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ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Look For The Truth

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Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月7日 at 19:29:28

Artist: ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Title: Look For The Truth
Source: Touhou
Tags: c80 nomiya ayumi shikieiki yamaxanadu
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5229kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hazy (3.01 stars, 247 notes)
  2. Illusion (4.81 stars, 510 notes)
  3. Truth (5 stars, 716 notes)
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Look For The Truth
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Snowy Dream's 4th Touhou song & 1000+combo , and 7th beatmap.
Hope you like this :3
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[Hazy](Normal) by Snowy Dream
[Illusion](Hard) by Snowy Dream
[Truth](Insane) by Snowy Dream
[Story Board] by Snowy Dream
Last edited by Snowy Dream , edited 44 times in total.
S h i a
397 posts
Joined December 2009
S h i a
Ne~
combo color 5 和 combo color 1 太接近了. 人老了好难看出区别呀(喂

[Hazy]
01:30:590 (1) - 让spinner 在 01:30:061 or 01:30:414开始？ 这个spinner时间比较短.;_;


[illusion]
00:46:208 (1) - new combo?
02:26:884 (1) - ^


[Truth]
<3

nice map. 对我来说已经很不错了。
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

S h i a wrote:

Ne~
combo color 5 和 combo color 1 太接近了. 人老了好难看出区别呀(喂 ._.

[Hazy]
01:30:590 (1) - 让spinner 在 01:30:061 or 01:30:414开始？ 这个spinner时间比较短.;_; 的确有点短了。。但总感觉提前就不合拍。。。嘛 之后再说吧


[illusion]
00:46:208 (1) - new combo? Fixed
02:26:884 (1) - ^ Fixed


[Truth]
<3

nice map. 对我来说已经很不错了。
ww thanks for modding~
Love
osu! Alumni
1,267 posts
Joined August 2010
Love
Hmm, thinking about taiko mapping this, would you accept it? :3
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my que

[General]
fine

[Hazy]
00:09:943 (1) - 建议少一次折返加个note
01:03:590 (1,2,3,4) - 这叠的有点眼花，换成五边形试试？
01:21:590 - 漏了个clap吧
01:25:825 - ^
感觉有的地方漏了不少clap，我懒得仔细听了，你自己找找吧0.0
03:13:472 (1,2) - 妈的吓死人了，这spacing这么小结果slider居然没减速。。强烈建议remap下。。放心吧能pass这个难度的人就算是0.5速都能1PC读出来

[Illusion]
AR考虑+1
00:06:767 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这一叠往右下移点，play的时候spacing不对
00:12:325 (4) - 为啥这么诡异？为啥不是白线开始？少个repeat然后挪到00:12:414吧
00:22:561 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 换几个去slider。。这泥马confusing到天边了
00:45:767 (8,1,2,3) - 这个也confusing到天边了，不过combo不长，改下排列弄好读点吧。。
01:05:355 (3) - 叠到4那去，似乎好点0.0
02:03:767 (1,2,3,7) - 这里play的时候看不到7了。。不过这只是我打图渣
02:08:178 (5) - 其实为了好看，这里不用刻意照着DS排，跟前面的摆成菱形多好看0.0
02:18:943 - add note
02:29:708 (6) - 弄长点，02:30:237结束
02:30:943 - add note
02:32:531 (5) - NC
03:23:355 (3) - ^
03:42:767 (3) - 有点被挡住了，差点以为是两个circle，不过这只是我打图渣
03:50:178 (1,2) - 这里可能有人会按早0.0

[Truth]
00:12:325 (6) - 这note感觉多了。。虽然这个是跟的重音，不过后面都是跟的高音了。。感觉这个重音不需要特意跟上。。
01:48:414 (5) - 诡异的shape，跟整体风格不符。。
02:40:649 (7,8) - 绕着圈的突然来个叠。。combo breakder \:D/ 我建议这里还是五边形或者六边形吧。。顺时针绕
03:14:884 (4,5) - 都是0.5x但是这里感觉1.0x好点。。
03:51:590 (5) - 结束在03:52:120感觉好点

膜拜神图
玛德一个两个都是神mapper
没法混了，删osu去QAQ
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
[Hazy]

00:27:943 (x) - 加個circle?

03:32:178 (x) - ^


Illusion

>>AR+1?

02:00:414 (1,2,3) - 尾巴沒重疊好:3
SPOILER
312,92,120414,6,0,B|276:80|232:92,1,75,8|0
235,163,120767,2,0,B|247:128|237:90,1,75,0|0
163,88,121120,2,0,B|198:100|237:90,1,75,8|0

02:08:531 (6) - NC

[Truth]
00:38:178 (1,2,3) - 一樣尾巴沒重疊好
SPOILER
224,216,38178,6,0,B|264:200|288:160,1,80,2|0
277,243,38531,2,0,B|293:203|284:165,1,80,8|0
333,225,38884,2,0,B|317:186|284:165,1,80,2|0

01:52:825 (4) - NC ?

02:26:178 (4) - 建議NC 感覺有點難讀

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圖還蠻不錯玩的:3

加油:D

(2小時多連續mod5張圖有點吃不消...)
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Thank you for mod request~

[Hazy]
  1. 03:09:237 (2,3,4) - Use whistle instead of finish?
  2. 03:14:884 (2,1,2) - ^
[Illusion]
  1. 00:22:561 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you can, it's better to use the slider at this difficult rhythm in hard diff.
  2. 01:30:590 (6,8) - Use whistle insterad of clap? The sound of clap is kinda noisy here imo.
  3. 02:49:472 (6) - ^
  4. 03:09:237 (2,3,4) - Use whistle instead of finish?
  5. 03:14:884 (2,3,4) - ^
  6. 03:48:061 (3) - Add whistle.
[Truth]
  1. 00:19:649 (6) - Add whistle at the end of slider?
  2. 00:45:590 (3) - Remove it.
  3. 01:24:590 (4) - How about stack it perfectly with (1)? (If you do it, move (5,6,7,8,9) right by 3 grids, too.)
  4. 01:29:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - I like this pattern. (Oops, it's not mod. :P)
  5. 03:09:943 (4) - Remove it? That makes good effect imo.
  6. 03:17:708 (4,5,6,7) - Looks crowded. Put them with x1.0 DS in this combo?
  7. 03:52:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this position is not really good. (It's kinda hard to find them and hit this stream.)
Good song<3
Of course your mapset is quite great!
Take my star and good luck~ :)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[general]
噗 你串錯lyrics了
Pink and red combo colour are quite similar, you can consider to change the order of combo colour

[Truth]
OD so low?
00:12:149 (5,7,8) - (5) finish, (7,8) whistle, no whistle on (9)?
00:17:884 (2) - poor spacing D:
00:30:237 (3) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 then (2,3,4) looks more symmetrical
00:45:237 (1,3,5) - clap?
01:09:237 (13) - finish here
01:29:884 (2) - place around (334,168), place (3) around (260,232) so that it forms 2 stright line
02:04:372 (2) - use slider to connect the two sentences?
02:15:943 (3,4,5) - spacing
02:28:296 (13) - finish
02:42:237 (5) - You arranged (ending of 2, 3,4,5) in a square but the ending position of (2) is not the reversing side, then we can only see the signs of 300s turning in a odd angle. Therefore I suggest you to place (2,3,4,5) in a sem-hexagon http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/177056
03:12:061 (3) - move the middle slider point up ~3 grids lv4 so that the slider curve around another notes better?
03:28:120 (x) - add notes?

quite energetic, I like this one <3

[Illusion]
00:02:531 (4) - y:256
01:00:061 (3,4) - (3) left 1 grid lv4, (4) up 1 grid lv4 to make it symmetrical
02:13:296 (7) - curve in a better way?
03:23:355 (1) - keeping one sentences / 8 beat 1 combo, remove this new combo
03:26:178 (1) - ^

>A<

[Hazy]
ok

nice song, I hope I can hv time to make a taiko diff but I'm too busy now ;w;
Shinkuu
231 posts
Joined June 2009
Shinkuu
整体完成度比较高，所以给不了太多实际的意见
太长了，挑后面两个diff mod

  • Illusion
  1. 01:52:649 (4,1) - 试着拉开，不要重叠？
  2. 03:39:590 (2) - NC？
  • Truth
  1. 00:17:708 (1,2,3) - 23太近了，移开
  2. 00:34:120 (3) - NC？
  3. 01:22:649 (4) - NC？
最后，射个星吧 ;)
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
[storyboard]
I don't like that the lyrics stop moving then fade out. They should stop when the fade ends, not when it begins.
sun-effect looks bad. make it again and don't crop off the edges. select the alpha channel and crop to selection. Also double check it on a black background.

[truth]
00:15:590 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/196100 - I didn't like the rhythm here, so I rearranged it where the sliders start on the longer notes in the melody, and the triple is on the guitar rhythm. Depending on your NC scheme you might want to put 00:15:414 (4) - as a new combo too. I usually only put NCs on the downbeat, but you're doing something different here that I don't understand.
01:31:296 (6,7) - overmap
02:17:002 (7) - There's a number of spots where you randomly put in NC, or put it on the next note/whatever. I don't think this is much of a problem, but it's awfully inconsistent. Consistency should be something you strive for in beatmaps.
02:28:296 - Also pretty :( when there's not a new combo on a kiai time start...
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
hello ~

general;
- fine

hazy;
- 01:12:414 >> new combo
- 02:30:414 >> remove a repeat and move it to 02:30:590 ? sounds better to me
- 02:35:708 >> maybe something like this is better


illusion;
- 01:05:531 >> i think that a slider from here to the next white tick fits more
- 02:49:472 >> remove a repeat
- 03:17:708 >> new combo
- 03:20:531 >> remove a repeat and add notes at 03:21:414 and 03:21:590

truth;
- 00:17:884 (2,3) >> eh, spacing ?
- 02:09:943 >> new combo
- 03:37:472 >> ^
- 03:42:767 >> ^

* that's all
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

lovhin456 wrote:

hello ~

general;
- fine

hazy;
- 01:12:414 >> new combo
- 02:30:414 >> remove a repeat and move it to 02:30:590 ? sounds better to me
- 02:35:708 >> maybe something like this is better


illusion;
- 01:05:531 >> i think that a slider from here to the next white tick fits more
- 02:49:472 >> remove a repeat
- 03:17:708 >> new combo
- 03:20:531 >> remove a repeat and add notes at 03:21:414 and 03:21:590

truth;
- 00:17:884 (2,3) >> eh, spacing ?
- 02:09:943 >> new combo
- 03:37:472 >> ^
- 03:42:767 >> ^



* that's all
ww thanks for your modding.
fixed all
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Increased OD and fixed little spacing issues (Illusion and Truth) Rest look fine
Bubbled
Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

lovhin456 wrote:

Increased OD and fixed little spacing issues (Illusion and Truth) Rest look fine
Bubbled
wwwwww
thanks! get 1 more bubbles
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Nothing worth to pop a bubble but I have some suggestions here :

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

SB

  1. 00:49:649 - 00:57:355 - leave-effect.png in front of lyric SB looked better imo, it's more layered (更有层次感)
  2. 01:09:237 - Red "全" character appeared only a few second, you make it by accident or you did it on purpose? Shouldn't it follow the lyric/3-1.png(全てを解き放ち)?
  3. 02:28:296 - Well, it seems you did it on purpose, nvm, it's fine though =/
  4. 01:19:120 - leave-effect.png stop here looked kinda odd, try this code?
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"Lyirc\leave-effect.png",320,240
     F,0,74708,74884,0,1
     F,0,74884,80531,1
     R,2,74884,80531,12.9024,14.6249
     M,0,74884,80884,-24,61,102,311
     F,0,80531,80972,1,0
     S,0,80531,81061,1,3.02752
     R,1,80531,81061,14.6249,14.78656
     M,0,80884,81061,102,311
     F,0,80972,81061,0
  5. 03:07:649 - 03:30:237 - 4 lines of lyric appear on a screen looked kinda crowded imo, maybe you can try only 1 or 2 line at a same time, then when late lyric appeared, make previous one fade out?

Illusion

  1. 02:28:296 (1,2) - I think it's better to use slider instead of 2 notes, idk why but when test, I read these 2 notes to 1/2 beat space =/ Well, maybe just my play skill suck

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
wow, congrats~!
wule
150 posts
Joined April 2011
wule
妈的神mapper哭了
AIR315
645 posts
Joined May 2011
AIR315
......

Congratz~

8-)
lovhin456
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Joined December 2008
lovhin456
congrats! :3
Dino99
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Dino99
Congratulations~
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