No_Gu wrote:

hard
00:32:019 (1) - remove NC
00:44:334 (1) - finish
00:57:598 (1) - remove NC

change tick from 0.5 to 1.
0.5 is unrankable

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue by athiota33

easy
00:57:598 (1) - remove NC ok
01:09:598 (1) - finish no, doesn't follow the music

normal
00:16:545 (2) - NC and last note remove NC ok
00:41:808 (1) - finish instead of whistle ok
00:58:861 (3) - NC ok

mercury2004 wrote:

Sorry for late ;-;
G Class Mod.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it, because of Bad Game play.

General
- Folder Fine

Easy Difficulty
Overall Difficulty -2
Approach Rate -1 ok
00:03:914 (1) - Soft Whistle these spinner[/color] ok
00:15:282 (3) - Better stick to the vocal. move it here 00:15:124 . For beginner it is very hard to catch this not on time with very low background audio it hit blue tick and I've ask someone to listen, better without change
00:20:335 (2) - ............^............... move it here 00:20:177 end the slider tail here 00:21:598. reason same as above I save this later. if other modder say same thing, I'll change it
00:41:808 (4) - add note ok
01:16:545 (3) - Move this note somewhere else. 300 hit cover them up and beginner easily miss that. not really covered with 300 hit
01:27:282 (1) - Soft Whistle this spinner ok

Normal Difficulty
00:19:861 (7) - remove this note and put the spinner? end the spinner here 00:21:598 (1) -
00:36:598 (?) 00:36:755 (?) - add note here?[/color] add note at 00:36:755

Overall. I give 9.5/10. Your note placement and hitsound perfectly fit into the music. This map really deserve star. Star~


If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos

mercury2004 wrote:

Ota's Hard Difficulty
HP Drain -1
00:02:651 (5) - remove note. This note do not rhythmic with the song at all. If you really want to place it. use slider at 4 instead
00:05:177 (5) - ^
00:12:756 (5) - ^
01:19:071 Your kiai time suppose to end here. Same as normal easy and taiki difficulty

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested

OD should be 5~6

00:09:598 - dk kd ok
00:13:072 - kkd ok
00:31:703 - finish? ok

that's all. Excellent work : D
what can you do make make it even better:
- 01:14:492 - in these stream apply finishes on accent like what you've done before
- there's no need to stick 100% to the music, a bit variation is perfectly fine :3
- make a more significant difference for different emotion in the song, like 01:04:545 the beginning of kiai it's stil the chorus and the notes arrangement seems nothing special as the kiai part~ :3

8/10

1. Song folder - remove osb. file
2. Song Setup - Colours - It is not unified. Easy,Normal or Ota's Hard. unify it ?
3. Audio Lead-in - +500ms in all diff

1. 00:18:756 (3,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aou0
2. 00:49:703 (1) - spacing too far. (1.46x)
3. 00:53:492 (2) - ^ (1.11x) x408,y104 ?
4. 00:56:966 (4) - add NC and 00:57:598 - remove NC
5. 00:57:913 (2) - I think I do not match BGM. slider end 00:58:071. or change circle 00:57:913only. ( i like circle )
6. 01:05:176 (2) - spacing too far (1.12x) 01:04:545 (1) - x256,y200 01:05:176 (2) - x328,y256
7. 01:06:755 (2,3) - ^ 2:x288,y152 3:x352,y224
8. 01:19:703 (2) - add NC

1. 00:14:019 (6) - add NC and 00:15:282 - remove NC and 00:16:545 - add NC
2. 00:19:072 (6) - add NC
3. 00:33:282 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm and NC http://puu.sh/aoxI
4. 00:42:755 (2) - grid x160,y104. ( because next spacing close (1.02x) )
5. 00:44:334 (4) - add NC
6. 00:49:387 (1) - spinner start 00:49:229
7. 00:59:334 (2) - I think that I do not match rhythm. tick move 00:59:492
8. 01:00:124 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aozh
9. 01:06:755 (1) - remove NC and 01:07:071 - add NC
10. 01:11:808 (7) - add NC
11. 01:21:598 (4) - add NC and 01:21:913 - remove NC ?
12. 01:27:282 (2) - add NC ( hp drain follow)

1. 00:11:966 (2,3) - I think that I do not match rhythm. remove. and change 00:11:966~00:12:756 slider
2. 00:15:282 (4,5) - ^ remove and 00:15:282~00:15:914 slider
3. 00:44:808 (3) - add one repeat ?
4. 00:45:440 (4) - add NC
5. 00:49:229 (6) - ^
6. 00:51:519 - add note ?
7. 00:51:598 - ^
8. 01:13:861 (7,8) - Please neatly stacked with 01:13:387 (6)

kosiga wrote:

hi~ shikyu

from mod4mod queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - remove osb. file ok
2. Song Setup - Colours - It is not unified. Easy,Normal or Ota's Hard. unify it ? ok
3. Audio Lead-in - +500ms in all diff ok

[Easy]

1. 00:18:756 (3,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aou0 ok
2. 00:49:703 (1) - spacing too far. (1.46x) ok
3. 00:53:492 (2) - ^ (1.11x) x408,y104 ? ok
4. 00:56:966 (4) - add NC and 00:57:598 - remove NC ok
5. 00:57:913 (2) - I think I do not match BGM. slider end 00:58:071. or change circle 00:57:913only. ( i like circle ) add circle
6. 01:05:176 (2) - spacing too far (1.12x) 01:04:545 (1) - x256,y200 01:05:176 (2) - x328,y256 ok
7. 01:06:755 (2,3) - ^ 2:x288,y152 3:x352,y224 ok
8. 01:19:703 (2) - add NC ok

[Normal]

1. 00:14:019 (6) - add NC and 00:15:282 - remove NC and 00:16:545 - add NC ok
2. 00:19:072 (6) - add NC ok
3. 00:33:282 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm and NC http://puu.sh/aoxI I follow guitar here
4. 00:42:755 (2) - grid x160,y104. ( because next spacing close (1.02x) ) ok
5. 00:44:334 (4) - add NC ok
6. 00:49:387 (1) - spinner start 00:49:229 ok
7. 00:59:334 (2) - I think that I do not match rhythm. tick move 00:59:492 ok
8. 01:00:124 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aozh ok
9. 01:06:755 (1) - remove NC and 01:07:071 - add NC ok
10. 01:11:808 (7) - add NC ok
11. 01:21:598 (4) - add NC and 01:21:913 - remove NC ? sorry no
12. 01:27:282 (2) - add NC ( hp drain follow) ok

That' all ~

Good luck ~

kosiga wrote:

[Ota's Hard]

1. 00:11:966 (2,3) - I think that I do not match rhythm. remove. and change 00:11:966~00:12:756 slider
2. 00:15:282 (4,5) - ^ remove and 00:15:282~00:15:914 slider
3. 00:44:808 (3) - add one repeat ?
4. 00:45:440 (4) - add NC
5. 00:49:229 (6) - ^
6. 00:51:519 - add note ?
7. 00:51:598 - ^
8. 01:13:861 (7,8) - Please neatly stacked with 01:13:387 (6)

spboxer3 wrote:

[Easy]
need let 01:24:755 - BPM of 95.000
kiai finish at 01:19:703 - ?[/color] ok

[Normal]
kiai end 01:19:072 but It's 01:19:071 [uh... I think 01:19:703 - is better >_>] ok
00:34:229 (2,3) - too Hard partten for Normal~ ok
00:44:334 (1,2) - ^ ok
00:45:755 - to 00:46:545 - need something to add here ok
01:07:071 (1,2,3,4) - too Hard for Normal... ok
01:27:282 (1) - I guess back is at 01:28:386 - >_> ok

[Taiko]
kiai 01:04:547 - but It's 01:04:545 right? ok
01:19:703 - finish kiai? ok

00:04:703 (1,1,2) - confuse rhythm it follow sound perfectly
01:23:176 - add note? ok

(red is unranked rule black is just suggest so you can ignore them~)

Ok that's All
good lucky

spboxer3 wrote:

[Ota's Hard]
01:24:758 - BPM of 95.000 -> 01:24:755 -
01:24:755 (1) - Unsnap spinner
00:51:519 (2,3) - not fit in this way
00:54:440 (1) - finish at 00:54:755 -
00:58:229 (1) - finish at 00:58:545 -
01:19:071 (3,4,5,6,1) - uneven spacing
01:22:861 - to 01:24:758 - need something to add here I want to add something in here but,i don't know what should i add..>.>

Sander-Don wrote:

Here's your taiko mod by request~

d = red, k = blue, D = finisher red, K = finisher blue.

00:23:492 (2) - change to d ok
00:26:019 (2) - ^ ok
00:26:334 (1,2,3,4) - change to k ok
00:28:545 (2) - change to d ok
00:29:808 (1,2,3) - how about adding finish to these? ok
00:33:598 (2) - remove ok
00:41:492 (5) - change to k ok
00:42:124 add k ok
00:50:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about making this 1/3 to fit the music?
first, delete 00:51:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Then switch to 1/3 and add 00:51:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - all red.
finished result should look like this (keep in mind i'm zoomed in all the way. ok


00:53:334 add k ok
00:53:650 add d ok

That's all. The map doesn't fit the music nor vocals very well at all imo >.<;

Flow 1/5
Patterns 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Overall 2/5

Good luck on getting it ranked~

Leorda wrote:

Halo

General
* Inconsistent timing sections http://puu.sh/ayZa ok
* Inconsistent combo color http://puu.sh/ayZh ok
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/ayZr ok

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Easy
00:58:545 (B) - Fill the object and pattern to this breaks, it's no good for adding a breaks without reason..... I made this part a break 'cause I've fill some intro parts at beginning and I think break in this part isn't problem at all
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Normal
00:35:492 (x) - Add note here? ok
00:42:755 (2) - Extend this slider to white tick? follow guitar here, it end at red tick
01:05:492 (3) - Could be weird if tail slider overlap the sliderpath (Nazi) it's okay
01:22:229 (2) - You use short slider with many repeating slider. This issue is tough to tell for beginners when it's end ok
01:27:282 (1) - Remove new combo? I feel unecessary for this I just follow stanza, if other say same thing I'll change it

-------------------------------------------------------------------

Good luck!

-Lennox- wrote:

Are you accepting a guest difficult? Would like to make a Insane diff here.

Edit: Get a timing pro. The timing is horrible.

Leorda wrote:

Ota's Hard
01:24:755 (1) - Unsnapped end spinner
01:22:370 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
01:22:686 (T) - ^
01:22:863 (T) - ^
01:23:337 (T) - ^

• offset 01418 || BPM 190,000
  offset 21628 || BPM 189,980
  offset 84811 || BPM 108,600
  offset 87337 || BPM 092,500

-Lennox- wrote:

Asked CNF for help.

SPOILER

16:28 <-Lennox-> : Hey CNF. Are you good in timing? There is a map who needs help with the timing
16:31 <Card N'FoRcE> : what map?
16:31 <-Lennox-> : sek
16:31 <-Lennox-> : +sec
16:32 *-Lennox- is listening to (BACK-ON - With You feat. Me)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38054]
16:33 <Card N'FoRcE> : the mp3 sounds really bad
16:33 <Card N'FoRcE> : where did he get it?
16:33 <-Lennox-> : idk. lol
16:33 <-Lennox-> : i guess via youtube converter
16:34 <Card N'FoRcE> : never do that please, it sounds horribly and may have timing issues due to distorsion
16:35 <-Lennox-> : good to know
16:36 <Card N'FoRcE> : try to get a better mp3 first, that way you'll be able to see if 190 is correct or not
16:36 <Card N'FoRcE> : no need to use multiple sections for 95
16:36 <Card N'FoRcE> : only 190 is fine as BPM
16:37 <-Lennox-> : It would be nice if you post this into the thread. The map creator is not like a real-life friend or something. i
16:37 <-Lennox-> : just have to do a guest diff for that map
16:37 <Card N'FoRcE> : sorry but i won't because i don't want to take part in osu!'s modding process anymore
16:38 <-Lennox-> : Is it okay if i take a screenshot from this? ( do post it into the thread ofc )
16:38 <Card N'FoRcE> : feel free to post it
16:38 <Card N'FoRcE> : go ahead
16:38 <-Lennox-> : okay thx
16:38 <Card N'FoRcE> : i think /savelog would work better btw+
16:38 <-Lennox-> : yea

Edit: Nevermind. Use Odaril's timing.

Odaril wrote:

I was asked to time this.

• offset 01418 || BPM 190,000
  offset 21628 || BPM 189,980
  offset 84811 || BPM 108,600
  offset 87337 || BPM 092,500

Touche wrote:

[EASY]

00:51:918 : Put this circle in 352,32 (x,y) actually I don't see why I have to put it there

[NORMAL]

00:13:076 : New combo ok
00:14:023 : Delete new combo ok

[Ota's HARD]

00:13:076 : New combo ok
00:14:023 : Delete new combo ok

[TAIKO]

Change the offset of 1,392 (Check the other diffs and put the same offset for TAIKO, all diffs with the same offset and bpm :3) ok
00:50:970~00:51:918 : A lot of D circles, put a little of K circles this I've try and it turn to be no good
01:05:496~01:06:128 : ^ change to slider instead

[OPINION]

So nice song :3 That's my play on the Taiko diff:



GO FOR THE RANK!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

General:
shouldnt the title be BACK-ON feat. Me - With You? erm... most people write like that


Easy:
00:01:392(1,1) - i dont feel like these spinners should be here. use this pattern instead? not really, it better for beginner
[attachment=0:7d015]BACK-ON - With You feat. Me (shikyu) [test play].osu[/attachment:7d015]
00:30:128(2) - IMO this might be confusing for beginners. move it beside (1) to make it easier for beginners
00:40:865(1) - add a clap at the beginning and end to keep the rhythm going ok
00:58:549-01:02:970 - why a break here? try to add notes here ok
01:04:549(1,2) - add a clap at the end ok
01:06:128(1,2,3) - move the clap to the beginning apply at (2)
01:24:764(1,1) - same as 00:01:392 ^

Normal:
00:01:392(1,1) - like at easy i dont feel like these spinners should be here. add notes instead? same as easy
00:21:918 - the break here compared to easy is inconsistent delete notes at easy
01:24:764(1,1) - same as 00:01:392^
everything seems fine wat bothered me is the clap hitsounds near the beginning. there isn't

this is the best i can do. GL

01:03:286(1,1) - r u sure that this is okay for an insane diff? because IMO some players wont be able to reach that slider when the spinner's done.

Mok wrote:

[General]
All Kiai Times should be the same. Check Lennox's Kiai Time. it's same
If this is Tv Size, you should add it in the title of the song, or at least in the tags. ok

[Easy]
00:01:393 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end). ok
00:15:128 (3) - Make it better. ok
00:49:707 (1) - Remove New Combo. ok
01:22:237 (1) - ^. ok

[Normal]
I noticed that you stuck all the map in the center, try to space it out! I like it...
00:20:339 (2) - Move the slider, making the red sliderpoint be in x=256; y=104. Then make it a bit better. ok

[Ota]
00:19:865 (2,3,4) - Since it's hard, you can take this combo to x=416; y=84. ok

I really like this song, even if i've never seen this anime. actually... it's game OP

384,184,77183,6,0,B|416:248|400:312|320:392|240:312|224:248|256:184,1,360,8|0

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

General

all diff lead-in 500 this is just fair and bad will be better if 1000 or 1500 IMO ok

Some Suggestions
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Easy

I not think HP is fine will better if HP -1 IMO ok

00:11:497 at 00:21:602 this part you have lack hitsound expect 00:16:549 (1,2) and 00:21:602 (1) IMO you should more add hitsound i feel need it ok

00:40:865 (3) - try CTRL+H as i just clean overlaps little with 00:42:760 (3) I mean this http://puu.sh/ccAQ this just easy read and better game play IMO ok
00:51:918 (1) - I wanna this need change place as i play and catch 300 score and hitburst big and lot overlaps with 00:52:865 (1,2,3) IMO ok
00:55:707 (2) - change place too http://puu.sh/ccBx this just clean with (3) end slider then most better read IMO ok
00:58:707 (5) - New combo? I feel need it IMO ok
00:59:497 (6) - grid 1 left and 01:00:760 (7) - grid 1 up better IMO ok
01:06:128 (1) - remove the clap the end slider but add only start slider ok
01:07:391 (3) - ^ most better if you really wanna hitsound conscienty IMO ok
01:17:183 (1) - I can see my self is weird slider try this code ok

384,184,77183,6,0,B|416:248|400:312|320:392|240:312|224:248|256:184,1,360,8|0

stuff cool and flow is good
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Normal

00:32:813 (3) - grid 1 right? or intentional ? ok
01:17:183 (3) - new combo? ok
01:24:764 (1,1) - should be end the 1/1 White tick as this diff is your if guest diff so will be fine as they are wanna anyway easy and normal is your right? should be end same ok

everthing look good for me
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Ota's Hard

Can be Od-1 most better imo ok

stuff aswome

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that all i think and good luck sorry my suck eng anyway
bye bye

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Oh my, seems like there is no audio file present.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Easy

• 00:11:497 (1,2) - I suggest doing something like this. I think it goes with the song a little better than what you have: ok

• 00:31:707 - I think it would be best to add a note here to match the vocals. ok
• 00:52:549 (1,2) - I think these two notes would sound/play better if you move them one white tick earlier. That way you would have something like this: ok

SPOILER

• 01:02:023 (1) - I think it would be best if you map through this spinner. The spinner seems odd and doesn't fit in very well. Here is one option: ok


Normal

• 00:14:023 (3,4,5) - These patterns don't go with the song and it seems pretty random to me. I would change it. Here is an option:

SPOILER

apply some
• 00:33:286 (1) - Move this to the earliest red tick. It seems pretty off. I follow guitar
• 00:35:813 (5) - Change the hitsounds to this (Claps = Red lines): it's better like that

• 00:46:549 (1,2) - In my opinion, this does not play well on a Normal. Try something like this:apply some

• 01:02:023 (1) - Again, I encourage you to map through this spinner (Same reason in easy)ok
• 01:05:496 (3) - Open up this slider. The way you have it now, it's pretty easy to slider break. ok


[Overall]
Overall, this map needs to be worked on. But, at this stage, it's natural. Also, the map does show potential.

Good luck on getting this ranked~