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capsule - Plastic Girl (feat. EeL)

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RedONI
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, February 27, 2018 at 5:40:08 PM

Artist: capsule
Title: Plastic Girl (feat. EeL)
Source: capsule
Tags: capsule plastic girl jpop
BPM: 180
Filesize: 9766kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.18 stars, 323 notes)
  2. Insane (3.3 stars, 31 notes)
  3. Normal (2.3 stars, 216 notes)
Download: capsule - Plastic Girl (feat. EeL)
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This was a song in need of a modern beatmap! Also I love Capsule songs let's get more Capsule in here seriously
Bebatch
Might want to adjust the slider at 00:22:057 (6) - to have a more defined shape? May want to try stretching it out just a tiny bit.
Spacing at 00:27:057 (2) - and 00:27:390 (3) - should be further apart by a little bit to match timings.

Good progress so far! I want to see more
Rivalax
I'll add a complete and long mod later today, but for now know at least that the map isn't timed well. I've done some tweaking and changed the offset to 3400, I'm not sure if it's precise but in any case you have to change it to time well since right now it's not playing correctly.
Topic Starter
RedONI

Rivalax wrote:

I'll add a complete and long mod later today, but for now know at least that the map isn't timed well. I've done some tweaking and changed the offset to 3400, I'm not sure if it's precise but in any case you have to change it to time well since right now it's not playing correctly.
Wow, I'd appreciate that a bunch! I'll do some tinkering right now and see if I can't fix that.
Rivalax
Hope this helps.

Normal

00:03:399 - I would add a hit circle here, since it's a little weird to not map the first impact of the song.

Hard

00:04:233 (5) - It's not spaced the same length as 4, 3, 2. move it just a tad bit away from 4.
00:04:566 (1) - Aligned kinda weird, it doesn't continue with the same line as the other four, move it to match a little after 5, you can disable grid snap to get exact results.
00:05:233 (3,4) - Like above, move them a little upwards to match the line of movement from the slider.
00:06:399 (2,3,4,5) - Same problem with spacing, it's uneven across all of them.
00:07:233 (6) - Move a little up to match 5.
00:09:066 (2,3) - move one of them so they appear on top of one another completley, 2 is for some reason just a little right of 3 and it's a little confusing.
00:11:399 (1,2,3) - This might be my taste, but I think it would look better if they won't overlap like that, just doesn't look good in the eye.
00:13:399 (6,7,8) - Wanted to take these three to say that regarding the whole spacing problem, make sure that it's the same spacing between all of those short "streams" for the sake of consistancy. these ones are spaced correctly but the spacing is completley different than from the spacing before.
00:14:066 (1) - I would move him a little away from the buzz slider to show the impact and climax of the hit.
00:14:399 (2,3,4,5) - Same spacing problem. they seem to be not align properly too.
00:15:233 (1) - Align to the slider.
00:15:566 (2) - Don't really understand why there's a buzz slider here, since it doesn't reflect the music.
00:17:066 (2) - Move this one a little further since there's quite a time gap between this one and the circle before.
00:17:233 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
00:18:733 (3) - Something about this one looks unatrual, maybe move it a little further so they won't overlap, or align it differently.
00:23:399 (1) - Move it further from the slider because of the time gap.
00:27:399 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing and alignment a little random.
00:29:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing uneven.
00:34:983 (3) - Move this one a little downwards.
00:35:399 (1) - Overalp with other slider doesn't look nice.
00:37:733 (6) - Again overlap with other slider weird.
00:39:899 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing :D
00:41:399 (3,4,1) - Spacing.

I think I'll stop pointing out the spacing because I think you get it, just make sure the spacing is even between hit circles because this problem is appearing throughout the entire map.

Other than that alignment and overlap, all of these are the same as spacing with their frequent problems.
Topic Starter
RedONI

Rivalax wrote:

Hope this helps.

Normal

00:03:399 - I would add a hit circle here, since it's a little weird to not map the first impact of the song.

Hard

00:04:233 (5) - It's not spaced the same length as 4, 3, 2. move it just a tad bit away from 4.
00:04:566 (1) - Aligned kinda weird, it doesn't continue with the same line as the other four, move it to match a little after 5, you can disable grid snap to get exact results.
00:05:233 (3,4) - Like above, move them a little upwards to match the line of movement from the slider.
00:06:399 (2,3,4,5) - Same problem with spacing, it's uneven across all of them.
00:07:233 (6) - Move a little up to match 5.
00:09:066 (2,3) - move one of them so they appear on top of one another completley, 2 is for some reason just a little right of 3 and it's a little confusing.
00:11:399 (1,2,3) - This might be my taste, but I think it would look better if they won't overlap like that, just doesn't look good in the eye.
00:13:399 (6,7,8) - Wanted to take these three to say that regarding the whole spacing problem, make sure that it's the same spacing between all of those short "streams" for the sake of consistancy. these ones are spaced correctly but the spacing is completley different than from the spacing before.
00:14:066 (1) - I would move him a little away from the buzz slider to show the impact and climax of the hit.
00:14:399 (2,3,4,5) - Same spacing problem. they seem to be not align properly too.
00:15:233 (1) - Align to the slider.
00:15:566 (2) - Don't really understand why there's a buzz slider here, since it doesn't reflect the music.
00:17:066 (2) - Move this one a little further since there's quite a time gap between this one and the circle before.
00:17:233 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
00:18:733 (3) - Something about this one looks unatrual, maybe move it a little further so they won't overlap, or align it differently.
00:23:399 (1) - Move it further from the slider because of the time gap.
00:27:399 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing and alignment a little random.
00:29:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing uneven.
00:34:983 (3) - Move this one a little downwards.
00:35:399 (1) - Overalp with other slider doesn't look nice.
00:37:733 (6) - Again overlap with other slider weird.
00:39:899 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing :D
00:41:399 (3,4,1) - Spacing.

I think I'll stop pointing out the spacing because I think you get it, just make sure the spacing is even between hit circles because this problem is appearing throughout the entire map.

Other than that alignment and overlap, all of these are the same as spacing with their frequent problems.
The more fixes I make, the more I realize... I kind of had spacing emphasis all wrong, didn't I? Oopsie. :oops:

Anyway, all fixes mentioned were made, and I'm currently going through the rest of the song to fix those mistakes.
Could I still increase spacing and slider speed during the chorus, do you think? Or would that just be too confusing?
Rivalax

TheRedWhite1 wrote:

Rivalax wrote:

Hope this helps.

Normal

00:03:399 - I would add a hit circle here, since it's a little weird to not map the first impact of the song.

Hard

00:04:233 (5) - It's not spaced the same length as 4, 3, 2. move it just a tad bit away from 4.
00:04:566 (1) - Aligned kinda weird, it doesn't continue with the same line as the other four, move it to match a little after 5, you can disable grid snap to get exact results.
00:05:233 (3,4) - Like above, move them a little upwards to match the line of movement from the slider.
00:06:399 (2,3,4,5) - Same problem with spacing, it's uneven across all of them.
00:07:233 (6) - Move a little up to match 5.
00:09:066 (2,3) - move one of them so they appear on top of one another completley, 2 is for some reason just a little right of 3 and it's a little confusing.
00:11:399 (1,2,3) - This might be my taste, but I think it would look better if they won't overlap like that, just doesn't look good in the eye.
00:13:399 (6,7,8) - Wanted to take these three to say that regarding the whole spacing problem, make sure that it's the same spacing between all of those short "streams" for the sake of consistancy. these ones are spaced correctly but the spacing is completley different than from the spacing before.
00:14:066 (1) - I would move him a little away from the buzz slider to show the impact and climax of the hit.
00:14:399 (2,3,4,5) - Same spacing problem. they seem to be not align properly too.
00:15:233 (1) - Align to the slider.
00:15:566 (2) - Don't really understand why there's a buzz slider here, since it doesn't reflect the music.
00:17:066 (2) - Move this one a little further since there's quite a time gap between this one and the circle before.
00:17:233 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
00:18:733 (3) - Something about this one looks unatrual, maybe move it a little further so they won't overlap, or align it differently.
00:23:399 (1) - Move it further from the slider because of the time gap.
00:27:399 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing and alignment a little random.
00:29:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing uneven.
00:34:983 (3) - Move this one a little downwards.
00:35:399 (1) - Overalp with other slider doesn't look nice.
00:37:733 (6) - Again overlap with other slider weird.
00:39:899 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing :D
00:41:399 (3,4,1) - Spacing.

I think I'll stop pointing out the spacing because I think you get it, just make sure the spacing is even between hit circles because this problem is appearing throughout the entire map.

Other than that alignment and overlap, all of these are the same as spacing with their frequent problems.
The more fixes I make, the more I realize... I kind of had spacing emphasis all wrong, didn't I? Oopsie. :oops:

Anyway, all fixes mentioned were made, and I'm currently going through the rest of the song to fix those mistakes.
Could I still increase spacing and slider speed during the chorus, do you think? Or would that just be too confusing?
To be honest I'm not sure if I'm qualified to say if it's confusing or not, since anything at around 3.5 stars is really easy for me. But I don't think it would be too confusing.
Topic Starter
RedONI
Hard difficulty is complete! I'll complete the Normal difficulty soon.
hanfan
Normal:

Several objects aren’t distance snapped, which can make a Normal diff hard to read for newer players. It’s not required, I know, but I’d still check them out. Especially instances like 00:17:066 (4,5,6) and 00:19:399 (5,6,7)

Sliders with more than one reverse are also tricky in Normals. The one at 00:29:233 (4) and 00:39:899 (5) could be represented with a circle and a slider, but this is totally up to you. The double reversing slider at 00:39:899 (5) is followed by a single reversing slider, though, which players may mess up.

Other than that I think it’s pretty good. I really like 01:18:066 (1,2,3,4,5)
Just a side note too, the timing for the Kiai section is not set up for the Normal. I’m sure you already knew, but thought I’d mention it.


Hard:

The Kiai section, both the beginning and end, aren’t snapped.

I would stack these: 00:17:227 (3,4,5) and 00:26:560 (5,6,1)

The slider at 00:20:727 (5) and 00:58:727 (7) are shaped the same, even though the represent very different parts in the music. I really like the first one, but I’d change
00:58:727 (7)
01:01:393 (7)
and 01:04:060 (6) to be different from the first (but the same as each other, if you want to keep them the same).

01:12:060 (6,7,8,9,1) – This is very confusing. I would stack 01:12:393 (7,8,9,1) to avoid this.

01:48:727 (5) I would move it up a little to make the circle look smoother.

Good job so far! Good luck with the map throughout the process :)
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