hi~
from my queue~
[Tatsujin]
It seems that we can still improve as the state of map.
good luck ~
from my queue~
[Tatsujin]
- 01:10:631 - add note here.
You should follow the sound of Drum.
Although it is certainly accompanied by a strong sound, it is picked up mainly by Drum, so let's pick it up. - 01:12:631 (424) - d
I judged that it does not match the sound behind at the time of this note.01:12:298 (421) -
The sound of K is emphasized by setting it to ddd - K, and you can also make a good flow in play. - 01:14:631 - add d
Drum sound here.
Perhaps it was intentionally pulled out, but it looks strange. - 01:31:048 (543) - change d
It brings out an effect that can emphasize k along the melody here. - 02:01:048 (776,777) - ctrl+g
02:01:131 - Drum sound (kick).
I do not understand why I took it with k. - 02:25:464 (1015,1016,1017,1018,1019,1020,1021,1022,1023,1024) -
Which sound did you pick?
I could not hear 5-5 sounds.
example:
(line 02:25:798 - )
https://puu.sh/xRrxs.jpg - 02:29:714 (1063,1064) - ctrl+g
It is strange that it ends with d because the sound of the synthesizer is rising. - 02:34:548 (1113,1114) - ctrl+g
Synthesizer's pitch, 1114 higher - 02:40:381 (1170,1171) - ctrl+g
- 02:45:214 (1220,1221) - ctrl+g
- 03:20:297 - add note,
miss? There is a sound, it is not a place to cut. - 03:48:048 (111,112) - ctrl+g
- 03:53:381 (167,168) - ctrl+g
- 04:26:131 (437,438,439,440) - why 1/8 snap?
1/6 is sufficient sound.
I do not understand the meaning of 1/8 and let flow also bad. - 04:31:131 (471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495) -
Notes is in some places deviated. - 04:43:213 (542) - K
It has a strong Clap sound different from other places. - 05:15:130 (865) - delete.
Let's delete it, especially because there is no sound. - 05:15:463 (868,869,870,871,872) - ctrl+g
The pattern is misaligned.
When listening to the sound, the 1/6 pattern is appropriate from 05:15:546 - . - 05:23:129 - add k
- 05:23:213 (950,951) - move to 05:23:296 -
- 05:23:463 (952,953,954,955,956) - ctrl+g
https://puu.sh/xRsdf.jpg
First of all, since the Drum sound and Notes are disconnected, the position of 1/6 is wrong, please fix it. - 05:25:463 (973,974,975,976,977) - ctrl+g
It seems that we can still improve as the state of map.
good luck ~