- 00:00:000 - Maybe add background blur for the first section of the map same as you did 02:22:772 - here?
- 00:14:889 (1,2,3,1) - This thing is surprisingly pretty hard to read.
- 03:08:429 (1) - Maybe silence the sliderend
- 03:09:634 - Try to make the white background starting at this point, so the screen will be white when the "curtain" goes up, and that white will slowly fadeout until 03:11:823 - . I think that would be nicer than it is now, because currently this white flash seems outta place
- 05:45:874 (4,1,2) - These things are very hard to read correctly. It doesnt work very well here. Id suggest stacking 05:46:203 (2) - under a circle before it, then it must be fine
- The offset seems better at ~865 for me.
- There may be problems because of storyboard explicity. I can't really tell what to do better in this situation, but just in case, if you're going to cut some elements, save the full storyboard and put it in map's description or smth.
Amazing beatmap, great work tokiko-chan