a new combo here to fit the others combo lenght.
   3. 00:19:984 (7) - ^Same.
   4. 00:32:641 (1,2,3) - I have seen this pattern more than 1 time in this diff.I think you should change a new pattern to give more feeling to player.
   5. 01:31:547 (1,2,3,4) - May I ask why do you put a stacking here?In this place it's obvious can may some interesting pattern.Quite weird about that.
   6. 01:38:266 (3) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this.
   7. 02:02:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - Something like 01:31:547 -
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:34:828 (5) - Remove the whistle from the beginning of the slider and then add a clap on it.Btw,please remove the clap at the end of the slider.
   2. 01:39:828 (5) - Add a clap here to fit your hitclap pattern.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. According to the BPM and your arrangement of this.It obviously didn't need ar9.Please trun down to AR8 at least.
   2. HP and OD -1 at least for consistency.
2. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:30:609 (5) - (bad gameplay) Be honest,this note is coverd by 02:29:672 (2) - and 02:29:828 (1) - 's comboburst.It's really hard to read it and it maybe make confused to player.
      
      something here.

      
3. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I can't understand that why you need to put a tons of jump here.It's really strange because you can't hear any up pitch.
   2. 00:43:891 (6,7,8,9) - Triplate sounds weird for me.I think some simple 1/2 is good enough here,it doesn't need to put any stream.They can't fit the music very well.
   3. 01:21:703 (8) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because the jump pattern is starting from here.
   4. 01:29:516 (4) - A design thing here.I would make this slider like this,I think that's much beautiful.
      
      Suggestion

      

      416,208,89516,2,0,B|469:200|489:108|448:66,1,160,2|8

   5. 01:38:266 (7) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this
   6. 02:26:234 (7) - New combo here please,the reason same as above.
   7. 02:36:391 (8) - Add a new combo here due to the jump pattern is started.

1. Please change taiko to Taiko please.
2. The hitsound is too soft now.Please change to soft - 100%.
3. 00:41:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I prefer kkddkdk here.It fits the music much better.
4. 01:00:609 (2,3,1) - Change these notes to big notes? Because I can heard the accent point here.
5. 01:22:016 (3) - Change this to kat?
6. 02:21:391 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - No please!This stream is much difficult than overall!This stream is oni9* stream.However you only put oni8* stream in other places.Please change it.

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:
Sorry for long delay.

[General]

1. The offset is different from each difficulty,you should fix this.

[Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:22:641 (1) - Some design thing here.Probably just make the second point of the slider to the middle of slider?I think that is more beautiful like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 00:34:828 (x) - This place is quite strong,so I think you shouldn't skip a note here.You should emphasize it instead.
   3. 00:36:703 (4) - I feel really strange about the rhythm here because there is nothing to support the this.I mean there are no drum sound/vocal etc.
   4. 00:52:016 (6) - Same as 00:22:641.
   5. 01:02:641 (1) - ^
   6. 02:41:391 (6) - I think you need to add a new combo here to fit your combo pattern.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (2) - Please remove the whistle from "whole" slider,just add it on the first and the end of the slider.Just want to point out that would make a noisy sound if you just add it to whole slider.
   2. 01:38:266 (2) - I think you should remove the whistle and turn the volume to 5% here to fit the music.
   3. 02:05:453 (3) - Same as 00:28:734.
   4. 02:07:953 (1) - ^
   5. 02:12:953 (1) - ^ (Please check this carefully,I won't point this out again)

[Normal]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 for consistent with OD.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:21:234 (3) - I don't think that it is suitable to put a long slider becuase I can saw you mostly put 1/1 and 1/2 in this part.So i recommend to change it to 1/1 or 1/2.
   2. 01:31:547 (4) - Why the spacing is different between (1.2)- and(3)?At least I can't find a reason that you need to do.
   3. 02:21:391 (1) - A spinner didn't fit the music here because the vocal is still singing.I assume that spinner is for the music of protraction.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:51:078 (2) - I think you are missing a clap sound at the beginning of the slider to fit your hitclap pattern.
   2. 02:32:641 (2) - Probably change this to normal hitsound with 50% volume to fit the music much perfect.

[Hard]

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:12:641 (2) - (bad gameplay) Be honest, this speed change can casues a really bad gameplay because the vocal didn't 'speed' up yet.So it will cause a miss if the player is careless and remember this is a Hard diff.It shouldn't be like that.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:641 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing here,please fix that because this kind of spacing may make confused to player.
   2. 00:13:734 (1) - And then add a new combo here to fit the others combo lenght.
   3. 00:19:984 (7) - ^Same.
   4. 00:32:641 (1,2,3) - I have seen this pattern more than 1 time in this diff.I think you should change a new pattern to give more feeling to player.
   5. 01:31:547 (1,2,3,4) - May I ask why do you put a stacking here?In this place it's obvious can may some interesting pattern.Quite weird about that.
   6. 01:38:266 (3) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this.
   7. 02:02:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - Something like 01:31:547 -
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:34:828 (5) - Remove the whistle from the beginning of the slider and then add a clap on it.Btw,please remove the clap at the end of the slider.
   2. 01:39:828 (5) - Add a clap here to fit your hitclap pattern.

[Insane]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. According to the BPM and your arrangement of this.It obviously didn't need ar9.Please trun down to AR8 at least.
   2. HP and OD -1 at least for consistency.
2. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:30:609 (5) - (bad gameplay) Be honest,this note is coverd by 02:29:672 (2) - and 02:29:828 (1) - 's comboburst.It's really hard to read it and it maybe make confused to player.
      
      something here.

      
3. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:28:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I can't understand that why you need to put a tons of jump here.It's really strange because you can't hear any up pitch.
   2. 00:43:891 (6,7,8,9) - Triplate sounds weird for me.I think some simple 1/2 is good enough here,it doesn't need to put any stream.They can't fit the music very well.
   3. 01:21:703 (8) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because the jump pattern is starting from here.
   4. 01:29:516 (4) - A design thing here.I would make this slider like this,I think that's much beautiful.
      
      Suggestion

      

      416,208,89516,2,0,B|469:200|489:108|448:66,1,160,2|8

   5. 01:38:266 (7) - Would you tell me why you put a 1/6 here?It's quite meaningless.Although it is slient,it shouldn't be like this
   6. 02:26:234 (7) - New combo here please,the reason same as above.
   7. 02:36:391 (8) - Add a new combo here due to the jump pattern is started.

[inaba's taiko]

1. Please change taiko to Taiko please.
2. The hitsound is too soft now.Please change to soft - 100%.
3. 00:41:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I prefer kkddkdk here.It fits the music much better.
4. 01:00:609 (2,3,1) - Change these notes to big notes? Because I can heard the accent point here.
5. 01:22:016 (3) - Change this to kat?
6. 02:21:391 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - No please!This stream is much difficult than overall!This stream is oni9* stream.However you only put oni8* stream in other places.Please change it.

That's it!Good luck.

Roddie wrote:

Hey.

Timing

Here's a chatlog about it.

Chatlog

23:37 <Roddie> : Hi
23:37 <Roddie> : i have a couple of questions to ask
23:37 <grasscarp> : hi roddie
23:37 <Roddie> : about this map you have
23:37  *Roddie is editing (Meiko - E? Aa, Sou.)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38550]
23:38 <grasscarp> : 0.0
23:38 <Roddie> : you do know that there is a 2nd timing section on the taiko diff right?
23:38 <Roddie> : and you don't have a 2nd timing section on the rest of the diffs...
23:38 <grasscarp> : ....eh, in fact i dont know about this.
23:39 <grasscarp> : Taiko diff is made by other person,maybe i could tell him.
23:39 <grasscarp> : ..or i could change it by myself.
23:39 <Roddie> : well, you can only use another timing section if there is a bpm change of the song or if one part of the song has a beat off and a timing section is 
23:39 <Roddie> : needed
23:40 <grasscarp> : So i should make the red line of taiko be same as solo diffs?
23:40 <Roddie> : NO!
23:41 <grasscarp> : :o
23:41 <Roddie> : i deleted the 2nd red line
23:41 <Roddie> : and the tempo is fine
23:41 <Roddie> : it's following along the beat
23:41 <Roddie> : so one red line is okay :P
23:41 <grasscarp> : = =ok,i see
23:42 <Roddie> : tell the guy who made the taiko about the timing
23:42 <Roddie> : and tell him a 2nd timing section is not needed
23:42 <grasscarp> : OK,I know how to deal with this....
23:42 <Roddie> : good :)

Timing Points (Easy, Normal, Hard, and Insane)

1. 00:42:250-It's odd seeing the kiai time starting off here. Please remove it.
2. 01:32:250-^
3. 02:21:312-^

General

1. There are a couple of issues with the background:
   
   
   1. I get the song is originally sung by Miku Hatsune but hearing that the song is sung by Meiko, a background of Miku Hatsune is not needed for this song.
   2. The background is suggestive. I don't think your map would get ranked because of the background. ):

Don't worry, man. I have a couple of backgrounds that would replace the current one.

SPOILER

Oh, and if you select one of them that I showed you, you don't forget to have that background turned into a Taiko background.

Easy

• 02:25:141 (3)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

Normal

1. 02:24:672-Perhaps it's best to put a new combo here?
2. 02:29:828-^
3. 02:42:641 (7)-Hm... How about removing this note and replace with a 1/2 slider? Starting from 02:42:641 and end it on 02:42:719.

inaba's Taiko

1. 02:37:953 (1)-A Big Kat is not needed in my opinion. Remove the finish.

Hard

1. 01:27:328 (3)-Stack this properly on the end point of the previous slider.
2. 02:03:641 (1)-How about using the distance snap, space this out and have it align with the end point of the previous slider. Some thing like this. In my opinion, it's the best way to go!
3. 02:42:641 (5)-^Pretty much the same thing.

Insane

1. How about making the circle size a bit larger? xD
2. 01:31:234 (5, 1)-Stack these properly on the end point of the previous slider.
3. 02:16:859 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11)-I don't think 1/4 streams would be fitting on this part of the song. ): Consider remapping something else.

And that's about it. Here's a star for you, man.

Good luck to you!