1. AncuL's Insane (4,96 stars, 844 notes)
2. Hard (3,67 stars, 514 notes)
3. Modernism (5,44 stars, 755 notes)
4. Normal (1,53 stars, 46 notes)
5. scub x scub (5,92 stars, 761 notes)
6. Seashore (5,71 stars, 761 notes)

AllieBork wrote:

as per scub's request I'll copy what i said on discord so he can reply

[13:21] Alleria: I like the ideas but you should be a bit more consistent with them(edited)
[13:21] Alleria: @我操你妈逼 *
[13:23] Alleria: 00:22:203 (1,1) - use different slidershape if you're gonna follow a different sound unrankable freedom. (If this were to be pushed to ranked I would have used different slider length, and besides every sv change is marked with an nc)
[13:23] Alleria: 00:24:603 (1,2,1,2) - here too though not as required since it's still readable unlike the first one same
[13:24] Alleria: 00:38:603 (3) - a fast non-straight slider would represent the sounds here much better I think that would only crowd the aesthetics. Even so, where would I curve it?
[13:25] Alleria: in the section after that there's no consistency in where those sliders with the bump are. At least not that i can tell consistency in unique slider shapes in the entire kiai though? That just boring
[13:26] Alleria: It's basically on every straight slider -- but I mean consistent with the music
[13:27] Alleria: I basically have the same complaint as your other maps. You have these nice ideas with sliders but you use the same slidershapes/speeds etc to represent different sounds. It'd be so much better if you kept them separate instead per sound sv on 2nd half is less chaotic, as well as adding 5-note bursts to represent some change, but it's still part of the drop. It changes gameplay wise, not aesthetically, because the music didn't change significantly. The 2nd drop is much more variable because it introduced more unique sounds and a significant change in the kiai at the 2nd half of the drop
[13:27] Alleria: 01:29:403 (3) - why yes
[13:28] Alleria: 01:43:603 (1) - since this is low sliderspeed, why is this 01:45:403 (1,2,1) - so highly spaced? snap streams as gimmick introduction for later. Besides, time-distance relations isn't too far off
[13:29] Alleria: also on this in particular. 01:45:203 (3,1,2,1) - all the others are 5 notes, and the music is the same, so why is the second note left out there 1 3 2 4 measure rule applies, you don't want the entire part to be stagnant in terms of musicality, as it gets boring quick
[13:29] Alleria: And lastly on that back and forth pattern the new combo makes it more difficult to read all repetitions are marked with NC
[13:31] Alleria: 02:19:003 (2) - this should represent that drum snare in the same way you did the entire section beore it, instead of the way you represented that other sound it serves as a subtle build-up
[13:31] Alleria: 02:19:603 (3) - ideally this would be one of those curved sliders as well, but that can be neglected for the spinner as you did (so up to your own discretion) there is no sound to represent the slider. It's like 1 2 2 1 2 2 1, and that's it. It's not 1 2 2 1 2 2 1 2 2, in which if it's the latter that is right, I would have followed this rule as well.
[13:33] Alleria: I actually rather like your maps that's why I want you to improve

Kocari wrote:

It's Fucking Amazing that's what I think of it. You mapped to what you heard which is good and not to borderline out of control which I like in mappers. Idk man it's pretty. Simple and Clean how I like it Anyone who posts under me after this comment with negative feedback has no taste and are PP mappers.

Holy fcuk thanks

Doguu wrote:

I like the style a lot.

One thing I do think could be better is the slider tumors are a bit excessive in the intro. It has less appeal there than the rest of the map imo. I don't think they should be removed completely just lessened (00:10:203 (1) like...wat). Also consider putting the tumors on slider ticks to give them a bit more impact; although unnecessary for the whole map, there's not a lot going on here and that would spice up the feeling the player gets by having the impact of the tumors and ticks combined.

smh wrote:

very cute map

gco wrote:

03:25:403 (1) - i think maybe change to a different pattern from here? it gets boring playing that same pattern for like 20 seconds straight imo