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termerys
Someone need to rank this song.
Topic Starter
Mercurius

termerys wrote:

Someone need to rank this song.
thx star!! :)
terametis
こんにちわ!
以下は全て提案です。気に入らなければスルーしてください

[Normal]
01:11:753 (2)     ここだけ間隔が1.5拍になるのはよくないと思います。スライダーを短くして終点を01:12:442にするか、このようなリズムはどうでしょうか。02:48:822 (1)     ここは流れに沿って置いたほうが綺麗だと思います。
[Hard] 
00:48:822 (x)     なにか置いた方がいいと思います。ボーカルが無い部分でも、01:10:891、01:21:925等、ドラムの音やリズムに合わせてノートを置いている場所が多いので違和感を感じます。
01:08:649 (x)     このようなリズムはどうでしょうか?02:17:098 (x)     00:48:822と同様
02:50:201 (2)     スライダーの終点を1grid上へ

[Insane]
かみまっぷ・・・



ランク化期待しています!頑張ってください!
Topic Starter
Mercurius
mod

terametis wrote:

こんにちわ!
以下は全て提案です。気に入らなければスルーしてください

[Normal]
01:11:753 (2)     ここだけ間隔が1.5拍になるのはよくないと思います。スライダーを短くして終点を01:12:442にするか、このようなリズムはどうでしょうか。02:48:822 (1)     ここは流れに沿って置いたほうが綺麗だと思います。
[Hard] 
00:48:822 (x)     なにか置いた方がいいと思います。ボーカルが無い部分でも、01:10:891、01:21:925等、ドラムの音やリズムに合わせてノートを置いている場所が多いので違和感を感じます。
01:08:649 (x)     このようなリズムはどうでしょうか?02:17:098 (x)     00:48:822と同様
02:50:201 (2)     スライダーの終点を1grid上へ

[Insane]
かみまっぷ・・・



ランク化期待しています!頑張ってください!

ok, ALL done!!
thx for modding!

頑張りまーす :oops:
nimba_old
Hardの01:16:925 (1) - のnew comboを
01:17:442 (2) - に変えてみてはどうでしょう?
Topic Starter
Mercurius

nimba wrote:

Hardの01:16:925 (1) - のnew comboを
01:17:442 (2) - に変えてみてはどうでしょう?
done
Topic Starter
Mercurius
OD7 -> OD8
Lucy-Kaede
From #modreqs for Pendulum 8-)

Normal
00:26:063 (2) - This sounds alright, but is a little quick. Swap out (2) for a single hit circle at this time, and leave (3)?
00:30:546 (1) - End at 00:32:529 to allow time for players to find and move to the following hit circle?
01:25:718 (1) - The few notes that follow this seem sidetracked from the rythm, try this timeline. (Placing doesnt matter, but I thought looked okay..)

Hard
02:26:236 (1) - Could be a 1/2 beat repeating slider?
* 02:26:408 (1) - End/repeat
* 02:26:580 (1) - End of repeat

Insane
>Editor says this is 4.86
Imo this is 4.99 or 5+, it must be lowered because of all the long sliders.
Could maybe use larger circles, but I see it's on "normal" already, so it's probably fine.
I can only watch AI play this, so can't be of much help xD


Thats all for now!
Topic Starter
Mercurius

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

From #modreqs for Pendulum 8-)

Normalfixed

00:26:063 (2) - This sounds alright, but is a little quick. Swap out (2) for a single hit circle at this time, and leave (3)?
00:30:546 (1) - End at 00:32:529 to allow time for players to find and move to the following hit circle?
01:25:718 (1) - The few notes that follow this seem sidetracked from the rythm, try this timeline. (Placing doesnt matter, but I thought looked okay..)

Hardfixed
02:26:236 (1) - Could be a 1/2 beat repeating slider?
* 02:26:408 (1) - End/repeat
* 02:26:580 (1) - End of repeat

Insane
>Editor says this is 4.86
Imo this is 4.99 or 5+, it must be lowered because of all the long sliders.
Could maybe use larger circles, but I see it's on "normal" already, so it's probably fine.
I can only watch AI play this, so can't be of much help xD


Thats all for now!
thx for mod.

[Insane]
I like circle size 5 (Normal) \;D/
so I didnt change.
ziin
I'm an early hitter and I'm hitting 10 ms late, so offset +8 should fix it.

[normal]
00:16:753 (1) - move it down a little

[hard]
00:26:408 (1,2,3,4) - I found these to be strange looking. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204185 maybe? I sort of like the fact that 3 is the odd one out, but it still makes the pattern work. I would prefer alternating directions, but you can't quite do that, though you could reverse 2 as well.
01:05:718 (1,2,3) - if you're not following the lyrics, there's not much of a reason to map this. It's the tail end of the break phrase. You should delete them
01:27:442 (1,2,3) - can i get some accelerated spacing?
01:35:891 (5) - up left 1. oh this is why I don't like this sort of spacing, it's easy to look bad.
02:33:649 (1,2,3,1) - accelerated spacing up to a 2.4x jump, as before.

[insane]
>that cs 5 big spacing ar9
too tough for me. good luck.
streams are overmapped, which is kind of surprising for a pendulum song. the drum section is really uninteresting for dnb, and you making it up doesn't sound very good to me. And it'd be a decent enough dt map without the overmapping.
00:22:960 (4) - these don't really fit IMO, mainly because there's hardly anything on the blue ticks in the song.
Topic Starter
Mercurius
mod

ziin wrote:

I'm an early hitter and I'm hitting 10 ms late, so offset +8 should fix it. *fixed

[normal]
00:16:753 (1) - move it down a little *fixed

[hard]
00:26:408 (1,2,3,4) - I found these to be strange looking. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204185 maybe? I sort of like the fact that 3 is the odd one out, but it still makes the pattern work. I would prefer alternating directions, but you can't quite do that, though you could reverse 2 as well. *replaced on my idea
01:05:718 (1,2,3) - if you're not following the lyrics, there's not much of a reason to map this. It's the tail end of the break phrase. You should delete them *deleted
01:27:442 (1,2,3) - can i get some accelerated spacing? *fixed
01:35:891 (5) - up left 1. oh this is why I don't like this sort of spacing, it's easy to look bad. *fixed
02:33:649 (1,2,3,1) - accelerated spacing up to a 2.4x jump, as before. *make x1.8 jump

[insane]
>that cs 5 big spacing ar9
too tough for me. good luck.
streams are overmapped, which is kind of surprising for a pendulum song. the drum section is really uninteresting for dnb, and you making it up doesn't sound very good to me. And it'd be a decent enough dt map without the overmapping.
00:22:960 (4) - these don't really fit IMO, mainly because there's hardly anything on the blue ticks in the song.

thx for mod \:D/

[Insane] *circles on blue tick were remapped to be able to hit more easy.
I'll recheck this
R a i n
特に気になるところなかった(´・ω・`)
とりあえず星だけ・・・
Genesis Rose
Normal

00:26:588 (3) - It sounds better if you make a circle on the previous white tick instead of the slider here.

Hard

01:29:692 (3) - This doesn't sound right, maybe remove it?

Insane

00:16:416 (4,5,6) - Seems overmapped.
00:23:485 (6) - Sounds very off, removing it sounds much better and gives room for a small jump.
02:24:175 (2,3,4) - Very nice looking but seems off pace. Maybe stack a circle above and under it?

Very nice map. Take a star.
Topic Starter
Mercurius
mod

There wrote:

Normal

00:26:588 (3) - It sounds better if you make a circle on the previous white tick instead of the slider here.

Hard

01:29:692 (3) - This doesn't sound right, maybe remove it?

Insane

00:16:416 (4,5,6) - Seems overmapped.
00:23:485 (6) - Sounds very off, removing it sounds much better and gives room for a small jump.
02:24:175 (2,3,4) - Very nice looking but seems off pace. Maybe stack a circle above and under it?

Very nice map. Take a star.
All done
thx for mod and star :)
Genesis Rose
Im really loving this song so I just gave you all my stars. Lets get a MAT/BAT here asap. :D
Trauma-
.
Genesis Rose
Un graveyard this and APPROVE IT!!!!
Natteke
RANK GO
Topic Starter
Mercurius

Natteke wrote:

RANK GO
yeah...
Niva
Random recheck~
I'll focus on the Insane diff for now.

[General]

-> Use PreviewTime: 88399 for a more accurate preview point~
-> Also, I suggest to use a light-blue slider border for this map, it fits your combo colors:

SliderBorder : 216,252,255

[Insane]

  1. 00:12:450 (5) - I'd rather stack this above (1) to give players more momentum before the jump, but it's not a must~
  2. 00:18:657 (4) - Let this form a solid diamond together with your previous (1,2,3), by placing this on x:88 y:288?
  3. 00:19:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (optional) This part's pattern, although it's not hard to catch, is quite random imo. Maybe a fan formation like this will play better?
  4. 00:20:899 (1,2,3,4,...) - Try to avoid (3)'s end on this stream (: - Well, your overlap with (3) doesn't look really good on play mode though, a moving stream with its first part encircling (3)'s end like this will do better:
  5. 00:21:588 (9,10) - Refer to my image above :3
  6. 00:26:588 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Here also, the arrangement is quite random. I suggest something like this:
  7. 00:30:209 (3,4,5,6,1) - It is currently unclear whether this stream is designed straight or curved atm - I suggest to make it curvier though >_<
  8. 00:37:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to make these five symmetrical? For this, you only need to move (2) to x:276 y:80 and (3) to x:308 y:64 ~
  9. 00:42:278 (1,2,3) - For intuitivity, try to move (2) more to the bottom-right so (1,2,3) will be spaced out equally?
  10. 00:45:209 (6,7) - Would be nice if (6) is placed on x:408 y:232 (so (4,5,6) is equally spaced), then (7) is placed on x:468 y:268 and encircle (6) - I feel the jump from (7) to (1) will get a better feeling this way~
  11. 00:49:864 (1) - Add finish here - there's a buzzing sound from the song here :3
  12. 00:54:002 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Again, this is a random-shaped stream (and the jump from (10) to (1) isn't intuitive imo) - try this stream?

    300,324,54002,5,0
    288,291,54088,1,0
    292,256,54175,1,0
    316,232,54261,1,0
    344,212,54347,2,0,B|368:216|392:208,3,42.5,8|0|0|0
    420,220,54692,1,0
    404,188,54778,1,0
    412,156,54864,1,0
    432,128,54950,1,0
    456,104,55037,2,0,B|444:64,3,42.5,8|0|0|0
    432,32,55381,5,4
  13. 01:05:812 (2,3,4...) - Well, I personally feel this stream is somewhat overmapped... Personally I liked more if you can only use circles on 01:05:899 and 01:06:071 with a jump here (stack the last circle to 01:06:416 (1)'s start), it gets this part's atmosphere better~
  14. 01:17:278 (1) - Remove the finish here - the finish should belong to the downbeat, and as you don't have any notes in the downbeat it's best to keep this unhitsounded >_<
  15. 01:20:899 (3) - (optional) CTRL+R, to avoid (4)'s repeat partially got covered by this slider's hitburst?
  16. 01:25:381 (2) - Missing clap here
  17. 01:28:485 (1) - Your whistle is very random in the chorus - whistle fits best everytime the vocals and synths hit high notes here~ The whistle idea is good already, but the execution isn't so good imo. Since it will be very long if I post all the whistles' place, I attached an .osu file with the proper whistles placement in the first chorus:

    Download: Pendulum - Crush (Mercurius) [Insane Hitsound].osu
  18. 01:33:312 (4) - (optional) Make this slider face rightward instead? It gives a more solid flow with your next (1)
  19. 01:47:106 (7) - Hmm, why don't you place its path perfectly cut by (6) in the center, like this?
  20. 02:03:485 (2,3,4) - Make this symmetrical? It's just feel quite weird when (4) is placed more to the bottom-right compared to (2)'s end >_<
  21. 02:07:450 (2) - Again here, I'd rather face this slider elsewhere to avoid the repeat got partially covered by 02:07:106 (1)'s comboburst, but that's not a must~
  22. 02:09:864 (1) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid down so it will be equally spaced to both (2) and (3)?
  23. 02:18:485 (2) - Again, this pattern feels forced. This pattern below might not follow the distance spacing properly, but it is more readable due to the less amount of cluster here:
  24. 02:19:519 (1,2,3,4) - Make (1) and (3) plus (2) and (4) in a same y-axis?
  25. 02:22:968 (1) - I highly recommend to curve this leftward, so it won't overlap with 02:22:450 (2), and:
  26. 02:23:226 (2,3,4,5,6) - (optional) To make this flow altogether with the curved slider above, design this stream in an flipped-S shape?
  27. 02:27:106 (1,2,3) - I think you're too forcing to make it spaced out normally with (3)... imo it's better to curve (1) rightward like this, so the flow will be continuous (feel free to CTRL+R (1)) as well though, it fits as well)
  28. 02:33:916 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Again here, I feel uneasy about the stream design - it's quite random. Perhaps arrange like this?
  29. 02:46:416 (3) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid left (without dist.snap) to avoid overlap with (2)~
...uhm, well, the main problem here imo is the map's design, it feels random in some parts >_<
About the streams, I know sometimes it's not following anything on the song, but it's cleverly placed - it sounds good already (:

Still, please take a look on the hitsound issue I attached - and adopt the hitsounding for the other diffs xD
GamerX4life
My Mod:

[Normal]
  1. 00:27:106 (4) try this: http://puu.sh/vxHX
  2. 00:44:692 add note
  3. 00:45:037 (2) Slider instead ( 00:45:037 to 00:45:381 )
  4. 00:45:726 try this pattern: http://puu.sh/vxIL
  5. 02:20:209 (5) delete circle
  6. 02:20:554 add circle
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:140 (6) only one circle at this place instead
  2. 00:13:485 add circle
  3. 00:29:519 try this: http://puu.sh/vxLO
  4. 01:15:209 try this pattern:
    352,284,75209,2,0,B|428:308,2,60
    372,216,75726,2,0,B|296:192,1,60,8|0
    292,128,76071,1,0
    220,128,76244,1,0
    197,197,76416,2,0,B|140:216,2,60,8|0|0
    160,284,76933,2,0,B|102:302,1,60,0|8
[Insane]
  1. fine
  2. I only don't like many of the streams ( but I think that's matter of taste)
Good Luck!
JauiPlaY
You should at least add (Short ver.) to the title since this one is obviously a cut version.
Topic Starter
Mercurius
I'm busy recently. When I have a time I'll fix this.
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