1. Cook Easy (5,47 stars, 359 notes)
2. Easy (1,39 stars, 101 notes)
3. Hard (3,43 stars, 256 notes)
4. Insane (4,6 stars, 328 notes)
5. Normal (2,07 stars, 175 notes)

ShiiTsuin wrote:

o/
Let's get into this!

Sphinx

You told me on my mod queue that you use "full-circular flow" for this difficulty, and the for most part I would agree. The consistent counter-clockwise rotation kind of gets pretty boring and, whilst you have snappy movement with the massive jumpy section, I can imagine it being an issue with people who play with mice.
I do however quite like how this circular motion is incorporated into the overlaps of hitobjects, with them either following on from a slider's shape, or by stacking them onto a slider head/end.
Another concern is the lack of Angular Consistency, with sliders all seemingly sharing their own angles, which looks visually inconsistent, and poor. I am aware that this Angular consistency could mess with how this difficulty is designed, but I've seen time and time again that this is something that gets noticed by BNs and stuff :3
00:01:502 (2,4) - these break the pattern i just mentioned above, and it looks a little messy. It's understandable that this was done so that 00:02:394 (1) - blanketed it better, but this could be resolved by moving both 00:02:394 (1) and 00:02:037 (4) either up and in line with 00:01:502 (2) , or moved away from 00:01:502 (2) entirely.
00:05:609 (2) - Could be curved a little more to blanket 00:05:966 (3) - better, and it'd probably make a bit more sense for the flow.
00:06:859 (4) - Need to be moved down ever so slightly to line up better with the arc of 00:07:752 (2) .
00:14:002 (1) - Would have expected a slightly stronger blanket, as it barely looks like it blankets 00:13:466 (3) .
00:15:430 (1) - Would have given this a sharper curve so that it blankets 00:15:073 (5) - nicer.
00:16:502 (1) - Could blanket 00:15:966 (3) - whilst having a shape which moves directly into 00:16:859 (2) .
00:16:859 (2) - Overlaps with 00:15:966 (3) and does not follow the pattern I mentioned at the beginning of the mod.
00:21:144 (2) - This would look so much nicer as a sharper curve that blankets 00:21:858 (5) .
00:27:215 (1) - This subtle "blanket" is a bit off because of the angle (and curve) of the slider vs. 00:27:751 (3) .
00:29:358 (3) - Should be moved a little up and to the left so that it is blanketed by the corner of 00:28:644 (1) more nicely.
00:29:179 (2,5) - These two look like they should be a blanket and hit object, yet 00:29:715 (5) is too low down.
00:32:572 (5,6,1,2,3) - Not really a fan of 5,6. Moreover, you switch from counter-clockwise to clockwise movement in an uncomfortable way. Yes you can snap this and it plays alright, but it doesn't really make much sense to me why there'd be a change in flow here.
00:39:447 (4,5) - Don't line up perfectly with 00:39:179 (3) - slider body :3 why?
00:43:286 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This is a solid 8 seconds of just jumps o.O Annoys me that it's mostly the same kind of spacing right up until 00:50:072 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) .
01:02:572 (5) - Overlaps with 01:02:215 (3) (probably intentionally) and 01:02:929 (1) which makes it look a bit ugly.
01:06:679 (4,1) - and 01:09:358 (4,1) have different visual spacing which looks messy.
01:21:321 (3) - Doesn't line up with 01:20:786 (1) - slider body particularly well
Not terribly made, just repetitive and a bit inconsistent.

Good Luck getting this mapset ranked

Yusomi wrote:

hii nm from my queue~

Sphinx

00:01:145 (1) - this slider is slightly too spaced from 00:01:055 (5) -
00:17:573 (5) - there's a strong vocal here you could emphasise better i think this good already
00:36:590 (4) - previous note is 0.66x, next note is 0.53x. maybe make spacing even
00:39:447 (4) - similar problem here
00:53:733 (2) - spacing is pretty inconsistent between parts of this stream. i understand you want the first 4 with low spacing and next 4 with higher spacing. but these groups of 4 aren't consistent with themselves
01:12:215 (1,1,1,1) - i dont understand the NCs here

insane

00:10:431 (1) - cute slider >w<
00:17:573 (5) - like the top diff i suggest emphasising vocals here. maybe with 3/4 slider or something i heard a sound 00:17:752 - here. so no..
00:36:590 (4) - spacing is a little off here
00:40:965 (5,6) - there's a little giggle (?) on the blue tick here, maybe a triple would be more fitting i didn't hear any..

01:11:143 (8) - spacing is a little off here

good luck !

Lafayla wrote:

NM mod from my queue
Interesting bug I found> upon freshly downloading your map, it requested an update for sphinx and after doing so it turned into this 0 star map >>I was able to redownload the map to get the sphinx difficulty again

updated map

Easy>
00:09:894 (5) - makes more sense to land 00:09:894 - here in my opinion, normally I would say otherwise to making rhythms in an easy different lengths but because the rhythm prior to this uses more than 1/1 spacing i think it would be better to match this sound with the same spacing i know but 00:09:716 - here is a strong sound anyway it will sound strange when i move it to red thick

spacing

01:25:964 - I would make this a clickable like a circle and then start the spinner after it i took reference from here
Normal>
01:15:786 - starting from here, consistency is hard to distinguish. listening to the melody > you got melody 1, melody 2, return to melody 1, then melody 3, I would use the same rhythm from melody 1 the first time it comes around at the second time , basically copying 01:16:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - and pasting 01:21:143 - hmm i dont get it
make sure that if you follow ^ advice you make aesthetics also similar to melody 1.
Hard>
00:21:858 (4) - not a fan of this kind of overlap on a hard, I would wait until more people complain about it though I don't think it's a problem as long as nobody complains about it
00:32:215 (3) - same as ^ ^
01:12:751 (1) - I would add this to the previous combo
01:13:108 (2) - I would make this the new combo
Insane>
I'm sure there are many prettier sliders you can make besides a question mark at 00:10:431 (1) - ,
ussually red anchors show some sounds that play in the background of sliders, I would use a wave slider instead like hmm no, thanks

wave slider

00:25:786 (5) - I wish you gave this circle more spacing especially when looking at the spacing you gave 00:25:965 (6) - 6 is more loud sound than 5 i guess
01:13:108 (2) - I think deserves the same spacing as 01:13:465 (4) - no since 01:13:643 (1) - is a more strong sound
Sphinx>
PP mapping at its finest>
00:43:286 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - not a big fan of the whole circle spam, perhaps add a slider to new vocal starts like you did at 00:42:929 (1) - , in other words I would make 00:44:358 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 1/2 sliders great idea but i have alternative for it
01:21:857 (6) - I don't think this circle needs this much spacing emphasis, the only thing that needs this spacing emphasis is 01:22:036 (1) -

Best wishes on the mapset Nevertary c:[/color]

Luel Roseline wrote:

From my queue

[Easy (HD,DT,HR)]

Add NC

00:03:644
00:08:644
00:15:364
00:20:787
00:26:144
00:31:501
00:37:215
00:57:215
01:02:929
01:08:643
01:18:286
01:23:286

Remove unnecessary timing (Green ticks)

00:01:145
00:10:431
00:17:930
00:23:644
00:28:644
01:15:786

Suggestions and problems

00:34:358 (1) - This slider looks like ugly...How about this? http://puu.sh/y5VSN/7618b0f35f.jpg

460,172,34358,6,0,B|448:128|429:96|429:96|392:92|356:119,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Call me back when you can't. I'll help you.

Josh123uaJ wrote:

o/ NM from my q.
Did you delete Sphinx diff? :^( i just rename it :^)
Easy:
Looks good to me

Normal:
01:01:143 (4,5) - Spacing between these two notes is slightly higher than usual. (1.05x spacing compared to usual 1.00x in the combo.)
01:02:929 (1,2,3,4) - Path between the slider end of (1) and note (2) could be parallel to the path between (3) and (4). hmm no thanks, i think this good already

Hard:
00:39:536 (6,7) - Make the path between them parallel to the path in 00:38:822 (2,3). considering this in the next update

Insane:
00:34:179 (6) - Move it one space to the left (with grid snap) because it's cleaner if you don't have that small angle. i'll only make (6) line up with (1)
00:43:643 (1,2) - Turn these two into a slider like 00:42:929 (1) to keep consistency. i snap slider 00:42:929 (1) - here just because there's no bass drum on its slider end (actually i just follow the bass drum and snare on every vocal sound like 00:42:929 - , 00:45:786 - , and 00:48:643 -
01:16:500 (3,4,5) - You can turn this into a perfect triangle.

Cook Easy:
00:01:145 (1) - You could place this slider at x:122 y:217 so that the 00:00:787 (2,3,4,5) flows better into it

I think this map is neat. GL with your mapset.

July - San wrote:

Hi-Hi!
From my queeeuee!



Okay let's see here..

Easy

00:01:859 (2) - (Cut this to 00:02:216 - )

00:02:752 (3) - (And put this in 00:02:573 - )

00:04:716 (2) - (Cut this to 00:05:073 - )

00:05:609 (3) - (And put this in 00:05:430 - )

00:06:859 (2,3) - (Try to do the same with these two)

00:38:286 (2,3) - (And this) (Cut and move)

01:16:500 (2,3) - (This too) (Cut and move)

01:19:357 (2,3) - (this) (Cut and move)

01:21:500 (2,3) - (This too) (Cut and move)

seems like you want me to follow the drum sound, but the important sound is the trumpet. so i'll follow it instead the drum (ofc if the drum is more strong than other instrument including vocal, i'll follow drum)

also, i took reference from here

Normal

00:08:823 (2) - (What pace are you still there?) (Move this to 00:08:644 - ) to cover that piano sound

00:08:644 (1) - (move this to 00:09:180 - ) snare
(Make this)

piano

01:23:464 (2,3,4,5) - (do the same) ^

Hard

00:12:931 (1) - (Why nc here?) because it's a different sound than the previous one

Cook Easy

01:26:053 (1) - (The spinner Starts in 01:26:143 - and ends in 01:29:357 - ) maybe i'll do it on normal/easy diff, but this is Extra, I don't think I have any reason to ''delay'' the arrival of spinners

That's all,

I like your map dude! <3

Good luck!

Marmorexx wrote:

Hey Pretty solid map you got there already! It was really hard for me to find anything that's improvable

Hard Difficulty ---

00:40:608 (2,3,4) - Until here everything is really continuous and the spacing and compisition seems perfect for me. But this triple is a little close to (1) compared to the rest of the jumps. Since there is an emphasis in the song, maybe move it a little further apart, so you can at least see a connection-line
01:07:215 (1) - Basically the same thing here. Since we're in the chorus here, it might be better to make this spacing a little bigger
01:25:250 (2,3) - This feels like it shouldnt be stacked, since these are also different notes in the song. although these two sounds are different but these two sounds are louder than others
That was it ._.' Seriously, this should be ranked already.


Insane Difficulty ---

Im not gonna tell you to change your whole map, but my idea here would be to make the part that starts here 00:12:931 and ends here 00:17:930 a little slower. If you reduce the spacing between the notes (sv feels nice) it would be an interesting contrast to the other parts of the song. (Also for the part 00:23:644 - 00:28:644) but the spacing is lower than 00:17:930 - already .-.
00:36:590 (4,5) - Here it looks like the spacing between (3) and (4) is bigger than the spacing between (4) and (5), which looks a little unpleasant
00:53:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Since this is the insane difficulty, this stream could be a really tiny hinch harder.


Cook Easy

00:00:430 (1) - Since you made the spacing between (1) and (2) bigger than the rest, and this is the hardes difficulty, making (1) and (2) NOT touch, feels a little nicer here in my opinion. Moving it up and right a little and turning it, so the connection-line aligns perfectly feels very nice for me. I think this is a sound that is not much different to make high spacing :/
00:12:216 (2,3,4) - Feels very nice uwu
00:36:590 (4,5) - Like in the insane diff, this looks a little unpleasant. Check the spacing
00:39:447 (4,5) - Same here
00:54:358 (1) - This last note of the stream makes a tighter curve than the other ones. Maybe move it down and right a little to make it align nicer i think this good already


Thats everything i could see. Seriously. This is the least i ever found and i REALLY adressed the small issues here. Everything i pointed out is such a little deal, that its nearly unnecessary to change anything at all with this map. I can already see it ranked

Good Luck!

Arphimigon wrote:

Lab Aesthetics Mod!

Results given in [x, y] formats
[Cook Easy]
Object at 00:17:395 - should be placed at: [395, 255] currently at: [396, 256] to move in line with slider at time 00:17:930 -
Object at 00:20:251 - should be placed at: [327, 291] currently at: [328, 292] to move in line with slider at time 00:20:787 -
Object at 01:17:750 - should be placed at: [391, 220] currently at: [388, 224] to blanket slider body at time 01:18:286 -
[Easy]
Object at 00:55:429 - should be placed at: [233, 147] currently at: [232, 148] to move in line with slider at time 00:56:501 -
[Hard]
Object at 00:26:679 - should be placed at: [230, 134] currently at: [232, 136] to blanket slider body at time 00:26:144 -
Object at 00:35:429 - should be placed at: [63, 111] currently at: [64, 112] to move in line with slider at time 00:35:608 - already stacked
[Insane]
Object at 01:20:250 - should be placed at: [390, 156] currently at: [390, 153] to blanket slider body at time 01:20:786 -
[Normal]
Object at 00:02:394 - should be placed at: [215, 187] currently at: [216, 188] to move in line with slider at time 00:01:859 -
Stacked objects won't work correctly often, so take those with salt.

fffffffffffffxD wrote:

Heyo! I'll mod easy and normal now only (sorry, I don't have much free time to mod every single diff, I hope you understand) but I can mod Hard later too if you want

Easy

For this diff, You should prob focus on white ticks only, use 1/1.. it's more likely that your map will be ranked that way (let me know if is there a reason for not following the white ticks, because I don't get it at first), points I think you could fix using the white tick as main reference:
00:01:859 (2) - Perhaps this should end at 00:02:216 (only make it shorter)
00:02:752 (3) - Perhaps this should start at 00:02:573
00:04:716 (2) - Perhaps this should end at 00:05:073 (same for 00:01:859 (2)
00:05:609 (3) - Perhaps this should be at 00:05:430 or 00:05:787
00:06:859 (2) - Perhaps this should end at 00:07:216
00:07:752 (3) - Perhaps this should start at 00:07:930
00:12:931 (1) - Perhaps this should end at 00:13:288 or 00:13:645
00:14:538 (3) - Perhaps this should start at 00:14:359 and end at 00:15:073
00:15:430 (1) - Perhaps this should end at 00:16:145
00:17:038 (3) - Perhaps this should start at 00:16:859 and end at 00:17:573
00:23:644 (1) - Perhaps this should end at 00:24:358
00:25:251 (3) - Perhaps this should start at 00:25:072
00:26:144 (1) - Perhaps this should end at 00:26:858
00:27:751 (3) - Perhaps this should start at 00:27:572 and end at 00:28:286
00:38:286 (2) - Perhaps this should end at 00:38:644
01:09:893 (2) - Perhaps this should start at 01:09:715 and end at 01:10:429
01:14:179 (1) - Perhaps this should start at 01:14:001
01:16:500 (2) - Perhaps this should end at 01:16:857
01:17:393 (3) - Perhaps this should start at 01:17:214
01:17:928 - Consider adding a hc here
01:19:357 (2,3) - Perhaps 2 should end at 01:19:714 and 3 should be at 01:20:071
01:20:428 - Consider adding a hc here
01:21:500 (2,3) - Perhaps 2 should end at 01:21:857 and 3 should be at 01:22:214
01:22:928 - Consider adding a hc here
01:25:964 (1) - Idk.. this slider looks too ''close'' to the previous hc in the timeline, try 01:26:143 so you'll give new people some time to think and realise they need to Spin. Give them 1-3 beats.. but try to always leave enough gaps between the objects, it's an easy diff, so try avoid fast things or things tha might get someone who just downloaded the game confused.
1/1 beats are not always in the white tick, we have to focus on "important sound", & in this case I focus more on its trumpet sound as "important sound"

Normal

00:00:430 (1) - It's okay to introduce new slider shapes already but I think this is too extreme for someone who got started a few minutes/hours.. maybe something simpler here. i took reference from here , so why not
00:00:430 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here seems a bit odd to me.. hmm, let's see, some sliders end at white ticks, while some end at red ticks and there's no pattern that I can see from them.. you should clarify what sounds/instruments you're prioritizing and stick with them, mainly in low diffs. I know, but we don't have to just focus on one instrument, we have to determine its dominant sound depending on the situation/song rhythm
00:53:643 (6) - I think this can be viewed as a bit complicated too as the new players will be used to curved and straight slider shapes at this point, and since the whole section 00:53:643 (6,1,2,3) is a bit dense already, I think you should make a simpler Slider shape too, that won't require much movement fixed

The rest of the diff is okay.. nothing special (I'd expect that from lower diff), but nothing here I could find that can mislead others or that seems out of place

Well fun map overall, but try to pay more attention to lower diffs and there's not much to mod here xD goddamnit.. well at least from what I can see, and I'm not too experienced at modding/mapping, so sorry for not having much content to offer in my mod :/ I hope I was smh helpful to you and your map.. Best of luck with it!