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Gordon123

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Gordon123 2017-10-18T16:50:37+00:00

ezek wrote:
hi owo hello

[Metadata]
May I know from where you got the title as and you disappeared outro ?
The bandcamp link you provide, which is a valid source, shows it as And You Disappeared and nothing more~ Both in the album and the song's page.

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Also, the album you link is not the one in which this song belongs, is this one, so you should change your link in the description, plus remove tyttö tytto ep from tags and add Harbor LP
fixed everything (my bad with metadata,because i'm idiot ;w;)

[General]
00:31:839 - It seems to be the best beat to end the spinner since a noticeable beat lands here. You would also have to add a new timing (red) line here for that. sure,added. (check it pls. after I answer the mod)
[Simple]
This whole difficulty is literally just 1/1 all over the place without a single variation; this makes the map boring. sorry ;w;
00:04:751 (1) - You could replace this slider with this rhythm to highlight the strong sounds + make variety. Don't worry about the 1/2 usage, it's safe at this bpm in this level + easy to follow because you're going from a slider tail to a slider head. Also applies to 00:14:225 (1) - and 00:23:699 (1) - . This should be enough for this short song. Don't forget about hitsounding after making changes.
really nice idea owo,you're right,added (:
[Average]
00:04:751 (1) - I suggest to use this rhythm. This is because at this level strong beats like 00:06:725 - would be better as clickable ones. The sound at the downbeat (00:06:330 - ) is pretty weak, so it doesn't matter to leave it as a slider's tail. Well, it also makes the diff slightly more challenging I guess, which should be good to make more contrast with the lower diff. Also applies for 00:14:225 (1) - and 00:23:699 (1) - . added
00:27:646 - This beat should be a circle since you put it as a circle in the lower diff, so you basically left this part easier to play than in the lowest diff... you could also make the slider into 3 circles for a better emphasis on the last notes. add a circle,i'm not feel here 3 circles sorry ;w;

Thank you ezek for really helpfull mod <3

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-10-19T06:42:24+00:00

[Average]
Ok here's an idea I got to make more contrast between this and the lowest diff, which also makes Average more interesting to play
00:01:593 - Here try this pattern. This is to take advantage of the tiny sounds at 00:01:988 - and 00:02:778 - . As you can see, those will be in the sliders' tails since they're very soft, but also because of that, you should add 5% volume in those slider tails (like I did in the screenshot).
Repeat the pattern at 00:11:067 - and 00:20:541 -

Timing at the end is still off, but I'm not sure on how to make it work properly; I'll be getting help with that soon. If the suggestion from above gets applied and the timing gets fixed, I'll be interested in nominating this set.

Edit: Don't kudos people again unless there's a new diff on the set or some were completely remapped

Gordon123

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Gordon123 2017-10-19T16:48:08+00:00

ezek wrote:
[Average]
Ok here's an idea I got to make more contrast between this and the lowest diff, which also makes Average more interesting to play why not :>
00:01:593 - Here try this pattern. This is to take advantage of the tiny sounds at 00:01:988 - and 00:02:778 - . As you can see, those will be in the sliders' tails since they're very soft, but also because of that, you should add 5% volume in those slider tails (like I did in the screenshot).
Repeat the pattern at 00:11:067 - and 00:20:541 - oh that idea cute, i like it :3

Timing at the end is still off, but I'm not sure on how to make it work properly; I'll be getting help with that soon. If the suggestion from above gets applied and the timing gets fixed, I'll be interested in nominating this set. a little confused, because I cant understand what the problem is ;w;

Edit:for real u help me again with diff, i changed some new,idk why i don't need give u kd again ;w;

Joe Castle

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Joe Castle 2017-10-21T04:01:13+00:00

Gordon123 wrote:
Edit:for real u help me again with diff, i changed some new,idk why i don't need give u kd again ;w;

Since he already helped you with your map, doesnt need to be paid with another kudosu.

thats why the "no kds"

Gordon123

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Gordon123 2017-10-21T06:58:34+00:00

;w;

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-10-22T21:33:52+00:00

I talked with pishi, so just remove the second timing line and snap the spinner's end at the blue tick (00:31:791 - )

Gordon123

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Gordon123 2017-10-23T03:21:07+00:00

After work i will fix it. ty
Edit: no kds again ;w;
done,thanks for timing check owo

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-10-24T06:09:17+00:00

;3

Gordon123

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Gordon123 2017-10-24T15:35:52+00:00

waaaaaa ty ezek ;3

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2017-10-25T21:27:14+00:00

Mukyu~

2017-10-25 22:31 Gordon123: hello ~
2017-10-25 22:31 Nozhomi: hi
2017-10-25 22:32 Gordon123: how are you ? (:
2017-10-25 22:33 Nozhomi: I'm fine at 99%
2017-10-25 22:34 Gordon123: but...what about 1%? :thinking:
2017-10-25 22:35 Nozhomi: that's possible math error
2017-10-25 22:35 Gordon123: oh :eyes:
2017-10-25 22:36 Gordon123: btw
2017-10-25 22:36 Gordon123: oh ,so hard ask but can i ask about check for my bubbled [https://osu.ppy.sh/s/678487 map] ? ;w; if u have free time
2017-10-25 22:38 Nozhomi: why this song is cutted ?
2017-10-25 22:38 Nozhomi: oh it's not
2017-10-25 22:38 Gordon123: its mot cutted
2017-10-25 22:38 Gordon123: not*
2017-10-25 22:39 Gordon123: u can check metadata
2017-10-25 22:39 Gordon123: :>
2017-10-25 22:39 Nozhomi: who the fuck would start their song with a such weird fade-in
2017-10-25 22:39 Nozhomi: uh
2017-10-25 22:40 Nozhomi: 00:00:015 - get a whistle here pls
2017-10-25 22:40 Gordon123: added
2017-10-25 22:41 Nozhomi: 00:12:646 - that kind of slider end shouldn't have a clap instead of whistle or nothing ?
2017-10-25 22:41 Nozhomi: sounds the same than 00:10:278 - 
2017-10-25 22:42 Gordon123: i think clap is better
2017-10-25 22:42 Gordon123: add
2017-10-25 22:42 Nozhomi: there's a couple of place where the problem is the same so check that and for both diffs
2017-10-25 22:42 Gordon123: oh no
2017-10-25 22:42 Nozhomi: ohno
2017-10-25 22:42 Gordon123: i think nothing better
2017-10-25 22:42 Nozhomi: lol
2017-10-25 22:43 Nozhomi: care to explain quickly why ?
2017-10-25 22:44 Gordon123: ;w;
2017-10-25 22:44 Gordon123: if u can
2017-10-25 22:45 Gordon123: in Average this plase empty,its good
2017-10-25 22:46 Nozhomi: I don't really see the point of adding a clap for 00:10:278 - that sound and then doing nothing for 00:12:646 - who have the exact same sound
2017-10-25 22:46 Nozhomi: that's dumb
2017-10-25 22:47 Nozhomi: and don't sounds good in any case to not emphasis that sound
2017-10-25 22:48 Gordon123: removed
2017-10-25 22:50 Gordon123: 00:12:646 (4) - i dont feel really clap here idk,just need to be empty o. o
2017-10-25 22:52 Gordon123: but on head yes i head a sound for clap, u're right o.o
2017-10-25 22:52 Gordon123: hear*
2017-10-25 22:54 Nozhomi: it needs a clap on the head ye not the end
2017-10-25 22:54 Nozhomi: and same for 00:17:383 - for example
2017-10-25 22:55 Nozhomi: you even did it for 00:26:857 - so why not the other
2017-10-25 22:57 Nozhomi: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1434597 tomppabeats - And You Disappeared [Average]]
2017-10-25 22:57 Gordon123: added
2017-10-25 22:58 Nozhomi: 00:00:015 (1) - this one starts on the corner and is a bit covered by score and accuracy, would be nice to move it a bit away from there
2017-10-25 22:59 Nozhomi: also what about start the spinner from 00:28:041 - there ?
2017-10-25 23:00 Gordon123: 00:00:015 (1) - i dont think what this a big problem for this diff
2017-10-25 23:00 Gordon123: becasue its really simple + its first note
2017-10-25 23:01 Gordon123: spinned - yes why not
2017-10-25 23:01 Gordon123: need to add in Simple diff too
2017-10-25 23:02 Gordon123: added*
2017-10-25 23:06 Nozhomi: should be everything if you fixed your hs correctly
2017-10-25 23:07 Gordon123: yea
2017-10-25 23:07 Gordon123: i fix HS how in Simple
2017-10-25 23:07 Gordon123: i mean claps
2017-10-25 23:07 Gordon123: welcome back o.o
2017-10-25 23:07 Nozhomi: same way than in the higher diff
2017-10-25 23:07 Nozhomi: ye my pc went off lol
2017-10-25 23:07 Gordon123: np owo
2017-10-25 23:08 Gordon123: so, i can update it?
2017-10-25 23:09 Nozhomi: ye
2017-10-25 23:10 Gordon123: oke rip bubble, its popped :O
2017-10-25 23:10 Gordon123: give IRC in forum o. o
2017-10-25 23:11 Nozhomi: I can tell you're new to this
2017-10-25 23:11 Nozhomi: let's see first if your changes are k
2017-10-25 23:12 Gordon123: sure
2017-10-25 23:12 Nozhomi: wait you have already a ranked map you should know lol
2017-10-25 23:12 Gordon123: yes
2017-10-25 23:13 Gordon123: i have one ranked map
2017-10-25 23:13 Nozhomi: you forgot a clap 00:07:909 - here
2017-10-25 23:13 Gordon123: i always suck at HS
2017-10-25 23:13 Gordon123: its my big problem
2017-10-25 23:13 Nozhomi: 00:22:120 - here too
2017-10-25 23:13 Gordon123: added
2017-10-25 23:13 Gordon123: same too
2017-10-25 23:13 Gordon123: [2]
2017-10-25 23:13 Nozhomi: 00:24:488 - here too that shouldn't be a whistle
2017-10-25 23:14 Nozhomi: same at 00:05:541 - lol
2017-10-25 23:14 Nozhomi: XD
2017-10-25 23:14 Gordon123: nono this is good for whistle ,sry ;w;
2017-10-25 23:14 Nozhomi: you want to keep the whistle ?
2017-10-25 23:14 Nozhomi: for these 2 ?
2017-10-25 23:14 Gordon123: yes..
2017-10-25 23:14 Gordon123: becasue
2017-10-25 23:15 Gordon123: I can hear the bell clearly
2017-10-25 23:15 Gordon123: OWO
2017-10-25 23:15 Nozhomi: both works so acceptable for them
2017-10-25 23:15 Gordon123: :>
2017-10-25 23:16 Gordon123: simple is clear?
2017-10-25 23:16 Nozhomi: ye
2017-10-25 23:16 Nozhomi: in theory
2017-10-25 23:16 Gordon123: LOL
2017-10-25 23:16 Gordon123: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1434597 tomppabeats - And You Disappeared [Average]]
2017-10-25 23:16 Gordon123: 00:07:120 (4) - added clap
2017-10-25 23:17 Nozhomi: same for hitsounds ye
2017-10-25 23:17 Nozhomi: since it applies to both diffs
2017-10-25 23:18 Nozhomi: for 00:00:015 (1) - maybe curve it a bit, or use the same shape than 00:03:172 (4) - 
2017-10-25 23:18 Gordon123: use ctrl+j
2017-10-25 23:19 Nozhomi: update when you're done with everything
2017-10-25 23:20 Gordon123: oke  done
2017-10-25 23:21 Nozhomi: YOU
2017-10-25 23:21 Nozhomi: MISSED
2017-10-25 23:21 Nozhomi: 00:22:120 - 
2017-10-25 23:21 Gordon123: waaaaaaaa
2017-10-25 23:22 Gordon123: IM ADDED
2017-10-25 23:22 Gordon123: ACTION hide
2017-10-25 23:22 Gordon123: :>
2017-10-25 23:22 Nozhomi: but only on Simple diff it seems
2017-10-25 23:22 Nozhomi: you know what to do
2017-10-25 23:22 Nozhomi: XD
2017-10-25 23:23 Gordon123: ye i done
2017-10-25 23:23 Gordon123: and updated
2017-10-25 23:23 Nozhomi: OK
2017-10-25 23:23 Nozhomi: seems finally good
2017-10-25 23:23 Gordon123: :>
2017-10-25 23:23 Gordon123: eeeee
2017-10-25 23:23 Nozhomi: nothing to add here ? like any question ?
2017-10-25 23:24 Gordon123: ty for help :3
2017-10-25 23:24 Gordon123: this*
2017-10-25 23:24 Nozhomi: then I assume I can do my job with that answer