01:17:981 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You could space this stream according to the pitch instead of using the same spacing. This would introduce and support the concept of stream spacing variaty later one (ex. changing stream spacing in your kiai time right after
01:14:452 (2,3,4,5,1) - Shouldn't these beats have different spacing since you are mapping to the guitar/bass? Might need explanation since you are mapping the repetitive sounds quite often
01:20:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rotate/Arrange the star patter, so that 01:20:276 (2) - does not almost overlap with 01:19:922 (8) - which at the end might look like this:
http://prntscr.com/h5gdpb01:21:511 (1) - Blanket to 01:20:805 (5) - ?
01:28:570 (3) - New combo here since you nc'ed the exact same patter like 3 times the same way except this one?
01:51:687 (8,1,2,3) - This is plays weird at least to me. I would have mirrored the triple 01:51:864 (1,2,3) - and rearranged these 01:51:864 (1,2,3,1) -
01:53:981 (3,4) - Rearrange these that they are not overlapping with these 01:53:275 (1,2) -
02:01:393 (2) - Blanket to 02:01:746 (3) - and fix the other sliders too 02:00:334 (1,2,1) - ?
02:02:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - These a bit to the right and the bottom and these rearranged 02:02:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - (http://prntscr.com/h5go5f)?
02:36:686 (5,6) - Since you already copypasted these, why did you not copypasted these 02:36:686 (5,6,7) - , so it looks like this(rearranged slider):
http://prntscr.com/h5gq1f ?
02:41:804 (7) - Maybe consider position at the sliderend of 02:42:333 (2) - ?
02:42:686 (3,5,1) - Rearranged these since they are almost overlapping?
02:54:333 (1) - ^ and could also be a blanket to 02:53:627 (4) - and stream 02:54:686 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
03:20:804 (3,4) - Rearranged these since they are almost overlapping?
03:46:045 (9) - Blanket to 03:46:574 (2) - and fix 03:46:221 (1) - ?
04:28:318 (7) - New combo this slider since it is special (almost twice as long and slow)?
05:07:668 (1,2,3,4) - I think there is something off ~ why is there this weird looking gap?
05:13:883 (1) - Silence spinnerend?
05:51:970 (2) - and 05:52:676 (2) - stacked to 05:51:264 (7) - which could also apply to the triple here 05:53:558 (7,8,9) -
05:54:264 (2) - A bit to the bottom?
06:44:038 (1) - Blanket to 06:43:332 (1) -
06:44:038 (1,1) - Spacing between them is less than the spacing between these 06:44:743 (1,1) - although the time passed is different and song has the same intensity. How about this:
http://prntscr.com/h5h90o