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Konomi Suzuki - One day sky [OsuMania]

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- Ly0572 -
1,135 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, January 29, 2018 at 4:07:38 PM

Artist: Konomi Suzuki
Title: One day sky
BPM: 118.4
Filesize: 3915kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dell's Artificial Life - 4Key (3.84 stars, 1021 notes)
  2. Easy - 4Key (1.32 stars, 311 notes)
  3. Hard - 4Key (2.76 stars, 652 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (1.9 stars, 486 notes)
Download: Konomi Suzuki - One day sky
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
Dell's Artificial Life by Dellvangel
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no hs yet
not sure with the timings (welp)
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ps: not related to ngnl 0
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MODS/STAR GIVERS
Dellvangel = GD + 3 stars + Timings/Mp3/BG <3
Hestia- = Easy-Normal-Hard-Artificial Life
Zylin = Easy-Normal
Last edited by - Ly0572 - , edited 4 times in total.
Hestia-
271 posts
Joined June 2010
Hestia-
hihi~

[Easy]
00:02:371 (2371|0) - Move to 00:02:624 - and make shorter
00:06:385 (6385|3) - Move to 00:06:628 - and make shorter
00:10:521 (10521|2) - Remove
00:13:115 (13115|1) - Remove
00:15:710 (15710|0) - Remove
00:18:304 (18304|2) - Remove
00:28:683 (28683|0) - Make this a LN and remove 00:28:845 (28845|3) -
or 00:28:845 (28845|3) - Move to 00:28:764 -
01:36:142 - Add 3
01:36:467 (96467|2) - Move to 01:36:548 -

[Normal]
00:07:358 (7358|0) - End at 00:09:061
01:31:642 (91642|2) - Move to 01:31:629 - the timing on this section is weird
01:36:223 (96223|0) - Move to 01:36:142 -

[Hard]
00:07:358 (7358|0,7845|1) - End at 00:09:061 -
00:10:899 (10899|2) - move to 00:10:845 -
00:10:953 (10953|1) - move to 00:10:926 -
01:36:142 (96142|0) - End at 01:36:467 - ?

[Dell's Artificial Life]
00:30:088 (30088|2,30088|3) - Move to 00:30:102 - the timing on these seems weird? double check
01:31:642 (91642|2) - Move to 01:31:629 -

good luck~
Himari Kino
324 posts
Joined June 2015
Himari Kino
hi ly _:3_z
req from pm

col 1|2|3|4

Easy
01:36:467 (96467|2) - move to blue line 01:36:548 -
well neat diff =w=)b

Normal
00:07:845 (7845|1) - maybe layering this sound, i think is better if u put ln in there
00:07:358 (7358|0) - idk why this ln end on 00:08:939 - move to red line , like you do on easy
00:14:737 - kick sound
00:14:575 (14575|1) - for hihat??? , maybe delete and just follow kick sound
01:03:223 - maybe double for cymbal emphasis?
i luv this diff <3 haha

sorry for short mod, hope this help
gdluck for ranked ;)

MY QUEUE IS ALREADY DEAD
- Ly0572 -
1,135 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

Hestia- wrote:

hihi~

[Easy]
00:02:371 (2371|0) - Move to 00:02:624 - and make shorter
00:06:385 (6385|3) - Move to 00:06:628 - and make shorter rearranged
00:10:521 (10521|2) - Remove
00:13:115 (13115|1) - Remove
00:15:710 (15710|0) - Remove
00:18:304 (18304|2) - Remove ayy not necessary
00:28:683 (28683|0) - Make this a LN and remove 00:28:845 (28845|3) -
or 00:28:845 (28845|3) - Move to 00:28:764 - got it
01:36:142 - Add 3 added
01:36:467 (96467|2) - Move to 01:36:548 - okii

[Normal]
00:07:358 (7358|0) - End at 00:09:061 okii
01:31:642 (91642|2) - Move to 01:31:629 - the timing on this section is weird lol ye dell did warn me about the timings in the last part~ im currently looking for someone to help me tho
01:36:223 (96223|0) - Move to 01:36:142 - rearranged

[Hard]
00:07:358 (7358|0,7845|1) - End at 00:09:061 - okii
00:10:899 (10899|2) - move to 00:10:845 - will keep it ~ following the 1/6 snap
00:10:953 (10953|1) - move to 00:10:926 - ^
01:36:142 (96142|0) - End at 01:36:467 - ? hmmmm rearranged

good luck~

sankyuu senpai~ <3

Zylin wrote:

hi ly _:3_z huehue hii tantan
req from pm

col 1|2|3|4

Easy
01:36:467 (96467|2) - move to blue line 01:36:548 - moved
well neat diff =w=)b oboi >w<

Normal
00:07:845 (7845|1) - maybe layering this sound, i think is better if u put ln in there added
00:07:358 (7358|0) - idk why this ln end on 00:08:939 - move to red line , like you do on easy lel
00:14:737 - kick sound okii
00:14:575 (14575|1) - for hihat??? , maybe delete and just follow kick sound nice
01:03:223 - maybe double for cymbal emphasis? okii
i luv this diff <3 haha yasss <3

sorry for short mod, hope this help nah ur cool
gdluck for ranked ;) sankyuuuu <3

MY QUEUE IS ALREADY DEAD

make another one and let me join lololol
thanks for the mod guys wuv u ;)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
923 posts
Joined April 2016
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
0|1|2|3
EZ
00:01:611 (1611|3) - I spent 5 minutes trying to figure out the purpose of this LN, still couldn't find it though
00:02:624 (2624|3) - I'm questioning myself is this is a vocal LN or not because of 00:01:611 (1611|3) but if it is a vocal LN, why didn't you make 00:03:131 (3131|1) a LN
00:03:385 (3385|3) - Welp, I don't know what this LN's purpose is since vocal started at 00:02:624 (2624|3)
00:05:412 (5412|0,6628|0,7358|0) - Same as above

^^^ Questioning LN's purposes, my life's purpose, my existence ^^^

01:04:196 (64196|2,64196|1) - Make this a single
01:28:521 (88521|3,88521|0) - I'd suggest turning this into a single
Not much to say in this diff though ^w^)b . Still, I have to mentioned that a lot of your patterns are repetitive. For example, from 00:10:358 to 00:27:223 , i see a lot of 1,0,2,3 pattern and the similar one repeats a lot. Consider changing that. Nevertheless, nice diff :)
NM
00:01:611 (1611|0,2624|3,3638|0,4651|1,5655|2,6628|3) - Why? Now I can't sleep at night without wondering what is the purpose of those LN
00:31:926 (31926|0) - Why isn't this a double?
00:51:872 (51872|3,51872|2) - You didn't map this sound as a double previously
01:04:845 (64845|0,65169|1,65494|0,65818|1,66142|0) - Erm..... how about 0,1,2,1,0
01:13:926 (73926|0,73926|1,74088|0,74250|2,74413|2,74494|1,74575|0) - I think this is too hard for a NM diff
01:36:467 (96467|1) - I'd suggest adding a note here
Hope this help and gl for ranking :)
error_exe777
720 posts
Joined February 2016
error_exe777
hasn't dellvangel quit? if so you'll need to apply the mods for him/her

General
Difficulties: good
Spread: i feel like the density gap between Normal and Hard is too large. you may want to fix that
Hitsounds: not done
Metadata: add some tags or a source if there is one
AiMod: all good
Other: yeah, timing is weird. i think you should just round them to 118 and 122 tbh. i tried and it works okay

Dell's Artificial Life
00:01:864 (1864|1,1864|3) - why is this a double? please make it a single

00:29:980 (29980|2,29980|3,30034|1,30034|0,30088|3,30088|2,30142|1,30142|0) - god what is this. just carry on the jumptrill normally, at 1/4. not to mention you're missing notes at 00:29:899 -

00:34:845 (34845|3,34845|0,34845|2) - this shouldn't be a triple really. it's the same sound as the notes above, and if you make it a double you can make 00:34:926 (34926|1) - a double as well

00:38:250 - triple?

00:38:899 - ^^

00:39:548 - ^^

00:52:683 (52683|0,52737|1,52791|2) - these should be jumptrills since all the others are. maybe find a way to implement these

00:55:277 (55277|3,55331|2,55385|1) - ^^

00:57:872 (57872|3,57926|2,57980|1) - with this one there is an LN in the way so i would cut to LN short to include it

01:00:467 (60467|0,60521|1,60575|2) - ^^

01:02:791 (62791|3,62791|2) - this is on the 1/4th

01:03:061 (63061|2,63061|3,63115|0,63115|1,63169|3,63169|2) - these are all also 1/4th

01:05:494 - add one to make it a triple like the others (eg 01:04:196 (64196|3,64196|2,64196|1) - or 01:04:845 (64845|2,64845|3,64845|0) - )

01:05:818 (65818|3,65818|1,65818|0) - delete one, not the same sound as the ones i mentioned above

01:06:142 (66142|1,66142|0) - add one bc you know why

01:09:385 - triple?

01:12:629 - ^^

01:12:953 - ^^

01:23:007 - all my concerns here won't mention further

01:30:034 (90034|1,90196|0) - 1/4th

01:30:358 (90358|2,90358|1) - ^^

01:36:183 (96183|0,96250|1,96304|2,96358|3,96413|0,96413|1) - all wrong. all to 1/4th

Hard
00:10:845 (10845|3,10899|2,10953|1) - nope, snapped to 1/4th

00:32:575 (32575|1,32737|2,32899|1,33061|2,33223|1) - ouch maybe move some

00:34:683 (34683|2,34683|3) - don't understand why this is a triple

00:50:899 (50899|0,50899|1,50899|3) - triple is a bit much tbh

01:01:277 - triple?

01:02:845 (62845|2) - snapped to 1/4th

01:03:061 (63061|3,63115|2,63169|1) - ^^

01:09:223 (69223|1,69385|1) - maybe move some?

01:26:575 (86575|2,86575|1,86737|0,86899|2,86899|1,87061|0) - bit boring tbh

01:30:034 (90034|1,90196|0,90358|1) - 1/4th

01:36:142 (96142|0) - don't see what this is for at all. i think you should delete it completely to emphasis the piano anyway

Normal
00:28:683 (28683|2,28845|1) - kyah you've basically gone inbetween the stronger note. as its a normal. delete the other two, and just have the 1/4th snap.

00:40:034 (40034|3,40196|2,40358|1) - if you've added the notes here for the drum, why didn't you add it here? 00:34:845 -

01:01:277 - considering this is like exactly the same as hard, maybe nerf it a bit

01:04:196 (64196|0,64196|2,64845|2,64845|0) - intended?

01:05:494 (65494|3,65494|0,66142|0,66142|3) - ^^

01:14:250 (74250|2,74413|2,74494|1) - that jack is a bit harsh with a 1/4th rhythm right after it. i would try to avoid this tbh

01:26:575 - would prefer this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9331669 - makes things simpler

01:30:034 (90034|1,90196|2,90358|3) - 1/4th

01:36:142 (96142|3) - same as Hard diff, maybe delete this

Easy
00:19:926 - why is there not a note here when there are in other places? (eg 00:22:358 (22358|3,22521|2,22683|0) - 00:24:953 (24953|0,25115|1,25277|3) - etc)

00:28:845 (28845|3) - delete this, as for new players the gap between the LN and the note may be difficult to adjust to

01:01:277 - compared to Normal this is ridiculously empty

01:08:737 (68737|3,69061|3) - not a fan of this

01:10:034 (70034|2,70358|1,70683|2,71007|1) - maybe move some

01:11:331 (71331|0,71656|0) - same as before. if it's intended tho ignore what i said

01:28:521 (88521|3) - shift this over one note (CTRL+LefttArrowKey) to avoid the jack below.

01:30:345 (90345|2) - 1/4th above

best of luck! o/
Mirea
417 posts
Joined May 2016
Mirea
as requested in game <3
1|2|3|4


Normal
00:31:602 (31602|2) - delete? no loud sound

00:34:845 - 00:35:007 - 00:35:169 - should be a note each of them, same like 00:40:034 (40034|3,40196|2,40358|1) -

01:03:548 - add LN? synth

01:14:088 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9298030

01:12:953 - 2 notes here, 01:13:440 - 1 note here, 01:13:926 - 2 notes here, 01:14:088 - 1 note here,
both of them has a same sound, which one is consistent?

Hard
u can actually put a note at 00:07:601 - 00:08:088 -
i hear sounds there same as the other below

00:07:358 (7358|0,7845|1) - i'd like to extend these LN to 00:09:061 - to emphasize the long sound comes up

00:19:764 (19764|2) - move to col 2? kinda weird with these 00:19:683 (19683|3,19764|2) - so it has 1 column space for balance

00:34:683 - delete a note? there's no loud sound, no need to put 2 notes there considering u only put 2 notes for snare here 00:34:358 - as well
check > 00:31:440 (31440|3) - 00:26:088 (26088|1) - etc

00:38:088 (38088|0,38413|0,38737|0,39061|0,39385|0,39710|0,39872|0) - make some change?

00:46:196 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9291726 more balance, imo

00:58:845 - delete a note? check > 00:59:169 - 01:00:791 - same sound

01:03:548 - add LN? synth

01:09:223 (69223|1) - prefer to move this to col 4, will be better i think

i have finish the mod since some days ago but im kinda busy in real life and forgot to post the mod lol
goodluck <3
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