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KazukiP

Joined January 2016

KazukiP 2017-11-04T21:01:50+00:00

Lifdrasir wrote:
im still newbie to mods so dont expect nothing xxdxdxdxd

[The Destination]
00:08:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - What if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471642 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471649 to invprove flow
00:42:314 (1) - blanket
00:51:914 (1,2) - change by a slow slider? I think is kinda acc dropper
00:59:114 (5,1) - about alll parts that are like this overlap, it feels at least for me really weird, I could suggest you to look the way to make it feel better flow, since you stop there when the ryhtmic flow was equal, the distance isa the same, so is like weird sorry english xdxdxd
01:10:394 (4) - imo all those parts where kicl slider are touching the next one would feel better if is ppointin to the head or if were just triple
01:53:354 (3,1) - Hm... distance is like confusing
03:03:914 (4,1) - even if emphatize is just objetive... there are no really high volume on 03:04:394 (1) - to put a that large distance imo
03:28:394 (1,2,3,1) - I sugggest you make something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471758 leaving a break here 03:29:474 - 03:31:154 -
03:32:954 (7) - slider pointin to down?
03:51:434 (3,4,5) - oh man this is real acc dropper, could you try something different?
04:06:314 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
04:48:074 (3) - try the same effect, like overlapped as the prev slider, I think could look better
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Mod finish Hope I did help in something, if something didnt u liked dont insulte me pls, nothing offensive, wanna be bullied just because tried to mod xd
^^ not to the mapper only, to everyone

You seem to know what you're talking about. If you could help at all could you give me some advice here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1443986&m=0

Fursum

523 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Fursum 2017-11-04T21:04:55+00:00

Lifdrasir wrote:
im still newbie to mods so dont expect nothing xxdxdxdxd

[The Destination]
00:08:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - What if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471642 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471649 to invprove flow thats a whole another thing to do, very far off from the structure i used for the section. I think it is fine as it is.
00:42:314 (1) - blanket how is that off xd
00:51:914 (1,2) - change by a slow slider? I think is kinda acc dropper well, the bpm is pretty low, i dont think it would cause much problems
00:59:114 (5,1) - about alll parts that are like this overlap, it feels at least for me really weird, I could suggest you to look the way to make it feel better flow, since you stop there when the ryhtmic flow was equal, the distance isa the same, so is like weird sorry english xdxdxd the music isnt quite the same as the overlapped slider doesnt have any percussion so i show it by reducing the movement same as the previous point.
01:10:394 (4) - imo all those parts where kicl slider are touching the next one would feel better if is ppointin to the head or if were just triple well i dont want any triples, the pointing to the head thing is already in the patterns, im alternating them to the rythmical structure
01:53:354 (3,1) - Hm... distance is like confusing adjusted
03:03:914 (4,1) - even if emphatize is just objetive... there are no really high volume on 03:04:394 (1) - to put a that large distance imo reduced spacing
04:48:074 (3) - try the same effect, like overlapped as the prev slider, I think could look better yea but the pitches arent the same
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Mod finish Hope I did help in something, if something didnt u liked dont insulte me pls, nothing offensive, wanna be bullied just because tried to mod xd
^^ not to the mapper only, to everyone y u scare is ok

thanks for the mod!

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955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2017-11-08T15:45:25+00:00

hi m4m from my q totally not from pm

[Destination]

00:01:994 (1) - drain t ime lol
00:13:274 (3,4) - make these parallel pls
01:06:314 (3,4) - this is the first time you use this stacking style instead of leaving (4) unstacked and looks a bit inconsistent imo, i would maybe move 01:06:554 (4) - to overlap under 01:05:834 (2) - ? idk
01:50:474 (1) - i think you could make the held note on the slider end clickable here since this you map this pitch held previously. i think a rhythm like this would fit nicely
01:53:354 (3) - similar suggestion to above, would like it if the held note was playable and a slightly faster sv slider than previous would be a nice buildup imo rhythm idea
01:55:034 (3,1) - i would have more spacing between these notes since (1) is the start of a new section and different instruments but has the smallest spacing here
02:16:874 (2,3) - subjective aesthetics are triggering me, make a blanket here pls xd
02:43:754 (3) - this feels overmapped compared to the previous time this section occured in the song since you're essentially making a sound that isn't there clickable, i would remove this circle and extend (2) to be fully 1/1
02:51:914 (1) - same comment as 01:50:474 (1) -
03:41:834 (7) - maybe nc this for the background vocal?
04:16:634 (1,2,3) - 04:24:314 (1,2,3) - spacing here seems inconsistent, same sounds and pitch both times but big difference in spacing?
04:48:554 - i would make these hihat fades clickable since it's a new sound in this section compared to the previous 2 times it occurs and also brings the note density down more gradually
04:59:594 - if you're struggling for drain time, i would actually just map the piano outro here, its in time for most of the duration so it wouldn't be that much extra timing work

cool song nice work! gl!

Fursum

523 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Fursum 2017-11-08T16:08:21+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
hi m4m from my q totally not from pm

[Destination]

00:01:994 (1) - drain t ime lol fu c
00:13:274 (3,4) - make these parallel pls grouped 00:13:994 (4,5) - instead as they are in a different vocal sentence
01:06:314 (3,4) - this is the first time you use this stacking style instead of leaving (4) unstacked and looks a bit inconsistent imo, i would maybe move 01:06:554 (4) - to overlap under 01:05:834 (2) - ? idk hmm, i unstacked and faced the 1/4 in an irregular direction to for some transition
01:50:474 (1) - i think you could make the held note on the slider end clickable here since this you map this pitch held previously. i think a rhythm like this would fit nicely it does mess up the pattern separation a bit though, i would like to implement some doubles before the kiai though they are too irregular to consider
01:53:354 (3) - similar suggestion to above, would like it if the held note was playable and a slightly faster sv slider than previous would be a nice buildup imo rhythm idea did a similar thing like after the kiai, added sv increase to both
01:55:034 (3,1) - i would have more spacing between these notes since (1) is the start of a new section and different instruments but has the smallest spacing here changed the angle instead cuz not enough space
02:43:754 (3) - this feels overmapped compared to the previous time this section occured in the song since you're essentially making a sound that isn't there clickable, i would remove this circle and extend (2) to be fully 1/1 I'd say the higher density makes sense because of the echos and the sounds are more pronounced in that bit
02:51:914 (1) - same comment as 01:50:474 (1) - same answer :d
04:16:634 (1,2,3) - 04:24:314 (1,2,3) - spacing here seems inconsistent, same sounds and pitch both times but big difference in spacing? derped with structure kek, did the slider as 2 circles and increased spacing
04:48:554 - i would make these hihat fades clickable since it's a new sound in this section compared to the previous 2 times it occurs and also brings the note density down more gradually well its almost the same thing with after the kiai on vocal echo stuff, i already mapped it a little differently structure wise and i think the decrease is already enough
04:59:594 - if you're struggling for drain time, i would actually just map the piano outro here, its in time for most of the duration so it wouldn't be that much extra timing work will consider, havent mapped piano solos yet :d

cool song nice work! gl!

thanks for the not pm mod!

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2017-11-15T17:52:58+00:00

pointed few things on 4some parts, ya we gud llo

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955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2017-11-16T03:03:09+00:00

lets go!

Fursum

523 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Fursum 2017-11-16T06:43:20+00:00

owo

Saturnalize

1,490 posts

Joined March 2011

Saturnalize 2017-11-16T17:08:05+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
pointed few things on 4some parts, ya we gud llo

what about MY part

Saturnalize

1,490 posts

Joined March 2011

Saturnalize 2017-11-16T17:30:40+00:00

I RECOGNIZE THIS AS DOUBLE POST. I FORGET AND I'M SORRY.

now moving on.

Lifdrasir wrote:
im still newbie to mods so dont expect nothing xxdxdxdxd

[The Destination]
03:28:394 (1,2,3,1) - I sugggest you make something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9471758 leaving a break here 03:29:474 - 03:31:154 - //moved stuffs //but there won't be any break here honey I insist
03:32:954 (7) - slider pointin to down? //this part is fucked up honestly I decided to move stuffs completely
03:51:434 (3,4,5) - oh man this is real acc dropper, could you try something different? //no
04:06:314 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ //no

Log Off Now wrote:
hi m4m from my q totally not from pm

[Destination]02:16:874 (2,3) - subjective aesthetics are triggering me, make a blanket here pls xd //(3) to curve, //and no blanket
03:41:834 (7) - maybe nc this for the background vocal? //03:40:874 (1,3) - doesn't have any so neither (7). Also, the vocal change isn't really contrast compared to snare build up.

yo y'all too nice

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Voli

811 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2017-11-22T11:38:21+00:00

u requested

Hitsounds

00:48:074 (1) - Starting here, I feel the normal-hitnormals are placed on the wrong ticks. The song uses them on offbeats, but you have them on the mainbeats. Ypu can however resolve this by making the hitnormal some sort of drum hitsound and adding a more ''clap'' like sound on the offbeats. Some parts feel really underhitsounded as well(ok we discussed hitsounds in game)

Map

00:17:594 (5) - how about moving this down a bit for a tad better flow, visuals and usage of space?
00:22:154 (6) - ctrl g this to maintain up/down movement? would work well for movement towards 00:22:874 (7) - too. Same goes for 00:25:994 (2) -
00:35:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this sequence I feel it's much better to keep following the vocals just as you did previously (00:32:234 (4,5) - etc), it's kinda weird to stop following them halfway through this part
00:43:754 (4) - how about making the overlap a bit more ''obvious"? Perhaps stack the slider on the head of 00:42:314 (1) -? Right now it's like almost fully overlapped, but not quite, which looks a bit sloppy imo, if you do it like this your intention would show in a better way.
patterns like 00:55:034 (4,5) -, 00:56:954 (4,5) - and 01:00:794 (4,5) - (basically these 1/4 slider patterns in this part) are cool but i think they would work even better if you moved them just a little bit closer to make the difference in visual distance more apparent (from the 1/2 parts). You can just do it like this, its already enough to make the difference: https://voli.s-ul.eu/YC0qeHvO.png
in the next part, 01:12:554 (5) - these are consistently spaced further than your 1/2 distance? but others are like very close to each other (01:14:234 (4,5) - ) why the huge difference?
01:24:314 (6) - 1/4 isn't necessary here i think, there aren't beats on both ticks unlike 01:23:834 (4) -
01:28:394 (1) - why is it overlapped/connected with the other slider? i think its the only occasion where this happens, i suggest separating it just like 01:32:234 (1) - etc.
01:40:154 (2) - imo this would work better if it just repeated 3 times instead of 4, the last repeat doesn't really cover anything since the sound stops at 01:40:874 - and makes the transition to 01:41:354 (3) - feel awkward
01:50:474 (1) - consider changing it to a stack of 2 notes instead? the second note has a higher pitch which would be nice if clickable too
01:54:074 (1) - nc not rly needed is it?
01:59:594 (2) - the repeat is overmapped, theres nothing here 01:59:834 -
02:51:914 (1) - same as what I said earlier (consider changing it to a stack of 2 notes instead? the second note has a higher pitch which would be nice if clickable too)
03:31:994 (3,4,5) - not rly nice to cover this under a triple when the part is so focused on those strong sounds, it kinda hinders the movement. same for 03:39:674 (3,4,5) -
these sliders 03:42:794 (1) - , 03:50:474 (1) - 04:05:834 (1) - have very strong beats on both ends, i suggest you change them to two notes instead, this feels rather underwhelming
04:42:794 (4) - the drum/clap sound stops here already so having this as part of the same triple doesn't feel quite right, perhaps remove this note and make 04:42:674 (3) - a slider instead
04:44:474 (2,3) - this completely ignores the melody here? o.o

alright, i'm popping for now mainly since i feel the hitsounds can be much more improved to accommodate the map. We've talked and you said you're willing to improve them, call me back when it's done and lets see

Saturnalize

1,490 posts

Joined March 2011

Saturnalize 2017-11-24T14:25:56+00:00

fyrsym sayd Y can change stuff about hytsound

also everythyng above of my part : ok

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Fursum

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Topic Starter

Fursum 2017-11-24T15:24:34+00:00

MariahCarey wrote:
u requested

Hitsounds
00:48:074 (1) - Starting here, I feel the normal-hitnormals are placed on the wrong ticks. The song uses them on offbeats, but you have them on the mainbeats. Ypu can however resolve this by making the hitnormal some sort of drum hitsound and adding a more ''clap'' like sound on the offbeats. Some parts feel really underhitsounded as well(ok we discussed hitsounds in game) did stuffs with coconut milk firend
Map
00:17:594 (5) - how about moving this down a bit for a tad better flow, visuals and usage of space? cant remember how they were before but i stacked ends of 00:15:914 (1,5) -
00:22:154 (6) - ctrl g this to maintain up/down movement? would work well for movement towards 00:22:874 (7) - too. Same goes for 00:25:994 (2) - ok why not
00:35:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this sequence I feel it's much better to keep following the vocals just as you did previously (00:32:234 (4,5) - etc), it's kinda weird to stop following them halfway through this part i couldnt work around the vocal ticks at 1/4 gaps, the second slider follows the vocal but i think it does fine regarding the transition to instruments and having a simple active rythm
00:43:754 (4) - how about making the overlap a bit more ''obvious"? Perhaps stack the slider on the head of 00:42:314 (1) -? Right now it's like almost fully overlapped, but not quite, which looks a bit sloppy imo, if you do it like this your intention would show in a better way. they were stacked at first so i put a manual stack thing for the body to show. did a half overlap now
patterns like 00:55:034 (4,5) -, 00:56:954 (4,5) - and 01:00:794 (4,5) - (basically these 1/4 slider patterns in this part) are cool but i think they would work even better if you moved them just a little bit closer to make the difference in visual distance more apparent (from the 1/2 parts). You can just do it like this, its already enough to make the difference: https://voli.s-ul.eu/YC0qeHvO.png okay
in the next part, 01:12:554 (5) - these are consistently spaced further than your 1/2 distance? but others are like very close to each other (01:14:234 (4,5) - ) why the huge difference? hmm i tried to separate the stringy sounds but i should probably space the big ones closer, the movement should be around the same on the prominent sounds now
01:24:314 (6) - 1/4 isn't necessary here i think, there aren't beats on both ticks unlike 01:23:834 (4) - the previous section has a lot of filler 1/4 sliders on stringy sounds so i think it fits well here as well
01:28:394 (1) - why is it overlapped/connected with the other slider? i think its the only occasion where this happens, i suggest separating it just like 01:32:234 (1) - etc. i tried to highlight the echoing vocal with some different movement and structure, if you have a suggestion regarding that, im open :p
01:40:154 (2) - imo this would work better if it just repeated 3 times instead of 4, the last repeat doesn't really cover anything since the sound stops at 01:40:874 - and makes the transition to 01:41:354 (3) - feel awkward theres the same note at 01:41:234 - tho, i could do a double but that doesnt really fit in a calm section, so ill probably keep it
01:50:474 (1) - consider changing it to a stack of 2 notes instead? the second note has a higher pitch which would be nice if clickable too ok i make double
01:54:074 (1) - nc not rly needed is it?yes
01:59:594 (2) - the repeat is overmapped, theres nothing here 01:59:834 - i had an offsnapped slider for the vocal, changed to a repeat slider to keep the 1/4 snapping for gameplay as milan suggested
02:51:914 (1) - same as what I said earlier (consider changing it to a stack of 2 notes instead? the second note has a higher pitch which would be nice if clickable too) yes
04:44:474 (2,3) - this completely ignores the melody here? o.o i dont get how it ignores the melody lol, the whooshes and the melody overlaps quite well or im deaf xd
alright, i'm popping for now mainly since i feel the hitsounds can be much more improved to accommodate the map. We've talked and you said you're willing to improve them, call me back when it's done and lets see

thank