TicClick wrote:

General

1. Timing:
   
   1. #1: BPM is 120,25 and offset is 4215
   2. #2: BPM is 142,75 and offset is 20181.
   3. #3: BPM is 145 and offset is 21862
   4. #4: BPM is 146,5 and offset is 28482
   5. #5: BPM is 156 and offset is 30095
   6. #6: BPM is 164,05 and offset is 31626
   7. #7: BPM is 167 and offset is 33088
   8. #8: BPM is 167 and offset is 34545
   9. #9: BPM is 165 and offset is 35982 (just snap it to white line)
      Bold sections are by me, the others are by you (just tweaked it). That's great for first try!

Boy-Skylark (when you finish it)

1. Is is supposed to be Normal? Use these settings. Then reduce sliders velocity to 1.0x and manually check every slider.
2. 00:31:626 (5) - make this more accurate and beautiful

Black Queen

1. 00:16:190 (5) - make it really symmetrical
2. 00:14:194 (3,5) - new combo
3. I recommend you to do something with empty places. While there's no break, HP is going doooooown
4. 00:22:068 (2) - swith your beat snap divisor to 1/3 and snap it to the tick. Also, I advice you to turn these two notes (and two next) into sliders because 1/3 rhythm is mixed with 1/2 here and people can easily hit 100 instead of 300
   Well, to be honest, it sounds as 1/3 for me; feel free to not re-snap it
5. 00:23:793 (2) - same. Snap it to 1/3 or.. or follow my note above ^
6. 00:25:172 (1,2) - I don't remember if these were 1/3, too. But they sound as 1/2 and.. Dunno. Turn it into slider
7. 00:25:793 (3,4,1,2) - looks good, but.. it's not easy to 'read' from the first time. Hitbursts (things that pop up with '300', '100' signs etc) close 00:26:206 (1) - partially
8. 00:31:441 (6) - finish for the end
9. 00:30:095 (4) - new combo
10. 00:41:800 (1,2,3) - good, but it's hard to see under previous slider's track and hitbursts. Move all these notes down and make 00:41:800 (1,2,3) - go up, not return by slider's way
11. 00:47:072 (1,2,3,4) - hmm hmm. There's something wrong, and you see what is. After you fix that (notes go along with the slider, oh my), I recommend you to re-do that slider. I know it's designed to be 'hold note', but.. I can't see where sliderball is going to
12. 01:13:800 (4) - move it away from the slider's body, looks bad in this case (especially when colors look the same)
13. 01:16:709 (4) - new combo
14. 01:12:709 (3) - well, you may do something with thiS Slider. Try to make it more symmetrical
15. 01:15:618 (3) - and this one too
16. 01:19:618 (1) - add finish

Black King

1. 00:32:997 (1) - that's weird when stream starts from blue tick. Add note on red tick before and add two notes after stream (until 00:33:806). Then insert break after it and add some hitsounds (you forgot to apply claps to stream)
2. 00:41:981 (1) - start it from previous white tick and end it at the same time (00:42:891)
3. 00:47:072 (13) - new combo
4. 00:46:800 — either add note here or place next one further from stream; there's no need to make player rage by forcing him to miss note (he implies that this note is in stream and hits earlier)
5. 00:47:254 (1) - remove combo
6. 00:47:618 — add note here
7. 00:53:436 (1) - place more notes after it; it's bad to leave this fragment empty
8. 00:55:527 — add note here
9. To next: Please, add more notes! Don't leave music empty; I know there's nothing special, but you may follow the main rhythm and add objects according to it
10. 01:05:436 (1,1,1,1,1) - too many short spinners in a row. Only old beatmaps have this disappointing stuff, so you better avoid that. Add some notes instead
11. 01:19:618 (1) - this one is fine. Add finish to it
12. 01:35:618 (6,9) - new combo
13. 01:37:436 (11) - remove that slider and make something usual
14. 01:44:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Add here stream, too (1/4 notes)

That's all for now. I also highly recommend you to map until the end (or at least until 01:57:436).