00:00:818 - should be a note here since there is in the patterns above eg 00:04:070 (4070|3,4175|0,4280|2,4280|1,4385|3,4490|1,4594|0,4699|2,4699|3) - not to mention there is a sound
only followed that high pitch "drumish" sound with streams00:00:923 - should be a double
00:02:497 - add one like before
same as before00:06:587 (6587|2,6692|3,6797|1,6797|0,7007|2,7112|3,7217|0,7217|1) - repeating the pattern seems pretty boring. there is no real call for it in the music either, so maybe just move some
it would be boring if it was the same pattern for like 10 seconds in a row, but 1 second of that pattern is not boring at all 00:13:301 (13301|2,13406|1,13510|3,13510|0,13720|2,13825|1,13930|0,13930|3) - ^^
^00:12:566 - missing a note
00:14:769 - ^^
00:40:364 (40364|1,40364|0,40469|3,40469|2) - considering these are both doubles, why arent 00:40:573 (40573|1,40678|2) - these doubles as well?
because sound fades out00:40:783 (40783|3,40888|1,40993|3,41098|1,41203|3,41308|1,41413|3) - well this is slightly boring, maybe move some
subjective00:42:252 (42252|0,43091|0) - im not a fan of these being in the same column
cant help you with that00:45:818 (45818|2,45923|2,46028|1,46133|1) - nothing calls for the jacks here. not to mention, its inconsistent when compared with the rest of the chart in this area
sound is repetitive imowould mine a note here 00:53:580 - and here 00:53:895 - for the bass
want to keep that part LN only00:58:406 (58406|2,58406|3,58510|1,58510|0,58615|3,58615|2,58720|1,58720|0) - why aren't these jacking? they should be
because its impossible to map them with LNs01:06:797 (66797|0,66797|1,67007|3,67112|2,67322|1) - ooo this is a bit of a mess tbh. would prefer something like:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9389031 this is fine imo01:18:965 - should be a triple
sound not strong enough as other ones01:24:420 (84420|0,84420|1,84839|0,84839|1) - there are alot of repeating patterns that make the chart p boring and repetitive in this section
01:26:517 (86517|2,86517|3,86937|2,86937|3) -
01:27:776 (87776|2,87776|0,88196|0,88196|2) -
01:33:231 (93231|1,93231|2,93650|2,93650|1) -
01:37:007 (97007|3,97007|2,97427|2,97427|3) -
01:39:105 (99105|2,99105|3,99524|2,99524|3) -
01:40:364 (100364|2,100364|1,100783|0,100783|1,101203|2,101203|1,101622|1,101622|0) -
there were some more
not that much noticable in gameplay, aslo subjective because some patterms cam be interesting to play, making them repetitive does not make them boring01:50:014 (110014|0) - should end at 01:52:112 - but idk
rearanged01:56:727 (116727|0) - ^^ but with 01:58:825 -
02:00:504 (120504|3) - ^^ but with 02:03:021 - tbh
02:26:098 (146098|2) - this shouldnt be here. i think there are more so you may want to double check
02:52:217 - okay this random gap is so weird to be. since its like the
only gap in kiai then maybe just fill it despite the lack of sound. a little overmapping cant harm anyway
its fine02:58:930 - ^^
^^03:02:287 - ^^
^^03:02:287 - they're more frequent than before so ill stop (take back what i said about the only gap lmao)
k03:58:196 (238196|3,238231|2,238266|1,238301|0) - why tf is this 1/12th? if its for this sound it is always 1/8th unless the song is on a 3/4 time signature. please change it to 1/8th. gets rid of that odd gap as well
works better with 142 BPM03:58:615 (238615|3,238650|2,238685|1,238720|0) - ^^
04:04:490 (244490|0,244524|1,244559|2,244594|3) - ^^
04:11:937 - why is this not a double, and why is it not jacking with the double below? :thinking:
because sound is not strong enough04:22:951 (262951|3,262986|2,263021|1,263056|0) - again, 1/8th pls
05:16:657 (316657|2,316762|3) - why aren't these doubles? these are 05:16:448 (316448|3,316448|2,316552|0,316552|1) -
they are not?05:33:650 (333650|3,334070|3) - intended? either way move them lmao
wanted some variety + wanted to represent that "bump" sound in the song by the drums05:37:007 (337007|1,337427|2,337846|1,338266|2,338685|1) - this isn't very interesting lmaoooo move some please
intended05:39:105 (339105|3,339524|0,339944|3,340364|0) - ^^
^^05:40:783 (340783|1,341203|3,341622|1) - ^^
^^05:42:042 (342042|2,342462|3,342881|2) - ^^