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Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi there ! Sorry for my late mod

This mod are just suggestions

General:

• The size of your BG should be 800x600 Image Link Replace it in the song folder Thanks but I'm pretty sure images can be 1024 x 768
• I think youre missing some lyrics Okay a hundred kudosus for pointing that out, te amo

SB:

I think this looks better
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Cool As Shit Black Background smooth red.jpg",320,240
F,0,0,1933,1
S,0,0,7586,1
F,0,1933,24977,1,0
S,0,7586,24977,1
F,0,154977,155846,0,0.75
F,0,155846,168564,0.75
F,0,168564,168890,0.75,0

Same here
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lyrics602.png",320,240
F,0,179107,179325,0,1
S,0,179107,182803,1,0.936
M,0,179107,183238,346,93,346,102
F,0,179325,182803,1
F,2,182803,183238,1,0
S,2,182803,183238,0.936,1.332
Lol i wish you had screenshots. I'll get to these later :)
Easy

• 00:45:412 (2) - 1 grid up ? really minor but okay
• 01:33:238 (2) - Remove whistle Nah
• 01:35:846 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:48:890 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:05:412 (2) - ^ Fixed
• 02:14:108 (1) - ^ Fixed
• 02:28:020 (1) - ^ Fixed

Normal

• 00:36:716 (1) - Inconsistent spacing ...I think they can handle it xD but I'll see if anyone else dislikes this.
• 00:42:369 (5,6) - 1 grid up Fixed
• 00:43:673 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:49:977 (4) - Remove note Fixed
• 00:57:586 (5) - Add finish Fixed
• 01:25:412 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:28:890 (1) - ^ Fixed
• 01:32:369 (1) - Add whistle Fixed
• 01:35:847 (3) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:48:890 (1) - ^ Fixed

Hard

• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:43:673 (2) - Add finish at the begin and change finish for clap at the end of the slider Fixed
• 00:57:151 (3) - Add clap
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish Fixed
• 01:21:934 (1) - ^
• 01:39:325 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:46:064 (4) - Remove NC add it in the next note ? Fixed
• 01:51:281 (6) - Add note Fixed
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed


Vass's Devil

•Fine C:

Lunatic


• 00:26:281 (1) - Add finish Fixed
• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:43:673 (2) - ^
• 00:52:803 (2) - Remove 1 reverse arrow Something bothers me...
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:53:238 (2) - ^ Fixed
• 01:59:325 (3) - Add whistle Fixed
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:46:716 (1) - Add finish Fixed

Sorry for my late mod Hope its helpful It's okay, it was very helpful :D Thank you very much!

Good luck !
and Star ! !! thanks again xD
:)
grumd
«Engrish version» in description?
maybe English?
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

grumd wrote:

«Engrish version» in description?
maybe English?
Hahaha it's a minor joke :lol: (it was on purpose)
Starry_old
Requested by TheVapor <3

[Easy]

01:56:716 (1) - Reverse this 1 more time.
02:38:455 (1,2,3) - Slider goes here way better. maybe you should make it the same as the next note.
01:17:586 - Add a note here.

[Normal]

01:28:020 (3,1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of the sliders only.
01:30:629 (4) - ^ and new combo here.
01:33:238 (4) - Add whistle to the beginning of the slider
01:40:629 (2) - Clap
01:42:369 (4) - ^
02:45:412 (2) - ^
02:46:064 (4) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:151 (4) - New combo
01:31:934 (4) - ^
02:55:846 (4) - ^
02:17:586 (2,3) - 1 slider?

[Vass's Devil]

00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]

01:14:108 (1) - Clap at the end
01:18:021 (10) - New combo
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Clap at 2,4,6,8?
01:26:064 (4) - Clap at 4?
01:27:477 (2) - Clap here?
01:27:912 (4) - ^
02:06:716 (5) - New combo here?
02:07:151 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:10:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding clap at the start of slider sounds nice :3

Nice map~
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Starry wrote:

Requested by TheVapor <3

[Easy]

01:56:716 (1) - Reverse this 1 more time. Fixed
02:38:455 (1,2,3) - Slider goes here way better. maybe you should make it the same as the next note. Fixed
01:17:586 - Add a note here. ?

[Normal]

01:28:020 (3,1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of the sliders only.
01:30:629 (4) - ^ and new combo here. Fixed
01:33:238 (4) - Add whistle to the beginning of the slider I think i'm okay now lol
01:40:629 (2) - Clap
01:42:369 (4) - ^
02:45:412 (2) - ^
02:46:064 (4) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:151 (4) - New combo Combos are fine i think xD
01:31:934 (4) - ^
02:55:846 (4) - ^
02:17:586 (2,3) - 1 slider?

[Vass's Devil]

00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]

01:14:108 (1) - Clap at the end
01:18:021 (10) - New combo Fixed
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Clap at 2,4,6,8? I did something else
01:26:064 (4) - Clap at 4?
01:27:477 (2) - Clap here?
01:27:912 (4) - ^
02:06:716 (5) - New combo here? Fixed
02:07:151 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
02:10:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding clap at the start of slider sounds nice :3 Okay i'll actually try this, Fixed

Nice map~

Thanks for the mod!!!!
Vass_Bass

Starry wrote:

[Vass's Devil]

00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^
nothing changed, but thanks
meiikyuu
In folder:
Lyrics need to be cropped like mentioned befre...to reduce lag
I can recompress the spinner bg if you want :)

Haha might update later, but this looks awesome now dbafjkdsaf good luck!!
Roddie
General
  1. Since you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have to a slider border included.
Storyboard
  1. Add an epilepsy warning.
Easy
  1. 01:15:412 (5)-Considering that this is an Easy, I suggest move this slider somewhere else because stacking this on the previous note could throw off a newbie. ):
  2. 01:25:412 (1)-Perhaps add a finish on the beginning?
  3. 01:58:455 (2)-Left the spacing on this intentional or by mistake? If it was a mistake, fix the spacing on that by using the distance snap.
  4. 02:47:151 (3)-Consider moving this one grid down.
Normal
  1. 02:42:151 (1)-I strongly suggest not having a spacing like that for this slider. It sort of looks like an anti-jump. And anti-jumps are no fun on normal difficulties. ): So, fix it by using the distance snap.
  2. 02:57:803 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap?
Hard
  1. 01:21:933 (1)-Forgot to add a finish?
  2. 01:48:890-Perhaps add a new combo here?
  3. 02:43:564 (4)-It's probably best to delete this note and replace with a 1/4 slider. If you do leave the note like that, it could come out as a surprise, you know?
  4. 02:55:846-It would make sense if you put a new combo here...


Vass' Devil

Looks good to me.

Lunatic
  1. 00:52:803 (2)-I believe you forgot to add a clap on the beginning.
  2. 01:19:216 (x, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12)-First on 01:19:325, I don't find this stream here fitting for this part of the song... It's suggest I'm giving you but how about a note placement like this? http://puu.sh/h4lU And as for 01:19:216, add a note there. If you do that, you'll get a triplet. It's better that way. Here's a screenshot on how it would look. http://puu.sh/h4mU
  3. 02:19:542 (3)-It sounds like this note should be on 02:19:651... Consider placing it there. Or you could replace the note from 02:19:325 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:19:651. In my opinion, the second option is the best way to go.
  4. 02:26:499 (3)-^Pretty much the same thing. You could place this note on 02:26:607 or you could replace the note from 02:26:281 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:26:607.
And that's about it.

Call me back once you've looked through my mod post~
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
SPOILER

Roddie wrote:

General
  1. Since you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have to a slider border included.
Storyboard
  1. Add an epilepsy warning. Fixed
Easy
  1. 01:15:412 (5)-Considering that this is an Easy, I suggest move this slider somewhere else because stacking this on the previous note could throw off a newbie. ): Fixed
  2. 01:25:412 (1)-Perhaps add a finish on the beginning? Fixed
  3. 01:58:455 (2)-Left the spacing on this intentional or by mistake? If it was a mistake, fix the spacing on that by using the distance snap.oops, Fixed
  4. 02:47:151 (3)-Consider moving this one grid down.Fixed
Normal
  1. 02:42:151 (1)-I strongly suggest not having a spacing like that for this slider. It sort of looks like an anti-jump. And anti-jumps are no fun on normal difficulties. ): So, fix it by using the distance snap. Fixed
  2. 02:57:803 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap? Fixed
Hard
  1. 01:21:933 (1)-Forgot to add a finish? Fixed
  2. 01:48:890-Perhaps add a new combo here? Fixed
  3. 02:43:564 (4)-It's probably best to delete this note and replace with a 1/4 slider. If you do leave the note like that, it could come out as a surprise, you know? Fixed (yeah someone told make to make it a note lol...)
  4. 02:55:846-It would make sense if you put a new combo here...Fixed


Vass' Devil

Looks good to me.

Lunatic
  1. 00:52:803 (2)-I believe you forgot to add a clap on the beginning. Fixed
  2. 01:19:216 (x, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12)-First on 01:19:325, I don't find this stream here fitting for this part of the song... It's suggest I'm giving you but how about a note placement like this? http://puu.sh/h4lU And as for 01:19:216, add a note there. If you do that, you'll get a triplet. It's better that way. Here's a screenshot on how it would look. http://puu.sh/h4mU I got confused so I just remapped it xD hope its okay
  3. 02:19:542 (3)-It sounds like this note should be on 02:19:651... Consider placing it there. Or you could replace the note from 02:19:325 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:19:651. In my opinion, the second option is the best way to go.
  4. 02:26:499 (3)-^Pretty much the same thing. You could place this note on 02:26:607 or you could replace the note from 02:26:281 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:26:607.Fixed
And that's about it.

Call me back once you've looked through my mod post~

All Fixed! Thank you so much!! ><
Roddie
All right. Everything checks out okay.

So... Bubbled!
haigawdy
Hi :)

[Normal]
  1. 01:53:020 (X) - Add a note?
[Hard]
  1. 02:17:586 (4) - Move middle slider point to x:180 y:304
  2. 02:59:977 (6) - How about another shape of this slider? :D
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:46:281 (1,2,3,4) - Strange spacing for me
  2. 00:48:890 (8) - Move middle slider point to x:384 y:72
Btw I use Xiao's skin :D
Roddie
A minor Storyboard issue has popped up. The issue as been resolved. Also, I should have said this before but when I played Vass' difficulty, There really isn't any issue while playing it.

Anyway, Rebubbled!
wmfchris
good to see this bubbled so I'll skip this one.
(eats an apple)
Star Stream
Easy
00:45:412 (2) - make it as copy/paste (1) and Ctrl+h,r, more looks good
00:49:325 (3) - put down a little, more playable
01:11:933 (1) - too closed with spinner, and don't put it at center.. it's hidden by spinner's hitburst. it's really confusing to beginners. i recommend delete it. if you did it, NC at 01:12:803 (2) -
01:30:629 (3,4) - remove arrow and make it as 1/1 slider?
01:40:194 - add whistle?
01:41:933 - ^
01:56:716 (1) - remove 1 arrow and add a circle instead
02:01:934 (3) - some grid right, will be more playable
02:42:803 - add whistle?
02:44:542 - ^
02:55:412 - ^

Normal
no hitsounds except finish at first part? it's not good idea imo
00:35:412 (4,5) - distance error? move to (212,300)
00:47:586 (7,1) - switch NC
00:56:716 (3,4,5) - 3 stack with 1/1 circles is boring, re-space them
01:20:195 (3) - distance 0.9x , so you can puy it at (172,88)
01:27:151 (1) - distance 0.9x plz
01:28:890 (1) - ^ (sorry for pretty nazi modding)
01:42:803 (1) - add whistle
02:29:760 (5) - NC
02:52:368 (5) - NC and remove NC at 02:54:108 (1) -

Hard
01:11:499 (1) - don't put it at center?

Vass
02:41:933 (1) - (208,76) so make some space around 02:40:846 (2) -

Lunatic
00:48:890 (8) - NC
01:24:434 (3,4,5) - don't make them as Ctrl+<, they should be shorten, so players can read it as 1/2 rhythm i recommend put them like this
03:02:803 (1) - NC i know it as unrankable source

Good luck~
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
All fixed! Thanks, Star Stream ^^
Roddie
Gonna have to pop the bubble. There is a new combo glitch. Have that fix and call me back after it's done.

Edit: 02:46:716 (1)-I told Sakuya about this spinner not having a new combo. It has been resolved.

And with that done, rebubbled! For the final time? :D
Leorda
Sorry if I already mod this one D:

Storyboard
* It is just me or the lyrics are offscreen? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/251466


Skin
* spinner-background.png is over 1MB, consider to lower it
* comboburst-0 should rename it to "comboburst" since there is only one comboburst in this mapset
* fruit-ryuuta isn't needed in this mapset
* spinner-osu dimension should not over 423x128, unless if you have a good reason


Hard
00:43:673 (2) - Why finish on tail slider?
01:04:542 (1,2) - This slider should using a soft hitsound


Vass' Devil

00:29:542 (1) - New combo for preventing of bug
00:57:586 (5) - I suggest you to not silenced this one, because it's just only spinner to silenced
01:24:216 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much stacked notes, should to unstack it


Popped , due to missing new combo at post spinner, and SB & skin issues. Sorry ;_;
Vass_Bass

Leorda wrote:


Vass' Devil

00:29:542 (1) - New combo for preventing of bug why there's bug? between this circle and spinner big interval, how can it be? (if it's so importantly, i will fix it) yep
00:57:586 (5) - I suggest you to not silenced this one, because it's just only spinner to silenced there's a sound change, that's why i won't change it
01:24:216 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much stacked notes, should to unstack it don't see a big trouble to read it
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

Leorda wrote:

Sorry if I already mod this one D: <3

Storyboard
* It is just me or the lyrics are offscreen? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/251466 Fixed


Skin
* spinner-background.png is over 1MB, consider to lower it Fixed
* comboburst-0 should rename it to "comboburst" since there is only one comboburst in this mapset Fixed
* fruit-ryuuta isn't needed in this mapset Fixed
* spinner-osu dimension should not over 423x128, unless if you have a good reason Well it's supposed to come out at the bottom so yeah, I guess that's my reason xD


Hard
00:43:673 (2) - Why finish on tail slider? I have no idea, Fixed
01:04:542 (1,2) - This slider should using a soft hitsound Fixed, including the spinner right?


Vass' Devil

00:29:542 (1) - New combo for preventing of bug Fixed
00:57:586 (5) - I suggest you to not silenced this one, because it's just only spinner to silenced
01:24:216 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much stacked notes, should to unstack it


Popped , due to missing new combo at post spinner, and SB & skin issues. Sorry ;_;
All fixed ^^ Thanks!
Leorda
IRC Modding
  1. (SB) - Remove the red spot at black.png
  2. (SB) - Crop the unecessary transparent pixel in Lyric SB
  3. (Easy) - Remove new combo at 00:55:846 (1) and 02:12:369 (1) for combo pattern
  4. (Normal) - Remove finish at head slider for 00:36:716 (1)
  5. (Hard) - Change the pattern for 01:53:021 (1,2,3,4)
Rebubbled
IceBeam
hello

fine in general
though,are you sure that artist's name should be capitalized?
could you provide some links,cause there're both senya and Senya maps ranked,I'd like to found out what's correct

[Easy]
01:38:890 - could you use soft sampleset/lower volume here,I don't like how it sounds
02:06:281 - ^

nice easy,though a bit unusual spacing for my tastes,but that's ok..I'd also add another break,but can't suggest a good spot for it,so nvm

[Normal]
00:56:716 (3,4) - as in Easy,these notes don't sound nice,soft sampleset + whistles sound better to me
01:16:716 (5) - that's honestly doesn't sound good either,I think such rhytm would be much better:
01:30:629 (1) - touches hp bar a little,move it down for some grids
02:06:282 (4,5) - you got it,soft is better
02:34:977 - oho,you should have a note when kiai starts/ends actually,so please a note here
something like this again:

all in all,I don't really like the last part,because you mostly base your notes at vocals,I'd rather followed both music and vocals and won't missed notes at downbeats,but it's up to you

[Hard]
00:34:542 (1,2,3) - why it's so close to previous objects? it doesn't make any difference between previous spacing :s so move farther please
00:56:716 (2,3) - soooft
01:17:803 - I think the note is missing here
01:55:847 (4,5) - err..to close from each other,fix the spacing here
02:06:282 (4,5) - soft
02:34:977 - a note please
02:40:846 (5,6) - huh..why it's silenced? I can't hear notes here,you can't have such things
02:42:151 (1,2,3) - spacing is really bad here,fix it,show that there's a 1/1 space

[Vass' Devil]
00:56:716 (3,4) - Васик,ты не хочешь тоже сделать тут софт? слишком громко
02:06:281 (3,4) - мех
02:35:412 (1) - вообще не слышу ноты :| погромче софт секции и свисточков чуток?

[Lunatic]
00:51:934 (1,2,3) - spacing >:(
00:56:716 (3) - soft
02:06:282 (4,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:890 (7,1) - that 1/4 jump..that's werid,really..I'd suggest to reduce it
Reiji-RJ

IceBeam wrote:

hello

fine in general
though,are you sure that artist's name should be capitalized?
could you provide some links,cause there're both senya and Senya maps ranked,I'd like to found out what's correct
I think, it should be senya (Link)
Vass_Bass
Thanks, Beamsy :3

алсо на счет последнего пункта, я сделала только погромче все секции, свистки там не звучат и то что софт не слышно это в общем-то так задумано

Download: senya - Little Devil (LunarSakuya) [Vass' Devil].osu
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya

IceBeam wrote:

hello

fine in general
though,are you sure that artist's name should be capitalized?
could you provide some links,cause there're both senya and Senya maps ranked,I'd like to found out what's correct
"senya" is correct, I saw that the Koakuma Map had it capitalized so I was confused xD I changed it

[Easy]
01:38:890 - could you use soft sampleset/lower volume here,I don't like how it sounds Fixed
02:06:281 - ^ Fixed

nice easy,though a bit unusual spacing for my tastes,but that's ok..I'd also add another break,but can't suggest a good spot for it,so nvm Thanks, I tried also xDD

[Normal]
00:56:716 (3,4) - as in Easy,these notes don't sound nice,soft sampleset + whistles sound better to me Fixed
01:16:716 (5) - that's honestly doesn't sound good either,I think such rhytm would be much better: Fixed
01:30:629 (1) - touches hp bar a little,move it down for some grids Fixed
02:06:282 (4,5) - you got it,soft is better Changed to soft sampleset ;)
02:34:977 - oho,you should have a note when kiai starts/ends actually,so please a note here
something like this again: Fixed

all in all,I don't really like the last part,because you mostly base your notes at vocals,I'd rather followed both music and vocals and won't missed notes at downbeats,but it's up to you Fixed, hope it works

[Hard]
00:34:542 (1,2,3) - why it's so close to previous objects? it doesn't make any difference between previous spacing :s so move farther please Fixed, kinda remapped
00:56:716 (2,3) - soooft Fixed
01:17:803 - I think the note is missing here Fixed
01:55:847 (4,5) - err..to close from each other,fix the spacing here Fixed
02:06:282 (4,5) - soft Fixed
02:34:977 - a note please Fixed
02:40:846 (5,6) - huh..why it's silenced? I can't hear notes here,you can't have such things Fixed
02:42:151 (1,2,3) - spacing is really bad here,fix it,show that there's a 1/1 space Fixed, is this okay? http://puu.sh/lSUH

[Vass' Devil]
00:56:716 (3,4) - Васик,ты не хочешь тоже сделать тут софт? слишком громко
02:06:281 (3,4) - мех
02:35:412 (1) - вообще не слышу ноты :| погромче софт секции и свисточков чуток?

[Lunatic]
00:51:934 (1,2,3) - spacing >:( Fixed, i hope this spacing is okay between (3,4): http://puu.sh/lSWb
00:56:716 (3) - soft Fixed
02:06:282 (4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
02:18:890 (7,1) - that 1/4 jump..that's werid,really..I'd suggest to reduce it Fixed, is the extra note there okay too? http://puu.sh/lSYh
Everything fixed :D A tiny part in the beginning of Lunatic is remapped if that's okay. Vass' diff updated as well. Thank you for your time!!
IceBeam
alright,enjoy your rank~
Cygnus
Grats XD

EDIT: Bad Apple approaching..
Elly-chan
bad ratings already? :(
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
lol oh well

Anyways, Thanks IceBeam! <3
YTYuyu
YES Lunar first ranked. congratz :D
winber1
gratz! :3
eikkaleyd
:) I'm late, gratz~~
Mythol
Grats~
Vapor
Grats Lunar~ Finally got your first rank~ ^^
Topic Starter
LunarSakuya
Aw Thanks everyone xDD
meiikyuu
gj you forgot to credit me for a good part of the skin ~
Xakyrie
obligatory congrats, silly =3=
shikyu
wow finally ranked, congratz XD
Sanae Kochiya
gratz for ranked :D
Aoriki
Congratz on getting this song rank ^ ^
XnHeNter
Love this beatmap !! <3 :)
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