Lenfried- wrote:

hi im really happy to see an odax map going for ranked for std tho you might want to add DANCE CORPS to tags when you get your quali check

good luck~

deadpon3 wrote:

Lenfried- wrote:

hi im really happy to see an odax map going for ranked for std tho you might want to add DANCE CORPS to tags when you get your quali check

good luck~

I wanna add beef stew to tags

Unpredictable wrote:

actually quite happy you mapped a song from odax, finally get to see artists from dance corps on osu. wish it was for mania though

Hydria wrote:

Unpredictable wrote:

actually quite happy you mapped a song from odax, finally get to see artists from dance corps on osu. wish it was for mania though

📝
#stealingthunder

Hydria wrote:

Unpredictable wrote:

actually quite happy you mapped a song from odax, finally get to see artists from dance corps on osu. wish it was for mania though

📝
#stealingthunder

somebody teach me mapping mania fellas

Unpredictable wrote:

somebody teach me mapping mania fellas

ok first you need to get song from sound voltex

then you just make it spammy

and then done. that's the ranked section for ya

-Mo- wrote:

Snapping issues:
== 00:36:863 (2) - Should end on the blue tick. fixed
== 04:46:539 (3) - Snapped to 1/16 for some reason. fixed

Other stuff:
- 00:59:692 (1) - This is misleading since it looks exactly the same as the 1/1 slider from 00:58:521 (1) - (the slider tick is hidden in game because it overlaps with the tail). I would've mapped this by shortening this to 1/2 so as to emphasise the silence from the vocals, and then place a circle on 01:00:131 like all of the other similar drum sounds in this diff. Remapped this part, the slider is now 1/2 with volume set to 40% on it's end, also it's ctrl+g'd so it flows nice with circle stacked on 01:00:277 (3) - aaand also done the same on 04:58:521 (1,2) -
- 02:35:692 (3) - I'd move the NC to start here instead so that it's a bit easier to read the timing (02:34:521 (1,2) is 1/2 apart, seperated by a 1/1 gap, then 02:35:692 (3,1,2) is 1/2 apart). done

- Some of the NCing for the burst sections after the first kiai feels kind of inconsistent, some parts you're using long combos and other times they're short. I'll try to make suggestions from what seems to me fits with the NC pattern you were going for.
- 02:26:765 (5) - +NC
- 02:29:106 (5) - +NC
- 03:02:033 (3) - +NC
- 03:24:790 (7) - +NC
- 03:32:106 (1) - -NC
- 03:33:497 (1) - -NC no reason for these single circle combos imo
- 03:42:863 (1) - -NC
(then again I just checked you went through some NC stuff with DRO so idk how much this conflicts with that) Fixed all mentioned above,
also I've modified some NC's while the map was bubbled and now it's submitted, should be way better but I'll look for some more single NC notes

- 03:08:619 (2) - This seems to be following the same sounds as 03:08:326 (2,1) but one has a circle under it and the other doesn't. Up to you I guess. Big white tick, I think that the sound is important enough to be clickable, don't wanna spam 1/8 without main rhythm fundamentals
- 03:53:546 (1) - Similar to before, I think keeping this to 1/1 is better for emphasising the silence in the song. I wanted a really slow slider here exactly for the silence's emphasize, it looks cool and imo doesn't mislead to any shitmisses, testplayed by a lot of people, they didn't say a bad word about his concept :3
- 03:54:424 (2,1) - 03:55:594 (2,1) - These might as well be arranged close to each other so that the rhythm is easier to read through spacing. It doesn't feel like this sort of patterning is used beforehand, and reading approach circles isn't reasonable since your attention is moved away from the next combo due to how 2 is placed near the edge. They're triangles now, nerfed enough :p

- 04:26:911 (1) - Single circle NC thing. removed nc
- 04:29:399 (3) - +NC somewhere around here. done
- 04:58:521 (1) - Misleading slider thing from before. yup fixed

- 05:04:375 - This kiai section (and a little after it) feels more underwhelming compared to your others, especially given that this is leading up to the map finale. I expected a lot more active 1/4 rhythms, but you ended up replacing quite a few of them with 1/4 and 1/4 reversing sliders instead. Stuff like 05:14:911 (1,2,3) would feel a lot better as a stream given how the rest of this map went. I'd recommend just buffing this final section a bit in general by doing this. Personally I like the copy paste idea on this kiai, the point was to make the triples similiar to each other as the beat stays the same, also the vocals repeat the very same "lalala" for the whole time. Each of the triple is supposed to give the player feel of hitting separated patterns without smooth flow, 05:05:399 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - has a smooth flow because of the drums continuity. It is supposed to repeat untill the song changes into more difficult thing. The first part is supposed to be simple, repetitive just to grow harder in the second one. Not changing it :3

DRO can rebubble once the snapping issues are addressed. Good luck.

1. 03:01:448 (5,1) - Swap NC's because 03:01:448 (5,6,1,2) - They should all be in same combo
2. 00:28:667 (1) - 00:29:838 (1) - Don't need NC's on these 00:31:009 (3) - 00:32:180 (3) - Didn't have any
3. 03:08:326 (2,1,2) - Kinda agree with mo here, circle at 03:08:765 - would be better because the sounds on 03:08:765 - 03:08:472 - are similar
4. 03:24:790 (1,2,3,4) - 03:24:570 (6) - should be parts of same combo since the stream sounds start on 03:24:716 -
5. 03:53:838 - Add a timing point to silence that slider tick
6. 05:20:399 (3) - Two circles just like 05:08:692 (6,7) - because same thing is going on in song

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

1. 03:01:448 (5,1) - Swap NC's because 03:01:448 (5,6,1,2) - They should all be in same combo done
2. 00:28:667 (1) - 00:29:838 (1) - Don't need NC's on these 00:31:009 (3) - 00:32:180 (3) - Didn't have any done
3. 03:08:326 (2,1,2) - Kinda agree with mo here, circle at 03:08:765 - would be better because the sounds on 03:08:765 - 03:08:472 - are similar oki
4. 03:24:790 (1,2,3,4) - 03:24:570 (6) - should be parts of same combo since the stream sounds start on 03:24:716 - alright
5. 03:53:838 - Add a timing point to silence that slider tick done
6. 05:20:399 (3) - Two circles just like 05:08:692 (6,7) - because same thing is going on in song aand done

Preview point was cooler before lol

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Lets give it another shot

Sinnoh wrote:

can you add a silent sliderslide

Guideline:
Buzz sliders should have appropriate delay before the next note. 1/8 and 1/16 sliders should be followed by a 1/4 gap, whereas 1/12 sliders should be followed by a 1/6 gap. This ensures that the hit-window between hit objects is playable.

03:08:326 (2,3) - 1/8 buzz slider gaps at 205 bpm is a bit iffy, should nerf them so they're all with two repeats or four repeats.
There's a lot of 1/8 gaps in the map, can you remove them since there's too many to count fixed

01:32:911 (2) - 01:48:570 (4) - Sounds like a triple here okay now there's 3 triples lol
03:53:546 (1) - Sound stops on the white tick, slider should too k
05:13:302 (1,2,3) - maybe change this for consistency, since it's the only triangle triple in the map No it has to be special, changes whole kiai mapstyle

will need to rebub if the slider thing is applied

Sinnoh wrote:

When life gives you lemons you make beef stew

XVoIR wrote:

finally some GOOD song is getting close to ranked

XVoIR wrote:

o kurw

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

ok

Mishima Yurara wrote:

buffer sliders

Mishima Yurara wrote:

ohNvm they alrdy r

Sinnoh wrote:

Guideline:
Buzz sliders should have appropriate delay before the next note. 1/8 and 1/16 sliders should be followed by a 1/4 gap, whereas 1/12 sliders should be followed by a 1/6 gap. This ensures that the hit-window between hit objects is playable.

03:08:326 (2,3) - 1/8 buzz slider gaps at 205 bpm is a bit iffy, should nerf them so they're all with two repeats or four repeats.
There's a lot of 1/8 gaps in the map, can you remove them since there's too many to count

deetz wrote:

one of your BNs told you to change these, why did you say "fixed" if you didn't?

Realazy wrote:

deetz wrote:

one of your BNs told you to change these, why did you say "fixed" if you didn't?

he probably only fixed the one sinnoh mentioned and thought it was good enough lolz