PyramiD - Cleopatrysm · forum

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Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2017-11-23T03:53:18+00:00

sorry i'm so late my dude

[General]

your background is kinda low res, i would try find a higher resolution one (at least 1366x768), maybe try waifu2x?
30 seconds of unmapped mp3 is kinda pushing what i would think is acceptable, i would maybe add a fade out and cut or something to reduce the filesize
check aimod, kiai is apparently unsnapped by 1ms in guest diffs

[Easy]

00:04:248 (2,1) - snap this to 1.3x ds like you do for the rest of the map to avoid this kinda ugly overlap
00:09:300 (2) - since there is no break here i would try to map this section with at least something, maybe a 3/2 slider or a more complex rhythm like this?
00:45:932 (1,2) - ds, if you're unsure where to put it, maybe try doing something like this
00:40:248 (1) - i would try make the downbeat of this clickable since the current clickable note sounds like it's winding down into the next bar of the music, and i would argue the downbeat here is much more important than the guitar fade here
01:15:616 (1,1) - i would try to avoid stacks in easy diffs since its kinda confusing to noobs

[Jager's Normal]

main issue with this diff is nc's its really inconsistent and seems like it's trying to accommodate for every layer of the music at once instead of focusing on one per section. try to nc with every new phrase of the music, so for example when a section of the melody you follow ends and theres a clear change, nc then instead of when the drums change every time like you do sometimes atm

00:12:932 (1) - remove nc, its inconsistent with the rest of your nc patterning
00:38:353 (5) - nc
00:42:774 (3,4) - i would turn this into a 1/1 slider since i think reducing the note density here and following the guitar fade might be better since there isn't much contrast between the two loud drums before here 00:42:143 (1,2) - and these two notes
01:05:511 (1,2,3) - this looks very misleading as the drums are hitting on the 1/3 tick and it looks like you're trying to follow them. i would suggest making a 1/3 repeat slider or making it more obvious you're hitting the 1/1 ticks
01:29:669 (3) - i would turn this into two hit circles because of how powerful the drums and and because this is the climax of the map, increasing the note density would be more satisfying to play imo

[Hard]

update bug lol zzzzz

00:53:511 (1) - reduce ds here, this is the biggest jump in the map and feels like a really big diff spike for a hard diff, i would move it closer so the visual spacing between 00:52:564 (7,9,1) - is equal on both sides
01:05:037 (1) - maybe turn this into a slider to continue following the held synth notes you used here 01:03:616 (1,2,3) - ?

cool

[Sharu's Insane]

artist + source clash with all diffs
normally not a fan of perfect stacks, but i actually think it suits the maps design pretty well so nice job

00:14:195 (1) - not sure if this is meant to be a soft whistle hitsound? this one sounds kinda outta place considering the rest are all soft sampleset whistles
00:43:406 (1,1) - nazi fix parallel
01:06:143 (1) - remove nc

cool also

[Insane]

considering how hard this diff is i would actually maybe consider renaming to extra, but its up to you
preview point clashes with all diffs
check aimod for unsnaps

01:06:144 (3) - i don't think this needs to be a repeat slider since the drum pattern doesn't repeat a third time, it just stops on the downbeat, i would suggest replacing with a circle

honestly i really like this diff and wouldn't change much about it

overall nice mapset, altho i think the lower diffs could use some more work

gl!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2017-11-23T21:41:49+00:00

Hi !

JeZag :

00:10:248 (3,1) - The high spacing between (2) and (3) keep the emphasis proper imo. I wanted the last slider to be different btw, so the different direction is okay lol
00:33:301 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is already quite low.
00:36:459 (1) - What bothers me in that is the inaccuracy of the pattern in terms of rhythm. It doesn't seem to follow the music that much. Starting streams on blue tick give pressure on them imo.
00:44:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't really get your point ):
00:57:932 (1) - Mapping those sounds would feel weird to me since they are on red tick and quite unnatural to click.
01:11:195 (1,2) - idk, mapping them would feel to dense imo.
01:29:353 (2) - I really like the current shape tbh... ): will change if many people complain.
Fixed the rest.

Log Off Now : fixed everything.

Thanks !

Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2017-11-26T00:12:59+00:00

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Log Off Now wrote:
sorry i'm so late my dude

[Jager's Normal]

main issue with this diff is nc's its really inconsistent and seems like it's trying to accommodate for every layer of the music at once instead of focusing on one per section. try to nc with every new phrase of the music, so for example when a section of the melody you follow ends and theres a clear change, nc then instead of when the drums change every time like you do sometimes atm

00:12:932 (1) - remove nc, its inconsistent with the rest of your nc patterning
00:38:353 (5) - nc
00:42:774 (3,4) - i would turn this into a 1/1 slider since i think reducing the note density here and following the guitar fade might be better since there isn't much contrast between the two loud drums before here 00:42:143 (1,2) - and these two notes
01:05:511 (1,2,3) - this looks very misleading as the drums are hitting on the 1/3 tick and it looks like you're trying to follow them. i would suggest making a 1/3 repeat slider or making it more obvious you're hitting the 1/1 ticks
01:29:669 (3) - i would turn this into two hit circles because of how powerful the drums and and because this is the climax of the map, increasing the note density would be more satisfying to play imo

gl!

fixed everything, thanks you !

Code

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Title:Cleopatrysm
TitleUnicode:Cleopatrysm
Artist:PyramiD
ArtistUnicode:ピラミッ℃
Creator:6th
Version:Jager's Normal
Source:発見！よみがえったBEMANI遺跡
Tags:Nekomata Master 96 Sota Fujimori Shoccho Akhuta Camellia Jager-kun Sharu
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128,360,95353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,95511,2,0,P|234:324|284:328,1,115.000002193451
384,352,96143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,268,96458,6,0,P|432:192|452:88,1,172.500003290176
492,72,97090,2,0,L|304:68,1,172.500003290176
267,63,97722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,164,98037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,250,98353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,315,98669,2,0,L|78:311,1,57.5000010967255
54,351,98985,6,0,P|63:246|54:160,1,172.500003290176
21,141,99616,2,0,L|198:137,1,172.500003290176
244,145,100248,2,0,P|250:92|250:48,2,86.2500016450882
275,186,100879,2,0,L|468:180,1,172.500003290176
492,176,101511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,348,102143,6,0,L|192:352,1,172.500003290176
156,352,102774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,256,103090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,156,103406,6,0,L|32:160,1,115.000002193451
16,64,104037,2,0,L|130:60,1,115.000002193451
184,60,104511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,56,104669,2,0,L|350:52,1,115.000002193451
488,124,105458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,152,105616,2,0,P|432:192|436:268,1,115.000002193451
484,356,106248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,340,106564,6,0,P|296:332|188:340,1,172.500003290176
168,372,107195,2,0,L|160:244,1,115.000002193451
156,204,107669,2,0,L|88:200,2,57.5000010967255
160,152,108143,2,0,L|276:148,1,115.000002193451
368,100,108774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,156,109090,6,0,L|464:72,2,57.5000010967255
488,256,109722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,344,110037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,280,110353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,110669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,110985,2,0,L|188:384,2,86.2500016450882
256,192,111616,12,0,116511,0:0:0:0:

Sharu

346 posts

Joined January 2015

Sharu 2017-11-28T20:59:43+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
sorry i'm so late my dude

[Sharu's Insane]

artist + source clash with all diffs
normally not a fan of perfect stacks, but i actually think it suits the maps design pretty well so nice job

00:14:195 (1) - not sure if this is meant to be a soft whistle hitsound? this one sounds kinda outta place considering the rest are all soft sampleset whistles ok
00:43:406 (1,1) - nazi fix parallel ok
01:06:143 (1) - remove nc i prefer keep the nc on this intense note

cool also

https://puu.sh/yvpeN/b3c2c2f94e.osu

Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2017-12-04T16:47:04+00:00

Late M4M

[Easy]
00:09:616 - why break here? song is just about going to be intense
00:11:827 - not agree with rhythm you put at here... you put all objects on white tick but actually music here is not that case. And hitsound here are not significant at all... i'll say, kinda hard for noob to follow. like 00:16:564 (3) - i will surely click on 00:16:564 (3) - up to you thio
00:24:143 - add a note here?
00:41:511 - sudden clap
00:48:143 (3) - i don't think this one is necessary
01:21:300 (3) - NC this plz. do what you did at 01:16:248 (1) -
01:47:511 (2) - del this for rhythm consistency

[jager's Normal]
00:01:722 (1) - begin at corner in lower diff is not a good idea lol
00:03:774 (4) - 1/2 is enough
00:08:827 (5) - ^, but this one feels kinda ok since it is at turning of the music
00:24:300 - make some difference plz. music getting intense
00:25:564 (4,5) - why 3/4 :/
00:35:195 - spinner stop here will be more proper
00:39:774 (4) - 1/2 is enough

[sharu's insane]
00:16:722 - why not clickable
00:28:248 (1) - ctrl+g? you cannot emphasize with just nc when all those slider have similar ds and point downside together

[Insane]
00:04:406 - don' t know why u ignore 1/4 here as you followed everything in previous part
00:05:985 - clickable?
00:08:195 - i know it's 1/6 but simply ignore this is not a good idea
00:37:406 (1) - 3/4 slider + note will be cool
00:44:906 - not clickable? really wierd
00:58:880 (2,4) - minor stack problem
00:56:195 (2) - this note is not necessary imo
01:15:774 (7) - nc? btw i really love this pattern

GL~

MaridiuS

878 posts

Joined June 2014

MaridiuS 2017-12-06T17:11:04+00:00

Greetings.

[insane]

00:09:301 (1,2) - these two are getting nice emphasis while 00:10:406 (1) - which sounds imo even stronger has low spacing on it. I think it should be a good idea to space that too. Sections in songs usually end with a bang or with a intensity stop, this sounds like a bang ;d.
00:13:801 (7) - Firstly, this is an overmap, second, 00:13:880 (8) - this sound breaks my earphones, having it on 0 spacing gives it no impact. In my ideal world, https://i.imgur.com/CvalrND.jpg this would be the best place for it (notice how I NCed it bcs its really strong).
00:14:195 (1) - making this into 3/4 and having the sliderend clickable will emphasize the drum much better which I think deserves emphasis since it sounds stronger than the sliderhead.
00:15:459 (1,2,3,4) - I really think you should think of something better aesthetically, it's just too plain atm. Btw 00:16:090 (3,4) - have really loud guitar backing them up compared to first sliders so I'd suggest to make that emphasized with different kind of patterning and bigger spacing.
00:17:512 (3) - By making this into two circles you will follow the instrument you were till now, the high pitched notes, while still following the irregular drum timing.
00:18:774 (3) - I don't hear any 1/4
00:23:986 (4) - Idk but following the loud piano noise in the background could be done much better by making this into two 1/4 sliders.
00:25:169 - this sound reminds of a soft-hitwhistle yet it is unmapped, strongly reconsider it's too noticeable.
00:25:880 (2,3,4) - Mapping them like this just seems weird, it doesn't properly express the raise of intensity, and it doesn't really look good or connected when the sounds sound similar. https://i.imgur.com/C9IsGnV.jpg doing something like this would be more fun and look better imo.
00:36:853 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1) - You're stuck in this corner for like 5 seconds, it doesn't appeal at all imo, I think you should reconsider some patterns and use more of the grid.
00:39:458 (2) - Inverse horizontally, should make the pattern look much better, especially since 00:39:616 (1,2) - aren't literal copy pastes, they were rotated and such.
00:37:880 (2,3,4,1) - related to this sounds, I think you should do some explaining about why analogous parts are mapped differently with different concepts, spacing and hell even rhythm.
00:49:722 (3) - CTRL+G will give the note in the middle much more emphasis and funner playability. https://i.imgur.com/WTFYqE9.jpg you can even do this with the bottom slider.
01:05:669 (1,2) - spacing is too large for a 1/4 gap and rhythm is really unusual while having a fairly uncomfy flow ehm. Ideally they should be much closer like https://i.imgur.com/jhYdMVh.jpg this, since its a really unreasonable spike on this difficulty.
01:16:722 (1,1) - Its unreasonable to introduce this structuring, make it consistent for few patterns 01:17:353 (1,1) - 01:17:985 (1,1) - 01:21:774 (1,1) - while suddenly you punch the players in the face with this flow and spacing. 01:22:090 (1) - ctrl+g this will work wonders to express this intense part, same goes for 01:22:722 (1) - 01:27:143 (1) - , also 01:27:458 (1,1) - why is bigger intensity variation dropped here.
01:20:195 (3) - Since music is less intense atm, by ctrl+ging this it will make the pattern look better and play with difficulty relevant to current intensity of the song, atm it has highly uncomfy flow and big spacing.
01:26:827 (1,1,2) - I don't think curved sliders complement this red anchored slider really well. Using red anchored 1/4 sliders https://i.imgur.com/3pkjek3.jpg something like this would make this to be a more solid pattern imo.
01:35:669 (3,4,5) - using something like this will make the rhythm fill everything and be really interactive to play. https://i.imgur.com/vHmeNsA.jpg. Although you might lose some weird synth emhpasis, but I really think making a better playing pattern here would a nice choice since you also get to follow the snare. 01:45:774 (3,4) - same goes for this.
01:40:248 - https://i.imgur.com/CRDdqL5.jpg Rhythm suggestion. At the current state it's just too weird when you switch between drum and synth layers, having stuff filled with sliders make's it much more playable. Btw made 01:41:195 - bcs it's much stronger than its sliderend.
01:50:985 (5) - This is mega weird because it goes through heavy drums which were fwe miliseconds ago mega emphasized.

Get more mods, this is basically a placeholder, ;p

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2017-12-07T22:13:48+00:00

Hi !

SPOILER

Easy
00:09:616 - why break here? song is just about going to be intense
00:11:827 - not agree with rhythm you put at here... you put all objects on white tick but actually music here is not that case. And hitsound here are not significant at all... i'll say, kinda hard for noob to follow. like 00:16:564 (3) - i will surely click on 00:16:564 (3) - up to you thio I will try to work that diff a bit, but honestly the rhythm of the song is really complicated so making an Easy diff requires a lot of approximations :/
00:24:143 - add a note here?
00:41:511 - sudden clap
00:48:143 (3) - i don't think this one is necessary
01:21:300 (3) - NC this plz. do what you did at 01:16:248 (1) -
01:47:511 (2) - del this for rhythm consistency

Insane
00:04:406 - don' t know why u ignore 1/4 here as you followed everything in previous part They are not thaaaat audible, and I wanted to keep the rhythm simple here because the song sounds slightly less intense.
00:05:985 - clickable? I think that using 3 circles would be too much, and I'd like to keep the white ticks clickable so the buzz slider after doesn't feel weird.
00:08:195 - i know it's 1/6 but simply ignore this is not a good idea
00:37:406 (1) - 3/4 slider + note will be cool A bit too hard imo.
00:44:906 - not clickable? really wierd
00:58:880 (2,4) - minor stack problem it was intended
00:56:195 (2) - this note is not necessary imo
01:15:774 (7) - nc? btw i really love this pattern

SPOILER

00:09:301 (1,2) - these two are getting nice emphasis while 00:10:406 (1) - which sounds imo even stronger has low spacing on it. I think it should be a good idea to space that too. Sections in songs usually end with a bang or with a intensity stop, this sounds like a bang ;d. Since many people pointed this out, I changed the position of the circle so the flow feels more special and keeps the emphasis high enough.
00:13:801 (7) - Firstly, this is an overmap, second, 00:13:880 (8) - this sound breaks my earphones, having it on 0 spacing gives it no impact. In my ideal world, https://i.imgur.com/CvalrND.jpg this would be the best place for it (notice how I NCed it bcs its really strong). Actually I think that the "triplet" gave it some emphasis (that's why there's a circle on that blue tick) but I like your pattern better so I changed it.
00:14:195 (1) - making this into 3/4 and having the sliderend clickable will emphasize the drum much better which I think deserves emphasis since it sounds stronger than the sliderhead. It's not necessary imo because the previous patterns indicate to the player that i'm following the piano.
00:15:459 (1,2,3,4) - I really think you should think of something better aesthetically, it's just too plain atm. Btw 00:16:090 (3,4) - have really loud guitar backing them up compared to first sliders so I'd suggest to make that emphasized with different kind of patterning and bigger spacing. Fixed
00:17:512 (3) - By making this into two circles you will follow the instrument you were till now, the high pitched notes, while still following the irregular drum timing. Changed
00:18:774 (3) - I don't hear any 1/4 The reverse slider is supposed to make the flow smoother and fit the piano. I don't think it is a problem because it doesn't make the blue tick clickable.
00:23:986 (4) - Idk but following the loud piano noise in the background could be done much better by making this into two 1/4 sliders. Changed to a triplet
00:25:169 - this sound reminds of a soft-hitwhistle yet it is unmapped, strongly reconsider it's too noticeable. Is it ? ok then.
00:25:880 (2,3,4) - Mapping them like this just seems weird, it doesn't properly express the raise of intensity, and it doesn't really look good or connected when the sounds sound similar. https://i.imgur.com/C9IsGnV.jpg doing something like this would be more fun and look better imo. I did something.
00:36:853 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1) - You're stuck in this corner for like 5 seconds, it doesn't appeal at all imo, I think you should reconsider some patterns and use more of the grid. Yeah
00:39:458 (2) - Inverse horizontally, should make the pattern look much better, especially since 00:39:616 (1,2) - aren't literal copy pastes, they were rotated and such.
00:37:880 (2,3,4,1) - related to this sounds, I think you should do some explaining about why analogous parts are mapped differently with different concepts, spacing and hell even rhythm. 00:47:985 - I made this consistent with first part now. Others analogous parts are different because the song sounds less intense.
00:49:722 (3) - CTRL+G will give the note in the middle much more emphasis and funner playability. https://i.imgur.com/WTFYqE9.jpg you can even do this with the bottom slider. I think it would make the flow too wide and unpleasant.
01:05:669 (1,2) - spacing is too large for a 1/4 gap and rhythm is really unusual while having a fairly uncomfy flow ehm. Ideally they should be much closer like https://i.imgur.com/jhYdMVh.jpg this, since its a really unreasonable spike on this difficulty. They play rather well according to testplays I got, but I made them a bit closer.
01:16:722 (1,1) - Its unreasonable to introduce this structuring, make it consistent for few patterns 01:17:353 (1,1) - 01:17:985 (1,1) - 01:21:774 (1,1) - while suddenly you punch the players in the face with this flow and spacing. 01:22:090 (1) - ctrl+g this will work wonders to express this intense part, same goes for 01:22:722 (1) - 01:27:143 (1) - , also 01:27:458 (1,1) - why is bigger intensity variation dropped here. Fixed all of them but the last one, I think the velocity already does the job for that one.
01:20:195 (3) - Since music is less intense atm, by ctrl+ging this it will make the pattern look better and play with difficulty relevant to current intensity of the song, atm it has highly uncomfy flow and big spacing. I really think intensity is consistently increasing here 01:19:879 - .
01:26:827 (1,1,2) - I don't think curved sliders complement this red anchored slider really well. Using red anchored 1/4 sliders https://i.imgur.com/3pkjek3.jpg something like this would make this to be a more solid pattern imo. sure !
01:35:669 (3,4,5) - using something like this will make the rhythm fill everything and be really interactive to play. https://i.imgur.com/vHmeNsA.jpg. Although you might lose some weird synth emhpasis, but I really think making a better playing pattern here would a nice choice since you also get to follow the snare. 01:45:774 (3,4) - same goes for this. Good idea actually because I thought the rhythm was weird too and was searching for a solution.
01:40:248 - https://i.imgur.com/CRDdqL5.jpg Rhythm suggestion. At the current state it's just too weird when you switch between drum and synth layers, having stuff filled with sliders make's it much more playable. Btw made 01:41:195 - bcs it's much stronger than its sliderend. Okay I did something else, let me know your opinion about it.
01:50:985 (5) - This is mega weird because it goes through heavy drums which were fwe miliseconds ago mega emphasized. It doesn't really matter since it's the last note imo, but I changed its shape to make sure players will read it.

Thanks for the mods ! really useful.

BOUYAAA

396 posts

Joined July 2010

BOUYAAA 2017-12-09T13:58:08+00:00

We did some irc. Pointed out some rythm issues and and some aesthetics.

14:34 6th: Salut Bouyaaa
14:35 BOUYAAA: 6eme
14:35 BOUYAAA: bjr
14:36 6th: J'ai eu un check de MaridiuS sur ma nouvelle map mais il veut que j'aie un peu plus de mods lol
14:36 6th: Ca te dérangerait de jeter un coup d'oeil ?
14:36 BOUYAAA: laquelle
14:36 BOUYAAA: pyramid?
14:36 6th: Oui
14:37 BOUYAAA: j'avais vu 2 trucs qui me dérangaient un peu
14:38 BOUYAAA: 00:45:300 (1) - repeat 1/4 ça sonne mieux ici
14:38 BOUYAAA: vue que y'a 3 notes
14:38 6th: L'idéal serait que tu postes sur le thread
14:38 6th: Comme ça on peut voir que j'ai eu des mods
14:39 BOUYAAA: je poste l'irc après
14:39 6th: Ok
14:39 BOUYAAA: a moins que ce soit modv2
14:39 6th: 00:45:300 (1) -
14:39 6th: Non
14:39 6th: 00:45:300 (1) -
14:39 6th: En vrai c'est pas rigoureux un repeat 1/4 car c'est du 1/6 lol
14:41 BOUYAAA: jte propose ça : http://puu.sh/yCGiX/ac73cc1794.jpg
14:41 BOUYAAA: ça colle mieux a mon avis
14:41 BOUYAAA: parce qu'on entent clairement une forme de triple
14:42 6th: Ok
14:42 6th: Mais du coup ça fait bizarre d'ignorer ça 00:45:537 -
14:42 BOUYAAA:   a mon sens non
14:43 BOUYAAA: parce que vu que tu follow plus ce sorte de synthé
14:43 BOUYAAA: le joeur il aura tendance a focus sur ça
14:43 6th: C'est surtout au niveau du hitsounding
14:43 BOUYAAA: franchement tu peux foutre ton clap sur le 1/3
14:44 BOUYAAA: il tombe plutôt que le 1/4 de toute façon
14:44 6th: C'est raisonnable tu penses ?
14:44 BOUYAAA: large
14:45 BOUYAAA: 00:05:827 (2) - ici un truc comme ça passe mieux aussi http://puu.sh/yCGoD/5ceb258c26.jpg
14:45 BOUYAAA: 00:08:353 (2) - same ici
14:46 BOUYAAA: 00:09:301 (1) - ici si tu le souhaite tu peux map le triple a la fin du slider comme ça t'aura plus d'emphase sur 00:09:774 (2) - 
14:47 6th: J'ai gardé le rythme que tu m'as suggéré mais je vais simplement pas mettre le clap je pense
14:48 BOUYAAA: 01:15:537 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ça c'était mon premier problème, jtrouve la forme pas très élégante
14:48 BOUYAAA: déjà a mon avis tu devrais nc ici 01:15:773 (7) - 
14:49 6th: 00:09:301 (1) - Pas bête
14:49 BOUYAAA: parce que t'as un changement dans la musique
14:49 6th: 00:05:827 (2) - Ca je préfère garder tel qu'il est pour avoir un rythme simple
14:49 BOUYAAA: 01:15:773 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - et ça il faudrait que la forme circulaire ait une forme circulaire plus prononcée
14:50 6th: Ah oui mais
14:50 6th: Attends t'as pas update non ?
14:51 BOUYAAA: 00:05:827 (2) - le pb avec ça c'était que le rythme le plus important est pas mappé de façon active, du coup on dirait que tu follow autre chose que le layer le plus important
14:51 BOUYAAA: ooups
14:51 BOUYAAA: j'ai pas update en effet
14:51 BOUYAAA: mdr
14:51 BOUYAAA: dsl
14:53 6th: Pas de souci
14:53 6th: Ok j'ai fait quelque chose pour le rythme
14:53 6th: J'ai just CTRL+G le slider et le cercle
14:55 BOUYAAA: ouais c'est mieux
14:55 BOUYAAA: du coup j'ai pas grand chose de plus
14:55 BOUYAAA: mon 2eme problème existe plus lol
14:56 6th: Ok ! je te laisse poster ça sur le thread
14:56 6th: merci :)

jeanbernard8865

600 posts

Joined December 2014

jeanbernard8865 2017-12-10T08:17:14+00:00

sorry for delay d

easy

00:06:774 (1) - would be cool if turn were exactly on the red tick cause its still noticeably far
00:24:143 (3) - overlap with 00:21:932 (1) - i suggest moving 00:24:143 (3,1,2) - to the right as its fine if objects are rather far from the centre due to a spinner following them
00:40:879 (1) - to 00:53:195 (2) - slider-only sections are rather tiresome for beginners due to sliders featuring more complex gameplay than circles, consider replacing some sliders with circles
00:44:353 - this greenline does...nothing. derp ?
00:50:353 (2) - eh, not a fan of skipping the downbeat for the sake of simplifying rhythm. your choice though
00:53:195 (2) - would do 1/1 circles as a finisher, however current one is fine too
01:32:669 (1) - not a fan of this shape here cause while the first turn lands on a snare, second one has nothing backing it up
01:50:353 (3,4,5) - make a perfect triangle reeee

jager

Lets get things straight this map needs a lot of polishing when it comes to aesthetics. It’s perfectly rankable as it is and i dont think the lack of patterning is gonna be an obstacle to pushing the set forward, so instead of pointing out every individual flaw in structure im just gonna point this out and give a few examples, because fixing everything would need a remap which is unnecessary imo

00:23:669 (4,5,1) - could be a perfect triangle, also helps with avoiding overlap at 00:23:985 (5,1) -
00:03:774 (4,2) - could be parallel
01:31:406 (1,2,3) - could be a perfect triangle
01:37:722 (3,4,5,6) - could be rotated the same angle each time

etc. these arent exactly required fixes, but do remember to incorporate more patterning into your subsequent low diffs

Now onto the specific stuff :

01:29:353 (2,3,4) - DS derp ?
01:28:090 (5,1) - im not sure about perfectly overlapping two objects so close in the timeline…
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/2 overlaps due to distance snapping are an exception.

hard

00:26:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty cute design tbh
01:05:669 (1,2,3) - while im all for introducing some irregular rhythms such as 3/4 in hard diffs, slider leniency or passive rhythm is still needed for it to not be too abrupt
01:20:353 (7) - could be 2 circles since this is kiai so supposedly peak intensity, and theres a 1/1 gap for the player to recover afterwards
01:28:879 (1,2) - i feel that 01:29:353 (2) - is too close for a finisher, suggest raising the spacing ( should be fine even with the jump afterwards cause its still relatively slow passive rhythm )
01:36:774 (2,3) - call me nazi but i clearly saw this as not perfectly parallel and its probably worse than a pattern which clearly isnt made for it
01:50:985 (1) - this is the place where irregular rhythm should be circles only, because its already been introduced at 01:05:669

insane

00:45:063 (4) - warrants more emphasis since a snare on a blue tick is pretty uncommon, simplifying it isnt worth for a top diff imo
01:32:748 - pretty sure theres a drum beat there, worth catching with a kickslider or something if you wanna keep the triplet rhythm
01:42:853 - the issue of undermapping becomes quite prominent here, because the drum is clearly audible

lol map page link from client links to this ppy pls

goodluck!

pls only kd after answering tydad

Last edited by jeanbernard8865 2017-12-20T07:12:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Vell

359 posts

Joined October 2013

Vell 2017-12-11T10:15:59+00:00

[Insane]
I feel like this part 00:35:827 - has alot of room for some more complex rhythm choices and a faster pace in general due to the song going really crazy here especially when compared to the kiai which is the fastest part in the map but the song is arguably not as heavy

00:11:037 - would prefer this rhythm here the second reverse feels a bit too simplified for the hardest diff in the set
00:12:774 (3) - doesnt really matter but I think stacking this note on the end of (4) seems cooler

a bit of nazi but
00:15:143 (5) - make it a clean triangle
00:17:353 (2,3,4,5) - might be intentional but with how clean the rest of the map is polishing this up like this would fit better
00:28:879 - making 1/2 notes here would definitely serve the buildup
01:25:090 (2,2) - maybe space these a little bit closer to 01:24:933 (1,1) -
01:31:406 (1) - I wonder why you chose to simplify these so much, there seems to be alot of potential for some more fun rhythms than just 1/1 sliders. generally the diff feels a bit undermapped and doesnt utilize the full potential of the song at many parts, the simplicity might be what you were going for, an extra diff would be nice though because the song really asks for something more complex

[Sharu's Insane]

00:04:722 - , 00:05:353 - making these sounds suddenly map to sliderends felt pretty unexpected, gonna be more comfortable to play if you would stay consistent with that in the beginning
00:10:169 - , 00:10:248 - why leave these out here when you mapped these 1/4s all the time previously
00:16:406 (4) - make this a 1/2 and add a circle at 00:16:722 - ?
01:15:774 (3) - make this slider start on the blue tick at 01:15:853 - so it goes with the guitar
01:29:984 (1) - stack this note below 01:28:722 (2) - or something, just so there is some movement for this beat

[Hard]

00:05:353 - leaving out this sound where you focused all the notes on it prior comes very sudden and might cause confusion for how the rhythm will play out with 00:05:669 (5) -
00:17:669 - this seems like a way too prominent sound to just leave out, maybe extend 00:17:353 (2) - to a 1/1
01:14:985 - maybe add spinner until 01:15:932 -
01:20:353 - either make this into 2 circles or a circle at 01:20:353 - and a 1/2 slider at 01:20:511 - , the sound on 01:20:511 - is way too prominent to just end it on a slider and generally doesnt seem right to use the same rhythm for these 2 notes as the 2 previously with 01:20:037 (6) -
01:25:879 - on a same part previously at 01:20:827 - you mapped the reverse slider on this beat, however now you mapped it on a sliderend instead and starting the reverse a whole 2 ticks later, might be better to stay consistent with it

[Normal]

00:11:827 - this whole part until 00:26:985 - might be problematic, the rhythm is all over the place trying to find a middle ground for what to follow but ending up ignoring alot of prominent beats and just mapping notes inconsistently on all different kind of sounds.
Like it seems you try to map to the piano, but then important things like 00:12:774 - and 00:14:037 - are being left out for the sake of simplicity, this gets problematic when notes like 00:15:458 - are clearly mapped to follow the piano only, but then the slider ends on a piano note again making it unclear on what rhythm exactly the player has to click to. The slider at 00:18:774 (1) - is very unclear as what its trying to follow as well, it skips alot of beats but the very next slider which is the same length and shape fits the music much better. I would suggest looking through this part again and trying to make things more consistent and easier to follow for beginners
01:06:143 (3) - increase spacing a bit maybe since this a bit bigger than a 1/2 gap but seems to be lower spaced than all your actual 1/2 gaps in the map
01:12:932 - maybe start spinner here instead
01:16:248 (1,2) - better map these the same way as 01:21:300 (1,2) - , those sudden 1/2 might be rather confusing as an introduction to this part as you never use them like this again

[Easy]
Easy is solid except for some things in the beginning, not a fan of this weird long gap at 00:14:353 (1,2) - not sure why its here. the note at 00:16:564 (3) - as well is kinda mapped to nothing, I never believed simplicity in difficulties for beginners means ignoring beats and placing notes at parts in songs where there is actually nothing for the sake of keeping a simple 1/1 rhythm. Its just going to confuse beginners more than do any good. But then again I hate mapping easier diffs myself so I cant help much with how to fix things like this or whats generally accepted to be allowed in these cases

Azzedd

468 posts

Joined August 2016

Azzedd 2017-12-11T12:26:33+00:00

Hi dude!
[Insane]
To be honest i love this mapset more particularly for the insane diff'. I did this map more than five times and, i also have a lot to watch the edit and i just find this [*] 01:09:932 (1,2,3,4) - little surprising before the kiai ; Apart from that I love.
Good luck dude!

Flowziee

699 posts

Joined October 2016

Flowziee 2017-12-14T03:43:58+00:00

hi, m4m from your queue.
Insane
00:43:091 (3) - Personally, I think this would work better as a 1/4 slider to really show the contrast between 00:43:249 (4,1) -
00:53:037 (2) - maybe blanket this with the previous slider?
01:11:432 - Sound not mapped here.
01:38:353 (5) - Maybe ctrl + g this? idk, your choice.
Sharu's Insane
00:14:669 (2,3) - I feel like these circles should be placed under the slider for better flow.
Jager's Normal
Stack leniency is a bit too low.
It is essential for a normal to have the entire difficulty mapped under distance snapping. New players can't handle variation of spacing yet. This difficulty is too inconsistent in spacing in my opinion. Open AIMod and there's so many spacing issues in this diff. I get that this song is very complex... but it's still needs to be easy and readable enough for new players. (e.g. one severe case is 00:56:669 (2) - )
00:42:458 (4) - Not distance snapped.
00:44:037 (2) - Not distance snapped.
00:45:300 (5) - Not distance snapped.
00:56:669 (2) - Not distance snapped.
00:45:616 (6) - ehh, not equal distance spacing between previous and next object.
01:01:722 (2) - Not distance snapped. (im just gonna stop stating these issues, there are tons in AIMod)
01:33:616 (6) - what sound is this slider mapping exactly????
Easy
00:11:827 (1,2) - can be confusing to new players...

Map is great but requires some fine-tuning to be rankable. Good luck!
note: at the time of modding this, the hard difficulty was unmapped and therefore i did not mod that difficulty.

Sharu

346 posts

Joined January 2015

Sharu 2017-12-15T21:40:55+00:00

Ametrin wrote:
[sharu's insane]
00:16:722 - why not clickable i follow main melody
00:28:248 (1) - ctrl+g? you cannot emphasize with just nc when all those slider have similar ds and point downside together i ctrl g this one its cool 00:27:932 (4) -

Vell wrote:
[Sharu's Insane]
00:04:722 - , 00:05:353 - making these sounds suddenly map to sliderends felt pretty unexpected, gonna be more comfortable to play if you would stay consistent with that in the beginning i think its ok
00:10:169 - , 00:10:248 - why leave these out here when you mapped these 1/4s all the time previously fixed
00:16:406 (4) - make this a 1/2 and add a circle at 00:16:722 - ? nono
01:15:774 (3) - make this slider start on the blue tick at 01:15:853 - so it goes with the guitar ok
01:29:984 (1) - stack this note below 01:28:722 (2) - or something, just so there is some movement for this beat ok

Flowziee wrote:
hi, m4m from your queue.

Sharu's Insane
00:14:669 (2,3) - I feel like these circles should be placed under the slider for better flow. ok

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6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2017-12-16T19:27:10+00:00

Hi

Insane

00:45:063 (4) - warrants more emphasis since a snare on a blue tick is pretty uncommon, simplifying it isnt worth for a top diff imo It's a bit hard to notice anyways and I can't find a way to emphasize it without making it too difficult

01:32:748 - pretty sure theres a drum beat there, worth catching with a kickslider or something if you wanna keep the triplet rhythm

01:42:853 - the issue of undermapping becomes quite prominent here, because the drum is clearly audible

I feel like this part 00:35:827 - has alot of room for some more complex rhythm choices and a faster pace in general due to the song going really crazy here especially when compared to the kiai which is the fastest part in the map but the song is arguably not as heavy idk, I don't want to abuse kicksliders

00:11:037 - would prefer this rhythm here the second reverse feels a bit too simplified for the hardest diff in the set Mapping the stream feels out of place imo, this slider is here to provide a transition between beginning and 00:11:827 - this

00:12:774 (3) - doesnt really matter but I think stacking this note on the end of (4) seems cooler Yeah, both work well

a bit of nazi but
00:15:143 (5) - make it a clean triangle

00:17:353 (2,3,4,5) - might be intentional but with how clean the rest of the map is polishing this up like this would fit better

00:28:879 - making 1/2 notes here would definitely serve the buildup It would make the rhythm inconsistent which isnt my intention
01:25:090 (2,2) - maybe space these a little bit closer to 01:24:933 (1,1) -
01:31:406 (1) - I wonder why you chose to simplify these so much, there seems to be alot of potential for some more fun rhythms than just 1/1 sliders. generally the diff feels a bit undermapped and doesnt utilize the full potential of the song at many parts, the simplicity might be what you were going for, an extra diff would be nice though because the song really asks for something more complex I'm not sure about what kind of rhythm you're talking about tbh, did you expect kickslider spam ? I don't really get it lol

@Azzedd; Reduced spacing

00:43:091 (3) - Personally, I think this would work better as a 1/4 slider to really show the contrast between 00:43:249 (4,1) -
00:53:037 (2) - maybe blanket this with the previous slider? It would change the way it flows tho
01:11:432 - Sound not mapped here. Not needed, would make the rhythm too dense considering there's a stream right before
01:38:353 (5) - Maybe ctrl + g this? idk, your choice. Yeah, both would work in fact

Hard

00:26:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty cute design tbh Ty!

01:05:669 (1,2,3) - while im all for introducing some irregular rhythms such as 3/4 in hard diffs, slider leniency or passive rhythm is still needed for it to not be too abrupt Well, the AR makes it obvious imo.

01:20:353 (7) - could be 2 circles since this is kiai so supposedly peak intensity, and theres a 1/1 gap for the player to recover afterwards

01:28:879 (1,2) - i feel that 01:29:353 (2) - is too close for a finisher, suggest raising the spacing ( should be fine even with the jump afterwards cause its still relatively slow passive rhythm ) The SV raise is already a bit surprising for the player so low spacing won't hurt.

01:36:774 (2,3) - call me nazi but i clearly saw this as not perfectly parallel and its probably worse than a pattern which clearly isnt made for it

01:50:985 (1) - this is the place where irregular rhythm should be circles only, because its already been introduced at 01:05:669

00:05:353 - leaving out this sound where you focused all the notes on it prior comes very sudden and might cause confusion for how the rhythm will play out with 00:05:669 (5) -
00:17:669 - this seems like a way too prominent sound to just leave out, maybe extend 00:17:353 (2) - to a 1/1
01:14:985 - maybe add spinner until 01:15:932 -
01:20:353 - either make this into 2 circles or a circle at 01:20:353 - and a 1/2 slider at 01:20:511 - , the sound on 01:20:511 - is way too prominent to just end it on a slider and generally doesnt seem right to use the same rhythm for these 2 notes as the 2 previously with 01:20:037 (6) -
01:25:879 - on a same part previously at 01:20:827 - you mapped the reverse slider on this beat, however now you mapped it on a sliderend instead and starting the reverse a whole 2 ticks later, might be better to stay consistent with it

Easy

00:06:774 (1) - would be cool if turn were exactly on the red tick cause its still noticeably far

00:24:143 (3) - overlap with 00:21:932 (1) - i suggest moving 00:24:143 (3,1,2) - to the right as its fine if objects are rather far from the centre due to a spinner following them

00:40:879 (1) - to 00:53:195 (2) - slider-only sections are rather tiresome for beginners due to sliders featuring more complex gameplay than circles, consider replacing some sliders with circles 2/1 gaps make them rather easy to play.

00:44:353 - this greenline does...nothing. derp ?

00:50:353 (2) - eh, not a fan of skipping the downbeat for the sake of simplifying rhythm. your choice though

00:53:195 (2) - would do 1/1 circles as a finisher, however current one is fine too

01:32:669 (1) - not a fan of this shape here cause while the first turn lands on a snare, second one has nothing backing it up This shape is random in fact, angles don't always have to follow changements in the song.

01:50:353 (3,4,5) - make a perfect triangle reeee

@Flowzieee; Beginners should not be underestimated, this is totally readable I think

@Vell; The pattern you mentioned sounds fine to me. I'm focusing on consistency about rhythm rather than following accurately the song.

Thanks for the mods !

Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2017-12-17T12:42:40+00:00

Normal diff has been remapped

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Thanks for mods!

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-12-18T17:33:58+00:00

t'as mod en anglais, je fais de même. si t'as besoin de clarification DM moi, tu sait ou me trouver

M4M from your queue (answer)

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General
unsnapped objects on insane

Jager's Normal
I think 1.2x for the kiai is a little bit too much for normal.
01:32:669 (4,5,6,1) - idk, they just visually look different. they are snapped at 0.9x though, so yeah
not really into normals so idk what to say, everything is snapped so yeah

Hard

00:10:248 (3,1) - isn't this a little too much for hard, idk, maybe you could place 3 inside of 1
00:14:353 (1) - 2 reverses doesn't feel right, better if it's 1 reverse + circle
00:16:879 (1,2) - angles doesn't really correlate, would be better if it was the same angle but Ctrl+H (and this goes too for 00:17:669 (3) - )
00:18:143 (4,5) - ^
i think you get my point, recheck your diff for these
01:28:879 (1,2) - sv is too high here. cool idea though, just keep sv to 1.5

also, diff is buggy (the wrong id bug). remove it from the set, go into the .osu, remove all the beatmap ids and add it again and pray :c

Sharu's Insane

I don't really like the stacks personally, just how they are placed. though it should be ok.
00:25:564 (1,4) - apply the stack offset too here
00:26:511 (4,1) - blanket pls
00:40:248 (1) - non perfect shape, fix pls (grid snap it and re rotate it)
00:42:458 (1) - not sure if this shape is ok, I had complaints about a simillar one in one of my maps
00:45:932 (1) - non perfect shape
00:48:458 (1) - again, not sure if this anchor weird thingy is ok (even if it doesn't affect play at all)
won't talk again about slider shapes as I think you get the idea.
01:00:458 (1,1) - feels like you are missing a lot of sounds, idk feels weird. fine though
01:07:880 (2) - mute slider end w
01:19:248 (1,1) - overlap (though idk how you can fix this)

weird how the end feels more dense than the actual kiai lmao

Insane

00:04:722 (2,3,4,5,1) - visual spacing seems inconsistent
00:07:643 (5,6,7,1) - put the three circle higher to get the same overlap on 4 and 1
00:07:880 (1,2) - missed blue tick
00:10:406 (1) - feels kinda empty, maybe you could emphasize the guitar a little more than reverses
00:13:406 (5,6) - spacing here feels out of place
00:40:248 (1) - not symetrical, redo it with grid snap and rotate it. concept is good though
00:50:353 (1) - ^
00:56:037 (1,3) - you only used stacks since the beginning, why lol
01:01:090 (1,3) - unless this is a pattern, but imo that's not what you should've done cuz it doesn't emphasize really distinc sounds. just my opinion here
01:36:458 (1,3) - make these 45° angles, looks better imo
01:48:143 (4,5) - blanket feels kinda off

really good diff, though it really doesn't feel like an insane. as this is from some BEMANI series I think you should rename this diff "another" or some special diff name.

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2017-12-21T22:07:09+00:00

SPOILER

00:04:722 (2,3,4,5,1) - visual spacing seems inconsistent
00:07:643 (5,6,7,1) - put the three circle higher to get the same overlap on 4 and 1 Wasn't my intention, inconsistent spacing is here to emphasize (1) a bit
00:07:880 (1,2) - missed blue tick In fact the 1/6 notes you're pointing out come after the slider so mapping them is pointless imo.
00:10:406 (1) - feels kinda empty, maybe you could emphasize the guitar a little more than reverses This is a transition between 2 sections
00:13:406 (5,6) - spacing here feels out of place
00:40:248 (1) - not symetrical, redo it with grid snap and rotate it. concept is good though
00:50:353 (1) - ^ I like this one tbh
00:56:037 (1,3) - you only used stacks since the beginning, why lol Don't think it's a big deal since the 2 sections are separeted from 1 minute, I don't really like stacking sliders in slow sections
01:01:090 (1,3) - unless this is a pattern, but imo that's not what you should've done cuz it doesn't emphasize really distinc sounds. just my opinion here Claps don't sound really important to me here
01:36:458 (1,3) - make these 45° angles, looks better imo I don't really get your point tbh.
01:48:143 (4,5) - blanket feels kinda off

00:10:248 (3,1) - isn't this a little too much for hard, idk, maybe you could place 3 inside of 1
00:14:353 (1) - 2 reverses doesn't feel right, better if it's 1 reverse + circle
00:16:879 (1,2) - angles doesn't really correlate, would be better if it was the same angle but Ctrl+H (and this goes too for 00:17:669 (3) - )
00:18:143 (4,5) - ^ Here it does tho, do CTRL+J to 00:18:143 (4) -
01:28:879 (1,2) - sv is too high here. cool idea though, just keep sv to 1.5 Testplays let me think it's fine.

Thanks !

Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2017-12-24T12:17:07+00:00

FruityEnLoops wrote:
Jager's Normal
I think 1.2x for the kiai is a little bit too much for normal. I think 1.2x is appropriate
01:32:669 (4,5,6,1) - idk, they just visually look different. they are snapped at 0.9x though, so yeah
not really into normals so idk what to say, everything is snapped so yeah

Thanks for mod!

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Sharu

346 posts

Joined January 2015

Sharu 2017-12-28T21:12:50+00:00

FruityEnLoops wrote:
Sharu's Insane
I don't really like the stacks personally, just how they are placed. though it should be ok.
00:25:564 (1,4) - apply the stack offset too here ok
00:26:511 (4,1) - blanket pls ok
00:40:248 (1) - non perfect shape, fix pls (grid snap it and re rotate it) no i prefer when its not perfectly aligned
00:42:458 (1) - not sure if this shape is ok, I had complaints about a simillar one in one of my maps it is
00:45:932 (1) - non perfect shape same
00:48:458 (1) - again, not sure if this anchor weird thingy is ok (even if it doesn't affect play at all)
won't talk again about slider shapes as I think you get the idea. it is
01:00:458 (1,1) - feels like you are missing a lot of sounds, idk feels weird. fine though undermapped on purpose to make the intense part more emphasize after and i feel like its cool
01:07:880 (2) - mute slider end w
01:19:248 (1,1) - overlap (though idk how you can fix this) not noticable ig but fixed it
weird how the end feels more dense than the actual kiai lmao lol its not wtf

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Version:Sharu's Insane
Source:発見！よみがえったBEMANI遺跡
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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2018-01-02T10:51:07+00:00

Sorry for delay
[Top]

Honestly ,after all those wub parts ,Naming this difficulty an insane is lol
00:17:717 (4,5) - leaving these without HS feels empty, use whistles like 00:15:191 (5,6) -
00:27:664 - 00:28:927 - Could definitely add claps for snares
00:31:770 (5,6) - The kicks or whatever you are following with these are 1/3 in the song
00:34:612 (1,2,3,4) - No hitsounds on these is weird considering you hitsounded the previous circles 00:33:349 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and the circles after these
00:37:770 - 00:44:085 - clap
00:49:770 (3) - NC for rhythm change
01:08:717 - Could reduce volume here becuase unlike other parts, 65 sounds too loud
01:08:717 - to 01:16:296 - No hitsounds?
01:26:560 (1) - You don't need this NC
01:28:927 (1) - 01:29:401 (2) - Using finish on both of these (heads) is better because they have the same cymbal sound in song
01:35:875 - 01:45:980 - 01:50:401 - 01:50:717 - Claps
01:22:454 (1) - Offscreen

The HS things go for other difficulties too if you copied the same hs
[Insane]

01:31:296 - The whole outro is missing HS

[Hard]

00:14:717 (2,3) - Uh what is this overlap lol its just too bad, try avoiding
00:24:506 (1,2,3,4) - What are you seriously trying to achieve with this. There are different kind of stuff going on in the song. Its like the sliders are randomly put there. They emphasize nothing in particular .why were they even made like this
00:50:401 (1,1) - This spacing is legit higher than your average 1/2 patterns (visually). This is just a no for a difficulty like hard
00:53:559 - Add break

[Normal]

00:07:612 (2) - The emphasis on this slider is totally wrong. Judging by what your notes were following previously, you should emphasize 00:07:927 - not 00:07:612 -
01:04:927 (1,2) - The kicks are actually 3/4 here not 1/3 lol
01:21:348 (7,1) - Swap NCs
01:25:138 (4,5) - DS
01:29:717 (3,4) - same

[Easy]

The rhythm in wub section is totally random to me. In some cases the growls such as on 00:40:927 - are on slider heads, they are clickable, They get proper emphasis but in other cases such as 00:38:401 - They are at either slider ends or at slider repeats and that way the emphasis for growls are p weak since these are like the most drastic sounds in that section.
For instance, at 00:37:770 (1) - the sound which is clickable is 00:37:770 - , ya this sound is extremely weak compared to 00:37:770 - So yea

gl

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2018-01-12T22:28:14+00:00

fixed everything, thanks.

niyuji

529 posts

Joined November 2014

niyuji 2018-01-14T13:45:25+00:00

rip animu bg

Egotrip

92 posts

Joined May 2015

Egotrip 2018-01-17T22:31:17+00:00

Code

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76169
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Cleopatrysm
TitleUnicode:Cleopatrysm
Artist:PyramiD
ArtistUnicode:ピラミッ℃
Creator:6th
Version:Jager's Normal
Source:発見！よみがえったBEMANI遺跡
Tags:Nekomata Master 96 Sota Fujimori Shoccho Akhuta Camellia Jager-kun Sharu
BeatmapID:1460554
BeatmapSetID:675326

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.05
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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