01:13:092 (1,2,3) - I would move the 1st circle upward like a perfect pyramid
01:16:521 (2,1) - srsly
01:19:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part seems very confusing
00:09:878 (4) - you can clearly hear a triple here like this part 00:10:735 (3) -
00:35:164 (1) - clap sound like in kiai time ??
00:38:164 (1,2) - aren't you going too far with the ds ??
01:03:021 (1) - it would be cool if you did something with this cool sound like in kiai time
01:09:878 (1) - ^
01:05:057 (4,1) - jumping from 0.75 to 1.50 woa isn't that a little bit too much, this part isn't even that intense
Change OD to 7.5 ??
00:09:878 (4) - you did the same thing here avoiding the triple how about decreasing the slider velocity before the next part ?
01:03:021 (3) - i really want to hold this circle, same here 01:09:878 (3) -
That's a really cool map i would definitely play it when it gets ranked good luck