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Gabe wrote:

Alright, let's do this!

Oni
  1. 00:12:019 (57,58,59) - and 00:18:019 (96,97,98) - represents the same sounds, however, you are emphasizing it differently by making the first notes only dons and the last notes only kats. It would be nice if you'd make it the same for the sake of a better consistency.
    >change 00:17:644 (94,95,96,97,98) - d k ddd and 00:11:456 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - ddkkk ddd, so that make some various pattern at first part and also keep consistency with triple pattern.
  2. 00:52:706 (91) - This note doesn't seem to emphasize the vocals perfectly, I'd suggest you to replace it with a kat. Also, looking previously, you were trying to follow most of the vocals with kat notes, I guess you could do the same thing here :D
    >kat fixed!
  3. 01:12:394 (209,210,211,212,213,214) - The 'kat-stream' seems out of place, mostly when the vocalist's note doesn't get long at this part, but only a short moment before it. In this case, I suggest you to switch them by CTRL+G and delete the note 01:13:144 (215) - , which would feel out of place.
    >sounds awesome! 'ctrl g'ed there and delete after triple circle following vocal for emphasize it more.



Call me back~

Greenshell wrote:

Time zones increase the delay by 24 hours or more (´・◡・`) (no kds)

[404's Oni]

00:11:456 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - Why are you switching emphasis all off a sudden? Apart from this pattern, you've been following the same sound (idk how to describe it) consequently, while you mapped something different for these notes, causing weird sounding and flow. I'd suggest dkddk or ddkdk for the 5-plet, leaving the ddd triplet as it is. If you insist on keeping the emphasis as it is, change the ddd triplet to ddk to match with the sound you're actually following and to keep a smooth flow.
>ddkkk ddd fixed

00:19:894 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - This rhythm choice seems very questionable to me, as the actual climax of this stanza begins at 00:21:394 - , whereas you've put the hardest part right before, but not within the buildup provided by the song, therefore making it quite unbalanced. I highly recommend re-structuring this short part, unless you can give good reasoning to it.
00:23:456 (126) - As the amount of kats feels pretty heavy, consider changing this to don, also to make the contrast between 00:23:269 (125,126) - clear in terms of pitch.
>good. nerf first part and make some difference from 00:21:394 - .

00:54:394 (102) - This could be a finish, to keep the finisher usage each 16/1 from 00:36:394 - to the end of this stanza consistent.
>so weak and almost can't listened finisher sound, than 00:36:394 - you refered . wanna keep here.

01:12:956 (214) - Consider changing this to don to match the decreasing vocal pitch and also to maintain flow.
>fixed

01:19:144 (252,253,254,255,256) - I can see you tried to capture the held notes by the vocals, but the result doesn't sound and play that nicely, hence I suggest changing it to kkddk, both to maintain flow (as mentioned before), and to express both vocals and the electronic sound in a nice way.
>fixed like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9284596

01:24:769 (288) - This gives the player a smoother feeling as a don, too. Alternatively, you can change 01:24:394 (285,286,287) - to kkd to express vocals nicely too, but I suppose you'd prefer the first suggestion to avoid repetitive patterns.
>fix 01:24:769 (285,286,287,288) - k kkk

The ending seems a bit over the top but that's a pretty subjective thing, looks still reasonable.

[]

That's about it from my side, I guess. I probably would've mapped it differently from the core, but I can see your intentions. I hope this helped~
Thanks for modding!!!


osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67284
Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Jounetsu Utopia
TitleUnicode:蒸熱♨ユートピア
Artist:Karen, Koharu Meu, Harukawa Akari
ArtistUnicode:華憐、小春めう、春河あかり
Creator:Charlotte
Version:404's Oni
Source:恋と恋するユートピア
Tags:eroge opening denki 電気 lovematic koipia koi to suru 404 AccNotFound
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Gabe wrote:

Alright, let's do this!

Kantan
  1. Ok!


Futsuu
  1. Ok!


Muzukashii
  1. 01:07:331 (114,115,116,117) - I'd suggest you to switch (114) and (115) to do like you've done to 01:13:331 (142,143,144,145) - hmm...nope for various pattern & kdkd is not bad.
  2. 01:13:894 (145) - Would require a finish hitsound as well. fixed.


Inner Oni
  1. 01:07:331 (189,190,191,192) - As the pitch is higher on (190) and (191), I suggest you to switch both (189) and (190) to make it dkkd. You did something similar on 01:13:331 (232,233,234,235) - . same as Muzu
  2. 01:13:894 (235) - Would require a finish hitsound to emphasize the cymbal sound. fixed.


Call me back~
Thanks for mods :)
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:3c
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Very sorry for the long wait, but since then you've received many good mods and I can't find any cause-to-be-unrankable issues, so I'll give you a kudosu instead. Sorry :cry:
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I fixed metadata.
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:3c

rebubbled due to metadatas
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why the hell the official website use 2 differents metadata lol

http://lovematic.net/koipia/special_include -> 華憐 小春めう 春河あかり
http://lovematic.net/koipia/special_vocal.html -> 華憐 春河あかり 小春めう

I think, both are ok.

anyway.

In futsuu, maybe better delete this 00:12:019 (34) - ; this note doesnt exist in muzu

feel free to accept or deny, just call me back for the heart \o
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Kin wrote:

why the hell the official website use 2 differents metadata lol

http://lovematic.net/koipia/special_include -> 華憐 小春めう 春河あかり
http://lovematic.net/koipia/special_vocal.html -> 華憐 春河あかり 小春めう

I got already metadata suggstion.

I think, both are ok.

anyway.

In futsuu, maybe better delete this 00:12:019 (34) - ; this note doesnt exist in muzu hmm...muzu is need 1/1 break.but,Futsuu is already have 1/1 break.so no change.

feel free to accept or deny, just call me back for the heart \o
Thanks for mods :)

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i think this is a heart
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Congrats Charlotte!! :3
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woowow yaayyayyayh uhuu connnngratz charlotte !!!
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yay, congrats!
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やったぜ。
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おめでとうございます :)
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Thanks everyone :)
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おめでとう~
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