1. Expert (6.07 stars, 540 notes)

• 00:07:385 (2) - why not a triplet? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9218054 something like this would work better becuase, you can clearly hear the triplet sound with vocals.. and because you have more triplets later in the map
  00:10:552 (3,1,2,3) - suggestion - rotate these to make a form like this slider 00:09:552 (4) - http://prntscr.com/grwcd7
  00:11:885 (1,2,1) - should have equal spacing to 00:09:219 (2,3,4) - or even more
  00:22:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole thing should have more spacing, start increasing the spacing from the first pattern as the music starts increasing its intensity too, and so 00:24:552 (1,2) - doesn't feel rushed
  00:28:052 (7,2) - ugly overlap yeah you can easyli avoid this, I don't want to be too nazi, but people will complain about some of you overlaps in future mods, Im pretty sure they will, like in 00:11:885 (1,1) - 00:16:552 (2,4) - 00:17:386 (7,2) - 01:21:385 (4,5) - etc.
  00:44:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo you should add a little more spacing in here, or less spacing 00:45:719 (3,4,5,1) -
  00:46:552 (1,2,3) - 00:47:219 (1,2,3) - why so different spacing? sound the same to me :thinking:
  00:46:885 (3) - 00:47:552 (3) - should have same shapes
  00:58:219 (1,1) - fix blankets w
  01:18:552 - from here to 01:29:219 - I feel like the map should have more spacing, it feels the same as 00:46:552 - 00:57:219 - but song gets more intense on 01:18:885 -

Itasha_S13 wrote:

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• 00:07:385 (2) - why not a triplet? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9218054 something like this would work better becuase, you can clearly hear the triplet sound with vocals.. and because you have more triplets later in the map i like it more the way it is now, a triple would take away from the held background notes the sliders are mapped to
  00:10:552 (3,1,2,3) - suggestion - rotate these to make a form like this slider 00:09:552 (4) - http://prntscr.com/grwcd7
  00:11:885 (1,2,1) - should have equal spacing to 00:09:219 (2,3,4) - or even more done
  00:22:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole thing should have more spacing, start increasing the spacing from the first pattern as the music starts increasing its intensity too, and so 00:24:552 (1,2) - doesn't feel rushed i dont think this needs changing
  00:28:052 (7,2) - ugly overlap yeah you can easyli avoid this, I don't want to be too nazi, but people will complain about some of you overlaps in future mods, Im pretty sure they will, like in 00:11:885 (1,1) - 00:16:552 (2,4) - 00:17:386 (7,2) - 01:21:385 (4,5) - etc. again these are all fine, i see no reason to change them
  00:44:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo you should add a little more spacing in here, or less spacing 00:45:719 (3,4,5,1) -
  00:46:552 (1,2,3) - 00:47:219 (1,2,3) - why so different spacing? sound the same to me :thinking: ok made it smaller
  00:46:885 (3) - 00:47:552 (3) - should have same shapes ok made smooth curve
  00:58:219 (1,1) - fix blankets w no need
  01:18:552 - from here to 01:29:219 - I feel like the map should have more spacing, it feels the same as 00:46:552 - 00:57:219 - but song gets more intense on 01:18:885 -

fun map tbh, I would farm this thank you, maybe one day
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