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AAAA - carnation

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ailv
403 posts
Joined August 2015
ailv
sorry late mod thanksgiving op

extreme

00:39:843 (4,1,1) - nc here is weird

01:00:093 (1,2) - add emphasis here to match since earlier u break flow 00:58:593 (1,2) -
01:04:593 (1,2) - ^

01:01:405 (10,11) - remove this since u don't use any other 1/4 jump in this section

01:10:780 (2,3,4) - spacing a bit large here imo

here 01:30:093 (3,4) - u ignore the bg piano so i don't t hink 01:25:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - needs to be so dense

01:49:968 (1,2,3,4) - prolly should have lower spacing than 01:50:624 (4) -


black another

not a problem its just kinda weird how this diff doesn't use the bottom much compared to the rest

00:19:218 (5) - split into two sliders? 00:19:405 - is rlly strong

00:54:093 (1,2) - kinda weak spacing here

01:46:093 (7) - rlly strong sound on slider end here clickable works better imo

02:02:249 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - only sharp angled stream, i think it'd make more sense both aesthietically and playabilityh to keep it curved like the rest

02:12:093 (1) - imo this is kinda ugly shape

another

01:07:405 (9,2) - overlap

01:15:093 (4,5,1) - fix nc to match same as higher diffs
02:12:093 (5,6,1) - ^

hyper

01:43:217 (4) - snap

00:59:155 (3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern feels too visually dense

normal

uh ur green lines are doubled
coke bottle
271 posts
Joined May 2017
coke bottle
hi late mod i blame my holiday trip
thats one weird bg
ithink all diff need to end on same note. pls fix this. correct me if im wrongf
classical music makes me want to jump off a building

beginner
00:46:593 (1) - ctrl j?
01:40:593 (1) - spinner must have at least 4 beat rest time for beginner
01:49:968 (1) - ^

normal
01:15:843 (1) - extend spinner enmd tyo 01:15:843 (1) -
01:49:968 (1) - spinner in normal must have 3 beat rest time

another
00:24:843 (4) - blanket can be improved. use hitcircles

cannot take clasical music head explodes.
modding skills has died over the past week
Noffy
Nomination Assessment Team
1,656 posts
Joined April 2012
Noffy

ailv wrote:

normal

uh ur green lines are doubled wtf... fixed by removing a ton of timing points whee

Reynolduh wrote:

normal
01:15:843 (1) - extend spinner enmd tyo 01:15:843 (1) - ok
01:49:968 (1) - spinner in normal must have 3 beat rest time
uh
  1. >ranking criteria
    1. >osu
      1. >normal
        1. >guidelines
          1. >"Spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats."
So no, it does not have to be 3 beat rest. It is a guideline it should be at least 2. Additionally, there is one bar rest immediately following the 2 objects after the spinner, so the player will have plenty of time to recover before playing the more dense objects. no change.
polka how did the doubled lines even happen
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 79218
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 93,12093,18093,25622,40593,46593,58593,64593,76059,85593,91593,103593,114122,121593,133059,136218,148622
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 0.7999997

[Metadata]
Title:carnation
TitleUnicode:carnation
Artist:AAAA
ArtistUnicode:ああああ
Creator:Veridian
Version:normal
Source:BMS
Tags:piano classical rhythm game stream noffy naotoshi
BeatmapID:1438652
BeatmapSetID:677687

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.7
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
polka

ailv wrote:

sorry late mod thanksgiving op

extreme

00:39:843 (4,1,1) - nc here is weird :arrow: I need it for the slider slow down haha

01:00:093 (1,2) - add emphasis here to match since earlier u break flow 00:58:593 (1,2) - :arrow: Not sure I understand.
01:04:593 (1,2) - ^ :arrow: ^

01:01:405 (10,11) - remove this since u don't use any other 1/4 jump in this section :arrow: 01:07:218 (8,9,10,11,1) - ?

01:10:780 (2,3,4) - spacing a bit large here imo :arrow: adjusted.

here 01:30:093 (3,4) - u ignore the bg piano so i don't t hink 01:25:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - needs to be so dense :arrow: Think I fixed.

01:49:968 (1,2,3,4) - prolly should have lower spacing than 01:50:624 (4) - :arrow: Done.


black another

not a problem its just kinda weird how this diff doesn't use the bottom much compared to the rest :arrow: Players wont care about it

00:19:218 (5) - split into two sliders? 00:19:405 - is rlly strong :arrow: Yeah but Im trying to keep the density lower.

00:54:093 (1,2) - kinda weak spacing here :arrow: For emphasise to 00:54:843 (3) - .

01:46:093 (7) - rlly strong sound on slider end here clickable works better imo :arrow: Really too hard to read.

02:02:249 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - only sharp angled stream, i think it'd make more sense both aesthietically and playabilityh to keep it curved like the rest :arrow: Its because 02:02:718 (8,9,10) - sounds different.

02:12:093 (1) - imo this is kinda ugly shape :arrow: Its a curve ??

another

01:07:405 (9,2) - overlap

01:15:093 (4,5,1) - fix nc to match same as higher diffs
02:12:093 (5,6,1) - ^

hyper

01:43:217 (4) - snap :arrow: finxed

00:59:155 (3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern feels too visually dense :arrow: Maybe

normal

uh ur green lines are doubled
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
polka

Reynolduh wrote:

hi late mod i blame my holiday trip
thats one weird bg :arrow: fits tho
ithink all diff need to end on same note. pls fix this. correct me if im wrongf :arrow: another doesnt have to because its a gd
classical music makes me want to jump off a building :arrow: why lol

beginner
00:46:593 (1) - ctrl j? :arrow: Ehhh I like how this looks
01:40:593 (1) - spinner must have at least 4 beat rest time for beginner
01:49:968 (1) - ^

normal
01:15:843 (1) - extend spinner enmd tyo 01:15:843 (1) -
01:49:968 (1) - spinner in normal must have 3 beat rest time

another
00:24:843 (4) - blanket can be improved. use hitcircles

cannot take clasical music head explodes.
modding skills has died over the past week :arrow: lol what. Aslo ya they have this was kinda ass especially considering what I gave you.
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata
went on vacation so this took a while, sry!!. about hitsounds i'll copy them later, still debating whether to use my own or not since i don't really like additive customs. more a personal preference tho~

please use my name on gd thx :D

~
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Uta
963 posts
Joined December 2016
Uta
finally, a monstrata gd
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
polka

Uta wrote:

finally, a monstrata gd
?
Shirayuki-chan
1 post
Joined July 2013
Shirayuki-chan
I hope this beatmap will finish sooner~! :) :) :) :) :)
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
polka

Shirayuki-chan wrote:

I hope this beatmap will finish sooner~! :) :) :) :) :)
waiting patiently ouo
Lulu-
398 posts
Joined March 2014
Lulu-
hi m4m with monstrata, smol mod

[general]

00:12:093 - unsnapped kiai
02:09:093 - ^
check aimod for more stuff

[diff]

00:17:999 (4,1) - the movement you chose for these two is great, but they could do a better job at representing the song's rising intensity if you were to increase the spacing on them

00:59:155 - after seeing you go all out on the first major kiai, the others just seem somewhat disappointing in terms of utilizing what the song offers to its fullest. while i do think that the first one is kinda overdone and needs some 1/4 sliders to make it play more fluently, this one needs some more work put into using some of the potential they have. both the volume and intensity just really call for something more powerful, considering how quiet the instruments in the first kiai were

01:01:593 (1) - isn't this offscreen

01:15:093 (1,2) - these sound more like 1/6s than 1/4s and changing them wouldn't make them feel particularly heavy either

01:31:593 (1,2) - the transition to 1/3 here seems a bit unintuitive to me, as you don't really have an indicator that makes it seem like the following section is snapped in 1/3. what i'd do here is to go with 1/3 reverses similar to what you did in the rest of the part

01:53:343 - consider increasing the hs volume, this is barely audible. a quick personal suggestion would be to increase the volume with each circle on 01:54:843 (1,2,3) -

02:12:093 (1,2) - same as above

this is some really cool stuff tbh, gl!
SquareTude
560 posts
Joined April 2015
SquareTude
mostrata m4m

00:31:218 (3) - Feel like this one should be away from 00:30:468 (1,2) - these two as it is quite different
00:34:593 (1,4) - is this overlap intentional?
00:49:593 (1) - This one should be clickable since it's way louder than 00:50:718 (3) - which is a circle.
01:11:718 (1,2,3,4) - has bigger spacing than 02:08:718 (1,2,3,4) - but it's sounding exactly the same.
01:26:343 (1,3) - should definitely have bigger spacing than the rest of those circles https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10132240
01:45:093 (3) - ugly, only slider like that in whole map
02:05:718 (2,3,4) - Isn't this too close to 02:05:343 (1) - ? 01:08:718 (5,6,7) - Overe here you have it spaced further away from the slider that was before it.

:) :) :)
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata
@Lulu-

01:31:593 (1,2) - the transition to 1/3 here seems a bit unintuitive to me, as you don't really have an indicator that makes it seem like the following section is snapped in 1/3. what i'd do here is to go with 1/3 reverses similar to what you did in the rest of the part I think the transition is fine, so i just added an NC for combo color change.

Fixed the rest

@SquareTude

00:31:218 (3) - Feel like this one should be away from 00:30:468 (1,2) - these two as it is quite different I think they play fine as they are so i don't really want to distinguish it
00:34:593 (1,4) - is this overlap intentional? yes
00:49:593 (1) - This one should be clickable since it's way louder than 00:50:718 (3) - which is a circle. i like it better as a sliderend
01:11:718 (1,2,3,4) - has bigger spacing than 02:08:718 (1,2,3,4) - but it's sounding exactly the same. the pitch is higher
01:26:343 (1,3) - should definitely have bigger spacing than the rest of those circles https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10132240 I prefer the current spacing i dont want to make the distinction here because its a simple section of the song
01:45:093 (3) - ugly, only slider like that in whole map curved it better
02:05:718 (2,3,4) - Isn't this too close to 02:05:343 (1) - ? 01:08:718 (5,6,7) - Overe here you have it spaced further away from the slider that was before it. fixed.



buffed the kiai and adjusted the hitsounding to fit my diff better.

monstrata's extra
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polka
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sweet! LETS PUSH!!!!

waiting for sotarks : )
Sotarks
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Sotarks
hi

general
aimod
01:48:749 - 01:49:124 - can you check snapping here? I think should be 1/4? not 1/3? some diffs use 1/3 some use 1/4 so not consistent
also please check all diffs you have kiai unsnapped and some tags and countdown conflicts, get that fixed.

monstrata's extra
00:30:468 (1,2,3,1) - not the same spacing?
02:01:030 (4,5,6) - move 5 more to the right? angle is plays bad here, and too close to 02:01:968 (3) -

extreme
00:17:905 (6,7,1) - 1/4 jump here would be cool, or something like what Monstrata did?
00:21:843 (3) - shorten to 1/1? you are skipping piano notes on 00:22:405 -
00:32:905 (5,1) - too big for this section man
01:10:780 (2,3,4) - why the extra spacing on 4? sounds the same as 01:09:280 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
01:13:874 - triplet here?
01:54:093 (1) - better to map the piano. playing a spinner to those piano notes on 01:54:843 - is questionable...

black another
00:04:221 (3,4) - really big for a quiet section... its even bigger than 00:08:718 (7,1) -
00:25:593 (1) - should end on white tick no?
01:15:093 (1,2) - should be 1/6

nao's another
00:11:717 (7,8) - 2 repeats beginning on white tick?
00:44:905 (2,3,4) - why this is so easy compared to stream earlier? and on red tick instead of white?
01:12:093 - forgot a slider here?
01:15:093 (4,5,1) - 1/6 slider instead? since this is 1/6 same with 02:12:093 (5,6,1) -
01:38:093 (2) - nothing here dude

back me call
polka
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polka

Sotarks wrote:

hi

general
aimod :arrow: fixed
01:48:749 - 01:49:124 - can you check snapping here? I think should be 1/4? not 1/3? some diffs use 1/3 some use 1/4 so not consistent :arrow: fixed
also please check all diffs you have kiai unsnapped and some tags and countdown conflicts, get that fixed. :arrow: fixed

monstrata's extra
00:30:468 (1,2,3,1) - not the same spacing?
02:01:030 (4,5,6) - move 5 more to the right? angle is plays bad here, and too close to 02:01:968 (3) -

extreme
00:17:905 (6,7,1) - 1/4 jump here would be cool, or something like what Monstrata did? :arrow: fixed
00:21:843 (3) - shorten to 1/1? you are skipping piano notes on 00:22:405 - :arrow: mapping strings.
00:32:905 (5,1) - too big for this section man :arrow: fixed.
01:10:780 (2,3,4) - why the extra spacing on 4? sounds the same as 01:09:280 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - :arrow: increase in pitch.
01:13:874 - triplet here? :arrow: fixed
01:54:093 (1) - better to map the piano. playing a spinner to those piano notes on 01:54:843 - is questionable... :arrow: fixed

black another
00:04:221 (3,4) - really big for a quiet section... its even bigger than 00:08:718 (7,1) - :arrow: fixed
00:25:593 (1) - should end on white tick no? :arrow: fixed
01:15:093 (1,2) - should be 1/6 :arrow: fixed

nao's another
00:11:717 (7,8) - 2 repeats beginning on white tick?
00:44:905 (2,3,4) - why this is so easy compared to stream earlier? and on red tick instead of white?
01:12:093 - forgot a slider here?
01:15:093 (4,5,1) - 1/6 slider instead? since this is 1/6 same with 02:12:093 (5,6,1) -
01:38:093 (2) - nothing here dude

back me call
Thank you!

Waiting on nao and monstertata
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Monstrata
@Sotarks. First one, I want the slider to be emphasized a bit thats whyt he spacing changes
Second one, agree, moved it more to the right, thanks!
Nao Tomori
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Sotarks wrote:

hi

nao's another
00:11:717 (7,8) - 2 repeats beginning on white tick? fixed
00:44:905 (2,3,4) - why this is so easy compared to stream earlier? and on red tick instead of white? i switched to following left hand piano,
thought it was more interesting and did not want to sspam 1/4 streams for spread purposes
01:12:093 - forgot a slider here? no, i want to highlight that that section ended, so there's a big gap
01:15:093 (4,5,1) - 1/6 slider instead? since this is 1/6 same with 02:12:093 (5,6,1) -
01:38:093 (2) - nothing here dude

back me call
https://pastebin.com/raw/wHysbqwt

thx
polka
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polka
updated and updated.
Sotarks
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Sotarks
alright, bubbled.
good luck
polka
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polka

Sotarks wrote:

alright, bubbled.
good luck
Thank you!!!!!

Waiting on Hobbes for: 11 days and counting ouo b
Izzywing
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Izzywing
for all u guys that map it as 1/6, 01:15:093 (1) - 01:15:843 (1) - and 02:12:093 (1) - and 02:12:843 (1) - are all 1/8, not 1/6. for both parts the first one has 5 notes and the second has 4.
polka
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polka

Hobbes2 wrote:

for all u guys that map it as 1/6, 01:15:093 (1) - 01:15:843 (1) - and 02:12:093 (1) - and 02:12:843 (1) - are all 1/8, not 1/6. for both parts the first one has 5 notes and the second has 4.
fixed. Also since you guys just used kick sliders, I shortened them but kept any angular aesthetic you guys had going!
Izzywing
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Izzywing
ok also fixed a spinner in the easy and some other thing i forgot that is really small, polka fixed a blanket or something on his own and then we also made the angle on a jump stream in the extreme less harsh cool cool
Noffy
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Noffy
yAAAAs
Monstrata
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Monstrata
We'll be right back after this short break.
polka
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polka

Hobbes2 wrote:

ok also fixed a spinner in the easy and some other thing i forgot that is really small, polka fixed a blanket or something on his own and then we also made the angle on a jump stream in the extreme less harsh cool cool
THANK YOU HOBBES
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