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Спасибо!tseegus wrote:
Insane:
00:20:943 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a lot of sliders not intresting to play( Changed!
01:27:811 (3,4) - it is better to make a little stream instead of this part Changed!
01:42:890 (6,7) - instead of this part it is better to continue this stream -> 01:42:416 (1,2,3,4,5) -
the end. Changed!
YashaPlay wrote:
Спасибо!tseegus wrote:
Insane:
00:20:943 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a lot of sliders not intresting to play( Changed!
01:27:811 (3,4) - it is better to make a little stream instead of this part Changed!
01:42:890 (6,7) - instead of this part it is better to continue this stream -> 01:42:416 (1,2,3,4,5) -
the end. Changed!
Бывает!tseegus wrote:
Только сейчас понял что ты Русский
017-09-24 22:35 Lokidoki: 00:07:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern
2017-09-24 22:35 Lokidoki: 00:08:153 (6) - seems really out of place
2017-09-24 22:36 Lokidoki: 00:08:153 (6,7,8) - and this spacing
2017-09-24 22:36 Lokidoki: 00:08:153 (6,7) - the sound here is more important than 00:08:311 (7,8) - so i don't see why you went for higher spacing
2017-09-24 22:37 YashaPlay: fixed
2017-09-24 22:37 Lokidoki: 00:10:679 (2,3,4) - spacing is inconsistent with 00:11:943 (2,3,4) - ; 00:13:206 (2,3,4) - ; and so on
2017-09-24 22:38 Lokidoki: 00:19:837 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - small spacing doesn't fit here, make it normal, like before
2017-09-24 22:39 Lokidoki: 01:01:995 (1,2,3) - really overspaced
2017-09-24 22:39 Lokidoki: 01:02:627 (4,5,6) - ^
2017-09-24 22:40 Lokidoki: 01:08:311 (1,2,3) - just my suggestion here, but using extented sliders doesn't represent the song to the fullest
2017-09-24 22:40 Lokidoki: don't&
2017-09-24 22:40 Lokidoki: 01:32:943 (1,1) - if you're going for the center of the spinner, it's a bit higher
2017-09-24 22:41 Lokidoki: are you keeping up with me?
2017-09-24 22:41 YashaPlay: For 01:08:311 (1,2,3) - i wan't to see it that
2017-09-24 22:41 YashaPlay: yes
2017-09-24 22:42 Lokidoki: 01:42:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this one is 1/3
2017-09-24 22:42 Lokidoki: 01:45:258 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern here could be more polished, like an even spaced star
2017-09-24 22:43 YashaPlay: yea
2017-09-24 22:43 YashaPlay: thanks
2017-09-24 22:43 YashaPlay: its all?
2017-09-24 22:43 Lokidoki: 01:46:206 (1) - this spinner seems unreasonably long, i can see that the guitar song is long here, but if you just cut the spinner short earlier it would be easier
2017-09-24 22:44 Lokidoki: that spinner is almost 7% of the song
2017-09-24 22:44 Lokidoki: mp3*
Thanks,Lokidoki wrote:
also, add "namae, UNIVERSAL MUSIC" to tags Ok.irc017-09-24 22:35 Lokidoki: 00:07:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern
2017-09-24 22:35 Lokidoki: 00:08:153 (6) - seems really out of place
2017-09-24 22:36 Lokidoki: 00:08:153 (6,7,8) - and this spacing
2017-09-24 22:36 Lokidoki: 00:08:153 (6,7) - the sound here is more important than 00:08:311 (7,8) - so i don't see why you went for higher spacing
2017-09-24 22:37 YashaPlay: fixed
2017-09-24 22:37 Lokidoki: 00:10:679 (2,3,4) - spacing is inconsistent with 00:11:943 (2,3,4) - ; 00:13:206 (2,3,4) - ; and so on
2017-09-24 22:38 Lokidoki: 00:19:837 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - small spacing doesn't fit here, make it normal, like before
2017-09-24 22:39 Lokidoki: 01:01:995 (1,2,3) - really overspaced
2017-09-24 22:39 Lokidoki: 01:02:627 (4,5,6) - ^
2017-09-24 22:40 Lokidoki: 01:08:311 (1,2,3) - just my suggestion here, but using extented sliders doesn't represent the song to the fullest
2017-09-24 22:40 Lokidoki: don't&
2017-09-24 22:40 Lokidoki: 01:32:943 (1,1) - if you're going for the center of the spinner, it's a bit higher
2017-09-24 22:41 Lokidoki: are you keeping up with me?
2017-09-24 22:41 YashaPlay: For 01:08:311 (1,2,3) - i wan't to see it that
2017-09-24 22:41 YashaPlay: yes
2017-09-24 22:42 Lokidoki: 01:42:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this one is 1/3
2017-09-24 22:42 Lokidoki: 01:45:258 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern here could be more polished, like an even spaced star
2017-09-24 22:43 YashaPlay: yea
2017-09-24 22:43 YashaPlay: thanks
2017-09-24 22:43 YashaPlay: its all?
2017-09-24 22:43 Lokidoki: 01:46:206 (1) - this spinner seems unreasonably long, i can see that the guitar song is long here, but if you just cut the spinner short earlier it would be easier
2017-09-24 22:44 Lokidoki: that spinner is almost 7% of the song
2017-09-24 22:44 Lokidoki: mp3*
HonKAn wrote:
hello. mod~ Hello!Insane00:32:943 - add clap Ok.
00:45:616 - I think the volume of the note is 65% better. Ok.
01:03:258 - Unused timing point Why this un-used?
01:30:890 - add clap ?? No.
01:38:627 - add clap (If you were meant to be. I'm sorry.) No.
good luck! Thanks!