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HoneyWorks feat.GUMI - Daikirai na Hazu Datta

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tutuhara
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tutuhara
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 февраля 2018 г. at 9:15:38

Artist: HoneyWorks feat.GUMI
Title: Daikirai na Hazu Datta
Tags: HoneyWorks GUMI Tales of Love vocaloid iinkai
BPM: 170
Filesize: 24219kb
Play Time: 04:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Tales of Love (4,87 stars, 1010 notes)
Download: HoneyWorks feat.GUMI - Daikirai na Hazu Datta
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One of the most favorite songs. I wanted to show it in this game. Just the first time in my life I made storyboards. Please do not pass by, help me make the map even better. Thank you, I love you

HS - 100%
SB- 100%

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dan227able
Daycore

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Last edited by tutuhara , edited 19 times in total.
prometheus_v
prometheus_v
no actual warning about hitobjects. just the map needs a epilepsy warning
tutuhara
202 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
tutuhara

OwOwWhatsThis wrote:

no actual warning about hitobjects. just the map needs a epilepsy warning
ok ) Thanks)
Uta
963 posts
Joined December 2016
Uta
Is this an unfinish map? bcuz the drain time is not possible to do a one diff mapset.
tutuhara
202 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
tutuhara

Uta wrote:

Is this an unfinish map? bcuz the drain time is not possible to do a one diff mapset.
download and check time
Daycore
918 posts
Joined January 2015
Daycore
From #modreqs / M4M ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/662778
Привет!

А ещё, рекомендую стаки в "Song Setup" поставить на 3.
Хотел бы ещё спросить насчёт названия диффы. Уверен, что Tales of Love? - Истории любви?; может, лучше поставить The Story about Love, типа, история О любви.

Мод
Напишу про не особо значительные, но в будущем (если ты сделаешь), но приятные мелочи.

00:21:483 (1,2,3,4,1) - не знаю, как тебе, но лично мне кажется, что вот так будет выглядеть намного приятнее. ~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381530, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381533
00:23:424 (2,3) - третий слайдер сунь под конец первого.
00:24:306 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381568
00:25:542 (4) - выглядит не очень приятно, так что, отодвинь 3,4 подальше от 5.
00:39:218 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - флоу стрима выглядит не очень приятно, почини.
01:09:483 - почему тут пустота? к тому же, тут new combo должен быть.
01:27:306 (5,6,1) - нечитабельно.
01:43:012 (4,5,1) - может, сделаешь треугольник?
01:47:512 (7,8) - тут должны быть кикслайдеры в 1/4
01:48:395 (10) - new combo (буду сокращать до NC)
02:27:130 (1) - что тут произошло со сторибордом? мне кажется, тот, кто будет играть твою мапу с сб, думаю, обосрётся на этом моменте.
02:53:424 (3) - подними св и сделай так: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381699
03:36:659 (3) - отсюда начинается довольно высокий св, понизь немного.
04:42:571 (9,1) - спейсинг умер?

Сториборд слишком милый, улыбался пока смотрел. Карта, ну, если ведёшь её на ранк (серьёзно ведёшь на ранк), то тут очень много моментов надо исправлять. В боксе я написал моменты и таких на карте довольно много.
Желаю удачи с картой! ;)
tutuhara
202 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
tutuhara

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

From #modreqs / M4M ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/662778
Привет!

А ещё, рекомендую стаки в "Song Setup" поставить на 3.
Хотел бы ещё спросить насчёт названия диффы. Уверен, что Tales of Love? - Истории любви?; может, лучше поставить The Story about Love, типа, история О любви.

Мод
Напишу про не особо значительные, но в будущем (если ты сделаешь), но приятные мелочи.

00:21:483 (1,2,3,4,1) - не знаю, как тебе, но лично мне кажется, что вот так будет выглядеть намного приятнее. ~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381530, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381533 - мне больше мой флоу нравится, мой стиль
00:23:424 (2,3) - третий слайдер сунь под конец первого. - тут не надо делать шаблонных бланкетов
00:24:306 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381568 - нет
00:25:542 (4) - выглядит не очень приятно, так что, отодвинь 3,4 подальше от 5. - нет сори, тут музыка если представить стоит на месте
00:39:218 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - флоу стрима выглядит не очень приятно, почини. - от такой вот флоу стрима - который выглядит изогнуто, так что все ок
01:09:483 - почему тут пустота? к тому же, тут new combo должен быть. - там все стоит , видимо ты сам как то карту сломал Доки http://prntscr.com/h19nv1
01:27:306 (5,6,1) - нечитабельно. - изи читабельно, потому что по флоу идет, хелло 2010 год
01:43:012 (4,5,1) - может, сделаешь треугольник? - не могу сори, там явный звук длинный на слайдере
01:47:512 (7,8) - тут должны быть кикслайдеры в 1/4 - лучше пока 1.6 встают
01:48:395 (10) - new combo (буду сокращать до NC) - спасибо
02:27:130 (1) - что тут произошло со сторибордом? мне кажется, тот, кто будет играть твою мапу с сб, думаю, обосрётся на этом моменте. - все по видео
02:53:424 (3) - подними св и сделай так: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9381699 - оставилю как есть
03:36:659 (3) - отсюда начинается довольно высокий св, понизь немного. - оставлю как есть
04:42:571 (9,1) - спейсинг умер? спейснутый слайдер тут, для отображение определенного слайдера который занимает две белых линии

Сториборд слишком милый, улыбался пока смотрел. Карта, ну, если ведёшь её на ранк (серьёзно ведёшь на ранк), то тут очень много моментов надо исправлять. В боксе я написал моменты и таких на карте довольно много.
Желаю удачи с картой! ;)
Спасибо за мод, одно применение , твою карту отмодю на днях.
И ниже, я не вижу какие моменты нужно исправлять, то что ты мне дал, относились не к технической части, а к визуальной, и то которые ты считаешь по своему вкусу плохими. Но все равно спасибо
Ответы на каждый мод в Куоте, можешь прочесть почему отклонил
dan227able
29 posts
Joined March 2016
dan227able
General

THE STORYBOARD IS AMAZING (I was wondering why the file size had to be 22MB but it was totally worth it.)

Tales of Love

00:15:042 (3) - This note doesn't fit there, I think it's better to remove it.

00:37:718 (3) - This slider should end on the red mark, not the blue one. It goes better with the beat that way.

00:39:218 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream could be better if you surround the previous slider like this:



00:49:189 (5) - Imo a hitcircle could be better than a slider here

01:17:248 (5,6) - the placement gap between these two should be larger to emphasize the pause in the music

01:23:248 (6) - Move this note to the red mark in 01:23:424 to match the beat better

01:23:601 (1,2) - Delete the 2nd hitcircle and instead make the slider longer to match the vocals better. The slider should also be a bit curved.

01:33:659 (5) - rather than having a returning slider, set the slider to normal and add a triple tap at 01:34:365. It would match the beat much better



01:56:424 (2) - Delete this hitcircle and have the previous slider end at this time mark. This way it doesn't mess with the rhythm that much.

02:04:101 (4) - This hitcircle looks extra here.

02:09:659 (4) - Like on a similar case I mentioned before, this should be a hitcircle instead of a slider

03:12:395 (2) - move this hitcircle to the next red mark and have the previous slider end at the white mark.



Good luck!!!
tutuhara
202 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
tutuhara

dan227able wrote:

SPOILER
General

THE STORYBOARD IS AMAZING (I was wondering why the file size had to be 22MB but it was totally worth it.) - thanksu ))

Tales of Love

00:15:042 (3) - This note doesn't fit there, I think it's better to remove it. - delete THANKS )

00:37:718 (3) - This slider should end on the red mark, not the blue one. It goes better with the beat that way. - sorry this vocal slider (((

00:39:218 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream could be better if you surround the previous slider like this: - nice idea ThanksU)))



00:49:189 (5) - Imo a hitcircle could be better than a slider here

01:17:248 (5,6) - the placement gap between these two should be larger to emphasize the pause in the music - okay))_

01:23:248 (6) - Move this note to the red mark in 01:23:424 to match the beat better

01:23:601 (1,2) - Delete the 2nd hitcircle and instead make the slider longer to match the vocals better. The slider should also be a bit curved.

01:33:659 (5) - rather than having a returning slider, set the slider to normal and add a triple tap at 01:34:365. It would match the beat much better



01:56:424 (2) - Delete this hitcircle and have the previous slider end at this time mark. This way it doesn't mess with the rhythm that much.

02:04:101 (4) - This hitcircle looks extra here.

02:09:659 (4) - Like on a similar case I mentioned before, this should be a hitcircle instead of a slider

03:12:395 (2) - move this hitcircle to the next red mark and have the previous slider end at the white mark.



Good luck!!!
Really Thanks bro for mod ) i love u )
Kyle Y
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Joined November 2013
Kyle Y
#modreqs

Anyway, I apologize for my sentences, I agree I always said something without thinking.
BUT I don't think vocal-mapping is absolutely wrong, or it is wrong in any extent.

After you offline, i read your map for three times. what I can say is as below:
  1. I think some major beat sound cannot be ignore/ skipped, like 00:12:306 - , 00:13:012 - etc.
  2. Some strong beat sound like 00:17:248 - , 00:20:071 - 00:32:777 - 01:54:306 (4,1) - etc. missing jump to emphasize the strong beats, while some object use jump without strong beat support like 00:40:895 (6,7) - 02:32:072 (5,6) - etc.
  3. some misleading spacing is included like 02:49:013 (5,6) - , 01:17:248 (5,6) - 01:37:012 (3,4) - etc . because you use a large ds for 1/2 in the previous part, so it may mislead players to 1/2 spacing instead of 1/1. or even misleading 1/2 spacing as 1/4 like 01:41:071 (3,4) - .
  4. some inconsistent place like 01:11:954 (6,7,1) - and 01:23:601 (1,2) - without hitcircle 01:23:424 - .
  5. some object is placed too near/ overlapped to another object like 03:49:012 (1,2) - 00:37:012 (1,2) - 01:51:836 (1,5) - etc. It affected looking and reading, not unrankable, but I still think it is important.
  6. some place forget to add nc, like 03:57:483 (6) - 01:47:512 (7) - etc.
At least I can think of these problem, whether you fix or not, I don't care.
Yuusei
32 posts
Joined July 2017
Yuusei
So, this is my first mod post.. The song is really nice
I don't really know how to mod so I just rely on my feeling on what feels comfortable and nice, it would be great if you considered my suggestions

(uhh.. I dunno why the images aren't showing up so I'll leave them as direct links)
SPOILER
00:18:659 (1,2) - If you replace the straight slider with a curved one and move the circle upwards, I think the flow would be better in the jump to the next circle:
http://imgur.com/a/ElE6r
00:23:424 (2) - This abrupt slider flow feels uncomfortable. I think it's better if you change the direction to point towards the next slider:
https://imgur.com/a/BWsuy
01:17:601 (6) - I think it's better if this one is the NC instead of 01:17:954 (1)
01:28:895 (6) - I think it's better if this one is the NC instead of 01:29:248 (1)
01:39:483 (2) - If you replace the slider like this I think it would flow better to the next note, it just feels more comfortable but I'm aware this might ruin the mapstyle because you mostly used three-point curved sliders:
https://imgur.com/a/8z9fQ
03:37:718 (1) - Here the song entered its chorus, so people intuitively expect longer jumps, so I think it would be better if you make this circle farther because of the "buildup of tension" from the previous section's long jumps:
https://imgur.com/a/MTnnV
03:41:248 (3,4) - I think the flow would be better if you moved the circle a bit to the right and the slider downwards (to preserve the distance of the long jump), like this:
https://imgur.com/a/LeRCR
03:49:012 (1) - If you replace the slider like this it would help make the next jump (2,3) more comfortable:
https://imgur.com/a/XF5QH

Good luck!
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