MikitoP - Akaito

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Topic Starter
Narcissu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年10月9日 at 17:42:05

Artist: MikitoP
Title: Akaito
Tags: Little couldsplash16 red string thread of fate vocaloid hatsune miku みきとp
BPM: 170
Filesize: 23991kb
Play Time: 05:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Inseparable (4.16 stars, 996 notes)


Download: MikitoP - Akaito
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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それでも君が好きだよって

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collab with Little

2 bookmark part by me. 1 bookmark part by Little

joker-
Asuka_-
Yasaija 714
Left
timemon
leo16834
Xiaolin
Mordred
Gottagof4st
Pentori
Eir_DELETED
cool original version feat. pro mappers

Narcissu

  1. oh the video has audio track! it's unrankable!
  2. the Volume on kiai raise to 70%? i listen they are weak sounds than others
  3. 00:14:227 (4) - 00:40:874 (3) - missing sample set normal?
  4. 02:02:932 (4) - why does the slider only shapes angular? i like same shape as 02:02:579 (3) - . 00:25:521 (5) - same as 00:25:168 (4) - ;w;
  5. 02:16:080 (2) - it's calm part and there is no sound in the song so i like to remove the circle. 00:52:786 (2) - same
  6. 02:27:109 (4,1) - they have big distance imo, i like the pattern
  7. 02:30:285 (6) - add nc?
  8. 04:19:521 (3) - it's unsnapped uwu

Little

  1. 01:09:109 - there is certainly vocal on here but, i hear background music is state of silence thus i'd prefer to mute the spinner end.
  2. 03:03:991 (1) - likely add whistle?
  3. 03:12:109 (4,1) - in case of considering the cymbal emphasis, there are closer than similar rhythms. would make suitable for Ctrl H plus G for instance.
    - 05:02:403 (4,1) - similar reason as above, why dont you unstack them?
  4. 03:39:462 (1,2) - i wanna suggest they are swapped nc each other then nc get players to notice transition of snapping or smh easier imo
  5. 03:41:050 (1) - add finish?
  6. 04:40:786 (3,4) - can you move them upward a bit for being smoothly flow? and 04:40:521 (2,4) - i suppose they would be unified the shape for aesthetics in my mind
  7. 05:08:227 (1) - i rly love to add red combo color for the representation of the theme "Akaito". but it's pretty lazy to adjust them...
  8. 05:14:050 - i'd prefer to mute the slider end cuz i assume the slider is following the echoes or lingering sounds of this song.
  9. 05:16:874 - 05:19:697 - 05:22:521 - 05:25:344 - 05:28:168 - ? why do those green lines express decrescendo unless the song sounds crescendo.

my suggestions are mostly just my preferences. but i hope they help for you guys...
the map is very good at all for me, i rly hope the map will be ranked! Good Luck☆
Topic Starter
Narcissu

joker- wrote:

cool original version feat. pro mappers

Narcissu

  1. oh the video has audio track! it's unrankable!
  2. the Volume on kiai raise to 70%? i listen they are weak sounds than others
  3. 00:14:227 (4) - 00:40:874 (3) - missing sample set normal?
  4. 02:02:932 (4) - why does the slider only shapes angular? i like same shape as 02:02:579 (3) - . 00:25:521 (5) - same as 00:25:168 (4) - ;w; …… i want to add random red point, 02:02:226 (2,3,4) - 0 /1 /2 point...
  5. 02:16:080 (2) - it's calm part and there is no sound in the song so i like to remove the circle. 00:52:786 (2) - same
  6. 02:27:109 (4,1) - they have big distance imo, i like the pattern
  7. 02:30:285 (6) - add nc?
  8. 04:19:521 (3) - it's unsnapped uwu

other fix
last slider and spinner by me, i fix it Orz

add red colours is easy 8-)
Monstrata
Call me for bubble thx
Topic Starter
Narcissu
of course !! thx !!!

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i really want to write “Call me for bubble” in some map too, but my english too shit to pass bn test :(
Asuka_-
選曲nice

Narcissu
00:29:580 (3) - normal sampleset?

00:50:756 (4) - move to down a bit cuz hp bar lol

02:19:256 - xdxd
you mapped drum sound which is weaker than this at 04:58:521 (1) -

02:31:962 - 02:32:315 - why skip this sound?
i want to follow all key(?) sound like 04:58:521 (1,2,3) -

Little
01:17:756 (5) - move to up a bit betterr imo,(blanket with 01:18:109 (1) - )
https://i.gyazo.com/e5e5072d9c0e7ae4f3e ... ac37e8.png

01:52:874 - normal sampleset?

04:38:933 (2) - ctrl+g? i think it's good flow.
Since song ascend from point 04:38:580 - , i think it would be better to ctrl+g and make a difference to DS.

04:53:933 - 04:53:933 - clickable?
04:51:109 - and 04:53:933 - and 04:56:756 - are identical for me, and there are big sound at 04:53:933 - and 04:56:756 - .
01:40:521 - ^

That's all (^^♪
Topic Starter
Narcissu
02:31:962 - skip here be smaller and simpler, little last part do hard maybe

other fix ~
Captain Yasaija
M4M
*I have not seen anything about Hitsound >:(

Inseparable
  1. 00:20:050 (8) - I think that it is better to not overlap
    How about trying to put it evenly on the distance of the approach rate circle like the image? Image
  2. 00:29:227 (2,5) - How about stacking to the beginning of the slider?
  3. 00:41:932 (3,1) - I think that overlap can be avoided
  4. 00:59:050 (3,4) - Probably I think that the rhythm with Ctrl+G matches
  5. 01:38:756 (3,5) - Stack is better
    01:38:756 (3,3) - just like here
  6. 01:57:109 (4) - Add NC?
  7. 02:08:756 (8,1) - I think that this distance is close
    I think that it is better to separate a little more to express a big sound
  8. 02:31:697 (1,2,3) - The appearance is getting worse due to the difference in distance
  9. 02:32:403 (3,2) - overlap
  10. 03:06:638 (4,4) - How about trying to stack?
  11. 04:48:109 (2) - I think it is better to place one circle and make one beat interval!


Good luck! :)
Left
[M4M]

00:19:521 (4,8) - stack both isn't better?
00:22:168 (3,4) - i wanna see symmetra here cuz 00:20:403 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - symme
00:29:491 - 02:04:080 - need note here i think cuz 00:26:580 (3,4,5) - ur rhythm use
00:55:697 (1,3) - can space this more like http://puu.sh/xLVI6/1f8c699cbe.jpg
02:54:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i wanna see stream here cuz sound is really strong just 1/2 looks quite awkward
02:31:697 (1,2,3,4) - 04:58:521 (1,2,3,4) - i hope you guys can make this two same
05:04:874 (3) - just triplet is better for this tension
05:14:227 (1) - spinner mute

good luck!
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M
*I have not seen anything about Hitsound >:(

Inseparable
  1. 00:20:050 (8) - I think that it is better to not overlap
    How about trying to put it evenly on the distance of the approach rate circle like the image? Image
  2. 00:29:227 (2,5) - How about stacking to the beginning of the slider?…… no, too far
  3. 00:41:932 (3,1) - I think that overlap can be avoided……it's just overlap in Edit ..
  4. 00:59:050 (3,4) - Probably I think that the rhythm with Ctrl+G matches
  5. 01:38:756 (3,5) - Stack is better
    01:38:756 (3,3) - just like here
  6. 01:57:109 (4) - Add NC?
  7. 02:08:756 (8,1) - I think that this distance is close
    I think that it is better to separate a little more to express a big sound
  8. 02:31:697 (1,2,3) - The appearance is getting worse due to the difference in distance
  9. 02:32:403 (3,2) - overlap……same as above
  10. 03:06:638 (4,4) - How about trying to stack?……
  11. 04:48:109 (2) - I think it is better to place one circle and make one beat interval!


Good luck! :)

Left wrote:

[M4M]

00:19:521 (4,8) - stack both isn't better?
00:22:168 (3,4) - i wanna see symmetra here cuz 00:20:403 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - symme……i dislike full symmetry ..
00:29:491 - 02:04:080 - need note here i think cuz 00:26:580 (3,4,5) - ur rhythm use……see the colours .. i add 3note all pink (4 bar loop)
00:55:697 (1,3) - can space this more like http://puu.sh/xLVI6/1f8c699cbe.jpg
02:54:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i wanna see stream here cuz sound is really strong just 1/2 looks quite awkward
02:31:697 (1,2,3,4) - 04:58:521 (1,2,3,4) - i hope you guys can make this two same…… if its 4.5+ star diff i will use stream .. i think stream too hard for novice. i only use stream once
05:04:874 (3) - just triplet is better for this tension
05:14:227 (1) - spinner mute……

good luck!
no reply = fix or little's part

thx mod :D
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