hitsound:
01:03:757 (63757|0) - change to kick
01:04:585 (64585|3) - ^
01:07:482 (67482|1) - remove clap
02:36:447 (156447|3,157275|0) - change to kick
I don't hear the change in the pattern of kick snare kick snare, not sure why you changed the pattern there.
for this calm part i think it might be better to change your hitnormal into something more soft, bell like sound
04:00:861 (240861|3) - to 04:19:482 (259482|0) -
05:19:482 (319482|2) - to end
I suggest this sound, https://puu.sh/yNobo/f2f47a67aa.wav
very good choice of hitsound, good job
01:03:757 (63757|0) - change to kick
01:04:585 (64585|3) - ^
01:07:482 (67482|1) - remove clap
02:36:447 (156447|3,157275|0) - change to kick
I don't hear the change in the pattern of kick snare kick snare, not sure why you changed the pattern there.
for this calm part i think it might be better to change your hitnormal into something more soft, bell like sound
04:00:861 (240861|3) - to 04:19:482 (259482|0) -
05:19:482 (319482|2) - to end
I suggest this sound, https://puu.sh/yNobo/f2f47a67aa.wav
very good choice of hitsound, good job