Snickerz wrote:

Hello!

General
I like the song, and a nice job with the SB!

Easy
I saw nothing wrong

Normal
01:16:281 - Add a note? Fixed
01:56:716 - Make slider symmetrical, same for slider 2 and 3 at this section. Fixed

Hard
01:54:760 - Move this note so the slider before it doesn't overlap with it.Fixed
02:09:325 - This slider feels awkward to me. Not sure what to suggest on it...Fixed
02:12:368 - New combo. Fixed. Put it on note before.

Lunatic
01:16:281 - Remove new combo Fixed
01:18:020 - New combo Nah
01:18:455 - Remove new combo ^
01:50:629 - This spinner doesn't really fit, remove it? Fixed


These are only suggestions and sorry I couldn't be that much of help! Great map though

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* You need spinner-background, spinner-approachcircle.png, cursortrail.png. It's a weird skin without that......Alright will do that
* The lyrics has an unused transparent background. Please crop it, or it'll be lag for ancient PC I'll...try...maybe
* It seems lyric10.png are not used...... Okay
* Remove all kiai and start the kiai at 02:07:151 and end the kiai at 02:34:977 Fixed
* Remove "english" in tags, since that word is in Genre after BAT ranked this Fixed
* I don't like if black space has the red spot Oh....Uh...idk I'll wait till someone else says something about it
* Since you have an SB, uncheck the "Letterbox during breaks" Fixed

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Easy
* AR +1?

00:43:673 (1) - The sliderborder is overlapped by previous slider (Nazi) Fixed
00:47:151 (3) - New combo Fixed
00:48:890 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
00:54:107 (4) - New combo Fixed
01:30:629 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
01:34:108 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:35:846 (3) - New combo Fixed
01:37:586 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
02:47:151 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:57:586 (1) - ^ Fixed

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Normal
00:34:542 (2,3,4,5) - These stacks are make me boring..... Fixed
00:39:325 (2) - You using many repeating slider with short slider. This issue makes beginners go confusing about when the slider is end Fixed
00:43:673 (1) - I don't like this single combo on single object Fixed
02:39:325 (3) - Same issue as 00:39:325 (2) Fixed?
02:56:064 (3) - New combo
02:57:803 (1) - Remove new combo

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Hard
00:29:542 ~ 00:43:673 (S) - This distance spacing for this part is 1,3x. You must to use 1,4x for this part, like others spacing Fixed kinda
00:34:542 (1) - Meh, I don't like this anti-jump..... lol flipped it
01:53:021 (1,2,3,4) - ^ idk honestly

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Insane
01:15:847 (6,7,8,9) - I don't think stream are fit to the calm part..... Well....i'll consider
01:19:325 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spread this stacks. Since it has a different tick on each object, it confusing for read Okay
01:44:542 (11) - New combo Fixed

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Ganbate!!!!

LunarSakuya wrote:

Maya-kira wrote:

-general-

1) you need to complete the spinner elements .-. btw Yeah getting there lol

2) sorry, forget to ignore easy and mine (just realized when I finished the mod hoho) lol thanks



-easy-

01:30:629- (3) why not put it in the same place as (1)? they looks tidier Fixed
01:37:586- (2) this touch the hp bar, looks ugly change it into like this? (don't worry, the stack matches and they're not difficult to read) Fixed
[spoilerbox]

hoLysoup wrote:

hi~
thank you for modding my map
here is the promised mod:

[General]

1. BG is 800x600? I'm sure there is a 1024x768 size for this exact BG. If you want I could find it for you. I got it ^^
2. you have custom hitbursts but no custom circle? Yes
3. This is just.. something:
   I see that you are using green lines to adjust the slider velocities in each difficulty. But why don't you just adjust the main SV from the timing tab? As difficulty levels go down, so does SV. It will be easier for you to map with the main SV changed already so why not? If you see other people's maps it's like this too.Fixed

[Lunatic]
This is something unrankable here: you are using more than 3 SVs in this difficulty, please fix this. I would suggest removing the 0.55x because it's too slow imo Fixed
00:23:455 (1) - this spinner is too early imo, it breaks the flow of the nice beat you had going on from the start. It will be better if you keep mapping with the same hitsound pattern and make the spinner from 00:26:281~00:28:020. Fixed...;_;
01:25:086 (6,7,8) - this whole part is quite confusing, because of the objects are all on different ticks. I would suggest do not stack (6,7,8). If you're gonna keep this pattern, at least NC at (6) with a more distinct colour which would probably help. Fixed
01:53:020 (5) - NC here instead Fixed
01:58:455 (9) - NC here for sure Fixed
02:01:064 (6,7) - Weird anti-jump and they're in the same combo? Fixed?
02:01:934 (8) - NC here because the stream looks weird and uneven, 02:02:260 (1) - remove NC Fixed
02:11:933 (1) - remove NC, this is part of the same pattern no need to NC, 02:13:238 (4) - NC here instead Fixed
02:15:847 (5) - why is this 0.75x? doesn't play very well I think, it's quite random actually Fixed
02:19:542 (3,4) - a strange place for antijump as well Fixed? (maybe define antijump)
02:26:282 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed?

[Mine]
is this difficulty finished? No
you should probably move this to WIP and not pending Fixed

[Hard]
OD5 is better I think Fixed
00:15:847 - why don't you start mapping here like you did for Lunatic? mm, perhaps have the same starting/ending point for all difficulties.Okay
01:11:934 (2) - NC here Fixed
01:16:716 (2,3,4) - strange anti jump like before ?
02:13:238 (4) - uhh... maybe NC this because it has a different number of repeats from the previous two kick sliders Fixed
02:21:064 (1) - remove this NC Fixed
02:50:629 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]
02:17:586 (2,3) - spacing~ Fixed

That's about it
the map is pretty good :>
Good luck~!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Re-checking as requested

Easy:
00:36:716(1) - make this a curved slider to make a blanket. Fixed
00:55:846(3) - add a clap at the end Fixed
01:56:281 - add a circle? Fixed
01:56:716(4) - NC Fixed
02:55:846(1) - adjust this slider so that itd make a blanket Well, I tried xD

Normal:
01:31:499(5) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow Fixed
01:33:238(4) - remove the clap at the end Fixed
01:36:716(4) - ^ Fixed
01:45:412(6) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:39:325-01:52:368 no hitsounds? can u add a clap rhythm? It was like this in the beginning too..
02:18:455(3) - move it down so that it doesnt touch each other Fixed

Hard:
01:32:368(6) - remove the clap Decided to redo all hitsounds in this part
02:09:542(6) - this slider could be nicer Fixed
02:54:542(2) - add a clap to keep the rhythm going Fixed

Mine:
why kiai time during breaks? and kiai time has to be the same for 1 mapset.
ohh this is a WIP. im not gonna mod it because its not done yet

Lunatic:
00:28:346 - remove the break because its not necessary Fixed
01:37:912 - ^ Fixed
01:43:673(3) - add a whistle Fixed
01:44:542(1,3) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:48:020(5) - add a whistle at the beginning Fixed
01:48:890(1) - add a whistle Fixed
01:49:760(1) - ^ Fixed
01:50:629(1) - ^ and this almost looks like a burai slider which is unrankable. Fixed, and oh...uh.
01:51:499(2,4) - add a whistle Fixed, but not on 4
01:55:853(3,4) - how about switching spots? (4) should be (3) and vice versa I'll consider.

this is the best i can do. u need to work on hitsounds because u use them but then u suddenly stop. GL Lol, thanks!!

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi,sorry for the late mod,but i'm here

General

1. Add spinner here 00:22:803 and finish here 00:28:020 in Easy,Normal and Hard Fixed
2. For future maps,use Distance Snap 1,0x Okay

Easy
HP: -3 Fixed
AR: -1 Fixed
OD: -2 Fixed
- 00:36:716 (3) - Switch new combo Fixed
- 00:55:846 (3) - ^ Fixed
- 02:38:455 (3) - ^ Fixed
- 02:45:412 (3) - ^ Fixed

Normal
- 02:10:629 (5) - Add new combo here Fixed
- 02:24:542 (5) - ^ Fixed

Hard
- 02:19:325 (8) - New combo Fixed
- 02:29:760 (3) - More symetric with (1) Fixed

Devil
- 00:59:433 (T) - The timing point should end here 00:59:325
- 01:09:760 (4) - New combo

Lunatic
-- Why Lunatic? i know is a difficulty from Touhou but is better to put Insane IMO I thought almost all the touhou maps had lunatic... ;_;
- 01:50:629 (1) - Burai slider.Unrankeable Fixed

Lovely SB.Addictive Sweet. Good Job

KayeSara wrote:

From my ignorable modding
[Easy]

1. 01:12:368 (1) - Put it in 01:11:933 Fixed. Good one too.
2. 01:13:238 (2) - put it in 01:12:803 Fixed
3. 01:14:108 (3) - put iy in 01:13:673 Fixed
4. 01:14:542 - add note Fixed
5. 01:14:977 (5) - put it in 01:15:412 Fixed
6. 01:16:716 (6,1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
   Anyway, this is my sense of rhythm, it makes stronger tempo IMO...
   And if you like it, you can change it about other part.

I like it. The other part I left because the rythmn might confuse beginners..I think lol

[Normal]

1. 01:34:977 (1,2) - it's better not to overlap those two notes Fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:13:890 (1,2) - remove it, make slider from 01:13:673 to 01:13:890, and other slider from 01:14:107 to 01:14:325 I got confused, but I changed something ^^;

[Vass' Devil]

1. 00:18:020 (1,2) - change the direction
   

[Lunatic]

1. 01:15:847 (4,5,6,7) - make a stream maybe better XD Fixed
2. 01:31:064 (3,4,5) - ^Fixed

you have a pretty skin xD

Nothing to say~Good Luck~and sorry for my inexistent star, becasue I don't have KD for star QAQ haha you deserve it, it was a good mod

eikkaleyd wrote:

From Anshi and eikka's modding queue.

[Easy]
01.27.151 (2) 1 grid right Fixed
01.35.846 (1,2) this way Fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224923
02.45.412 (1,2) these two sliders should have same shapes, maybe lol ok Fixed

[Normal]
01.48.020 (3) put it on (260,256) Fixed

[Hard]
01.16.933 (3) how about change it into a short slider? Fixed
01.46.064 add a circle Fixed
02.53.020 ^ Fixed

02.40.846 (5) it should be further from (4) Fixed
02.59.977 (6) Umm, should be ended on the red line (03.00.412) oops xD Fixed

[Vass'Devil]
01.37.586 (1) this note should be further from (6)

[Lunatic]
00.52.803 (2) reduce one time reserve would be better reserve?
02.18.455 (6,1) ^

02.02.803 (9) New combo? Sure

That's all, good luck to you~

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Cool As Shit Black Background smooth red.jpg",320,240
 F,0,0,1933,1
 S,0,0,7586,1
 F,0,1933,24977,1,0
 S,0,7586,24977,1
 F,0,154977,155846,0,0.75
 F,0,155846,168564,0.75
 F,0,168564,168890,0.75,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lyrics602.png",320,240
 F,0,179107,179325,0,1
 S,0,179107,182803,1,0.936
 M,0,179107,183238,346,93,346,102
 F,0,179325,182803,1
 F,2,182803,183238,1,0
 S,2,182803,183238,0.936,1.332

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi there ! Sorry for my late mod

This mod are just suggestions

General:

• The size of your BG should be 800x600 Image Link Replace it in the song folder Thanks but I'm pretty sure images can be 1024 x 768
• I think youre missing some lyrics Okay a hundred kudosus for pointing that out, te amo

SB:

I think this looks better

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Cool As Shit Black Background smooth red.jpg",320,240
 F,0,0,1933,1
 S,0,0,7586,1
 F,0,1933,24977,1,0
 S,0,7586,24977,1
 F,0,154977,155846,0,0.75
 F,0,155846,168564,0.75
 F,0,168564,168890,0.75,0

Same here

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\lyrics602.png",320,240
 F,0,179107,179325,0,1
 S,0,179107,182803,1,0.936
 M,0,179107,183238,346,93,346,102
 F,0,179325,182803,1
 F,2,182803,183238,1,0
 S,2,182803,183238,0.936,1.332

Lol i wish you had screenshots. I'll get to these later
Easy

• 00:45:412 (2) - 1 grid up ? really minor but okay
• 01:33:238 (2) - Remove whistle Nah
• 01:35:846 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:48:890 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:05:412 (2) - ^ Fixed
• 02:14:108 (1) - ^ Fixed
• 02:28:020 (1) - ^ Fixed

Normal

• 00:36:716 (1) - Inconsistent spacing ...I think they can handle it xD but I'll see if anyone else dislikes this.
• 00:42:369 (5,6) - 1 grid up Fixed
• 00:43:673 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:49:977 (4) - Remove note Fixed
• 00:57:586 (5) - Add finish Fixed
• 01:25:412 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:28:890 (1) - ^ Fixed
• 01:32:369 (1) - Add whistle Fixed
• 01:35:847 (3) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:53:238 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:48:890 (1) - ^ Fixed

Hard

• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:43:673 (2) - Add finish at the begin and change finish for clap at the end of the slider Fixed
• 00:57:151 (3) - Add clap
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish Fixed
• 01:21:934 (1) - ^
• 01:39:325 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:46:064 (4) - Remove NC add it in the next note ? Fixed
• 01:51:281 (6) - Add note Fixed
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed


Vass's Devil

•Fine C:

Lunatic

• 00:26:281 (1) - Add finish Fixed
• 00:29:760 (2) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 00:43:673 (2) - ^
• 00:52:803 (2) - Remove 1 reverse arrow Something bothers me...
• 01:11:499 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 01:53:238 (2) - ^ Fixed
• 01:59:325 (3) - Add whistle Fixed
• 02:21:064 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider Fixed
• 02:46:716 (1) - Add finish Fixed

Sorry for my late mod Hope its helpful It's okay, it was very helpful Thank you very much!

Good luck ! and Star ! !! thanks again xD

Starry wrote:

Requested by TheVapor <3

[Easy]

01:56:716 (1) - Reverse this 1 more time. Fixed
02:38:455 (1,2,3) - Slider goes here way better. maybe you should make it the same as the next note. Fixed
01:17:586 - Add a note here. ?

[Normal]

01:28:020 (3,1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of the sliders only.
01:30:629 (4) - ^ and new combo here. Fixed
01:33:238 (4) - Add whistle to the beginning of the slider I think i'm okay now lol
01:40:629 (2) - Clap
01:42:369 (4) - ^
02:45:412 (2) - ^
02:46:064 (4) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:151 (4) - New combo Combos are fine i think xD
01:31:934 (4) - ^
02:55:846 (4) - ^
02:17:586 (2,3) - 1 slider?

[Vass's Devil]

00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]

01:14:108 (1) - Clap at the end
01:18:021 (10) - New combo Fixed
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Clap at 2,4,6,8? I did something else
01:26:064 (4) - Clap at 4?
01:27:477 (2) - Clap here?
01:27:912 (4) - ^
02:06:716 (5) - New combo here? Fixed
02:07:151 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
02:10:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding clap at the start of slider sounds nice :3 Okay i'll actually try this, Fixed

Nice map~

Roddie wrote:

General

1. Since you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have to a slider border included.

Storyboard

1. Add an epilepsy warning. Fixed

Easy

1. 01:15:412 (5)-Considering that this is an Easy, I suggest move this slider somewhere else because stacking this on the previous note could throw off a newbie. ): Fixed
2. 01:25:412 (1)-Perhaps add a finish on the beginning? Fixed
3. 01:58:455 (2)-Left the spacing on this intentional or by mistake? If it was a mistake, fix the spacing on that by using the distance snap.oops, Fixed
4. 02:47:151 (3)-Consider moving this one grid down.Fixed

Normal

1. 02:42:151 (1)-I strongly suggest not having a spacing like that for this slider. It sort of looks like an anti-jump. And anti-jumps are no fun on normal difficulties. ): So, fix it by using the distance snap. Fixed
2. 02:57:803 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap? Fixed

Hard

1. 01:21:933 (1)-Forgot to add a finish? Fixed
2. 01:48:890-Perhaps add a new combo here? Fixed
3. 02:43:564 (4)-It's probably best to delete this note and replace with a 1/4 slider. If you do leave the note like that, it could come out as a surprise, you know? Fixed (yeah someone told make to make it a note lol...)
4. 02:55:846-It would make sense if you put a new combo here...Fixed

Vass' Devil

Looks good to me.

Lunatic

1. 00:52:803 (2)-I believe you forgot to add a clap on the beginning. Fixed
2. 01:19:216 (x, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12)-First on 01:19:325, I don't find this stream here fitting for this part of the song... It's suggest I'm giving you but how about a note placement like this? http://puu.sh/h4lU And as for 01:19:216, add a note there. If you do that, you'll get a triplet. It's better that way. Here's a screenshot on how it would look. http://puu.sh/h4mU I got confused so I just remapped it xD hope its okay
3. 02:19:542 (3)-It sounds like this note should be on 02:19:651... Consider placing it there. Or you could replace the note from 02:19:325 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:19:651. In my opinion, the second option is the best way to go.
4. 02:26:499 (3)-^Pretty much the same thing. You could place this note on 02:26:607 or you could replace the note from 02:26:281 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:26:607.Fixed

And that's about it.

Call me back once you've looked through my mod post~