EnduranceDamn we have another rochi map right here
General: • 05:53:358 - You have two different volume levels at the same time
• Modding Assistant says that you're not using the following hitsounds, but it could be my fault for not redownloading, if that's the case please ignore this:
Unused hitsounds:
drum-sliderslide.wav
normal-hitclap2.wav
normal-hitclap3.wav
normal-slidertick10.wav
soft-hitfinish2.wav
• Why "Accel World" on tags?
• Combo Color 2 and Combo Color 5 are way TOO similar, not even differenciable ingame, so I'd recommend you to change one of those, at least make them be notoriously different
• Background size is smaller by 1 pixel, it's
1365x767 so just change it to 1366x768
• Widescreen support but NO SB!? ON A -TOCHI MAP!?
Map: • 00:32:459 - I think that this kind of downbeats must be clickable, their sound are just really important in this case
• 00:33:807 - The current rhythm plays a bit weird, maybe if you do
this you could get a better playability and you would still be following the vocals (Just saying but you did it here too 00:38:526 - )
• 00:51:757 (2) - What about moving this a bit up so it doesn't overlap with the slider?
• 00:59:425 (1) - I'd move sliderend a bit down so it blankets better with the next slider shape
• 01:04:650 (1) - Unnecessary NC?
• 01:15:268 (4) - I don't think that this hitsound does fit the song, It feels more as if you accidentaly put it. Same with similar ones on the later parts.
• From 01:42:571 - to 01:47:965 - , What are you trying to follow? It doesn't seems that the mapping there has too much of a sense, you're doing the same thing that you did on the beginning in a, uh, not different, but not the same rhythm. Maybe you could use this space to do use of a concept and follow the 1/4 sounds at the background, It would emphasize a lot more with the song and also would bring a feeling of emotion to the map imo
• 01:55:043 - This one MUST be clickable, the vocal starts there and it's the most important thing to mark on this part, also putting an NC on a slider on a blue tic isn't recommended at all, it doesn't really fit the song since the vocal starts here. For this case I'd just recommend you to change this slider into a kickslider and move 01:55:128 (1) - by 1 tic to the left. Then you could add 1 more tic of lenght to the long sliider and add a kick slider on 01:55:380 -
• 01:58:077 (4) - Maybe moving this a bit down would look better, since it'd be overlapping with 01:58:751 (1) - in a better way
• 02:03:470 (4) - NC for emphasis to the vocals?
• 02:05:493 (1,3) - I think that you should remove the NC on the 1 and add it on the slider 3, It would fit a lot better with the main vocals
• 02:16:279 (1,3) - The same thing here and for simlar parts too
• 02:20:830 (2) - This is the only time that you spaced this slider that far from the previous slider, If you go and see the previous kiais you'll notice that all of the same sliders are spaced by a really low spacing meter. If you don't really want to change the spacing due to your own reasons, at least I'd suggest you to change this slider's shape into a curved one to fit the previous slider and make it look a lot better and synchronized to the previous slider
• 02:31:616 (2) - Same spacing thing, same for future similar sliders
• 03:02:628 (2) - Doing Ctrl+G here would bring a better flow wiith the previous slider, also would emphasize the following strong sounds that have no emphasis at all at this moment (03:03:133 (3,4) - )
• 03:38:526 (1,2) -
This might sound a bit stupid, so If you think so please ignore this one. Maybe you could do clearer shapes here to represent the "calm part" before the kiai, shapes as like straight ones or wave ones. Maybe this has no real sense, I just want to give this map's as most emotion as I can, since the vocals have a really special tone that wants me to hype when I play this.
• 03:48:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same sound than 03:51:335 (4,5,6) - but totally different built up. I guess you could just use one of them for the same patterns, or at least two different patters that have not that much differences like Slider+Circle as pattern1 and 4 circles as pattern2
• 04:12:908 - Why do I hear whistles from now on to the next patterns of this part? It makes no sense since you haven't been using them and now you are (Note that i'm moddiing this with default skin). Please be cautious, since everyone have different skins and different hitsounds on their skins, so using default hitsounds might end up sounding as you didn't want to. You should do a check on your own map with default skin on and see through the whistle's thing
• You can difference this 04:47:291 (1,2) - from this 04:47:628 (1,2,1,2) - , I suggest you to map them as two different sounds like changing the flow after the first two.
• 05:22:347 - This is the only part (that is similar than the previous) where you didn't use the stack to represent this pattern, Why such an inconsistency now?
• 05:53:358 (1) - For this shape I think that you could change the top a bit in order to make it look better. In this case I didn't really had an idea at alll of how to improve it, but maybe you could do something like
this • 06:08:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could add a really cool effect here, by gradually adding spacing to the stream (like First circle is 0,2x, Second circle is 0,3x, Third circle is 0,4x, etc...) It would be REALLY cool, since the sound fits perfectly to that idea
• 06:19:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same here
• 06:38:357 (2) - I suggest you to change this into a kickslider, since it has the same emphasis as 06:38:526 (3,4,5,6) - at this moment, and you should be emphasizing 06:38:526 (3,4,5,6) - in a different way since they're part of a different section
This is all!