spboxer3 wrote:

[Mancuso's Easy]
01:53:765 (1) - tap on HP BAR~need fix it

Elly-chan wrote:

[*]It'd be nice if you updated the Beatmap Thread's Title to 'Katy Perry - E.T. (Nightcore Mix)', too, since currently it is misleading since it only says 'Katy Perry - E.T.' .

Mustaash wrote:

Just to say that this doesn't matter at all.

144,196,28965,6,8,B|172:124|268:96|380:124|384:212,1,300,8|0

Zelos wrote:

OMG Saten insanes <3 <3

General:
Add Teenage Dream to tags since that is the album this song came from. added on my diff
Keep a consistent tick rate. The Saten diff has a tick rate of 2 while the others have a tick rate of 1. you should con

Satene:
Saten <3 <3
Oh wow this is like Saten '10 o.o (or saten early days /:D) Yeah my old style is super jumps, but I still like them~
01:04:485 (2,1) - this is unrankable because the slider end of 2's combo burst covers up the kick back part of slider 1 so this needs to be changed. Changed
01:50:245 (1) - yeah same thing with this area being too quiet. at least higher the volume a little? it's now 35%

Jeeezus this is by far the most intensely hard saten difficulty I have seen o.o o.o

CXu wrote:

AR10 do want.

Saten-san wrote:

Yeah, it should be 10, like in Sa10 (Saten)

Xavier18488 wrote:

My mod!

[General]
[SB]
I think you should put more lyrics

[Yli's Hard]
00:14:245 - Do this: Done
00:14:565 (2) - At the end (00:14:725) revoke Clap Done
00:14:885 (3) - Add Hit Sound Clap at the start Done
01:21:125 (3) - Unrakable jump (I think) Not changed, we'll see what others say
02:04:325 (2,3,4) - ^ ^

Good map I'l give kudo When have one!

Xavier18488 wrote:

My mod!

[Mancuso's Easy]
00:20:645 (1) - This sounds bad! Revoke reverse and put the end here: 00:21:285. Add a new slider starting here: 00:22:085 and ending here: 00:22:565
00:37:285 (2) - Slider should end at: 00:37:925 with, in the end, Hit Sound Whistle I played with Vocal/Instrument, for this reason feels like off-rhythm, but you have to follow better the music
00:41:125 (1) - Slider Should end at: 00:41:765 with, in the end, Hit Sound Whistle ^
00:42:405 (2) - Slider Should end at: 00:43:045 with, in the end, Hit Sound Whistle ^
02:19:685 (2) - The slider is unplayable Well this map is very ugly, but Unplayable??. I'll change it because it were ugly and made another pattern[/color]

Download: Katy Perry - E.T. (Nightcore Remix) (Barney Stinson) [Mancuso's Easy].osu

1. Storyboard : cc.png is 1146x250, the maximum allowed is 800x600 for storyboarding (except in certain cases).You must resize it and fix the storyboard afterwards.
2. I don't think putting the storyboard in front of combo fire is a good idea, it looks creepy :/

1. 00:20:645 (1) - You have added a reverse only for the sake of ending the slider at 00:22:565 right ? However the reverse sounds pretty awkward because it is on neither the instrumental nor the vocal. It is completely off. So, you should do something like this instead :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:37:285 (2) - This slider shoul end 1/1 earlier, it would end on the vocal + a loud beat which makes more sense than its current end spot.
3. 00:41:125 (1,2) - In my opinion it would make more sense to end them on the "me", i.e. 1/1 earlier for both.
4. 01:11:845 (3) - Putting it underneath the slider makes it less visible which isn't a good thing especially in the easiest difficulty.
5. 01:14:085 (3) - This circle is kinda superfluous. In my opinion it would sound better and be easier for beginners if you removed it.
6. 01:22:725 (2) - Reduce it by 1/1 to follow the vocal, it sounds nicer according to me.
7. 01:38:725 (1) - Do not silence anything please (you can only for spinner ends), this is unrankable because there is no sound to give feedback to the player if he has hit the object correctly. Use at least 25%.
8. 02:03:685 (1) - This circle is hidden by the spinner's hitburst. Make it visible please.

1. 00:30:885 (3) - The new combo mark should be on this circle and not on 00:32:165 (1).
2. 01:14:405 (2,1) - Switch the new combo to keep consistency with the above line.
3. 01:31:045 (2) - This anti-jump is evil, it looks like (1) and (2) are 1/2 apart but they are 1/1 apart which is very confusing and shouldn't be used in any way in a Normal difficulty.
4. 01:37:445 (1) - You should reduce it by 1/1 to keep consistency with 01:34:885 (1) (and because it sounds better too).
5. 01:57:925 (7) - The spot where it ends is kinda awkward to me, it would feel much better if you could end it 1/1 earlier.
6. 02:14:565 (2) - It is badly stacked, try to fix this please.

• For the sake of the difficulty spread, HP drain -1 please ~

1. 00:14:245 (1,2,3) - This pattern sounds weird, I know you have inverted 00:12:965 (1,2,3) to make symmetry, but the gamaplay shouldn't be broken for design issues. Do your pattern like this then :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:805 - Why don't you add a note here, there is a loud beat and without a note 00:16:965 (4) feels late and awkward.
3. 00:21:925 - ^
4. 00:22:085 (4,5) - Don't stack their ends like that, because of (4)'s hitburst, it is hard to see where (5) will end.
   It is better like this : (of course don't forget to fix the spacing afterward whatever you've done).
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:23:845 (3) - Same thing as above.
6. 00:28:325 (2) - Why did you put it at the top, wouldn't it be better to put it at the bottom like this ?
   
   SPOILER

   
   Of course, if you put this slidr at the bottom, you have to put 00:29:606 (4) at the top. So select 00:28:325 (2,4) and use ctrl+J (Shortcut for the vertical flip)
7. 01:00:325 (3,4,5) - Why do you suddenly use an huge spacing, this is really confusing and not fun
   Please, use proper spacing here.
8. 01:20:965 (2,3) - Same here, don't use suddenly such huge spacing.
9. 01:36:165 (1,2) - This jump is too huge for a Hard difficulty. In my opinion, this would be better :
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:40:005 (5) - Do not silence anything please (you can only for spinner ends), this is unrankable because there is no sound to give feedback to the player if he has hit the object correctly. Use at least 25%.
11. 02:04:325 (2,3,4) - Waa, what's with this spacing o.o
    I'm ok with increasing the spacing a bit here because this part needs to be epic, but not that much :O
12. 02:10:725 (1,2) - Do this pattern like this, it would be easier to play.
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:17:125 (1,2,3) - Try to stack them correctly, it looks uite ugly in this way.

1. The HP drain and the OD are a way too high ! -1 for both please o.o
2. 00:16:805 - Why don't you add a note here, there is a loud beat and without a note 00:16:965 (1) feels late and awkward.
3. 00:22:085 (2) - ^
4. 00:47:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why do you increase the sliderspeed for each slider here, I mean, no, this is bad and very confusing. If you want to make epic patterns it isn't the good way.
5. 00:50:085 (2,3,4,5) - ^
6. 01:05:445 - Same as before
7. 01:22:725 (3,4,5) - Why do you suddenly start using 1/4 patterns, this is weird and unexpected. Besides, a triple doesn't fit the music here, so please consider removing (4).
8. 01:24:005 (4,5,6) - ^
9. 01:39:845 (5) - Do not silence anything please (you can only for spinner ends), this is unrankable because there is no sound to give feedback to the player if he has hit the object correctly. Use at least 25%.
10. 01:40:005 - End the kiai time here to keep consistency throughout the mapset please.

1. AR10... sorry, but... Are you serious !! o.õ
   This is not even playable...
   Looks like you have already decided to change it.
2. The spacing + the sliderspeed are both too huge/high for me. I don't see where the fun is :/
3. 00:24:485 (1,1,1,1) - Don't combo spam like this please, this is senseless.
4. 00:35:365 (1) - This spinner is barely doable.
5. 00:57:125 (3) - Don't hide it underneath the stream's hitburst please, make it more visible.
6. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as before.
7. 02:03:685 (1,2) - Switch the new combos.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Satene

1. AR10... sorry, but... Are you serious !! o.õ
   This is not even playable...
   Looks like you have already decided to change it.
2. The spacing + the sliderspeed are both too huge/high for me. I don't see where the fun is :/ I really think it's quite fun. And there are probably that think so too~
3. 00:24:485 (1,1,1,1) - Don't combo spam like this please, this is senseless. okay.
4. 00:35:365 (1) - This spinner is barely doable. fine imo
5. 00:57:125 (3) - Don't hides it underneath the stream's hitburst please, make it more visible. changed
6. 01:18:885 (1) - Same as before. should be fine as well
7. 02:03:685 (1,2) - Switch the new combos. done

KuraiPettan wrote:

Yli's Hard

• For the sake of the difficulty spread, HP drain -1 please ~ Done

1. 00:14:245 (1,2,3) - This pattern sounds weird, I know you have inverted 00:12:965 (1,2,3) to make symmetry, but the gamaplay shouldn't be broken for design issues. Do your pattern like this then :
   
   SPOILER

   
   This is already changed, but not uploaded yet ~
2. 00:16:805 - Why don't you add a note here, there is a loud beat and without a note 00:16:965 (4) feels late and awkward. Done
3. 00:21:925 - ^ Done
4. 00:22:085 (4,5) - Don't stack their ends like that, because of (4)'s hitburst, it is hard to see where (5) will end.
   It is better like this : (of course don't forget to fix the spacing afterward whatever you've done).
   
   SPOILER

   
   Changed
5. 00:23:845 (3) - Same thing as above. I don't see the reason to change them. They are not in a line, so the end is not hard to see, I think
6. 00:28:325 (2) - Why did you put it at the top, wouldn't it be better to put it at the bottom like this ?
   
   SPOILER

   
   Of course, if you put this slidr at the bottom, you have to put 00:29:606 (4) at the top. So select 00:28:325 (2,4) and use ctrl+J (Shortcut for the vertical flip) Changed
7. 01:00:325 (3,4,5) - Why do you suddenly use an huge spacing, this is really confusing and not fun
   Please, use proper spacing here. Done
8. 01:20:965 (2,3) - Same here, don't use suddenly such huge spacing. For the symmetry I need a little jump. Changed it and hope it's better now =/
9. 01:36:165 (1,2) - This jump is too huge for a Hard difficulty. In my opinion, this would be better :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Done
10. 01:40:005 (5) - Do not silence anything please (you can only for spinner ends), this is unrankable because there is no sound to give feedback to the player if he has hit the object correctly. Use at least 25%. Changed
11. 02:04:325 (2,3,4) - Waa, what's with this spacing o.o
    I'm ok with increasing the spacing a bit here because this part needs to be epic, but not that much :O Decreased the spacing
12. 02:10:725 (1,2) - Do this pattern like this, it would be easier to play.
    
    SPOILER

    
    The jump is the same (2,00) and your way the spacing from the previous note would be lower and then had to fix a lot of little spacing
13. 02:17:125 (1,2,3) - Try to stack them correctly, it looks uite ugly in this way.F ixed

Saten-san wrote:

KuraiPettan wrote:

Satene

1. The spacing + the sliderspeed are both too huge/high for me. I don't see where the fun is :/ I really think it's quite fun. And there are probably that think so too~

1. Can i ask you something? Why the diff from Mancuso have different colors? For me is inconsistency in combo colours,try to change that in my opinion,so use this code:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,128,64
   Combo2 : 0,255,255
   Combo3 : 255,128,128

2. Just a suggestion, in you future maps,try to use Distance Snap 1.0x for the bad overlap between the notes in my opinion
3. You forgot to add in tags "Ylinestra44" in my opinion

• -- Much better if you reduce one tick in Approach Rate in my opinion
  -- Disable the countdown like the other diffs?
  - 00:28:325 (3) - You should probably to add a new combo here and remove here 00:28:965,looks pretty nice
  - 00:37:285 (1) - I think if you considered to reduce this slider a little bit here 00:37:925 because follow very nice the music in my opinion
  - 01:11:845 (3) - Move this note looks ugly to overlap the slider
  - 01:38:725 (1) - Sorry for being nazi but much better if you move this slider in the center in my opinion
  - 02:14:565 (1) - I think this slider is really kinda bad for me,try to use some traditional like this?

• - 00:57:125 (x) - You should probably map this part in my opinion
  - 01:27:205 (1) - This slider sounds reeally bad so you need to extend this slider to 1/1 oh and if you make the change you probably delete this note 01:28:485
  - 01:55:365 (4) - Add a new combo here to follow the rythm
  - 02:14:565 (2) - You can see there is a bug stack here so change that

• - 00:46:885 (2) - For being symetric,align this note with (1) please
  - 00:57:125 (x) - You should probably map this part in my opinion
  - 01:40:005 (5) - Silence this note please because sound loud to me

• -- Ok

• - 01:38:405 (8) - You can center this note please? For a perfect symetry

MoodyRPG wrote:

This is a OVNI mod so be careful

You forgot to add in tags "Yliniestra44" in my opinion Pleease, my name is Ylinestra44, not Yliniestra4..

Hard

• - 00:46:885 (2) - For being symetric,align this note with (1) please Done
  - 00:57:125 (x) - You should probably map this part in my opinion Done
  - 01:40:005 (5) - Silence this note please because sound loud to me Done

I Agree with Kurai,the map need more work but for now,Good luck

m4w11 wrote:

Wtf is peoples problem with ar 10? sheesh... l2p