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Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue

combo colour 2 and 3 a bit same. how bout changin the colour with white/black/try another blue

[Normal]
00:47:098 (5,6) - maybe make it like this http://puu.sh/7Aip
02:06:063 (2) - http://puu.sh/7Aj6
02:07:098 (1) - http://puu.sh/7AkB
02:26:063 (4) - instead of 02:26:063, 2 times up
02:34:339 (4) - instead of 02:34:339, 1 time down 1 time to the right

[Hard]
01:15:201 (2) - add reverse.
01:15:201 (2,3) - resnap if ^ did

Good Luck :D :)
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius
SPOILER

xDeaTHcOrEx wrote:

Normal:

Nothing to say here

Some suggestions about the hitsounds tho:

I don't like the whistles on kiai time :/
Also, you can add custom snare sound to some slider ticks so you fill up the missing snare at some places.

Hard:


  1. 00:26:408 (1,2,3,4) - This notes aren't needed and they don't play good either imo. :/ My Suggestion: http://puu.sh/7z7m
    You can either keep the lastreverse slider or add 2 reverses on it which i actually liked more
  2. 00:54:339 (2,3,4) - Just a small suggestion, how about lowering the sound on every reverse slider by 15% till 25% and using 70%
    the Finish again ?
  3. 01:05:718 (1,2,3) - I don't know but this one bothered me 2 of 2 times now, i don't know why, it doesn't play good after a break :/
    How about converting the first 2 notes to a slider ?
  4. 01:19:684 (6) - New combo here and delete new combo on 01:20:029 (1)
  5. 02:14:856 (x) - I didn't like the hole here, i think you should add a note
  6. 02:34:684 (1) - I smell much copy&paste form here on :/
  7. 02:49:511 (4) - Hm, maybe you should move this note a bit to the center because it will touch the record list i think.[/b]
Insane:

Can't mod it right now :/ but the mod will come, i think tomorrow i will add it to the post then.

Just one nazi-mod-thing i noticed on the first view

00:28:477 (3) - move this to 169:143 till it fits good with 00:28:132 (2) - , looks better ^^

SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

Pendulum HURRAY <3 alright im gonna try my best feel free to ignore any of my suggestions

Normal:
01:33:994(1) - try to make this slider like this
02:26:408(1) - Aline this to the the end of the slider
02:34:339(4,1) - Either Aline the end of the slider to (1) or the opposite.

Hard:
00:34:684(5) - NC
00:45:718(5) - ^
00:51:236(7) - ^
00:52:615(1) - Recommended but remove NC
01:16:925(7) - NC and remove NC for the next note

Insane:
00:18:822(6) - NC
01:47:787(1,2,3,4) - Shorten this anti jump between 2.4-2.45
02:49:856(5) - NC
02:53:994(1,2,3,4) - same as 01:47:787

This is the best i can do. GL getting this song ranked :D

SPOILER

Teru21 wrote:

Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue

combo colour 2 and 3 a bit same. how bout changin the colour with white/black/try another blue

[Normal]
00:47:098 (5,6) - maybe make it like this http://puu.sh/7Aip
02:06:063 (2) - http://puu.sh/7Aj6
02:07:098 (1) - http://puu.sh/7AkB
02:26:063 (4) - instead of 02:26:063, 2 times up
02:34:339 (4) - instead of 02:34:339, 1 time down 1 time to the right

[Hard]
01:15:201 (2) - add reverse.
01:15:201 (2,3) - resnap if ^ did

Good Luck :D :)

Thanks a lot Mod!! I applied Mod, xDeaTHcOrEx -> Byakugan249 -> Teru21.
I have applied most of the Mod, but some are not. (I forgot to take a memo... :p)


:idea:
Waiting some Hitsounds mod (◞‸◟)
Im not good at (◞‸◟)
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius
Insane : fixed "00:26:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) / 00:38:649 (3)" (mod by xDeaTHcOrEx)
Bobo_old
492 posts
Joined February 2011
Bobo_old
Yo, I freaking love this song.

I'll start with Insane because I usually tend to put the most effort into the first diff I mod.

-Insane-

Woah woah dial down the HP drain a little.

00:20:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Add a slider repeat to (9) and (10) and then rearrange the stream like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175859 In my opinion it looks and flows better.
00:31:925 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Perhaps rearrange the hitcircles so that the stream is more circular? Idk it looks messy how you've done it. Could you you do this for all the streams that look like this please?
00:35:718 (5,6,7) - Stack on the endpoint of (4)?
00:55:287 (10) - Remove this slider repeat.
00:55:373 (1) - Delete this note.
01:11:236 (1,2,3) - Stack with the start point of (4).
01:33:649 (4) - Whistle (Endpoint only).
01:39:167 (4) - Whistle.
01:44:339 (3) - Whistle.
01:47:787 (1) - Whistle.
01:47:787 (1,2,3,4) - These big jumps seem kinda sudden, perhaps make them a little smaller than the jumps at the end of the 2nd kiai.
02:02:529 (5,6) - Stack these with the endpoint of (4) like you have with many previous patterns. Plus, it doesn't looks very good like this. You may have to reposition (7) if you make this edit.
02:24:684 (3,4) - Turn this into a 3 hitcircle stack? I generally dislike patterns like this.
02:28:477 (1,2,3) - Stack with the start point of (4)?
02:39:856 (5) - Whistle (Startpoint only).
02:42:098 (3) - Stack with (2).
02:45:373 (7) - Whistle.
02:50:546 (4) - Whistle.
02:50:891 (7) - Whistle.
02:53:994 (1) - Whsitle.

Nice diff.

-Hard-

AR 8 seems kinda high for a Hard.

01:40:029 (3) - Delete this note.
02:08:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps turn this into a slider pattern of some sort? This doesnt look too good.

Umm... ok not too many errors there... O.o

-Normal-

AR 6 seems a little high for Normal.
I always suggest that a map's easiest diff uses circle size 3.

00:38:649 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.
00:49:856 (2) - ^
00:55:029 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175898 ?
01:11:925 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.
01:22:960 (2) - ^
01:25:718 (1) - 4 grids down.
02:18:132 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.
02:26:753 (2) - Delete this note? Idk...
02:29:167 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.

Nice mapset, would like to see this ranked.
Take a star!
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius
SPOILER

Bobo wrote:

Yo, I freaking love this song.

I'll start with Insane because I usually tend to put the most effort into the first diff I mod.

-Insane-

Woah woah dial down the HP drain a little. [not]

00:20:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Add a slider repeat to (9) and (10) and then rearrange the stream like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175859 In my opinion it looks and flows better. [not]
00:31:925 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Perhaps rearrange the hitcircles so that the stream is more circular? Idk it looks messy how you've done it. Could you you do this for all the streams that look like this please? [not]
00:35:718 (5,6,7) - Stack on the endpoint of (4)? [not]
00:55:287 (10) - Remove this slider repeat. [not]
00:55:373 (1) - Delete this note. [not]
01:11:236 (1,2,3) - Stack with the start point of (4). [not]
01:33:649 (4) - Whistle (Endpoint only).
01:39:167 (4) - Whistle.
01:44:339 (3) - Whistle.
01:47:787 (1) - Whistle.
01:47:787 (1,2,3,4) - These big jumps seem kinda sudden, perhaps make them a little smaller than the jumps at the end of the 2nd kiai.
02:02:529 (5,6) - Stack these with the endpoint of (4) like you have with many previous patterns. Plus, it doesn't looks very good like this. You may have to reposition (7) if you make this edit.
02:24:684 (3,4) - Turn this into a 3 hitcircle stack? I generally dislike patterns like this.
02:28:477 (1,2,3) - Stack with the start point of (4)? [not]
02:39:856 (5) - Whistle (Startpoint only).
02:42:098 (3) - Stack with (2). [not]
02:45:373 (7) - Whistle.
02:50:546 (4) - Whistle.
02:50:891 (7) - Whistle.
02:53:994 (1) - Whsitle.

Nice diff.

-Hard-

AR 8 seems kinda high for a Hard.

01:40:029 (3) - Delete this note.
02:08:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps turn this into a slider pattern of some sort? This doesnt look too good.

Umm... ok not too many errors there... O.o

-Normal-

AR 6 seems a little high for Normal.
I always suggest that a map's easiest diff uses circle size 3.

00:38:649 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.
00:49:856 (2) - ^
00:55:029 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/175898 ? [not]
01:11:925 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.
01:22:960 (2) - ^
01:25:718 (1) - 4 grids down.
02:18:132 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.
02:26:753 (2) - Delete this note? Idk...
02:29:167 (2) - Move back to the red tick and extend by 2 ticks.

Nice mapset, would like to see this ranked.
Take a star!

thx for modding & star :)
[Insane] is not difficult, so not changed HPdrain
~♪
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

  1. osb.file削除
  2. Lead-in必要ないと思います！
[Insane]

  1. HP-1?
  2. 00:36:753 (4) - add new combo?
  3. 01:10:546 (5) - ^
  4. 01:45:029 (1) - 初めにfinish
  5. 02:06:408 (5) - add new combo?
  6. 02:17:787 (4) - ^
[Hard]

  1. 00:12:960 (x) - add note?
  2. 01:10:891 (x) - ^
  3. 01:21:925 (x) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 01:15:718 (x) - add note?
That's all~
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius
SPOILER

phonic wrote:

Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

  1. osb.file削除
  2. Lead-in必要ないと思います！
[Insane]

  1. HP-1? [not]
  2. 00:36:753 (4) - add new combo?
  3. 01:10:546 (5) - ^
  4. 01:45:029 (1) - 初めにfinish
  5. 02:06:408 (5) - add new combo?
  6. 02:17:787 (4) - ^
[Hard]

  1. 00:12:960 (x) - add note?
  2. 01:10:891 (x) - ^
  3. 01:21:925 (x) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 01:15:718 (x) - add note?
That's all~

ok, done (HP drain is ignored) ;)
thx for mod !!

p.s. I will NOT change AR,OD,HP.
Sync
osu! Alumni
1,575 posts
Joined April 2011
Sync
Star. Great map, great song. Good luck, hope to see this ranked soon.
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius

Sync wrote:

Star. Great map, great song. Good luck, hope to see this ranked soon.
:shock:
Thanks for the your valuable star!!
I'll do my best to get Ranked ;)
Jupiter
335 posts
Joined December 2010
Jupiter
nice map
star~
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hi- :)

[General]

●fine

All suggestions

[Normal]

●00:30:546 (1) - finish add?
●00:38:649 (2) - 伸ばしすぎじゃない？　00:39:167までにする　（音があってない気がする）
●00:45:718 (3) - スライダーの開始にfinish add?
●00:47:098 (1) - ^
●00:49:684 (2) - 伸ばしすぎじゃない？ 00:50:201までにする（音があってない気がする）
●00:55:029 (4) - move (x:296 y:232) AND 00:55:373 (5) - move (x:360 y:184) 流れ的にこれのほうがいいかも
●01:28:132 (4,1) - これきついかも　circle消して　スライダーにしてみる
●02:17:960 (2) - 伸ばしすぎじゃない？ 02:18:477までにする（音があってない気がする）　そして02:19:167~02:19:511 のスライダーをつくる　（02:19:511 (3) - 削除して）
●02:28:994 (2) - 上と同じ感じに
●02:45:718 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - circle８個はきつい　どこかでスライダーを使う

伸ばしすぎのスライダーは、なんか変な感じがしただけですの無視してもかまいません

[Hard]

●00:54:684 (3) - move (x:380 y:228)
●00:55:029 (4) - move (x:340 y:288)
●01:36:753 (1) - finish add?
●02:17:098 (x) - circle add?
●02:42:960 (1) - finish add?

[Insane]

●HP-1 (高い気がします）
●00:39:167 (2) - move (x:248 y:336) こんな感じが好きですので
●01:26:063 (4) - move (x:252 y:136)

Good map!!!!!!
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius

Jupiter wrote:

nice map
star~

SPOILER

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- :)

[General]

●fine

All suggestions

[Normal]

●00:30:546 (1) - finish add?
●00:38:649 (2) - 伸ばしすぎじゃない？　00:39:167までにする　（音があってない気がする）
●00:45:718 (3) - スライダーの開始にfinish add?
●00:47:098 (1) - ^
●00:49:684 (2) - 伸ばしすぎじゃない？ 00:50:201までにする（音があってない気がする）
●00:55:029 (4) - move (x:296 y:232) AND 00:55:373 (5) - move (x:360 y:184) 流れ的にこれのほうがいいかも
●01:28:132 (4,1) - これきついかも　circle消して　スライダーにしてみる
●02:17:960 (2) - 伸ばしすぎじゃない？ 02:18:477までにする（音があってない気がする）　そして02:19:167~02:19:511 のスライダーをつくる　（02:19:511 (3) - 削除して）
●02:28:994 (2) - 上と同じ感じに
●02:45:718 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - circle８個はきつい　どこかでスライダーを使う

伸ばしすぎのスライダーは、なんか変な感じがしただけですの無視してもかまいません

[Hard]

●00:54:684 (3) - move (x:380 y:228)
●00:55:029 (4) - move (x:340 y:288)
●01:36:753 (1) - finish add?
●02:17:098 (x) - circle add?
●02:42:960 (1) - finish add?

[Insane]

●HP-1 (高い気がします）
●00:39:167 (2) - move (x:248 y:336) こんな感じが好きですので
●01:26:063 (4) - move (x:252 y:136)

Good map!!!!!!

以下の部分は意にそぐわなかったのでスルーしました
[Normal]
●00:45:718 (3) - スライダーの開始にfinish add?
●00:47:098 (1) - ^
[Hard]
●02:17:098 (x) - circle add?
[Insane]
●01:26:063 (4) - move (x:252 y:136)

mod & star ありがとう！

いや～・・・HPドレイン下げました
I lowered to 7 HPdrain.
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
Someone need to rank this song.
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius

termerys wrote:

Someone need to rank this song.
thx star!! :)
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
こんにちわ！
以下は全て提案です。気に入らなければスルーしてください

[Normal]
01:11:753 (2)　　　　　ここだけ間隔が1.5拍になるのはよくないと思います。スライダーを短くして終点を01:12:442にするか、このようなリズムはどうでしょうか。
SPOILER
02:48:822 (1)　　　　　ここは流れに沿って置いたほうが綺麗だと思います。
SPOILER

[Hard]　
00:48:822 (x)　　　　　なにか置いた方がいいと思います。ボーカルが無い部分でも、01:10:891、01:21:925等、ドラムの音やリズムに合わせてノートを置いている場所が多いので違和感を感じます。
01:08:649 (x)　　　　　このようなリズムはどうでしょうか?
SPOILER
02:17:098 (x)　　　　　00:48:822と同様
02:50:201 (2)　　　　　スライダーの終点を1grid上へ

[Insane]
かみまっぷ・・・



ランク化期待しています!頑張ってください!
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius
mod

terametis wrote:

こんにちわ！
以下は全て提案です。気に入らなければスルーしてください

[Normal]
01:11:753 (2)　　　　　ここだけ間隔が1.5拍になるのはよくないと思います。スライダーを短くして終点を01:12:442にするか、このようなリズムはどうでしょうか。
SPOILER
02:48:822 (1)　　　　　ここは流れに沿って置いたほうが綺麗だと思います。
SPOILER

[Hard]　
00:48:822 (x)　　　　　なにか置いた方がいいと思います。ボーカルが無い部分でも、01:10:891、01:21:925等、ドラムの音やリズムに合わせてノートを置いている場所が多いので違和感を感じます。
01:08:649 (x)　　　　　このようなリズムはどうでしょうか?
SPOILER
02:17:098 (x)　　　　　00:48:822と同様
02:50:201 (2)　　　　　スライダーの終点を1grid上へ

[Insane]
かみまっぷ・・・



ランク化期待しています!頑張ってください!

ok, ALL done!!
thx for modding!

頑張りまーす :oops:
nimba_old
101 posts
Joined May 2010
nimba_old
Hardの01:16:925 (1) - のnew comboを
01:17:442 (2) - に変えてみてはどうでしょう？
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius

nimba wrote:

Hardの01:16:925 (1) - のnew comboを
01:17:442 (2) - に変えてみてはどうでしょう？
done
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius
OD7 -> OD8
Lucy-Kaede
435 posts
Joined April 2011
Lucy-Kaede
From #modreqs for Pendulum 8-)

Normal
00:26:063 (2) - This sounds alright, but is a little quick. Swap out (2) for a single hit circle at this time, and leave (3)?
00:30:546 (1) - End at 00:32:529 to allow time for players to find and move to the following hit circle?
01:25:718 (1) - The few notes that follow this seem sidetracked from the rythm, try this timeline. (Placing doesnt matter, but I thought looked okay..)
Try this..

Hard
02:26:236 (1) - Could be a 1/2 beat repeating slider?
* 02:26:408 (1) - End/repeat
* 02:26:580 (1) - End of repeat

Insane
>Editor says this is 4.86
Imo this is 4.99 or 5+, it must be lowered because of all the long sliders.
Could maybe use larger circles, but I see it's on "normal" already, so it's probably fine.
I can only watch AI play this, so can't be of much help xD


Thats all for now!
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

From #modreqs for Pendulum 8-)

Normalfixed

00:26:063 (2) - This sounds alright, but is a little quick. Swap out (2) for a single hit circle at this time, and leave (3)?
00:30:546 (1) - End at 00:32:529 to allow time for players to find and move to the following hit circle?
01:25:718 (1) - The few notes that follow this seem sidetracked from the rythm, try this timeline. (Placing doesnt matter, but I thought looked okay..)
Try this..

Hardfixed
02:26:236 (1) - Could be a 1/2 beat repeating slider?
* 02:26:408 (1) - End/repeat
* 02:26:580 (1) - End of repeat

Insane
>Editor says this is 4.86
Imo this is 4.99 or 5+, it must be lowered because of all the long sliders.
Could maybe use larger circles, but I see it's on "normal" already, so it's probably fine.
I can only watch AI play this, so can't be of much help xD


Thats all for now!
thx for mod.

[Insane]
I like circle size 5 (Normal) \;D/
so I didnt change.
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
I'm an early hitter and I'm hitting 10 ms late, so offset +8 should fix it.

[normal]
00:16:753 (1) - move it down a little

[hard]
00:26:408 (1,2,3,4) - I found these to be strange looking. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204185 maybe? I sort of like the fact that 3 is the odd one out, but it still makes the pattern work. I would prefer alternating directions, but you can't quite do that, though you could reverse 2 as well.
01:05:718 (1,2,3) - if you're not following the lyrics, there's not much of a reason to map this. It's the tail end of the break phrase. You should delete them
01:27:442 (1,2,3) - can i get some accelerated spacing?
01:35:891 (5) - up left 1. oh this is why I don't like this sort of spacing, it's easy to look bad.
02:33:649 (1,2,3,1) - accelerated spacing up to a 2.4x jump, as before.

[insane]
>that cs 5 big spacing ar9
too tough for me. good luck.
streams are overmapped, which is kind of surprising for a pendulum song. the drum section is really uninteresting for dnb, and you making it up doesn't sound very good to me. And it'd be a decent enough dt map without the overmapping.
00:22:960 (4) - these don't really fit IMO, mainly because there's hardly anything on the blue ticks in the song.
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Mercurius
mod

ziin wrote:

I'm an early hitter and I'm hitting 10 ms late, so offset +8 should fix it. *fixed

[normal]
00:16:753 (1) - move it down a little *fixed

[hard]
00:26:408 (1,2,3,4) - I found these to be strange looking. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204185 maybe? I sort of like the fact that 3 is the odd one out, but it still makes the pattern work. I would prefer alternating directions, but you can't quite do that, though you could reverse 2 as well. *replaced on my idea
01:05:718 (1,2,3) - if you're not following the lyrics, there's not much of a reason to map this. It's the tail end of the break phrase. You should delete them *deleted
01:27:442 (1,2,3) - can i get some accelerated spacing? *fixed
01:35:891 (5) - up left 1. oh this is why I don't like this sort of spacing, it's easy to look bad. *fixed
02:33:649 (1,2,3,1) - accelerated spacing up to a 2.4x jump, as before. *make x1.8 jump

[insane]
>that cs 5 big spacing ar9
too tough for me. good luck.
streams are overmapped, which is kind of surprising for a pendulum song. the drum section is really uninteresting for dnb, and you making it up doesn't sound very good to me. And it'd be a decent enough dt map without the overmapping.
00:22:960 (4) - these don't really fit IMO, mainly because there's hardly anything on the blue ticks in the song.

thx for mod \:D/

[Insane] *circles on blue tick were remapped to be able to hit more easy.
I'll recheck this
R a i n
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R a i n
特に気になるところなかった(´・ω・｀)
とりあえず星だけ・・・
Genesis Rose
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Genesis Rose
Normal

00:26:588 (3) - It sounds better if you make a circle on the previous white tick instead of the slider here.

Hard

01:29:692 (3) - This doesn't sound right, maybe remove it?

Insane

00:16:416 (4,5,6) - Seems overmapped.
00:23:485 (6) - Sounds very off, removing it sounds much better and gives room for a small jump.
02:24:175 (2,3,4) - Very nice looking but seems off pace. Maybe stack a circle above and under it?

Very nice map. Take a star.
Mercurius
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mod

There wrote:

Normal

00:26:588 (3) - It sounds better if you make a circle on the previous white tick instead of the slider here.

Hard

01:29:692 (3) - This doesn't sound right, maybe remove it?

Insane

00:16:416 (4,5,6) - Seems overmapped.
00:23:485 (6) - Sounds very off, removing it sounds much better and gives room for a small jump.
02:24:175 (2,3,4) - Very nice looking but seems off pace. Maybe stack a circle above and under it?

Very nice map. Take a star.
All done
thx for mod and star :)
Genesis Rose
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Genesis Rose
Im really loving this song so I just gave you all my stars. Lets get a MAT/BAT here asap. :D
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Genesis Rose
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Un graveyard this and APPROVE IT!!!!
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RANK GO
Mercurius
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Natteke wrote:

RANK GO
yeah...
Niva
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Random recheck~
I'll focus on the Insane diff for now.

[General]

-> Use PreviewTime: 88399 for a more accurate preview point~
-> Also, I suggest to use a light-blue slider border for this map, it fits your combo colors:

SliderBorder : 216,252,255

[Insane]

  1. 00:12:450 (5) - I'd rather stack this above (1) to give players more momentum before the jump, but it's not a must~
  2. 00:18:657 (4) - Let this form a solid diamond together with your previous (1,2,3), by placing this on x:88 y:288?
  3. 00:19:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (optional) This part's pattern, although it's not hard to catch, is quite random imo. Maybe a fan formation like this will play better?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:20:899 (1,2,3,4,...) - Try to avoid (3)'s end on this stream (: - Well, your overlap with (3) doesn't look really good on play mode though, a moving stream with its first part encircling (3)'s end like this will do better:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:21:588 (9,10) - Refer to my image above :3
  6. 00:26:588 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Here also, the arrangement is quite random. I suggest something like this:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:30:209 (3,4,5,6,1) - It is currently unclear whether this stream is designed straight or curved atm - I suggest to make it curvier though >_<
  8. 00:37:450 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to make these five symmetrical? For this, you only need to move (2) to x:276 y:80 and (3) to x:308 y:64 ~
  9. 00:42:278 (1,2,3) - For intuitivity, try to move (2) more to the bottom-right so (1,2,3) will be spaced out equally?
  10. 00:45:209 (6,7) - Would be nice if (6) is placed on x:408 y:232 (so (4,5,6) is equally spaced), then (7) is placed on x:468 y:268 and encircle (6) - I feel the jump from (7) to (1) will get a better feeling this way~
  11. 00:49:864 (1) - Add finish here - there's a buzzing sound from the song here :3
  12. 00:54:002 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Again, this is a random-shaped stream (and the jump from (10) to (1) isn't intuitive imo) - try this stream?
    SPOILER

    300,324,54002,5,0
    288,291,54088,1,0
    292,256,54175,1,0
    316,232,54261,1,0
    344,212,54347,2,0,B|368:216|392:208,3,42.5,8|0|0|0
    420,220,54692,1,0
    404,188,54778,1,0
    412,156,54864,1,0
    432,128,54950,1,0
    456,104,55037,2,0,B|444:64,3,42.5,8|0|0|0
    432,32,55381,5,4
  13. 01:05:812 (2,3,4...) - Well, I personally feel this stream is somewhat overmapped... Personally I liked more if you can only use circles on 01:05:899 and 01:06:071 with a jump here (stack the last circle to 01:06:416 (1)'s start), it gets this part's atmosphere better~
  14. 01:17:278 (1) - Remove the finish here - the finish should belong to the downbeat, and as you don't have any notes in the downbeat it's best to keep this unhitsounded >_<
  15. 01:20:899 (3) - (optional) CTRL+R, to avoid (4)'s repeat partially got covered by this slider's hitburst?
  16. 01:25:381 (2) - Missing clap here
  17. 01:28:485 (1) - Your whistle is very random in the chorus - whistle fits best everytime the vocals and synths hit high notes here~ The whistle idea is good already, but the execution isn't so good imo. Since it will be very long if I post all the whistles' place, I attached an .osu file with the proper whistles placement in the first chorus:

    Download: Pendulum - Crush (Mercurius) [Insane Hitsound].osu
  18. 01:33:312 (4) - (optional) Make this slider face rightward instead? It gives a more solid flow with your next (1)
  19. 01:47:106 (7) - Hmm, why don't you place its path perfectly cut by (6) in the center, like this?
    SPOILER
  20. 02:03:485 (2,3,4) - Make this symmetrical? It's just feel quite weird when (4) is placed more to the bottom-right compared to (2)'s end >_<
  21. 02:07:450 (2) - Again here, I'd rather face this slider elsewhere to avoid the repeat got partially covered by 02:07:106 (1)'s comboburst, but that's not a must~
  22. 02:09:864 (1) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid down so it will be equally spaced to both (2) and (3)?
  23. 02:18:485 (2) - Again, this pattern feels forced. This pattern below might not follow the distance spacing properly, but it is more readable due to the less amount of cluster here:
    SPOILER
  24. 02:19:519 (1,2,3,4) - Make (1) and (3) plus (2) and (4) in a same y-axis?
  25. 02:22:968 (1) - I highly recommend to curve this leftward, so it won't overlap with 02:22:450 (2), and:
  26. 02:23:226 (2,3,4,5,6) - (optional) To make this flow altogether with the curved slider above, design this stream in an flipped-S shape?
  27. 02:27:106 (1,2,3) - I think you're too forcing to make it spaced out normally with (3)... imo it's better to curve (1) rightward like this, so the flow will be continuous (feel free to CTRL+R (1)) as well though, it fits as well)
    SPOILER
  28. 02:33:916 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Again here, I feel uneasy about the stream design - it's quite random. Perhaps arrange like this?
    SPOILER
  29. 02:46:416 (3) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid left (without dist.snap) to avoid overlap with (2)~
...uhm, well, the main problem here imo is the map's design, it feels random in some parts >_<
About the streams, I know sometimes it's not following anything on the song, but it's cleverly placed - it sounds good already (:

Still, please take a look on the hitsound issue I attached - and adopt the hitsounding for the other diffs xD
GamerX4life
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My Mod:

[Normal]
  1. 00:27:106 (4) try this: http://puu.sh/vxHX
  2. 00:44:692 add note
  3. 00:45:037 (2) Slider instead ( 00:45:037 to 00:45:381 )
  4. 00:45:726 try this pattern: http://puu.sh/vxIL
  5. 02:20:209 (5) delete circle
  6. 02:20:554 add circle
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:140 (6) only one circle at this place instead
  2. 00:13:485 add circle
  3. 00:29:519 try this: http://puu.sh/vxLO
  4. 01:15:209 try this pattern: 
    352,284,75209,2,0,B|428:308,2,60
    372,216,75726,2,0,B|296:192,1,60,8|0
    292,128,76071,1,0
    220,128,76244,1,0
    197,197,76416,2,0,B|140:216,2,60,8|0|0
    160,284,76933,2,0,B|102:302,1,60,0|8
[Insane]
  1. fine
  2. I only don't like many of the streams ( but I think that's matter of taste)
Good Luck!
JauiPlaY
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You should at least add (Short ver.) to the title since this one is obviously a cut version.
Mercurius
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I'm busy recently. When I have a time I'll fix this.
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