AAAA - carnation

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Ultima Fox
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, November 4, 2017 at 7:24:44 PM

Artist: AAAA
Title: carnation
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6214kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.12 stars, 391 notes)
  2. Normal (1.97 stars, 191 notes)
  3. Plaudible's Hard (3.31 stars, 326 notes)
  4. Tango (5.39 stars, 503 notes)


Download: AAAA - carnation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - Me
Hard - Plaudible
Insane - Me
Tango - Me
celerih
2017-09-16 10:59 Ultima Fox: bird abuse is wrong
2017-09-16 11:01 celerih: daily reminder that bird abuse is wrong
2017-09-16 11:01 celerih: 00:06:038 (1,2) - use slider instead of mean 1/8
2017-09-16 11:02 celerih: here it's fine because slider right under catches the late hit due to 1/8 00:15:084 (1,2) -
2017-09-16 11:02 celerih: 00:24:788 (2,3,4) - same hee with sliders
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: it beings
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: HSIET$
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: hsnFUJIKED
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: HSIET$
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: hsnFUJIKED
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: ok
2017-09-16 11:03 Ultima Fox: changed both
2017-09-16 11:03 celerih: 00:25:632 (1,1) - stack
2017-09-16 11:04 Ultima Fox: holy fukxcnsf
2017-09-16 11:04 Ultima Fox: fixd
2017-09-16 11:04 celerih: to make the slow down more noticeable give the slider a more distinct shape 00:25:632 (1) -
2017-09-16 11:05 celerih: 1https://celerih.s-ul.eu/xHoLR3gM
2017-09-16 11:05 celerih: when the slider start the ticks still aren't visiblew
2017-09-16 11:05 Ultima Fox: i could
2017-09-16 11:05 Ultima Fox: make 00:24:882 (3) -
2017-09-16 11:05 Ultima Fox: slower
2017-09-16 11:05 celerih: that would also work
2017-09-16 11:07 celerih: 00:44:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2017-09-16 11:07 Ultima Fox: ok done
2017-09-16 11:07 celerih: nice stream tbh
2017-09-16 11:07 celerih: 00:59:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - also clean accel stream
2017-09-16 11:08 Ultima Fox: othx
2017-09-16 11:09 celerih: https://celerih.s-ul.eu/svwqWwqJ
2017-09-16 11:10 celerih: 01:15:132 -
2017-09-16 11:10 celerih: map the piano that's 1/6 before spinner
2017-09-16 11:11 Ultima Fox: done
2017-09-16 11:11 celerih: you have a 1/3 section full of potential and you just do sliders
2017-09-16 11:11 celerih: ._.
2017-09-16 11:11 celerih: 01:31:632 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
2017-09-16 11:12 celerih: from this point on 01:33:132 - should be circles
2017-09-16 11:12 celerih: could be much more more creative
2017-09-16 11:13 celerih: https://celerih.s-ul.eu/Aiwmr0ht
2017-09-16 11:14 Ultima Fox: ok, ill change it at the end because i'm going to have to change most of the part
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: same thing with 1/6 at the end
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: with spinner
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: apart from that nice map
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: gl
2017-09-16 11:15 Ultima Fox: yaya
2017-09-16 11:15 Ultima Fox: thanks daddy
Topic Starter
Ultima Fox

celerih wrote:

2017-09-16 10:59 Ultima Fox: bird abuse is wrong
2017-09-16 11:01 celerih: daily reminder that bird abuse is wrong
2017-09-16 11:01 celerih: 00:06:038 (1,2) - use slider instead of mean 1/8
2017-09-16 11:02 celerih: here it's fine because slider right under catches the late hit due to 1/8 00:15:084 (1,2) -
2017-09-16 11:02 celerih: 00:24:788 (2,3,4) - same hee with sliders
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: it beings
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: HSIET$
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: hsnFUJIKED
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: HSIET$
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: hsnFUJIKED
2017-09-16 11:02 Ultima Fox: ok
2017-09-16 11:03 Ultima Fox: changed both
2017-09-16 11:03 celerih: 00:25:632 (1,1) - stack
2017-09-16 11:04 Ultima Fox: holy fukxcnsf
2017-09-16 11:04 Ultima Fox: fixd
2017-09-16 11:04 celerih: to make the slow down more noticeable give the slider a more distinct shape 00:25:632 (1) -
2017-09-16 11:05 celerih: 1https://celerih.s-ul.eu/xHoLR3gM
2017-09-16 11:05 celerih: when the slider start the ticks still aren't visiblew
2017-09-16 11:05 Ultima Fox: i could
2017-09-16 11:05 Ultima Fox: make 00:24:882 (3) -
2017-09-16 11:05 Ultima Fox: slower
2017-09-16 11:05 celerih: that would also work
2017-09-16 11:07 celerih: 00:44:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2017-09-16 11:07 Ultima Fox: ok done
2017-09-16 11:07 celerih: nice stream tbh
2017-09-16 11:07 celerih: 00:59:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - also clean accel stream
2017-09-16 11:08 Ultima Fox: othx
2017-09-16 11:09 celerih: https://celerih.s-ul.eu/svwqWwqJ
2017-09-16 11:10 celerih: 01:15:132 -
2017-09-16 11:10 celerih: map the piano that's 1/6 before spinner
2017-09-16 11:11 Ultima Fox: done
2017-09-16 11:11 celerih: you have a 1/3 section full of potential and you just do sliders
2017-09-16 11:11 celerih: ._.
2017-09-16 11:11 celerih: 01:31:632 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
2017-09-16 11:12 celerih: from this point on 01:33:132 - should be circles
2017-09-16 11:12 celerih: could be much more more creative
2017-09-16 11:13 celerih: https://celerih.s-ul.eu/Aiwmr0ht
2017-09-16 11:14 Ultima Fox: ok, ill change it at the end because i'm going to have to change most of the part
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: same thing with 1/6 at the end
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: with spinner
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: apart from that nice map
2017-09-16 11:15 celerih: gl
2017-09-16 11:15 Ultima Fox: yaya
2017-09-16 11:15 Ultima Fox: thanks daddy
lol

havent updated yet but yeahjhajhhjhj

edit : updated
RevengeZ
this song isn't Tango
Topic Starter
Ultima Fox
:thinking:
[ - Zekks - ]
M4M from my queue

[Tango]
00:09:132 (1) - When doing wave sliders / 'S' shape sliders, it's important to make sure that your two points in the centre aren't spread out to each other, to fix it you should move the two points so they form a 'Z' in the middle and they form a diagonal line in the middle of the slider
00:11:757 (2,3,4,5) - Instead of hand placing streams and guessing the distance between each object you should use distance snapping so that each object is the same length from each other
00:12:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
(That basically for every stream in the map)
00:15:131 (2) - This slider isn't placed on the downbeat, move the slider 1 tick over using 1/8th, and replace 00:15:084 (1) - with a 1/8th slider
00:17:944 - 00:18:132 - Melody was ignored in this section, I suggest that you change this slider ( 00:17:757 (2) - ) into a kickslider, and place a repeated 1/8th slider in the section I mentioned previously ( 00:17:944 - 00:18:132 - )
00:24:788 (2) - This 1/8th slider is placed a tad bit too early, so move it back 2 ticks and repeat it until the tick before 00:24:882 (3) -
00:40:632 (1,2) - There's no need for 2 objects here because their isn't a new sound on the 2. This would be better as a kickslider
00:58:632 (1) - Make the slider end of this object clickable, pointing this out because there is an ignored sound at 00:58:819
01:00:132 (1) - ^
01:00:788 - Piano was ignored here, place an other hitcircle here
01:02:382 (3) - Change this into a slider that extends until 01:02:569 - Make sure to get rid of 01:02:569 (1) - to do this
01:04:632 (1) - Another case of make the slider end a clickable object
01:06:132 (1) - ^
01:07:632 (1) - ^
01:15:413 (1) - This entire spinner seems to end awkwardly on a blue tick, you should shorten up the spinner a bit and move the end of it to 01:18:507
01:49:444 (2) - A triplet was ignored here, so replace this slider with a repeated 1/8th slider
01:55:632 (1) - Oof, again with the clickable sliderend problem
01:57:132 (1) - ^
01:58:819 - Another triplet ignored here, change 01:58:632 (1) - so it's shorter
02:01:632 (1) - Make the sliderend of this slider clickable by shortening up the slider
02:03:132 (1) - ^
02:04:632 (1) - ^
02:12:413 (1) - Awkward spinner ending, move it 1 tick over so it doesn't end on a blue tick like the other spinner

Overall pretty S M O O T H map, I like it very much
Good luck! <3
Topic Starter
Ultima Fox

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Tango]
00:09:132 (1) - When doing wave sliders / 'S' shape sliders, it's important to make sure that your two points in the centre aren't spread out to each other, to fix it you should move the two points so they form a 'Z' in the middle and they form a diagonal line in the middle of the slider ok
00:11:757 (2,3,4,5) - Instead of hand placing streams and guessing the distance between each object you should use distance snapping so that each object is the same length from each other deadass there is one circle that is off by 0.02x (i did use distance snap)
00:12:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Here it's off by 0.01x : '
(That basically for every stream in the map)
00:15:131 (2) - This slider isn't placed on the downbeat, move the slider 1 tick over using 1/8th, and replace 00:15:084 (1) - with a 1/8th slider i simplified it so it would be easier to play
00:17:944 - 00:18:132 - Melody was ignored in this section, I suggest that you change this slider ( 00:17:757 (2) - ) into a kickslider, and place a repeated 1/8th slider in the section I mentioned previously ( 00:17:944 - 00:18:132 - ) added 1/8 kickslider to respresent the notes
00:24:788 (2) - This 1/8th slider is placed a tad bit too early, so move it back 2 ticks and repeat it until the tick before 00:24:882 (3) - fixed
00:40:632 (1,2) - There's no need for 2 objects here because their isn't a new sound on the 2. This would be better as a kickslider I think there is, it's just a really low note
00:58:632 (1) - Make the slider end of this object clickable, pointing this out because there is an ignored sound at 00:58:819
01:00:132 (1) - ^
01:00:788 - Piano was ignored here, place an other hitcircle here tru
01:02:382 (3) - Change this into a slider that extends until 01:02:569 - Make sure to get rid of 01:02:569 (1) - to do this wut why, to me 3 and 1 sound like distinct sounds not calling for a slider
01:04:632 (1) - Another case of make the slider end a clickable object
01:06:132 (1) - ^
01:07:632 (1) - ^
01:15:413 (1) - This entire spinner seems to end awkwardly on a blue tick, you should shorten up the spinner a bit and move the end of it to 01:18:507 o i messed it up i meant to make it end when the sound ended (fixed)
01:49:444 (2) - A triplet was ignored here, so replace this slider with a repeated 1/8th slider I dont hear a 1/8 triplet..
01:55:632 (1) - Oof, again with the clickable sliderend problem
01:57:132 (1) - ^
01:58:819 - Another triplet ignored here, change 01:58:632 (1) - so it's shorter not too sure how I want to fix this cause I kind of want to keep the pattern, so I'll see what i can do
02:01:632 (1) - Make the sliderend of this slider clickable by shortening up the slider
02:03:132 (1) - ^
02:04:632 (1) - ^
02:12:413 (1) - Awkward spinner ending, move it 1 tick over so it doesn't end on a blue tick like the other spinner i realized i moved all of the sliders so all of the ends of the sliders were messed up so yea fixed

Overall pretty S M O O T H map, I like it very much
Good luck! <3
about the clickable sliderends, I'm not sure I want to have it end on the red tick with a circle on the blue tick because I feel like it plays a lot better and smoother without it. If it becomes a recurring thing in mods in the future, then I'll probably change it but for now I'm going to keep it

Anyway thanks a ton!~ :)
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