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artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
resnap the first note at all diff plz 00:01:049 (1) - ---> 00:01:050 (1) -
add audio lead-in at least 1 second plz, it has a little lag when start playing map especially in Finnel

Don't have any issues in note pattern, I test playing and get a few slips. Nice SB too

no kuds
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Hi :)
Don't forget that everything are only suggestions.

[General]

Well, I'm not a fan of some sliders, which looks a bit weird to me, but I guess it's okay...
Your mp3's is 320kbps which is not rankable, you need a 192kbps mp3 :<
So : here's a new mp3 for you ! :D

http://www.mediafire.com/?xgzbfatmalv65sw

New offset : 1030

[Aoto]

00:42:892 (2) - Half of this slider is hidden by the previous one, I don't think this is a good idea.
02:49:207 (5) - New combo since you are using a higher spacing.

[Finnel]

03:12:892 (4,1) - Stack them properly under the end of (3)

Hehe, this map is pretty nice, especially the sb ;)
~Starz'd !
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
很棒的图 没发现什么问题 =v=
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
awesome sb~ >~<//

General

green lines dtill cant resnap :!:

Saki

00:21:556 (1) - add finish
00:34:187 (2) - ^
01:56:293 (7) - put under the (6)?
03:03:793 (1) - remove finish
03:04:187 (1) - add finish


Finnel

00:21:556 (1) - add finish
00:34:187 (1) - add finish
00:40:306 (6) - add NC1clap
00:43:661 (6) - ^
01:35:766 (3) - remove clap and add finish
02:51:556 (1) - add finish
03:04:187 (3) - ^


Aoto

00:07:345 (3) - add finish
01:31:029 (1) - remove new combo
01:32:608 (5) - new combo
01:34:187 (1) - remove new combo
01:35:766 (3) - new combo
01:57:872 (1) - add finish
02:08:135 (2) - add NC1clap

good map~~good luck!
Aleksart
616 posts
Joined January 2011
Aleksart
Hi. Has casually found your song.Very much it is pleasant to me
All is very well made.
Upsets only a current absence Kiai-time. Boringly without it :(
Try to add though on the song end 03:04:187 - 03:19:187 ;)
Very class SB :) good job
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Beren

Alexart wrote:

Hi. Has casually found your song.Very much it is pleasant to me
All is very well made.
Upsets only a current absence Kiai-time. Boringly without it :(
Try to add though on the song end 03:04:187 - 03:19:187 ;)
Very class SB :) good job
I hate KIAI :o
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
先射 反正又不要钱 XD
Aleksart
616 posts
Joined January 2011
Aleksart

Beren wrote:

Alexart wrote:

Hi. Has casually found your song.Very much it is pleasant to me
All is very well made.
Upsets only a current absence Kiai-time. Boringly without it :(
Try to add though on the song end 03:04:187 - 03:19:187 ;)
Very class SB :) good job
I hate KIAI :o
:(
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
神sb..

总体来说..找不出什么问题来的..

Saki

前面5个的finish 可以 25% 40% 50% 50% 65%的音量试试（其实变化不大。。）。。

AR+1 OD+1

fine

Finnel

前两个clap 30% 40%?

00:16:434 - x:272 y:120
00:16:632 - x:320 y:64
03:18:408 - finish

个人看法。。

02:38:539 移到后面红线 并且clap音

其余。。。

00:48:408 - 上移一格（lv3）
01:27:882 - 右上角的waypoint右移两格 使其平衡？
02:00:645 - 1,2 右一格（lv3）

Aoto

开始同Saki

00:10:118 - 30% volume
00:13:276 - ^

其余不错

其他

02:38:539 - x 404 y 348
02:38:737 - x 316 y 324
02:38:934 - x 304 y 232
03:07:158 - x 304 y 244
03 07 355 - x 212 y 252

射不出星...暂时
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
:)
Special Normal diff~

Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren) [Normal].osu
注意sb编码 我写在了osu文件里面了
难度名随意

因为图层的问题 做了图层位置的修改
↓
Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren).osb
两个一起使用

记得先备份XD <3 Good luck~

Last edited by DarkRingSystem , edited 1 time in total.
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
My mod is here Beren :3

general;
- fine

saki;
- 00:07:355 >> start the new combo here instead ?
- 00:29:855 >> clap ?
- 00:39:724 >> remove clap, add it on the end instead
- 00:46:237 >> finish ?
- 00:56:303 >> new combo
- 00:58:671 >> finish with 30% volume ?
- 02:07:355 >> new combo ?
- 02:49:197 >> remove a repeat

finnel;
- 00:19:197 >> remove clap
- 01;38:145 >> finish ?
- 02:07:947 >> add a note ?
- 02:49:789 >> add a note with whistle ?
- 00:23:737 >> end (9) here
- 00:41:105 >> end (4) here
- 00:58:671 >> finish with 30% volume ?

aoto;
- 00:23:737 >> end (9) here
- 00:41:105 >> end (4) here
- 00:58:671 >> finish with 30% volume ?

* star
Bessy
145 posts
Joined September 2009
Bessy
Hi~you can lean on me
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
:)
Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren) [Normal].osu

done 难度名你来定~

记得保证 osb里面不要有以下代码

Sample,171566,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",50

:roll: good luck
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
LRC-Mod
20:48 <cmn_891127> : aoto
20:48 <cmn_891127> : 00:22:553 (4) -
20:49 <cmn_891127> : 这个六边形，我觉得应该从5那个位置开始，4放在最后
20:49 <cmn_891127> : 我说的摆放
20:50 <Beren> : O,O我看看
20:52 <Beren> : 这样9一出来8还没消失
20:54 <cmn_891127> : 那最后三个左下，右，右上？
20:55 <Beren> : 瞎了..你等我摆摆看 好复杂
20:55 <cmn_891127> : 用ctrl + r颠倒顺序就好了
20:56 <Beren> : ok~
20:58 <cmn_891127> : 00:22:553 (4) -
20:58 <cmn_891127> : 对其一下
20:59 <Beren> : 恩
20:59 <cmn_891127> : 在01:49:691 这点先下一个，然后移到后面
21:00 <Beren> : 恩
21:01 <cmn_891127> : 02:48:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 扭曲了
21:01 <Beren> : O.O没扭曲
21:01 <cmn_891127> : 而且02:48:013 (4) - 这么近好么
21:02 <Beren> : 恩 故意的
21:05 <cmn_891127> : finnel
21:05 <cmn_891127> : 00:46:829 (1,2,3,4) - 这个要对称么
21:05 <cmn_891127> : ar要不要加一格？
21:06 <Beren> : 不用吧 她排版一直这样的
21:06 <cmn_891127> : 01:34:197 (1) -
21:06 <cmn_891127> : 从这里开始声音好小啊
21:06 <Beren> : ..collab换人了
21:07 <Beren> : 我改一下吧
21:08 <cmn_891127> : 02:07:355 (3,4,5,6) -
21:08 <cmn_891127> : 这里好容易看错啊
21:09 <cmn_891127> : 02:23:145 (1) - 关于SB
21:09 <cmn_891127> : 我觉得应该在转盘前消失掉
21:09 <Beren> : 为什么O.O
21:10 <cmn_891127> : 因为转盘突然把标题遮住好诡异
21:10 <cmn_891127> : 02:22:355 (1) - 从这点消失多好啊
21:10 <Beren> : 打水果的看会更诡异lol
21:10 <cmn_891127> : 这倒是
21:12 <cmn_891127> : 我感觉finnel应该比aoto难啊
21:12 <Beren> : 没啊 finnel
21:12 <Beren> : 是hard
21:13 <cmn_891127> : 错觉了
21:13 <cmn_891127> : tiria
21:14 <cmn_891127> : 00:44:066 (1) - 这个不紧跟着前面么
21:14 <Beren> : 嗯~
21:16 <cmn_891127> : 01:37:947 (2) - 容易在这里断，不过我感觉这样也挺好的
21:16 <Beren> : 这个我跟DRS说过 他说他找人测过没问题
21:18 <cmn_891127> : 02:10:118 (1) - 这个我感觉在这点放一个circle，slider从02:10:513 (1) - 开始
21:18 <cmn_891127> : 02:12:882 (4) - 这个结尾处的音效好诡异
21:19 <Beren> : lol
21:20 <cmn_891127> : 这几个结尾的音效都很诡异，我觉得可以用轻一点的，要不就在长线处加
21:22 <Beren> : 恩，等会让他自己看~
21:23 <cmn_891127> : 02:51:566 (？) - 这是神马
21:23 <Beren> : ..我也不知道
21:23 <cmn_891127> : 是大神那个皮肤的么？
21:24 <Beren> : 他弄的吧 不清楚
21:24 <cmn_891127> : 03:23:145 (3) - 好丑
21:26 <Beren> : ..他的他自己改~一会让他看
21:28 <cmn_891127> : saki
21:28 <cmn_891127> : 01:44:855 (1) -
21:28 <cmn_891127> : 这个很奇怪
21:28 <Beren> : 怎么奇怪了
21:29 <cmn_891127> : 改成一个覆盖的circle?
21:30 <Beren> : 覆盖的circle?
21:30 <cmn_891127> : 不要折返，slider后移1/1
21:31 <Beren> : 01:44:855呢
21:31 <cmn_891127> : 01:44:855 (1) - circle
21:31 <cmn_891127> : 01:45:250 (1) - slider
21:32 <Beren> : ..有区别吗
21:32 <cmn_891127> : 个人喜好。。。
21:32 <Beren> : = =b
21:33 <cmn_891127> : 没有问题了
21:33 <Beren> : 谢谢~
21:37 <cmn_891127> : 还有一个SB的小建议
21:37 <cmn_891127> : Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
21:37 <cmn_891127> : 可以考虑用in/out
21:39 <Beren> : 恩O.O
音乐真的超好听。。。
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
LRC-Mod
thx~

update~
Download: KOKIA - EXEC_COSMOFLIPS. (Beren) [Tiria].osu
Nadina120
135 posts
Joined March 2010
Nadina120
i very much enjoyed playing this map and the song is amazing
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
irc req from kiiwa

[General]

太懒了不看了=_=

[Saki]

00:16:829 (5) - NC
00:24:724 (5) - ^
01:48:408 (6) - ^
01:54:724 (5) - ^
02:01:040 (5) - ^

[DRS]

01:53:539 (4) - 没对好

[Finnel]
00:01:040 (1) - 一开始声音有点响，降点volume吧
02:07:750 (1) - NC吧，有点杀初见

最后一个难度找不出问题嗯:<

好图可惜没有多少星星我就不射了<3

EDIT：竟然有2KD。那就补射一个
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
from kiiwa's irc req.

很喜欢beren的图 无论SB还是图本身 都很喜欢!!

Red : Unrankable/error staff that you must fix them
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

  • [General]
  1. snap绿线
  2. [Finnel]的最后的spinner没有消音
  3. 02:51:566 - SB音效这个有点硬 应该换成更有气势一点的比如N:C1的clap
  • [Tiria]
  1. 00:37:355 (2,3,4) - ..这里发生了什么..试着把(3)向下1grid再向右1grid挪一下..test的时候因为stack的缘故我看到这里乱成一团了|||
    推荐坐标是x360，y208..然后(4)再对齐
  • [Finnel]
  1. 02:07:750 (1,2,3) - 诶？第一次打被骗在这里miss了D:
  • [Aoto]
  1. 00:46:829 (3,4) - 4有点看不清..
  • [SB]
    神SB:D (假note吓我一跳
  1. 嗯，把背景淡出去吧，可以减整整1.0的load呢。
    在//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)底下加一行，内容是

    Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
     S,0,-129,,0.625
     F,0,-129,1055,1,0
     ...
    这样如果你愿意，黑屏的元件都可以省了，因为淡出了BG的背景本身就是黑色的
  2. 此外想问一下为什么"Black Ring.png"的尺寸是800x600?
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Kiiwa asked me to mod this :P

General
the AudioLeadIn isn't the same in all diffs. open the .osu files manually and set it as 1000 in all diffs but [Finnel]
shouldn't the source be Ar Tonelico III?

[Saki]
00:43:671 (1) - the end of this spinner sounds a bit weird to me >_< it sounds better if you finish it 1/2 earlier, imo (and make its end silent)
01:37:355 (1) - omg 5 seconds on a spinner makes it reeally tiring (and boring) D: consider doing something else here
02:03:803 (1,2) - *nazi* consider making a curvy pattern on (1) -kinda like this http://puu.sh/d9A5- so (2) doesn't touch it
02:48:408 (4) - the rhythm kinda changes here so add new combo?
the following green points are unsnapped:
SPOILER
  1. 00:01:647
  2. 00:02:436
  3. 00:03:226
  4. 00:04:015
  5. 00:04:804
  6. 00:05:594
  7. 00:06:383
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  10. 00:07:469
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[Tiria]
increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Diff. they're way too low for a Normal
00:57:092 (7,8) - *nazi* make (8) like this http://puu.sh/d9C4? fits better imo
03:17:224 (2) - *nazi* make it like this http://puu.sh/d9Dh?
again, unsnapped timing sections:
SPOILER
  1. 00:05:594
  2. 00:07:272
  3. 00:07:469
  4. 00:08:851
  5. 00:09:048
  6. 00:10:429
  7. 00:10:627
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also, that fake note is really confusing >< i'm not a big fan of keeping it, since this is a Normal diff. but yeah, you should check it with someone else

[Finnel]
00:30:250 (5) - *nazi* make it like this http://puu.sh/d9EE instead?
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[Aoto]
00:42:092 (1,2) - aaa (2) is pretty much hidden under (1) >_< use some other spacing?
01:44:954 - really unexpected speed up >_< consider making the SV for this slider x1,0 instead
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    lovely mapset! have a star
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
[Aoto]
01:17:816 (7) - 1 grid right
01:27:882 (1) - bad distance
01:45:447 (2) - hard to read,maybe usb new combo?

[Finnel]
00:29:263 (3) - the distance with 2and4 isn't very nice
00:30:842 (6) - same with 5and1
00:37:355 (1) - 1 grid up
00:38:539 (3) - ^when you finish it,redo this note
01:48:013 (1) - bad distance
02:10:513 (7) - you may put this note more upper
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
……kiiwa找我帮忙看我以为是外国mapper，结果是lol
那再加一点吧(英语苦逼<

Finnel里很多slide都拉的过分了一些，追求形状的话应该更加细致一点，也不用刻意追求各种样子，现在的感觉有点粗糙，有点反效果
Tiria的ar用的不是特别好，圈下来的太慢，slide有点偏快，note之间感觉挤得好紧

kds给上一个就好
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

Tiria
02:04:987 (3) - Try not to overlapped by previous slider too much (Nazi)
02:10:118 (1) - This slider is having too much repeating slider......
02:13:671 (1) - ^
02:39:329 (3) - New combo?
02:41:697 (6) - ^
02:48:408 (7) - Same issue as 02:10:118 (1)


Finnel
02:30:053 (2) - Move to another place? I feel I was miss this because it overlapped by hitbursts
02:36:368 (2) - ^
03:24:724 (1) - Why this spinner volume is not lower and lower?


Aoto
* Not sure about slider, but some slider is kinda unrankable. Just sayin'

00:42:882 (2) - Move further away from previous slider, because some player thought that it has another object in middle
00:46:829 (3) - Hmmm, I believe this slider is kinda unrankable because the tail slider is on the sliderpath, also, maybe the player will can't tell the path
01:45:053 (1) - This sudden slider speed can makes confusing for players
02:08:934 (1) - Unrankable slider, the players will can't tell the path, since the head slider is on the sliderpath (not sure if this right)
02:58:276 (2) - ^
03:19:197 (7) - New combo?
03:19:395 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:20:974 (1) - ^

Nice map~
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
加油rank :)
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Beren

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

Tiria
02:04:987 (3) - Try not to overlapped by previous slider too much (Nazi) fixed
02:10:118 (1) - This slider is having too much repeating slider...... fixed
02:13:671 (1) - ^ fixed
02:39:329 (3) - New combo? fixed
02:41:697 (6) - ^ fixed
02:48:408 (7) - Same issue as 02:10:118 (1) fixed


Finnel
02:30:053 (2) - Move to another place? I feel I was miss this because it overlapped by hitbursts fixed
02:36:368 (2) - ^ fixed
03:24:724 (1) - Why this spinner volume is not lower and lower? fixed


Aoto
* Not sure about slider, but some slider is kinda unrankable. Just sayin' it's not a big problem i guess.

00:42:882 (2) - Move further away from previous slider, because some player thought that it has another object in middle
00:46:829 (3) - Hmmm, I believe this slider is kinda unrankable because the tail slider is on the sliderpath, also, maybe the player will can't tell the path
01:45:053 (1) - This sudden slider speed can makes confusing for players
02:08:934 (1) - Unrankable slider, the players will can't tell the path, since the head slider is on the sliderpath (not sure if this right)
02:58:276 (2) - ^
03:19:197 (7) - New combo? fixed
03:19:395 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed
03:20:974 (1) - ^ fixed

Nice map~
Thanks for you mod :)

@Crazy Jay 谢谢:3 我会加油的~
S h i a
397 posts
Joined December 2009
S h i a
[总]
AudioLeadIn: 1000

[aoto]
00:21:566 (1) - x掉 让spinner在这里结尾 再结合后面很漂亮的slider组合也不错啊 ( 这个note位置有点匪夷所思而且.. 打起来感觉太受了
00:42:882 (2) - new combo
01:15:250 (1) - 同00:21:566
01:45:053 (1) - 好快。。
02:41:303 (5) - new combo
02:53:934 (7) - x117 y137
03:11:303 (3) - x127 y166
后面03:24:526 (1) - spinner那里的绿线最好对整齐

[Finnel]
绿线！
其余fine

[Tiria]
绿线手动对齐

[Sakif]
fine
不过 circle size +1 怎么样？

很棒的SB
图也不错<3
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
前一阵找我MOD这图然后我居然给忘了现在才想起来orz

曲子好听，其实我想知道这是什么语……

Aoto

00:41:303 - 听了听感觉这个clap还是去掉好点。已经插了一个二连进来做变化了没有必要再加强了。还有由于这里音乐里没有鼓听起来音色会和前面有出入。
01:45:447 (1) - 我觉得这个circle删掉更能表现你想要的这种感觉
02:30:250 (3,4,5) - 想了想还是提下这里，把3/4slider后面拖个二连放在小节结尾感觉不是很好……加上右面有个停顿会让节奏显得更不连贯（有种突然加速然后急刹车的感觉？不过好像音乐里没有这种表现） 02:30:842 add note
02:49:987 - 为什么我在这个位置不由自主去转spinner……其实从这里到02:51:171放个spinner也挺好的……
03:28:276 - spinner好像可以收到这里


Finnel

01:38:934 to 01:40:513 - 感觉这里可以拖一个0.5x的slider，后面再接spinner，可以多增加一个梯度。而且这spinner略显长……
03:28:276 - end the spinner here

感觉排列有点毛草……建议不开grid重新distance snap一下，打的时候看相邻的circle有的贴上了有的没贴上有的叠起来一点很不爽啊


Tiria

01:48:013 (4) - new combo?
01:51:961 - 这里提高音量有点多此一举了，其实我觉得音乐是从01:53:145才开始加强的
02:09:329 - whislte 略吵
02:31:039 (2,3) - 在音乐里我真的没有听出这种节奏的感觉……如果你非要自创我也无可厚非……
02:36:566 (1) - 这个往上点吧别和底下的叠在一起……
02:51:566 - 其实我想知道这里为什么要弄个假的- -~
02:56:303 (3,4,1,2,3) - note显多。音乐的节奏在这里是很松的。
03:28:276 - 最后的spinner收在这个位置吧- -


Saki

02:41:303 - 为什么把这个地方跳过去了- -
03:28:276 - spinner结束到这里

其实感觉这diff很多new combo略长……估计你有自己的想法我就不指了……


另外这三个diff最后那spinner开始和结束的位置最好都和最高难度统一下……


最高难度做得不错
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
As per your request:

有diff是外國人做的 我就不用中文mod了

[General]
  1. Inconsistent lead-in in Finnel diff, please unify them.I recommend changing the lead in to 1000.
  2. As I remember,you can't put the stack leniency to the highest tick or the lowest tick.For this map,Stack Leniency 5~6 is cool enough.
  3. Silent slider + Silent tick in a map is now unrankable!You should remove either silent tick or silent slider.
[Saki]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 01:37:355 (x) - This spinner is too long for newbie, usually a long spinner will make them boring so would you reduce the lenght of the spinner.
    2. 01:57:092 (4) - (nazi) Would you put this note on the y-axis?I think that's much beautiful.Well this is depends on you.You may need to adjust the spacing after change.
    3. 02:40:513 (2) - I think this place shouldn't be a long slider (to skip a lot of important accent) I would suggest some 1/1 instead of this long slider
    4. 02:49:987 (x) - This place was a bit void compare to overall, I think you need to stuff something here.
    5. 02:52:355 (2) - Same as 01:57:092
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:13:276 (2) - I think you should remove the clap here because there are nothing to support that.I mean the drum sound.
[Tiria]
  1. Difficulty setting
    (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
    1. OD+1 HP+2 to consistent the overall difficulty setting.
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:38:145 (3) - A bit naiz here,would you stack the end of the slider to the end of the slider (2)- properly?
    2. 01:27:487 (5) - This may make confused to some of the newbie and this cover is just a bit meaningless.Please change a position if possible.
    3. 01:48:013 (4) - Probably add a new combo here due to a new pattern was starting here.
    4. 02:51:566 (x) - ...I would ask why here...it's too fake
    5. 03:07:355 (5) - Probably add a new combo here because the new accent point was starting here.
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:18:013 (6) - Add a clap sound at the reverse of the slider to fit the drum sound.
    2. 00:19:197 (7) - Add a clap at the beginning of the slider.
[Finnel]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:34:197 (x) - I think this suggestion would be fine for a hard diff:I would suggest to use x0.8 slider speed here,you can hear the music was slow down here.So slow down the SV can fit the music very much.
    2. 01:48:013 (1,2,3) - I feel really strange to this jump,the main reason is probably about the spacing between (2) and (3)- is smaller then (1)- and (2)-.
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 01:12:092 (x) - Probably add a 5% volume at the end of the spinner?It sounds much better.
[Aoto]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 02:58:276 (2) - (bad gameplay) This slider is really confused!It can lead to a bad gameplay.We don't know what's the sliderpath going for at the beginning of the slider.
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:23:539 (5,6) - The 2-plet at the end of the slider is quite unnecessary,I think a 1/1 slider here is good enough.
    2. 00:27:882 (1) - hum,spacing problem?I didn't recommend reducing the spacing suddenly.
    3. 01:45:447 (1) - Remove the new combo here?
    4. 01:49:987 (8) - I would add a new combo here because a new jump pattern is starting here.
    5. 02:49:197 (1) - I think this note should be a jump, you can hear that the instrument is going ape at all.Consider to change so position of the (1.2.3.4)?
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 01:48:013 (1) - Do you forgot to add a clap here? If not, consider a clap here?
    2. 03:06:961 (7) - ^Same.
That's it.Good luck!
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Beren
@Sandpig 土屋晓创的塔语(Hymmnos) 谢谢mod
@kanpakyin thanks for mod
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[General]
Lead-in is inconsistent. If no special reasons just make them all 1000 plz.
offset: (+8)

[Saki]
01:12:092 (1,1) - 稍微质疑下，这对于最低难，spinner结束后跟的会不会有些快了（而且位置比较偏离中心？）
02:49:987 - 这个点可不可以考虑加个3拍的slider，开头及tick低音或甚至静音，表现一个拖过去？
02:51:566 (1,2,3) - 肉眼可见的spacing

[Tiria]
00:38:145 (3,4) - 可以理解因为折返的限制所以不能反过来，和前面才不一致，但如果是这样或许干脆不要折返用个circle取代呢？
00:47:618 (2) - 这角度真是不怎么好看。。。
01:15:250 (1,1) - 前一个1有点太深入了然后后一个1虽然纵轴位置相同但是不是明显感觉抽出去了。。。。
02:39:329 (1) - 有碰到HP bar
02:49:987 - 建议同Easy，而且至少前面那个finish似乎不太有必要。
03:00:250 (5,6,7) - 这三个实际叠后，5和前面的4可就弄的不太好，自己修一下
一个整体上的东西，这难度给我的感觉太过拥挤了，挡不是不好，我自己就很喜欢，但是没有速度支撑的话就会感觉一坨一坨的。。。

[Finnel]
00:01:040 (1) - 作为一个整体上的前面说明……我总觉得slider的设计无论是单体上还是作为一个局部来讲。。不太精致……甚至是最简单的对称都好。像00:07:355 (1,2,3) - 这样，想法很容易看到，可是视觉感受真是比较糟糕。

[Aoto]
00:27:684 - add a note?
01:25:513 (4,7) - would it be better with new combo?
02:08:934 (1) - silence the tick or use a very low volume
03:02:224 (6,7) - a little nazi... 7 seems not on the line of 3-6
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Beren

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Lead-in is inconsistent. If no special reasons just make them all 1000 plz.
offset: (+8)

[Saki]
01:12:092 (1,1) - 稍微质疑下，这对于最低难，spinner结束后跟的会不会有些快了（而且位置比较偏离中心？）
02:49:987 - 这个点可不可以考虑加个3拍的slider，开头及tick低音或甚至静音，表现一个拖过去？
02:51:566 (1,2,3) - 肉眼可见的spacing

[Tiria]
00:38:145 (3,4) - 可以理解因为折返的限制所以不能反过来，和前面才不一致，但如果是这样或许干脆不要折返用个circle取代呢？
00:47:618 (2) - 这角度真是不怎么好看。。。
01:15:250 (1,1) - 前一个1有点太深入了然后后一个1虽然纵轴位置相同但是不是明显感觉抽出去了。。。。
02:39:329 (1) - 有碰到HP bar
02:49:987 - 建议同Easy，而且至少前面那个finish似乎不太有必要。
03:00:250 (5,6,7) - 这三个实际叠后，5和前面的4可就弄的不太好，自己修一下
一个整体上的东西，这难度给我的感觉太过拥挤了，挡不是不好，我自己就很喜欢，但是没有速度支撑的话就会感觉一坨一坨的。。。

[Finnel]
00:01:040 (1) - 作为一个整体上的前面说明……我总觉得slider的设计无论是单体上还是作为一个局部来讲。。不太精致……甚至是最简单的对称都好。像00:07:355 (1,2,3) - 这样，想法很容易看到，可是视觉感受真是比较糟糕。

[Aoto]
00:27:684 - add a note?
01:25:513 (4,7) - would it be better with new combo?
02:08:934 (1) - silence the tick or use a very low volume
03:02:224 (6,7) - a little nazi... 7 seems not on the line of 3-6
all fixed. thanks for mod! :D
NatsumeRin
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i only got 3 diffs when redownloading, plz do a full-submission before i could recheck.
Beren
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full了~
NatsumeRin
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bubbled.

Edit: Map is not that great but SB is pure awesome.

To the next MAT/BAT: There's two sliders in [Aoto] overlaps on itself a bit, but they're very intuitive as i could see, it should be ok imo.
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Beren
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thanks! :D
tutuhaha
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恭喜<3~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Garven
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[Saki]
00:46:837 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for the Easiest difficulty. Hmm. I guess you have several that are like this though.
00:59:469 - Extend break to here

02:10:521 - ^
03:19:995 (1,2,3) - The slider ticks are obnoxiously loud here.
03:24:732 (1) - Maybe end the spinner on the "s" at around 03:28:383 - ?

[Tiria]
00:08:153 (1) - Repeat arrow is covered by the osu! image post-spinner. Think you can rearrange a bit?
SPOILER
Hrm, I think ending the spinners where Easy did will work best for this difficulty. Two beats feels best for recovery at this difficulty level.
01:45:258 (1) - This might balance out better to use what you did later in the song for this same part with 02:49:995 (10) -
00:59:469 - Extend break to here

02:10:521 - ^
02:39:337 (1,3) - Eew, slider whistle on slider slide sounds awful here.
03:19:995 (1,2,3) - The slider ticks are obnoxiously loud here.
03:24:732 (1) - Maybe end the spinner on the "s" at around 03:28:383 - ?

[Finnel]
This has a different offset than the other three difficulties. Line them up please.
This also doesn't seem to be using that custom soft-hitclap which gives a big consistency disconnect.
00:08:934 (3) - Think you could link the slider ticks up?
SPOILER
00:59:469 - Extend break to here

02:10:521 - ^
01:57:487 (1,2,3) - This spacing bugged me. There's a lot of it riddled throughout the difficulty, if you want to take care of those.
03:24:732 (1) - Maybe end the spinner on the "s" at around 03:28:383 - ?

[Aoto]
00:59:469 - Extend break to here
01:27:890 (1) - You'll have to use tick rate 2 if you want to use this .5x speed here, since the slider looks exactly the same as the previous sliders.
Hm, I didn't like the normal finish use at the end. Felt better using only the custom clap to me. Gives more consistency with the other difficulties too.
Beren
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all fixed :oops:
thank you
Garven
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After like 4 rechecks, everything should be straightened out now. :P

Rebubbled!
Beren
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thank you
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
突然發現beren做的曲子我都好喜歡0w0 map也很不錯
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