1. Easy (1,87 stars, 74 notes)
2. feat.Haku (4,98 stars, 256 notes)
3. feat.Lennox (4,97 stars, 197 notes)
4. feat.Ota (4,92 stars, 168 notes)
5. Normal (3,48 stars, 90 notes)
6. Taiko (4,93 stars, 340 notes)

Yasora-chan wrote:

yo shikyu~ o/

General
- Background: 1024 x 768 (convert ke .jpg untuk menghemat besar file)
- rr.. wa juga ga jago dalem timing sih.. cuma, ini kayaknya BPM nya kecepetan ya? (ato cuma perasaan wa aja?)

SPOILER

Easy fixed
HP -1
OD -2
00:11:444 (1) add finish
00:38:276 (3) overlap with 1, move to other place
00:50:903 (1) the spinner is too fast, can remove it?

Ota's Hard fixed
00:10:902 (1) more better like this? http://puu.sh/7hul
00:40:170 (8) NC
01:03:293 (1) del NC
01:06:766 (5) NC
01:24:759 (1) more better like this? http://puu.sh/7huO

Ya.. kayaknya cuma itu yang bisa wa mod. sori >.<
Good luck~

SPOILER

Backfire wrote:

Taiko
00:11:495 (4) - finish ok
00:20:179 - add note ok
00:20:337 - delete note, add a spinner till 00:21:284 - ok
...thats all that I can really "help" with.

Sonic Fumes wrote:

00:56:966 - New combo ok
01:09:598 - New combo ok
00:52:861 - Remove new combo, because you have a 1-combo before this. no, I do it for effect
Happy Beatmapping!

1. Menurut rule baru, ga boleh ada gap antar difficulty. Easy>Hard itu unrankable. Bisa check thread ini buat info lebih lanjut : http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=80&t=56753. Jadi pindahin ke WIP lagi aja.
2. Semua BG terlalu blur, kayak dari gambar kecil terus dipaksa jadi 1024x768. Cari BG yang lebih bagus, pasti lebih banyak BG yang lebih bagus di luar sana.
3. BPMnya apa g kekecilan? Kata miya ini lagu cepet. BPM 190 lebih cocok, atau mau pake BPM 85 sama 190 juga bisa karena ada bagian lagunya yang lambat di awal2. Kalo mau pake dua BPM bisa taro non-inherit timing section dengan BPM 190 di 00:21:598

1. 00:18:124 (2) - hapus new combonya? Kata miya masih satu irama terus g jump.
2. 00:43:388 (3) - emm, patternya agak aneh. >.< g simetris. kalo dibuat gni : http://puu.sh/8Ba7 gimana? terus note 00:43:388 (3,1,2,3) - pindahin dan bentuk jadi gini : http://puu.sh/8Baq. Terus note 00:47:178 (1) - pindahin ke x:376 y:152
3. 00:47:178 (1) - mendadak ganti suara jadi whistle, kurang bagus kata miya. Ganti lagi aja jadi clap biar lebih konsisten.
4. 00:45:283 (2) - ^
5. 00:45:915 (3) - ^ startpoint sama endpointnya.
6. 00:47:178 (1) - clap? Nerusin yang atas.
7. 00:47:810 (2) - ^
8. 00:49:073 (3) - ^
9. 00:49:703 (1) - ^ di startpointnya aja.
10. 00:56:966 (1) - kenapa new combo? hapus aja kata miya. Ga jump kq. Terus ganti whistle jadi finish lebih bagus.
11. 00:57:915 (2) - finish sound di enpointnya kurang enak di denger. Hapus?
12. 01:04:546 (1) - kasih finish buat pembuka chorusnya?
13. 01:13:072 (1) - new combo disini.

1. 00:04:703 (2,3,4,5) - patternya g dibuat kayak 00:02:177 (2,3,4,5) - ? lebih konsisten. Daripada stack.
2. 00:15:124 (1) - new combo disini?
3. 00:17:651 (2) - kasih whistle disini lebih bagus dan lebih konsisten deh.
4. 00:32:019 - Saran miya kasih circle disini, soalnya tiba2 pindah polarity jadi biru, jadi harus dipasang penghubung satu circle disini. Letaknya stack aja lagi dengan 1.
5. 00:42:440 - sama kayak atas, kasih circle disini jg.
6. 00:48:124 (4) - kasih clap? biar lebih konsisten kata miya.
7. 00:49:230 (6) - slider ini ga masuk beat kata miya. Coba dipendekin sampe 00:49:703
8. 00:50:966 (1) - ini juga, pendekin 1/4 beat trus pindah ke 00:50:966
9. 00:52:072 (3) - kasih finish lebih bagus.
10. 00:52:861 (2) - ^ ini juga, tapi di endpoint aja
11. 01:01:072 (1) - new combo? soalnya sebelumny waktu vokalny diteken new combo jg sih.
12. 01:03:282 (1) - saran new combo jg. Penekanan vokal.

Miya wrote:

Hi shikyu. Miya coba mod mapnya shikyu ya

General

1. Menurut rule baru, ga boleh ada gap antar difficulty. Easy>Hard itu unrankable. Bisa check thread ini buat info lebih lanjut : http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=80&t=56753. Jadi pindahin ke WIP lagi aja. udah bikin normal
2. Semua BG terlalu blur, kayak dari gambar kecil terus dipaksa jadi 1024x768. Cari BG yang lebih bagus, pasti lebih banyak BG yang lebih bagus di luar sana. pas awal bikin blum ada yang bagus, sekarang ada
3. BPMnya apa g kekecilan? Kata miya ini lagu cepet. BPM 190 lebih cocok, atau mau pake BPM 85 sama 190 juga bisa karena ada bagian lagunya yang lambat di awal2. Kalo mau pake dua BPM bisa taro non-inherit timing section dengan BPM 190 di 00:21:598 ok

Easy

1. 00:18:124 (2) - hapus new combonya? Kata miya masih satu irama terus g jump. ok
2. 00:43:388 (3) - emm, patternya agak aneh. >.< g simetris. kalo dibuat gni : http://puu.sh/8Ba7 gimana? terus note 00:43:388 (3,1,2,3) - pindahin dan bentuk jadi gini : http://puu.sh/8Baq. Terus note 00:47:178 (1) - pindahin ke x:376 y:152 ok
3. 00:47:178 (1) - mendadak ganti suara jadi whistle, kurang bagus kata miya. Ganti lagi aja jadi clap biar lebih konsisten. ok
4. 00:45:283 (2) - ^ ok
5. 00:45:915 (3) - ^ startpoint sama endpointnya. ok
6. 00:47:178 (1) - clap? Nerusin yang atas. ok
7. 00:47:810 (2) - ^ ok
8. 00:49:073 (3) - ^ ok
9. 00:49:703 (1) - ^ di startpointnya aja. ok
10. 00:56:966 (1) - kenapa new combo? hapus aja kata miya. Ga jump kq. Terus ganti whistle jadi finish lebih bagus. ok
11. 00:57:915 (2) - finish sound di enpointnya kurang enak di denger. Hapus? ok
12. 01:04:546 (1) - kasih finish buat pembuka chorusnya? ok
13. 01:13:072 (1) - new combo disini. ok

Ok deh segitu aja dari miya. :3
Good luck ya shikyu.

siren chan wrote:

~Easy~
kumod beberapa hitsound yang kurang pas

oo:41:809 - put a note here and use whistle hitsound
00:44:651 - use clap here
00:45:282 - use clap here
00:45:914 - use clap here
00:46:230 - use whistle here
00:46:545 - use clap here
00:47:177 - use clap here
00:47:809 - use clap here
00:48:440 - use clap here
00:49:072 - use clap here

met berjuang ya (kalau butuh bantuan lagi bilang aja )
yang di-mod sama kayak miya, fixed

1. Setting difficultinya kurang pas. Jadiin gni deh : HP Drain = 4, AR=5, OD=4
2. 00:32:808 (3) - Mending jangan di stack deh. Kurang bagus liatnya. Terus dipasin juga g bisa.
3. 00:34:703 (3) - Kalo ngikutin saran di atas, mending ini juga jangan di stack.
4. 00:41:808 (1) - Kasih finish disini, soalnya pembukaan irama baru.
5. 00:45:755 (5) - Circle ini g masuk vokal. Coba pindahin ke 00:45:913. Terus kalo bisa jangan di stack jg :3
6. 00:47:176 (2) - Ini bisa disejajarin dengan 1. Pindahin deh startpointnya ke x:336 y:128 terus endpointnya ke x:404 y:192. Jangan lupa fix spacing dengan 3.
7. 00:48:440 (4) - Ini dibuat stack dengan 1 aja biar lebih bagus patternya. Fix spacing dengan 5 kalo ngikutin ini.
8. 00:59:334 (4) - Ini juga sebaiknya g usah di stack >.<
9. 01:07:861 (3) - Hapus clap dari sini, terus tambahin clap di endpoint slider ini 01:07:071 (2) - biar lebih konsisten.
10. 01:13:071 (5) - Circle ini juga off vocal. Pindahin ke 01:12:913. Jangan lupa perbaiki spacingnya.
11. 01:14:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, apa ini g kesusahan buat diff normal? Miya aja harus pake 2 jari buat ngikutin iramanya.
12. 01:17:019 (1,2,3,4) - Ini juga, mending disederhanain jadi 2 repeat slider gtu.
13. 01:24:755 (1,2) - Linear slider agak g enak diliat. Kenapa g dibuat spinner aja kayak yang di easy?

atk1992 wrote:

My mod

SPOILER

[Ota's Hard]
00:02:651 (5) - it seems unnecessary, del it,add a note at 00:03:282 or change 00:02:493 (4) to a slider end at 00:03:282
00:05:177 (5) - same as before
00:12:756 (5) - umm....
00:41:335 (5) - distance?
00:48:756 (5) - distance...
01:08:966 (8) - dis...oh,im not sure but is he do this distance on purpose?
01:26:019 (2) - begin at 01:25:861
01:28:545 (2) - move it to 01:28:387

this diff need some more mods i think

atk1992 wrote:

My mod

SPOILER

[General]
I love this song and TALS OF series,RANK it plz!

[EASY]
00:21:598 - move the green line at 00:21:698 to here or another place ok
01:08:019 - how about add a note here? ok

fine diff

[NORMAL]
00:18:124 (3) - cancel whistle-hittsound on the slider (and same misses in so other places as 00:43:387 (3),00:44:334 (4)) ok
00:32:808 (3) - hide it perfectly seems better no, I move it other place
01:24:755 (1) - try to turn the slider at 01:25:782 to follow the music? ok
01:27:282 (2) - as the same, turn it at 01:28:387 this part longer than before, I make repeat at 01:28:545

nice rhythm .but maybe a little difficult as a Normal-diff

[Ota's Hard]
00:02:651 (5) - it seems unnecessary, del it,add a note at 00:03:282 or change 00:02:493 (4) to a slider end at 00:03:282
00:05:177 (5) - same as before
00:12:756 (5) - umm....
00:41:335 (5) - distance?
00:48:756 (5) - distance...
01:08:966 (8) - dis...oh,im not sure but is he do this distance on purpose?
01:26:019 (2) - begin at 01:25:861
01:28:545 (2) - move it to 01:28:387

this diff need some more mods i think

[taiko]
sorry i cant mod taiko

that it, Good luck!

Miya wrote:

Mod request for new normal diff

Normal

1. Setting difficultinya kurang pas. Jadiin gni deh : HP Drain = 4, AR=5, OD=4 ok
2. 00:32:808 (3) - Mending jangan di stack deh. Kurang bagus liatnya. Terus dipasin juga g bisa. ok
3. 00:34:703 (3) - Kalo ngikutin saran di atas, mending ini juga jangan di stack. yang ini spacingnya lebih deket, jadi di-stack
4. 00:41:808 (1) - Kasih finish disini, soalnya pembukaan irama baru. aneh dengernya
5. 00:45:755 (5) - Circle ini g masuk vokal. Coba pindahin ke 00:45:913. Terus kalo bisa jangan di stack jg :3 part ini ngikutin gitar
6. 00:47:176 (2) - Ini bisa disejajarin dengan 1. Pindahin deh startpointnya ke x:336 y:128 terus endpointnya ke x:404 y:192. Jangan lupa fix spacing dengan 3. ok
7. 00:48:440 (4) - Ini dibuat stack dengan 1 aja biar lebih bagus patternya. Fix spacing dengan 5 kalo ngikutin ini. ok
8. 00:59:334 (4) - Ini juga sebaiknya g usah di stack >.< ok
9. 01:07:861 (3) - Hapus clap dari sini, terus tambahin clap di endpoint slider ini 01:07:071 (2) - biar lebih konsisten. ok
10. 01:13:071 (5) - Circle ini juga off vocal. Pindahin ke 01:12:913. Jangan lupa perbaiki spacingnya. remake
11. 01:14:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, apa ini g kesusahan buat diff normal? Miya aja harus pake 2 jari buat ngikutin iramanya. ok
12. 01:17:019 (1,2,3,4) - Ini juga, mending disederhanain jadi 2 repeat slider gtu. remake
13. 01:24:755 (1,2) - Linear slider agak g enak diliat. Kenapa g dibuat spinner aja kayak yang di easy? biar beda, dibetulin dikit

Well, itu aja. Miya rasa masih banyak pattern yg kurang solid. Perhatiin lagi ya. >.<
Ok deh, good luck shikyu!

Miya wrote:

Ota's Hard

1. 00:04:703 (2,3,4,5) - patternya g dibuat kayak 00:02:177 (2,3,4,5) - ? lebih konsisten. Daripada stack. Ok
2. 00:15:124 (1) - new combo disini? ^
3. 00:17:651 (2) - kasih whistle disini lebih bagus dan lebih konsisten deh. ^
4. 00:32:019 - Saran miya kasih circle disini, soalnya tiba2 pindah polarity jadi biru, jadi harus dipasang penghubung satu circle disini. Letaknya stack aja lagi dengan 1. ^
5. 00:42:440 - sama kayak atas, kasih circle disini jg. ^
6. 00:48:124 (4) - kasih clap? biar lebih konsisten kata miya. ^
7. 00:49:230 (6) - slider ini ga masuk beat kata miya. Coba dipendekin sampe 00:49:703 Sebenernya kalau didenger baik-baik ada suara gitarnya :3 tapi ok~
8. 00:50:966 (1) - ini juga, pendekin 1/4 beat trus pindah ke 00:50:966 ^
9. 00:52:072 (3) - kasih finish lebih bagus. a bit noisy,tapi ok~
10. 00:52:861 (2) - ^ ini juga, tapi di endpoint aja ^
11. 01:01:072 (1) - new combo? soalnya sebelumny waktu vokalny diteken new combo jg sih. Ok
12. 01:03:282 (1) - saran new combo jg. Penekanan vokal.^

atk1992 wrote:

SPOILER

[Ota's Hard]
00:02:651 (5) - it seems unnecessary, del it,add a note at 00:03:282 or change 00:02:493 (4) to a slider end at 00:03:282 If other modder say so,I'll change
00:05:177 (5) - same as before ^
00:12:756 (5) - umm.... Sorry,when you mod it,this part isn't done yet >< shikyu really BAKA,request mod when my part isn't done yet... ._.
00:41:335 (5) - distance? ^
00:48:756 (5) - distance... ^
01:08:966 (8) - dis...oh,im not sure but is he do this distance on purpose? ^
01:26:019 (2) - begin at 01:25:861 Ok
01:28:545 (2) - move it to 01:28:387 ^

this diff need some more mods i think I think so too~:3

No_Gu wrote:

hard
00:32:019 (1) - remove NC
00:44:334 (1) - finish
00:57:598 (1) - remove NC

change tick from 0.5 to 1.
0.5 is unrankable

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue by athiota33

easy
00:57:598 (1) - remove NC ok
01:09:598 (1) - finish no, doesn't follow the music

normal
00:16:545 (2) - NC and last note remove NC ok
00:41:808 (1) - finish instead of whistle ok
00:58:861 (3) - NC ok

mercury2004 wrote:

Sorry for late ;-;
G Class Mod.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it, because of Bad Game play.

General
- Folder Fine

Easy Difficulty
Overall Difficulty -2
Approach Rate -1 ok
00:03:914 (1) - Soft Whistle these spinner[/color] ok
00:15:282 (3) - Better stick to the vocal. move it here 00:15:124 . For beginner it is very hard to catch this not on time with very low background audio it hit blue tick and I've ask someone to listen, better without change
00:20:335 (2) - ............^............... move it here 00:20:177 end the slider tail here 00:21:598. reason same as above I save this later. if other modder say same thing, I'll change it
00:41:808 (4) - add note ok
01:16:545 (3) - Move this note somewhere else. 300 hit cover them up and beginner easily miss that. not really covered with 300 hit
01:27:282 (1) - Soft Whistle this spinner ok

Normal Difficulty
00:19:861 (7) - remove this note and put the spinner? end the spinner here 00:21:598 (1) -
00:36:598 (?) 00:36:755 (?) - add note here?[/color] add note at 00:36:755

Overall. I give 9.5/10. Your note placement and hitsound perfectly fit into the music. This map really deserve star. Star~


If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos

mercury2004 wrote:

Ota's Hard Difficulty
HP Drain -1
00:02:651 (5) - remove note. This note do not rhythmic with the song at all. If you really want to place it. use slider at 4 instead
00:05:177 (5) - ^
00:12:756 (5) - ^
01:19:071 Your kiai time suppose to end here. Same as normal easy and taiki difficulty

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested

OD should be 5~6

00:09:598 - dk kd ok
00:13:072 - kkd ok
00:31:703 - finish? ok

that's all. Excellent work : D
what can you do make make it even better:
- 01:14:492 - in these stream apply finishes on accent like what you've done before
- there's no need to stick 100% to the music, a bit variation is perfectly fine :3
- make a more significant difference for different emotion in the song, like 01:04:545 the beginning of kiai it's stil the chorus and the notes arrangement seems nothing special as the kiai part~ :3

8/10

1. Song folder - remove osb. file
2. Song Setup - Colours - It is not unified. Easy,Normal or Ota's Hard. unify it ?
3. Audio Lead-in - +500ms in all diff

1. 00:18:756 (3,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aou0
2. 00:49:703 (1) - spacing too far. (1.46x)
3. 00:53:492 (2) - ^ (1.11x) x408,y104 ?
4. 00:56:966 (4) - add NC and 00:57:598 - remove NC
5. 00:57:913 (2) - I think I do not match BGM. slider end 00:58:071. or change circle 00:57:913only. ( i like circle )
6. 01:05:176 (2) - spacing too far (1.12x) 01:04:545 (1) - x256,y200 01:05:176 (2) - x328,y256
7. 01:06:755 (2,3) - ^ 2:x288,y152 3:x352,y224
8. 01:19:703 (2) - add NC

1. 00:14:019 (6) - add NC and 00:15:282 - remove NC and 00:16:545 - add NC
2. 00:19:072 (6) - add NC
3. 00:33:282 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm and NC http://puu.sh/aoxI
4. 00:42:755 (2) - grid x160,y104. ( because next spacing close (1.02x) )
5. 00:44:334 (4) - add NC
6. 00:49:387 (1) - spinner start 00:49:229
7. 00:59:334 (2) - I think that I do not match rhythm. tick move 00:59:492
8. 01:00:124 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aozh
9. 01:06:755 (1) - remove NC and 01:07:071 - add NC
10. 01:11:808 (7) - add NC
11. 01:21:598 (4) - add NC and 01:21:913 - remove NC ?
12. 01:27:282 (2) - add NC ( hp drain follow)

1. 00:11:966 (2,3) - I think that I do not match rhythm. remove. and change 00:11:966~00:12:756 slider
2. 00:15:282 (4,5) - ^ remove and 00:15:282~00:15:914 slider
3. 00:44:808 (3) - add one repeat ?
4. 00:45:440 (4) - add NC
5. 00:49:229 (6) - ^
6. 00:51:519 - add note ?
7. 00:51:598 - ^
8. 01:13:861 (7,8) - Please neatly stacked with 01:13:387 (6)

kosiga wrote:

hi~ shikyu

from mod4mod queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - remove osb. file ok
2. Song Setup - Colours - It is not unified. Easy,Normal or Ota's Hard. unify it ? ok
3. Audio Lead-in - +500ms in all diff ok

[Easy]

1. 00:18:756 (3,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aou0 ok
2. 00:49:703 (1) - spacing too far. (1.46x) ok
3. 00:53:492 (2) - ^ (1.11x) x408,y104 ? ok
4. 00:56:966 (4) - add NC and 00:57:598 - remove NC ok
5. 00:57:913 (2) - I think I do not match BGM. slider end 00:58:071. or change circle 00:57:913only. ( i like circle ) add circle
6. 01:05:176 (2) - spacing too far (1.12x) 01:04:545 (1) - x256,y200 01:05:176 (2) - x328,y256 ok
7. 01:06:755 (2,3) - ^ 2:x288,y152 3:x352,y224 ok
8. 01:19:703 (2) - add NC ok

[Normal]

1. 00:14:019 (6) - add NC and 00:15:282 - remove NC and 00:16:545 - add NC ok
2. 00:19:072 (6) - add NC ok
3. 00:33:282 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm and NC http://puu.sh/aoxI I follow guitar here
4. 00:42:755 (2) - grid x160,y104. ( because next spacing close (1.02x) ) ok
5. 00:44:334 (4) - add NC ok
6. 00:49:387 (1) - spinner start 00:49:229 ok
7. 00:59:334 (2) - I think that I do not match rhythm. tick move 00:59:492 ok
8. 01:00:124 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aozh ok
9. 01:06:755 (1) - remove NC and 01:07:071 - add NC ok
10. 01:11:808 (7) - add NC ok
11. 01:21:598 (4) - add NC and 01:21:913 - remove NC ? sorry no
12. 01:27:282 (2) - add NC ( hp drain follow) ok

That' all ~

Good luck ~

kosiga wrote:

[Ota's Hard]

1. 00:11:966 (2,3) - I think that I do not match rhythm. remove. and change 00:11:966~00:12:756 slider
2. 00:15:282 (4,5) - ^ remove and 00:15:282~00:15:914 slider
3. 00:44:808 (3) - add one repeat ?
4. 00:45:440 (4) - add NC
5. 00:49:229 (6) - ^
6. 00:51:519 - add note ?
7. 00:51:598 - ^
8. 01:13:861 (7,8) - Please neatly stacked with 01:13:387 (6)

spboxer3 wrote:

[Easy]
need let 01:24:755 - BPM of 95.000
kiai finish at 01:19:703 - ?[/color] ok

[Normal]
kiai end 01:19:072 but It's 01:19:071 [uh... I think 01:19:703 - is better >_>] ok
00:34:229 (2,3) - too Hard partten for Normal~ ok
00:44:334 (1,2) - ^ ok
00:45:755 - to 00:46:545 - need something to add here ok
01:07:071 (1,2,3,4) - too Hard for Normal... ok
01:27:282 (1) - I guess back is at 01:28:386 - >_> ok

[Taiko]
kiai 01:04:547 - but It's 01:04:545 right? ok
01:19:703 - finish kiai? ok

00:04:703 (1,1,2) - confuse rhythm it follow sound perfectly
01:23:176 - add note? ok

(red is unranked rule black is just suggest so you can ignore them~)

Ok that's All
good lucky

spboxer3 wrote:

[Ota's Hard]
01:24:758 - BPM of 95.000 -> 01:24:755 -
01:24:755 (1) - Unsnap spinner
00:51:519 (2,3) - not fit in this way
00:54:440 (1) - finish at 00:54:755 -
00:58:229 (1) - finish at 00:58:545 -
01:19:071 (3,4,5,6,1) - uneven spacing
01:22:861 - to 01:24:758 - need something to add here I want to add something in here but,i don't know what should i add..>.>

Sander-Don wrote:

Here's your taiko mod by request~

d = red, k = blue, D = finisher red, K = finisher blue.

00:23:492 (2) - change to d ok
00:26:019 (2) - ^ ok
00:26:334 (1,2,3,4) - change to k ok
00:28:545 (2) - change to d ok
00:29:808 (1,2,3) - how about adding finish to these? ok
00:33:598 (2) - remove ok
00:41:492 (5) - change to k ok
00:42:124 add k ok
00:50:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about making this 1/3 to fit the music?
first, delete 00:51:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Then switch to 1/3 and add 00:51:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - all red.
finished result should look like this (keep in mind i'm zoomed in all the way. ok


00:53:334 add k ok
00:53:650 add d ok

That's all. The map doesn't fit the music nor vocals very well at all imo >.<;

Flow 1/5
Patterns 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Overall 2/5

Good luck on getting it ranked~

Leorda wrote:

Halo

General
* Inconsistent timing sections http://puu.sh/ayZa ok
* Inconsistent combo color http://puu.sh/ayZh ok
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/ayZr ok

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Easy
00:58:545 (B) - Fill the object and pattern to this breaks, it's no good for adding a breaks without reason..... I made this part a break 'cause I've fill some intro parts at beginning and I think break in this part isn't problem at all
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Normal
00:35:492 (x) - Add note here? ok
00:42:755 (2) - Extend this slider to white tick? follow guitar here, it end at red tick
01:05:492 (3) - Could be weird if tail slider overlap the sliderpath (Nazi) it's okay
01:22:229 (2) - You use short slider with many repeating slider. This issue is tough to tell for beginners when it's end ok
01:27:282 (1) - Remove new combo? I feel unecessary for this I just follow stanza, if other say same thing I'll change it

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Good luck!

-Lennox- wrote:

Are you accepting a guest difficult? Would like to make a Insane diff here.

Edit: Get a timing pro. The timing is horrible.

Leorda wrote:

Ota's Hard
01:24:755 (1) - Unsnapped end spinner
01:22:370 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
01:22:686 (T) - ^
01:22:863 (T) - ^
01:23:337 (T) - ^