K o g u r e wrote:

Hi~
From my queue:

Easy
00:01:445 (1) - Consider making these two sliders one slider, since its a map for begginers and they wouldnt expect a slider after another no, that'll make spinner longer and make player tired
01:24:844 (1) - Same here ^

Normal
00:11:551 (1) - No NC? ok
00:16:603 (1) - NAZI - In grid level 4, take notes from 00:16:603 (1) to 00:20:393 (2) and go 1 grid down. Do this so the slider in 00:15:972 (5) will be in the center of 00:16:603 (1) and you wont have spacing problems ok
00:33:356 (1) - No NC? ok
00:34:303 (2) - NC? ok
00:53:882 (5) - No NC? no, it has different ryhtm

Thats all i could find
Nice song and nice diffs u got there
Good Luck

goodbye wrote:

[feat. Ota]
00:21:672(T) - delete this meaningless green line. you can add NC1 at the red line. fixed

[Normal]
00:11:551 (1) - remove nc ok
00:33:356 (1) - ^, and add nc in 00:34:303 (2) ok
01:02:093 (1) - finish at the end weird
01:04:540 (T) - I dont know this red line is necessary or not but at least you should delete the green one at the same time. no, I make all timing same (0.75x). It has same case as easy diff

[Easy]
00:21:577(T) - delete this green line ok
00:40:935 (3) - clap at the begin and the end ok
00:49:777 (4) - clap at the begin ok
01:00:514 (2) - spacing ok

Sync wrote:

feat. Ota
Other than the timing issues mentioned above, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty...other than unsnapped inherited timing sections, that is! Make sure to snap those.

Unsnapped inherited timing sections

00:06:496
00:11:549
00:11:707
01:19:791
01:22:476
01:22:950
01:23:266

Sync wrote:

General
-- Change Easy, Ota, and Haku's audio lead-in time to 1000. You can achieve this by opening the .osu file. fixed
-- Easy and Haku has combo colors that differ from the rest of your mapset. Be sure that combo colors are consistent throughout your map. fixed
-- Remove Haku's first kiai to have consistent Kiai sections throughout all of the difficulties. wait him do by himself
-- In Ota's difficulty, there are timing sections that differ from the rest of the mapset. (01:04:540 BPM 189.950, 01:04:634, BPM 189.950) fixed

Normal
00:33:356 (3) - Move this back one tick (1/2) I follow guitar
00:35:724 (4) - Move this back one tick ^
00:43:461 (3) - Move this back one tick and extend by one tick. ^
01:22:314 (x) - Unsnapped inherited timing section fixed

Easy
I'd suggest nazi-ing your own map for the sake of it looking better. Other than that, I found nothing wrong. ok

That is all. Good luck.

[feat. Haku]
00:05:235 (6) - remove whistle The one on the sliderslide?
00:32:566 (4) - why there is a whistle here? It's the remnant of an experiment, thank for pointing
00:58:935 (1) - not stack well
01:00:672 (8) - this sounds strange...use 1/2 slider repeat instead it? Nothing strange, simply following the voice while using a graphical pattern
01:01:303 (10) - clap at the end
01:07:002 (8) - not stack well
01:23:265 (1,2) - Dont you think they're too close to 12?I'd like to make a little jump here. hm, like that it's better, nuff' said (1. Archheard reason: I like it, 2. It's graphically good, 3. The song become slower there, so as well the snap ( it's like 1,4x in the 1x speed I used (the distance is counted from the last note section, so it's 0.7 in 2x) 4. You actually have some graphical sign while plaiying, as this appear when the last note is ended. note before the start.

General
-- Remove Haku's first kiai to have consistent Kiai sections throughout all of the difficulties.
It's called "fountain", and i want to use it.

feat. Haku
00:08:393 (2) - Add a whistle The whistle are not in the bell sounds, but in the synth.
00:18:498 (2) - Totally unpredictable and unfitting slider speed-up. I don't believe this should stay. Do as you wish. Now 1.75x
00:32:566 (4) - What on earth is this whistle doing here? Failed experiment remnant
I have to admit, this map is very unique. Well done.

[feat.Haku]
00:10:288 (3)　　　　Please use complete stack.Very confusing pattern. Why?, play it. I just stacked (3) under (2) end and not viceversa.
00:15:656 (6)　　　　^ Why?, play it. I just manually stacked (6) to continue (5)
00:29:882 (3)　　　　Ctrl+R Flow and Look better. nuff said
00:58:461 (x)　　　　I think the slider should start from here. As you saw in 00:56:882 (7,8) - , this slider follow voice better like this

[feat. Haku]
More than three unique slider speeds = unrankable nope, it was a guideline, plus we modders changed it to

Please don't change slider speeds more often than the music suggests. Changing speeds by small amounts to help fit objects is fine, but don't change the speeds of single stray sliders by noticeable amounts.

00:10:288 - Move this to x216 y100 Uhm... okay ...
00:58:383 - Ugly here between these to sliders ?.?

terametis wrote:

Hi~
These are all suggestion.

[Easy]
Hmm, I recommend to redesign by GlidLv4.
It is more readable for beginners.

00:17:709 (x)　　　　Shorten slider.

SPOILER

01:00:514 (1)~(2)　1grid right
01:11:897 (2)~(3)　1grid up
01:13:476 (5)　　　　1gid left

[Normal]
Same as suggestions of precedent.
Try using the GridLv4?

00:17:709 (x)　　　　Shorten slider.

SPOILER

That's all.

I wish your map is Ranked~
bye~

Jacob wrote:

From my queue. Not much left for me to pick at

[General]
00:50:093 - This timing section's volume change is barely noticeable in [Easy], and rather annoying in other diffs - delete it
00:50:408 - ^
00:50:724 - ^
00:51:040 - ^

[Easy]
1:15:686 - Clap

[Normal]
00:32:250 - Move back one tick and add claps to the front and end of the slider. (sounds better to me) fixed sometihing else too

Katsuri wrote:

From Rank-Ready queue, I wish you good luck.

General

1. At [feat. Ota] you can see the uninherited sections placed at 01:04:540 and 01:04:634 have a different BPM of the other difficulties. The timing in each difficulty must be the same if you use the same mp3 for all diffs. fixed
2. I think you should keep the tick rates all at 2, it's highly recommended by BATs and great mappers like RJ and others. This way you can hear the constant 1/2 while playing sliders.sorry, not for now. I'm not really used to it

Easy

1. New Combos:
   
   1. 00:19:130 (3) - I think it's the start of a new phrase of vocal, I suggest you to add a New Combo here. ok
2. Pretty clean difficulty!

Normal

1. Structure:
   
   1. 00:19:130 (1) - I think the flow here is really bad in my opinion, I think something like this will look better. actually I do that to make cursor near the center so player can easily start spin, but ok, I accept it
2. Lovely!

Ota

1. 00:39:356 (1) - I think the recover time between the spinner and the next note is too small, I really suggest you to shorter the spinner to 00:40:303 since it fits perfectly with the song. fixed

Good mapset, Call me for a recheck later and I will see if you will pass to next layer of the queue .

Katsuri wrote:

Okay, I will talk with Elly-chan and we will decide if your map shall pass to the MATs' layer.
@Lennox, I think my suggestions would totally improve your map, I think you could at least see the suggestions and not just ignore them because it's just my opinion. At least open the editor and see the suggestions.
I have the newest version of your diff, maybe Shikyu missed to update it.

1. Timing: reset red line#2 21,672 →21,662
2. 01:04:540 - useless red line
3. end kiai at [01:22:949]

LKs wrote:

req from my queue

General
seems fine, and you've recieved a lot of mods

1. Timing: reset red line#2 21,672 →21,662 ok
2. 01:04:540 - useless red line
3. end kiai at [01:22:949] ok

Easy

00:01:445 (1,1) - these two spinners were given too large volume, reduce them. especially the end of them. ok
00:15:182 (3) - remove whistle at the end of the slider ok
00:40:935 (3) - remove whistle at the reversal point and the end of the sliderok
kiai time: You diveded kiai time into 3 parts and used different hitsound sets. It's interesting but less logic though. Anyway just sound a bit weird, but creative. I like placed different hitsound there

Normal

00:01:445 (1,1) - same part in different diffs is not very wise deed, I'd suggest concentrating on new things. it's normal, give another pattern will make confused IMO
00:12:024 (3) - slider shape is poor fixed
00:33:672 (3) - remove whistle at the beginning of the slider ok
00:31:777 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - You created your own way of setting hitsounds during this part? I won't show you my opinion if that. if you hear clearly I follow guitar rhytm

feat. Ota

AR+1 OD+1
maybe change name to feat.Ota since song name is feat.Me.

00:01:445 (1,1) - boring spinner couple, why even a GD used similar objects?
00:03:972 (1) - this should be stop at red line
fixed all

Timing: reset red line#2 21,672 →21,662 ok Nope, as 21672 is precise as hell. It's an offset jump.
01:04:540 - useless red line True...
feat. Haku

name problem
slider tick rate1 is enough for this song (I'm waiting for section-based slider-ticks)

00:10:288 (3) - this note stack is a misguide. It's manually stacked ...
00:19:446 (3,4,5,1) - noisy sound, abite the volume
01:03:356 (2) - freak sliderslide sound.. add a section at 01:03:395- SC1, 20%volume. and add a section at the end of slider to bring back the volume

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ shikyu ~ (Sorry for later mod)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change same offset in all diff. already...
2. Your Mp3 file it's 409 kbps,this is unrankable.need change for 192 kbps. what the it's already 192 kbps, I'll full submit it later

That's all ~

Good luck ~

Your Mp3 file it's 409 kbps,this is unrankable.need change for 192 kbps.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Before giving a kudosu you should be sure i'll follow something.

Lissette wrote:

I felt timing off at the end, you may get some pro timer to check this out
Offsets must be the same in all difficulties

Normal and Easy
00:31:777 - the soft hit-sounds doesn't fit to this part, try normal sounds, like in the guest difficulties

Taiko
00:31:461 - add note
00:31:619 - same
01:24:212 (2) - move to prev red tick

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Taiko mod /late
• General
- Volume in 90% at least

• Map
- 00:04:761 (1) - Delete no, there's something
- 00:37:777 (5) - ^ ^
- 01:24:528 (1) - Katsu ok
- 01:24:686 (2) - Delete ok

Easy map lol, i can't mod it very well

Lissette wrote:

feat.Lennox
00:34:145 (2) - this jump makes no sense to me, what did you follow to put it here?
00:36:040 (3) - same fixed
00:43:619 (3) - same, also this one is even more confusing due to this 00:42:987 (5,1,2,3) - see the spacing between them, maybe you did it on purpose, but this doesn't always turns well, it has to follow the music very well, and this one looks random to me.
00:46:145 (3) - same fixed
00:57:198 - add note? feels like is missing one here ok
00:57:672 (1) - move to prev red tick and add note here 00:57:514 (1) - sounds and plays better, try it~ ok
01:02:724 (1,2,3,4) - delete 3 and 4, also you could put the two left in jump, it gives a nice effect while playing, also sounds better, example: http://puu.sh/giA7 fixed
01:03:356 (1) - new combo bug, add new combo to the spinner ok
01:04:634 - 01:24:844 - nice