soraru - Mata Ashita

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Cheri
Sorry for being a bit late ~ was busy with personal issues but thats solve now so...



  • Reunion
  1. 03:27:688 (3) - The spacing is kind of too low right here tbh compare to usual like around this section - it ain't much but it wouldn't hurt to consider bringing it up higher so it at least wouldn't have simialr spacing to this 03:28:045 (1,2) -
  2. 04:47:331 (4) - forgot a finish here like how ya did it over here 04:44:474 (2) -
  3. 04:50:902 (1,2) - having 2 sliders right here is pretty weak considering what ya did previously 04:45:188 (1,2,3,4) - 04:48:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - and after 04:53:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - so yea I think it be best to express the music more if ya change to maybe like the first time in the song 04:45:188 (1,2,3,4) - to be consistent or something similar to that idea

  • General

  1. Check ya aimod ~ Some Objects isn't snapped and the kiai - also preview time point isn't snapped to anything around here 00:00:367 -


Well I did look at it for a while and didn't see no problems with the map as far as gameplay/visuals so I guess just call me back and metadata?

also

Topic Starter
Nao Tomori
Cheri
ok
Lasse


so apparently red/green line with different volume isn't unrankable anymore?
could use that to lower volume on 00:00:545 (1) - a bit by doing https://i.imgur.com/FA8AXie.jpg, think that fits well
00:54:474 (3) - bit weird to suddenly ignore piano on red tick when it's mapped all the time before, why not https://i.imgur.com/snDldA0.jpg
01:00:902 - whistle would be cute with some lower volume // 04:00:902 -
01:03:581 (5,6) - sounds a bit off, but 1/12 also sounds off so whatever lol
01:51:617 - normal hitnormal
probably forgot to nc somewhere in this 02:02:777 - part? so much longer than all others
04:15:902 (2,5,1) - same for these and other cymbals until 04:20:902 -
03:58:045 (1) - would start this on 03:57:956 - already to make it feel more connected to the vocal it follows
04:40:188 (1) - missing finish/clap or something
05:13:700 (1) - think removing one repeat sounds better?
05:22:450 (1) - sounds rly off, should be moved to 05:22:465 - or something

yea
GoldenWolf
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Lasse wrote:



so apparently red/green line with different volume isn't unrankable anymore?
could use that to lower volume on 00:00:545 (1) - a bit by doing https://i.imgur.com/FA8AXie.jpg, think that fits well
00:54:474 (3) - bit weird to suddenly ignore piano on red tick when it's mapped all the time before, why not https://i.imgur.com/snDldA0.jpg idea of this map is to clearly change instrumental layers. i used ncing to signal that, each combo follows a different instrument. this combo follows vocals, and i think the 3/4 slider emphasizes the slight delay and held-ness of the vocal here.
01:00:902 - whistle would be cute with some lower volume // 04:00:902 - applied first cuz piano, no piano 2nd one
01:03:581 (5,6) - sounds a bit off, but 1/12 also sounds off so whatever lol i think its a good enough approximation, dont want to try and map a pickup trill lol
01:51:617 - normal hitnormal
probably forgot to nc somewhere in this 02:02:777 - part? so much longer than all others no layer change no nc
04:15:902 (2,5,1) - same for these and other cymbals until 04:20:902 - same nc idea
03:58:045 (1) - would start this on 03:57:956 - already to make it feel more connected to the vocal it follows meh i like it as is, its not a big difference and i feel like starting on downbeat is nicer
04:40:188 (1) - missing finish/clap or something agree
05:13:700 (1) - think removing one repeat sounds better?
05:22:450 (1) - sounds rly off, should be moved to 05:22:465 - or something

yea
timing fixed thx to gowo
Cheri
05:15:671 (1) - um this isn't snapped to anything so fix that and i'll bubble
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori
indeed
Cheri
k
Lasse
k
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hello im in the tags owo


Yh but seriously why am I in the tags?
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