davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello -Sh1n1-, from my queue

[Volta's Futsuu]

1. 00:33:114: Change to d, pitch is dropping retained as k to represent the cymbal sound

Well, nothing to say about this map, clean map and fit the music
@here take 2 stars

Good luck

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello -Sh1n1-, from my queue

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:32:593 (10,11): Ctrl + G? to emphasize the pattern at 00:31:900 I wanna add more enphasis on 00:33:027 (14,15) -
2. 01:07:449: Add a note here, because I hear vocal it's for spread with Oni uwu
3. 01:18:547: ^ same as above

[Dark Oni]

1. Nice cool

Well, nothing to say about this map, clean map and fit the music
@here take 2 stars wow thanks <3

Good luck

Chromoxx wrote:

let me GD inner oni pls :3

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey, from my queue. Sorry I'm so late.

[Futsuu]

00:44:906 - Such overwhelming and distinguishing vocals, awkward not to map it in Futsuu. Would just put a d here and delete both k's around it. You could consider it in Kantan as well. the main element in my diffs are the drum i find it awkward if switching to vocal here
00:55:830 (31) - ^ same as ^
01:19:067 (92) - add Finisher fixed

Map's really well done. Good job!

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey, from my queue. Sorry I'm so late.

[Muzukashii]

00:13:345 (37) - Feels like were rushing into this section abit with this note i wouldnt mind deleting it. I think that gap between Oni and Muzu will be too long, so I'll keep for now.
00:24:616 (83,89) - Could consider deleting these cause this is such a calm prety spot. structure will be very similar as futsuu imo
01:02:767 - 01:13:865 - You could add snares to these spots and leave the othe 2 similar with the bigger break. Flow seems awkward with too many of these breaks. It's just I Really want to click the snare here! nice catch, fixed both.
01:18:547 (4,5) - You could consider a dkd here instead consistency with higher diff, if you mean, add a note at 01:18:547 -, I can't cause I'll ruin the gap between oni-muzu-futsuu

[Oni]

00:35:541 (34) - All these could just be d's for consistency with every other snare mapped dk in the Kiais. done


Map's really well done. Good job!

Invective wrote:

hi yahallo~~

Muzukashii

1. I think it's a bit weird to not have the drum sounds at places like 00:57:218 - 01:02:767 - etc. Added a note on the second one.
2. 01:16:293 (1) - Change to k? The three drum sounds at 01:15:945 (85,86,1) - are the same and since the note placement here matches them exactly I think it's better to emphasise these notes. 01:15:945 (87,88) - have different sounds
3. 01:16:640 (3,4) - Ctrl+g? I think more emphasis should be placed on the note on the red tick regardless of whether you're following drums or instrumental,the sound is more prominent there. More so if you change the above. I'm trying to make a mirrored pattern with 01:16:640 (3,4,5,6) -

Oni

1. 00:31:553 (8) - Maybe change this to k for the buildup so it goes from ddkk to dkdk, like the rhythm happens twice as often (idk how to explain it)
   sure, fixed

Nice set

Hope it helps

Invective wrote:

hi

mod

Kantan

1. 00:55:137 (17) - Maybe add k here? Mirrors previous pattern, fits the drum sound. retained to make 4/1 break between kiais

Futsuu

1. 00:54:096 (26,27) - Change these to d? To differentiate them from 00:55:137 (28) - since they act as sort of a build-up. i think building up using k is better for this part since the vocal is different than 00:42:998 (100,101) -
2. 01:16:293 (83) - Change to k? I think having the 3/2 k rhythm fits the drum sounds better. d fits the kick better imo

Nice set

Hope it helps

Nifty wrote:

From that nifty queue~

Muzukashii

◾ 00:09:183 - Why do you only start mapping this part of the music here and not have it mapped for the duration of its being? It's there in the whole intro.
◽ 00:24:790 - Place d here for voice. it will ruin the spread cause I'm not following vocal at this part in Oni
◾ 00:26:697 (89) - Move this note 2 beats to the right (or later, I guess), since you start these patterns here on the second beat. I don't think it will be a good idea, I prefer to keep my current pattern cause it is supposed to keep consistency with 00:24:270 (82,83,84) -
◽ 00:51:322 - You could liberally follow the drums here, the d d k ddd d k stuff. it will be too similar as Oni, I prefer to keep the current gap between diffs.
◾ 01:07:969 - I think straight 1/2 d's here ending in that k would have a cool effect. yeah, that's true, fixed.
◽ 01:16:293 - Here the drums are pretty obvious, they should look more like this. changed 01:17:680 - into k as your example, but not 01:16:293 - cause the main drum I'm following with k is on 01:15:946 - and I wanna add more enphasis on 01:16:293 - with a different sound.

DARK Oni

◾ 00:34:501 (27) - This is surprisingly ok, the only thing I suggest is that this note be a d since the drums are falling. current k contrast better the next note, also is more confortable to play k D than d D
◽ The only other thing here I suggest doing is experimenting with different pattern that aren't ddk kkd ddkkd kdkkd. uwu my mapping style is based in consistency but I understand you, I changed 00:49:068 (42,43,44,45,46) - into kkddk to add variation, other ones are fine imo cause fits the song well.
◾ 00:56:177 - Like here is a good example of thinking outside the box. got it.
◽ Not every dnb song has to be boring!!! I prefer to don't reply to your comment lool

ye

Nifty wrote:

From that nifty queue~

Volta's Kantan

◾ 00:06:235 (5) - There's nothing to denote this being here, so it is questionable. there is a melody at 1/2 tick before but for the sake of simplicity of kantan and consistent structure with 00:11:784 - , it is placed in white tick
◽ 01:19:067 - I feel like this should be all k like the beginning to have a nice roundabout ending. the ending's atmosphere is different than the intro. The intro feels very constant, while the first part of the ending is kinda deep and become lighter until the end, so i colored it differently than the intro.
◾ 01:23:923 (58) - Same comment as first. same as first

Volta's Futsuu

◾ Nah this is pretty fine, just the point about having the ending be the same as the beginning, I guess. same reason as kantan

ye

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Option 1

Option 2

Option 3

Option 4

• [Volta's Kantan]

1. 00:29:125 (31) - consider adding finish here to follow the relatively strong cymbal sound as you did in Futsuu ?
2. 00:56:524 (19) - move to 00:56:177 - and change 00:55:830 (18) - to d ? In this way the pattern structure would be coherent with 00:44:385 (1,2,3) -

• [Volta's Futsuu]

1. 00:19:241 (36) - maybe remove this note ? Currently it stands rather alone compared to the break at 00:12:998 -
2. 00:56:524 (32) - similar to Kantan, you may move this note to 00:56:177 - and change 00:55:137 (28,29,31) - to d.
3. 01:02:247 - consider adding k here for a better spread with Muzukashii ?
4. 01:13:345 - same as ^

• [Muzukashii]
  
  OD should be 5 in order to provide better difficulty transition.

1. 00:13:692 (39) - consider deleting this note to reduce the gap with Futsuu ? Volta's Futsuu only has a 1/1 pattern so it would be better not to fill too many 1/2 notes here.
2. 00:19:241 (62) - same as ^
3. 00:32:767 (12,14) - similar to ^ , I would recommend removing these notes as well since the current density here is very similar to Dark Oni.
4. 00:37:622 (35,41) - maybe remove these notes to make this kiai less similar to the next one ?
5. 00:44:906 (10) - same as ^
6. 01:19:934 (3,8,13,23,28) and 01:28:257 (2) - as Futsuu is rather simple here, you may delete these notes to improve the spread.

• [Dark Oni]

1. 00:26:177 (130) - as the music becomes relatively calm in this session, it would be better to delete this note so as not to take away the emphasis of other parts.
2. 00:33:937 (21) - this note seems unnecessary in the context of spread with lower difficulties. As 1/8 + 1/6 patterns are really hard and form a wide difficulty gap with Muzukashii, I would recommend removing it together with the green line.
3. 01:16:640 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - consider changing this pattern to d k d d k d k to follow the percussion more coherently ? Then you may change 01:16:293 (1) - to k as well for the same reason.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

• [Volta's Kantan]

1. 00:29:125 (31) - consider adding finish here to follow the relatively strong cymbal sound as you did in Futsuu ? fixed
2. 00:56:524 (19) - move to 00:56:177 - and change 00:55:830 (18) - to d ? In this way the pattern structure would be coherent with 00:44:385 (1,2,3) - i think emphasizing the wind sound at 00:56:524 - would be nicer here since different than 00:45:773 - , the finisher at 00:56:871 - led to a new session, it's more like 01:07:969 (38,39) - this slider's end with the next finisher

• [Volta's Futsuu]

1. 00:19:241 (36) - maybe remove this note ? Currently it stands rather alone compared to the break at 00:12:998 - fixed
2. 00:56:524 (32) - similar to Kantan, you may move this note to 00:56:177 - and change 00:55:137 (28,29,31) - to d. same as kantan
3. 01:02:247 - consider adding k here for a better spread with Muzukashii ? fixed
4. 01:13:345 - same as ^ ^

You may call me back after that~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

• [Muzukashii]
  
  OD should be 5 in order to provide better difficulty transition.

1. 00:13:692 (39) - consider deleting this note to reduce the gap with Futsuu ? Volta's Futsuu only has a 1/1 pattern so it would be better not to fill too many 1/2 notes here.
2. 00:19:241 (62) - same as ^
3. 00:32:767 (12,14) - similar to ^ , I would recommend removing these notes as well since the current density here is very similar to Dark Oni.
4. 00:37:622 (35,41) - maybe remove these notes to make this kiai less similar to the next one ?
5. 00:44:906 (10) - same as ^
6. 01:19:934 (3,8,13,23,28) and 01:28:257 (2) - as Futsuu is rather simple here, you may delete these notes to improve the spread.

• [Dark Oni]

1. 00:26:177 (130) - as the music becomes relatively calm in this session, it would be better to delete this note so as not to take away the emphasis of other parts.
2. 00:33:937 (21) - this note seems unnecessary in the context of spread with lower difficulties. As 1/8 + 1/6 patterns are really hard and form a wide difficulty gap with Muzukashii, I would recommend removing it together with the green line.
3. 01:16:640 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - consider changing this pattern to d k d d k d k to follow the percussion more coherently ? Then you may change 01:16:293 (1) - to k as well for the same reason.

You may call me back after that~