22:46 Nitrous: yo kocari
22:46 Nitrous: mind checking my map quick?
22:46 Kocari: I mean
22:46 Kocari: I guess
22:47 Nitrous: ok
22:47 *Nitrous is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1425681 Toyama Kasumi (CV. Aimi) - Kirakiraboshi ~hajimari no suteji Ver.~]
22:47 Nitrous: trying out less generic styles for a change of pace
22:50 Kocari: ok offset might be fucked in some places
22:51 Nitrous: hmm
22:51 Kocari: 00:13:284 (4,5,6) - 
22:51 Nitrous: slight change?
22:52 Kocari: yeah
22:52 Kocari: shouldnt be too much
22:52 Kocari: but let's go over things I see
22:52 Nitrous: ok
22:52 Kocari: couldn't these be the same 3/2 sliders 00:01:522 (6,6) - 
22:52 Kocari: practically same rhythm
22:54 Nitrous: I don't like it being too repetitive though, some variation perhaps?
22:55 Kocari: spacing here wouldn't make much sense given the music but if it's your preference sure 00:08:511 (7) - 
22:56 Kocari: possible ctrl+G here
22:56 Kocari: 00:10:897 (6,7) - 
22:56 Kocari: makes strong piano keys like 00:08:681 (1) - 
22:56 Kocari: and 00:11:409 (1) - 
22:57 Nitrous: okay
22:57 Kocari: quite subjective but as well doesn't make much sense to me
22:57 Kocari: 00:14:136 (1,2,3) - 
22:57 Kocari: are these
22:57 Kocari: you've changed the rhythms up quite a lot
22:57 Nitrous: over a short map
22:58 Kocari: it would make sense to do it for half
22:58 Kocari: then change it for half
22:58 Nitrous: well I shift emphasis
22:58 Kocari: beause it's all sliders here 
22:58 Kocari: 00:19:590 (1) - 
22:58 Kocari: compared to starting at 00:15:500 (1) - 
22:59 Nitrous: good point, I should balance them
23:00 Kocari: I would possibly add a slider or whatever you prefer on (2,3) 00:28:284 (2,3,4,5,6) - 
23:00 Kocari: they are seperate in piano sounds from 00:29:647 (2,3,4,5,6) - 
23:01 Kocari: it'll give more emphasis to the 2nd part 
23:01 Kocari: same can be said here for 
23:02 Kocari: (3,4) but it's subjective up to you
23:02 Kocari: 00:32:375 (3,4) - 
23:02 Kocari: since (4) doesn't have much emphasis on it
23:03 Kocari: just tell me when you have an opinion on it or finished I'll move on
23:04 Nitrous: okay
23:05 Kocari: 00:33:227 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:34:590 (1,2,3,4) - 
23:05 Kocari: there's less distinctive sounds on the 2nd part but is mapped the same way
23:05 Kocari: I would just somehow tone it down to where it brings in more emphasis to 00:35:954 (1) - 
23:06 Kocari: because it does slow down until there
23:06 Nitrous: I see
23:07 Kocari: only something I would do https://puu.sh/xJ84z/2595432f78.jpg
23:08 Nitrous: I was accounting for the snares
23:08 Nitrous: is it still ok?
23:09 Nitrous: btw after that should be consecutive circles, mind sharing ideas to improve it?
23:09 Kocari: yeah I heard them too should be ok 
23:09 Nitrous: 10 seconds of clicking just circles
23:09 Kocari: for the circles hmm
23:10 Kocari: I would somehow want to incorporate the vocals in
23:10 Kocari: at 00:35:954 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 
23:11 Kocari: these parts
23:11 Nitrous: something I would save on lower SR diffs
23:11 Nitrous: ah
23:11 Nitrous: okay
23:11 Nitrous: 1/1 slider or 1/2?
23:11 Kocari: probably 1/1 to 
23:12 Nitrous: would it be preferrable to increase SR on every vocal line instead?
23:12 Kocari: that would be up to you
23:13 Kocari: I think it's up to patterning here 
23:13 Nitrous: okay
23:14 Kocari: I'd remove this note 00:46:181 (7) - 
23:14 Kocari: not much going on here in the music and it'll progressively build into kiai better
23:15 Nitrous: but I hear a castanet
23:15 Kocari: thats just her
23:15 Kocari: from where (5) was 
23:15 Kocari: I mean (4)
23:16 Kocari: just her vibrato
23:16 Nitrous: huh
23:17 Kocari: yeah I'm not sure what consanant you're hearing
23:17 Kocari: it's still a vowel of u up until there 
23:17 Kocari: "u"
23:19 Nitrous: pretty sure theres a castanet too :/
23:19 Kocari: nope https://puu.sh/xJ8pl/2d1103b1a4.png
23:20 Nitrous: ok
23:20 Kocari:  hard to judge the kiai
23:20 Kocari: it's practically identical to at 00:25:045 (1) - 
23:21 Nitrous: but the piano is less distinct this time
23:21 Nitrous: oh how I love children's songs
23:21 Nitrous: no lolicon tho
23:22 Kocari: I mean other than that it's alright
23:23 Nitrous: even how controversial I think the circles in that 10 second part
23:23 Nitrous: you think this can go through?
23:23 Kocari: the chances of this going through without a lot of changes or variables to rhythm in some cases by others I would say
23:23 Kocari: 40%
23:24 Kocari: once you implement hitsound
23:24 Kocari: is where it'll change
23:24 Nitrous: true
23:24 Kocari: whistles are your friend here
23:24 Nitrous: use many whistles?
23:24 Kocari: yes
23:24 Nitrous: thanks for the tip
23:25 Kocari: should be ok
23:25 Kocari: the easier diffs will be easier