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Hatsuki Yura x Tsukiko - Jewel Cat

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice

phonic wrote:

Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

  1. How about already adding a combo color one color?
I think 2 colors are OK since it's Hatsuki Yura x Tsukiko, 2 people...

[Icsa3egr]

  1. 00:11:861 (1) - Is BPM change necessary? yes ;)
  2. 00:16:929 (5) - add new combo? ok~~
  3. 00:39:226 (6) - ^ ok~~
  4. 00:40:239 (11) - I see the one that I repeated neatly ok~~
  5. 00:41:658 (1) - Firstly it is finish ok~~
  6. 00:53:010 (1) - add finish? ok~~
  7. 01:10:239 (1) - Is BPM change necessary? yes~ ;)
  8. 01:40:442 (7) - add new combo ok~~
  9. 01:51:388 (1) - add finish? ok~~
  10. 02:21:794 (7) - add new combo? ok~~
  11. 02:31:929 (2) - add finish? ok~~
  12. 02:38:212 (9) - add new combo? ok~~
  13. 02:50:577 (6) - ^ ... I prefer this part is the same color.
  14. 02:52:199 (14) - ^ ^
  15. 02:55:645 (1) - Is BPM change necessary? yes~ ;)
  16. 02:56:253 (2) - add new combo ok~~


[Normal]

  1. AR-1? I think AR5 is ok for a normal...
  2. There are few sound charge accounts, and a map is lacking um...
  3. I do not have in particular any problem. I am sorry in simple Mod :o:)



fight~
Thank you~~

update tomorrow
L_P
hihi L_P's mod queue
all suggestion, cause the map is good
hitsounds 有点太单调?
um。。。我个人喜欢你的图!不知为何没人Star?(好吝啬哦

insane
um...我觉得这个diff好像不够难(as for insane) 做hard又有太过快的slider velocity?不如改个名字,如meow或者什么的?

00:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing even bigger
00:13:483 (1) - make it a slider end at next white tick
eh? you speak chinese?
00:18:753 (4) - 这里加多一个note,然后让他跟前面三个形成四边形,next slider stack with it
00:38:821 (5) - 做向前面一样,三个note 的
00:42:773 (4) - add a note, stack with the slider
00:52:807 (11) - 加多一个plz不然感觉怪怪的
01:06:388 (1) - 加spinner?
02:13:685 (4) - 加note在正中央?
02:29:496 (1,2,3) - dont make notes for rhythm like that...make a slider with repeat
02:58:483 (3) - teehee make it nicer
你没有放 kiai time????why??

normal
00:21:591 (1) - 拆成一个note一个slider
01:05:780 (6) - 结束的地方怪怪的
01:41:253 (3) - 需要再弯曲一点,不然跟前面的不搭
02:30:712 (2) - 这里太空了,加slider or notes
02:51:388 (1) - spinner

才两个diff啊 强烈建议再加 hard 或者 更上一楼的insane.
还有不要spam star 二十多就够了 = =
itankn
我被你的星星震精了- -!
YTYuyu
sorry about the delay

Normal:
00:06:794(2,3) - make the 2 sliders like this http://puu.sh/8oLB or u can make (3) and (2) look alike
00:51:388(2) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8oWy
01:01:321(2) - Aline this to the end of the slider to make it easier for beginners
01:52:401(1,2) - Aline them like this http://puu.sh/8oYQ

Icsa3egr
00:32:739(7) - NC
01:00:915(3,4) - Aline them both to (1) and (2)
01:03:550(4) - Stack it on (2) perfectly
01:20:577(2,3,4,5) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8p0U
02:51:388(9) - NC

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

L_P wrote:

hihi L_P's mod queue
all suggestion, cause the map is good
hitsounds 有点太单调?
um。。。我个人喜欢你的图!不知为何没人Star?(好吝啬哦 估计看我自己+了33个就不想了= =

insane
um...我觉得这个diff好像不够难(as for insane) 做hard又有太过快的slider velocity?不如改个名字,如meow或者什么的?

难度什么的我觉得还好啊... 因为我自己也就刚能过几个ins图 自己觉得还好= =

00:05:983 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing even bigger done
00:13:483 (1) - make it a slider end at next white tick I like it this way ^^
eh? you speak chinese? 我说英语的XD
00:18:753 (4) - 这里加多一个note,然后让他跟前面三个形成四边形,next slider stack with it 好的, didn't stack
00:38:821 (5) - 做向前面一样,三个note 的 不好看ww
00:42:773 (4) - add a note, stack with the slider 好的
00:52:807 (11) - 加多一个plz不然感觉怪怪的 不会啊...
01:06:388 (1) - 加spinner? 好的
02:13:685 (4) - 加note在正中央? 不想加ww
02:29:496 (1,2,3) - dont make notes for rhythm like that...make a slider with repeat 好的
02:58:483 (3) - teehee make it nicer 好的
你没有放 kiai time????why?? 感觉不知道放哪里= = 这歌感觉不是全kiai就是没kiai...

normal
00:21:591 (1) - 拆成一个note一个slider 弄弯了slider
01:05:780 (6) - 结束的地方怪怪的 = =
01:41:253 (3) - 需要再弯曲一点,不然跟前面的不搭 好的
02:30:712 (2) - 这里太空了,加slider or notes 简单的空点没关系吧
02:51:388 (1) - spinner = =不想...

才两个diff啊 强烈建议再加 hard 或者 更上一楼的insane. 我在找人做hard GD 因为感觉图里有GD好看...
还有不要spam star 二十多就够了 = = noooooooooooooo
thanks for modding~

itankn wrote:

我被你的星星震精了- -!
- - 这个嘛......

Byakugan249 wrote:

sorry about the delay ^.^

Normal:
00:06:794(2,3) - make the 2 sliders like this http://puu.sh/8oLB or u can make (3) and (2) look alike ok
00:51:388(2) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8oWy ok
01:01:321(2) - Aline this to the end of the slider to make it easier for beginners ok
01:52:401(1,2) - Aline them like this http://puu.sh/8oYQ ok

Icsa3egr
00:32:739(7) - NC ok
01:00:915(3,4) - Aline them both to (1) and (2) naw...
01:03:550(4) - Stack it on (2) perfectly I like it this way =o=
01:20:577(2,3,4,5) - make it like this http://puu.sh/8p0U ok~
02:51:388(9) - NC I prefer this section is the same color so it looks better ^^

this is the best i can do. GL :DThanks~~ >.<
Thank you~~

update tomorrow
L_P
这样啊 那我可以做hard吗
DerekMcD
Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/123212&m=0 (Please ignore the insane mod, it's currently remaking...)

  • ~General~

    You really have to use full submission because I don't see the background yet.

    ~Normal~

    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:05:983 (1) - Add finish at the start and end.
    00:07:604 (3) - Add the finish at the start and the second reverse.

    ~Icsa3eger~
    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:06:388 (2) - ^
    00:07:199 (4) - ^
    00:09:226 (5) - ^

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

L_P wrote:

这样啊 那我可以做hard吗
好的 thanks
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 or http://osu.ppy.sh/b/123212&m=0 (Please ignore the insane mod, it's currently remaking...)

  • ~General~

    You really have to use full submission because I don't see the background yet.

    ~Normal~

    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:05:983 (1) - Add finish at the start and end.
    00:07:604 (3) - Add the finish at the start and the second reverse.

    ~Icsa3eger~
    00:02:740 (1) - Add finish
    00:04:361 (1) - ^
    00:06:388 (2) - ^
    00:07:199 (4) - ^
    00:09:226 (5) - ^

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
Thank you for modding!!
shikyu
Ignore this post.
athiota33
Hi :D
Anyway,sorry for spamming this tread.I always use wrong user ==" like that post *point to shikyu's post*
I'm really sorry...><

[Normal]
Its to long for normal diff i guess?

00:17:739 (4) - Remove whistle
00:31:321 (1) - Don't make it jump
00:56:658 (3) - Remove whistle
01:05:577 (5) - NC?

[Icsa3egr]

00:09:226 (5) - NC?
00:10:239 (1) - RNC?
00:18:145 (1) - Delete note.
00:18:348 (5) - NC?
00:18:956 (1) - RNC?
00:03:550 (1) - ^
00:05:172 (1) - ^
00:29:902 (1) - ^
02:02:942 (1) - ^
02:03:348 (7) - NC?
02:51:388 (9) - ^

That's all~
Good luck xD~
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

shikyu wrote:

Ignore this post. done

athiota33 wrote:

Hi :D
Anyway,sorry for spamming this tread.I always use wrong user ==" like that post *point to shikyu's post*
I'm really sorry...><

[Normal]
Its to long for normal diff i guess?

00:17:739 (4) - Remove whistle it's ok to me..
00:31:321 (1) - Don't make it jump done.
00:56:658 (3) - Remove whistle ^^
01:05:577 (5) - NC? done.

[Icsa3egr]

00:09:226 (5) - NC? done.
00:10:239 (1) - RNC? done.
00:18:145 (1) - Delete note. feels empty without it
00:18:348 (5) - NC? naw
00:18:956 (1) - RNC? ^
00:03:550 (1) - ^ ..what's the point
00:05:172 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:902 (1) - ^ ^
02:02:942 (1) - ^ done.
02:03:348 (7) - NC? done.
02:51:388 (9) - ^ um, as I'm drawing something, I'd prefer they're in the same color.

That's all~
Good luck xD~
Thank you for modding~~
L_P
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

L_P wrote:

haha here
thanks~~
IzzyWuff
this is a strange song to me o.o thinking this http://youtu.be/LCaGprY51aY

The diffs is all right imo, but that meow disturbing me xD
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Iz-Ko wrote:

this is a strange song to me o.o thinking this http://youtu.be/LCaGprY51aY

The diffs is all right imo, but that meow disturbing me xD
lol meow
No_Gu
request from my queue

首页看不到BG.试试full下

3m-4m - 2diff

[normal]
00:02:740 (1,1,1) - 结尾删finish。很吵
01:05:780 (2) - 换个spinner
01:18:753 (1) - 删NC
01:27:064 (2) - 开头的clap换成finish。第二个折返clap。第三个折返删clap
01:28:483 (4) - 删clap
02:03:956 (2) - 换个spinner
02:40:442 (1) - 删NC
02:42:064 (1) - ^
02:59:496 (1) - 开头finish

[insane]
00:10:848 (1) - 删NC
00:12:469 (1) - ^
00:23:010 (1) - ^
00:23:821 (3) - NC
00:24:631 (1) - 删NC
00:25:442 (3) - NC
00:51:388 (5) - ^
01:21:794 (5) - 顶HPbar
01:22:199 (6) - NC
01:24:226 (7) - ^
01:41:658 (10) - NC
01:42:469 (1) - 删NC
01:43:280 (3) - NC
02:23:618 (4) - x248 y296
02:51:388 (9) - NC
Topic Starter
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

首页看不到BG.试试full下

3m-4m - 2diff

[normal]
00:02:740 (1,1,1) - 结尾删finish。很吵 ok~
01:05:780 (2) - 换个spinner no
01:18:753 (1) - 删NC ok
01:27:064 (2) - 开头的clap换成finish。第二个折返clap。第三个折返删clap ok
01:28:483 (4) - 删clap ok
02:03:956 (2) - 换个spinner no!!
02:40:442 (1) - 删NC ok
02:42:064 (1) - ^ ok
02:59:496 (1) - 开头finish ok

[insane]
00:10:848 (1) - 删NC 故意的
00:12:469 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:010 (1) - ^ ??
00:23:821 (3) - NC ????
00:24:631 (1) - 删NC ^
00:25:442 (3) - NC ^
00:51:388 (5) - ^ no
01:21:794 (5) - 顶HPbar fixed
01:22:199 (6) - NC ok
01:24:226 (7) - ^ ok
01:41:658 (10) - NC I like this style www
01:42:469 (1) - 删NC ^
01:43:280 (3) - NC this??? what is this
02:23:618 (4) - x248 y296 ok
02:51:388 (9) - NC 这段明显是故意的好么......
Kert
This song is hypnotizing

[Icsa3egr]
01:46:929 (2) - How about moving to 01:46:827 and extending the slider to 01:47:131?
Same for the next one

And btw. How about making those "meow" sliders have some unique shape and not the regular one? It will be a lot better

[L_Ps Hard]
00:11:861 (2) - You can't see that it's fast at all, because of the overlap D: Also I think it's too fast for a Hard diff anyway
01:10:239 (1) - If you still want to leave it as it is, make a unique shape too, please D:
01:23:212 - Starting from here clap hitsounds sound weird and unconsistent (claps are no more on white ticks) :< I like variety too, but this is a little unexpected. Try just using whistles or add additional claps sometimes
03:05:577 (4) - lol megatrap :D You can't see a reverse arrow
If it was your intention to make it a trap, maybe it's okay then :D

[Normal]
01:05:780 (2) - I think it could be better to extend it to 01:07:604
L_P
yeah Kert, that was a trap....
changed other things

Download: Hatsuki Yura x Tsukiko - Jewel Cat ([CSGA]Ar3sgice) [L_Ps hard].osu
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