Hi Wildone (late mod) sorry i ve been busy lately
Nice Mapset
Goodluck !!
General:
- mind cutting the end of the audio where it goes silent for about 14 secs (which is not good in idle mode it will end but u will wait 14 seconds until the next song start etc)
- try to Add "Drum" and "Bass" in tags to ease reachability for people seeking for bass or drum particularly
- i think its unecessary to have two timing sections in this song, one is enough and set offset to 108ms instead, then resnap all notes and inheriting sections ( timing setup then Ctrl+A and +9 ms to all )
Formed
- 00:14:842 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - as u can hear this melody is different than the rest and stronger and needs different representation (playing it like that sounds less rhythmical imo ) so i suggest to increase the spacing of the stream at this pattern or maybe characterize it differently
an example - 00:20:328 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same suggestion as above
Vocals snapping suggestions - 00:26:156 (2) - this slider's end should be on 1/6 (next tick) not on 1/12 ( play it on 25% playback rate there will be no sound even after it passes the 1/12 tick, and it starts technically at the next tick )
- 00:26:670 (1) - this starts and sounds better when its mapped to the more audible sound at 1/12 (next tick) ofc the tail should stay where it was
- 00:32:213 (1) - if you mapping this to vocals it start one tick earlier (1/12) ( if u changed fix the slider extend slider to where it ended before )
- 00:32:870 (2) - this the previous gey tick is where it should start ( when u change etc lol )
- 00:34:856 (1) - and this is clearly starting on 1/6
- 00:35:199 (2) - this seems to start on the next grey tick (1/12)
- 00:37:985 (1) - this should start on 1/16 next gey tick ( when etc )
- 00:39:870 (2) - hmm it seems too far from where its supposed to be unless you were following that change in tone, it/vocal starts here anyway 00:39:806 - (1/16)
- 00:40:385 (3) - yea it seems that what u were following
- 00:41:527 (3) - i suggest to put this on the white tick where the sound is more important/emphasising the vocal/word at that part
Done - 00:43:842 (2) - hmm it will play better if you just copied then ctrl+h 00:43:156 (1) -
- 00:47:413 (1) - a fully vertical slider would fit better that vocal and strong beat imo or just apply a circle like u did here 00:50:156 (1) -
- 00:52:899 (1) - same as above
- 00:53:270 (2) - still not enough to invovle a hyper dash here a normal move is fitting that part better like u did before
- 00:58:385 (1) - same as above
- 01:08:499 (2) - rotate it vertically heading to right, as it feels now like the rhythm is drawn when it comes
- 01:13:985 (2) - same
- 01:59:242 (3,4) - it doesnt fit well its the similiar to the case as above ( ctrl+g can improve it )
- 02:01:470 (1,2) - same thing the flow freezes where it should be active try to move 02:01:813 (2) - to x240 y192
- 02:10:213 (3,4) - same suggestion
- 02:15:527 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same suggestion i mentioned at 00:14:842 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
- 02:31:642 (1) - stacking this on (3) gives better emphasis to the last beat ( bigger jump )
Rain
- *if you are mapping those various metronome vocals in the same ticks as "Formed" then apply the same suggestions mentioned above (for the rest of diffs too )
- 00:09:185 (3,4) - a hyper would fit rhythmically and aesthetically better imo
- 00:28:899 (2) - i recommend a similiar shape as 00:26:156 (2) - since they share same tone
- 00:43:842 (2) - same suggestion copy paste 00:43:156 (1) -
- 01:45:013 (1) - move a little bit to left
- 01:46:385 (1) - a little bit to right
- 02:31:642 (1) - a little bit to right xD
Platter
- 00:05:927 (7,1) - since you made a hyperdash here i think its better if u keep it consistent on this parts 00:00:784 (1) - and 00:11:756 (1) -
- 00:19:470 (3) - stack it on (2) like u did at 00:16:727 (3) -
- 00:17:927 (2,3,4) - increase the space for bit bigger jump
- 00:30:613 (4,1) - same thing a slight jump would flow better
Salad
- 00:23:413 (2,3) - a jump like u will do later in such strong vocals try to ctrl+g slider then stack circle on 00:24:213 (1) -
- 00:23:413 (2) - its clearly unsnapped (well i already mentioned suggestions about this part)
*rest is Clean
Cup
- *imo the vocals part it will not be well represented because its a cup where there shouyld be no jumps and it sounds unrhtyhmical catching those close unstable metronomes i think its better if you map the music sounds with long sliders instead or try this
- 00:27:870 (3) - i think it would be better replacing it with a circle ( simple rhythm will make things clearer)
- 00:29:413 (1) - same
- 00:30:785 (1) - same
- 00:34:856 (1) - same
- 00:37:642 (3) - same
- 00:39:185 (1) - same
- 00:41:242 (2,3) - increase spacing
- 00:41:727 (1,2) - same thing
- *Rest is good
Nice Mapset
Goodluck !!