Tofu1222 wrote:

Patterns of latter half part looks way better. Call me back when everything is replied. Also I would strongly suggest you to double check the hitsounds in the map as a whole, and be aware of the consistency of the calm vocal part in the beginning and in the middle.

To Faputa: Do you have metadata proof?

Tofu1222 wrote:

4K:1|2|3|4

[Kuriossiti's Jungle Karnage]

1. 00:37:854 - Double for vocal. fiiine
   
   
2. 00:44:254 - 00:44:854 - 00:45:854 - You have doubles here but not 00:31:454 - 00:32:054 - and 00:33:054 - .These are essentially the same music going, so please double check the consistency of note-catch and note amount used in these two similar parts.You might also need to add a few notes such as on 00:44:454 - to be consistent with the previous part as well. i changed quite a bit of the slower part, hopefully it's more consistent.
   
   
3. 01:25:654 (85654|2,85654|1,85754|1,85754|2) - Shouldn't you repeat this pattern first then going to 01:26:054 (86054|3,86054|0,86154|0,86154|3) - , just like the previous patterns? Also, 01:28:454 (88454|1,88454|0,88554|0,88554|1,88854|2,88854|0,88954|0,88954|2) - Why you suddenly change to another one? It just doesn't follow a good consistency here. I was hoping to avoid having 1313 jack twice, but i realize i did the same with 14 and 12, so i fixed it
   
   
4. 01:34:854 - Same inconsistent thing goes from here.Well things should be grouped in 4 first, so like, 01:36:054 (96054|1,96154|1) - these two should be on col[1]. aye, fixed up a bit (but this one was less important imo)
   
   
5. 03:37:054 - Double for vocal. yep
   
   
6. 03:41:454 (221454|1,221454|3) - Just single should be enough since no sound actually needs to be emphasized here. done
   
   
7. 03:47:054 - ^ ^
   
   
8. 03:55:554 - I think from here you can try something like this to more accurately follow the music: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10912949 i added more lns, but the 1/4 are fine since there's sounds there for sure. not sure about extending that first ln, i feel like it has a natural cut off that allows for the player to focus on something else when this stuff kicks in
   
   
9. 04:03:354 - For consistency you should have a W hitsound and a double here. mkay, jacked it
   
   
10. 04:07:454 (247454|3,247454|1,247554|3,247554|1,247654|0,247654|2,247754|0,247754|2,247854|3,247854|1,247954|3,247954|1,248054|0,248054|2,248154|0,248154|2) - 04:09:054 (249054|2,249054|1,249154|2,249154|1,249254|3,249254|0,249354|0,249354|3,249454|2,249454|1,249554|1,249554|2,249654|3,249654|0,249754|3,249754|0) - I don't mean it'
    s wrong, but using such tiring jacks inside this long jumptrill part really makes it not suitable for a build-up part for the second-kiai. These kinds of jacks are some of the most exhausting kinds. i think it's fine as a buildup part, but i see where you're coming from. i made some changes that fix those issues.
    
    
11. 04:27:454 (267454|0,267554|0,267654|0,267804|0,267954|0,268104|0) - 04:27:554 (267554|3,267704|3,267854|3,267954|3,268054|3,268204|3,268354|3,268504|3) - Can you rearrange this part a bit to avoid these imbalance? that's intentional, i wanted to get away from the 1/8 js i had earlier. this is less dense, but much more difficult, which fits i think. plus, there's no imbalance hand-wise, it goes from left to right, twice. and it fits the theme of the first half with triple jacks. it's just really hard lol
    
    
12. 04:37:454 - Add W. ok w
    
    
13. 04:49:454 - I would suggest delete C here cuz the drum isn't like W+C. yea dunno what that was doing there, fixed
    
    
14. 04:54:654 - Maybe add a C? sure, why not

Patterns of latter half part looks way better. Call me back when everything is replied. Also I would strongly suggest you to double check the hitsounds in the map as a whole, and be aware of the consistency of the calm vocal part in the beginning and in the middle.

Tofu1222 wrote:

00:52:654 - Redundant green line, please delete it.

Otherwise the whole map is fine. Faputa you can just fix this for Curiossity :3

lucari0lu wrote:

00:34:254 (34254|3,34254|0,34320|2) - These currently start on the beat, in the music the instrument ends these 2 notes on the beat. This should be mapped accordingly and should be moved back by one space

Fun map to play

Tofu1222 wrote:

Give me some fresh taiko pp :3

Protastic101 wrote:

Maxus is correct about the snaps, they should be moved up by 1/6 and made 1/8 respectively.

Otherwise, looking through this section, I have not come across anything else, so I believe you'll be fine to get this renominated after the snaps are fixed.

Maxus wrote:

Hello, Congrats for qualify, but i think there's something that needs to be addressed first here.

[Mania]
03:39:187 (219187|1) - Quite sure this note is misplaced, should be at 03:39:320 - , a bit fatal one here.

03:52:054 (232054|0,232120|1,232187|2,232254|0) - These should be 1/8 and isn't 1/6 , the sound here sounded 5 times instead of 4 times.

Want to hear your opinion first about this matter.
Regardless though, this is quite nice map you have here, good luck.

Tofu1222 wrote:

Maxus and I have discusssed about a few more concerns of the snaps in the osu!mania difficulty. We come up with the following suggestions:

[Kuriossiti's Jungle Karnage]

1. 00:52:354 - The snaps around here is a bit questionable. To accurately follow the soft bell-like drums, you can implement the following suggestion shown in this screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10944254
   The double note is due to the heavier presence of that drum sound compared to others, and as we have discussed, they should be snapped to 1/8 seems good
   
   
2. 03:25:854 - The snaps of piano sounds from here actually is not merely evenly spreaded to 1/6, but do have varied snaps. The suggestion is shown in this screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10944259
   At first it is 1/2 snapped pianos, when it gets to 03:26:054 - , a sudden 1/12 sound on 03:26:087 - happens, and then the sounds are just evenly spreaded with 1/6 intervals with each other from that point until the very end, 03:26:487 - . The wub sound is still snapped to 03:26:254 - , however. Though it might be a bit awkward to play, it is the best way we can think of to accurately snap these pianos. definitely, some changes needed to be made here. However, I found it closer to the piano to have the first two notes 1/6 from each other, then a 3/12 gap between the next note, and then 1/16 spacing after that. The first note sounded closer than 1/2, same with the second. let me know if i'm wrong

After resolving this, I think this diff is already good to go again

Tofu1222 wrote:

03:25:920 (205920|2,206020|0,206087|1) - Still these snaps are not exactly right. 03:25:920 (205920|2) - This one is definitely a bit too early, should be on 03:25:954 - , while the interval between 03:26:020 (206020|0,206087|1) - is not the same as the further notes: this one is shorter, which is why i suggest this 03:26:020 (206020|0) - to be on 03:26:054 -