Genkishi wrote:

Hi thar!!

[General]
-Delete "starduster" in tags because starduster is the title of the song so no need to put it ok fixed
-uncheck the letterbox during breaks what?

[Normal]
00:37:877 (3)-add clap at the beginning of the slider and then remove the clap at the end of the slider no change :<
00:39:340 (2)-add clap if you do ^ ^
00:41:535 (1)-whistle here? ok fixed.
00:41:535 (1,2,3)-i suggest that you change the beat here..so the player wont be bored when playing..add whistle in (1) and also remove the clap,add whistle instead at the end of the slider (2), replace the clap with whistle in (3)..(do this when you followed my suggestion) I get your point here but I made some different changes.

SPOILER

01:50:681 (7)-move this slider in x:176 y:368..if you do fix the spacing of the following notes ok fixed.
01:54:706 (1):make this slider like this

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fixed.
01:56:169 (2,3,4,5):if you do ^..fix the spacing like this

SPOILER

fixed.
03:25:986 (1)-make the slider like this

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fixed.

[Hard]
00:29:096 (8)-remove clap and add whistle fixed.
00:40:803 (2)-^ fixed.
01:12:084 (3)-symmetry for this slider fixed.
01:19:584 (2)-ugly slider..make it like this

SPOILER

much better fixed.
01:23:242 (2)-^ fixed.
01:45:560 (1)-remove new combo fixed.
02:38:425 (2)-give much effort when it comes to slider!! like this..

SPOILER

lol XD fixed.
02:41:352 (2)-^ fixed.
03:16:657 (2)-ugly slider..make it like this

SPOILER

much better fixed.
03:20:316 (2)-^ fixed.
04:15:011 (2)-as i said in 02:38:425.. fixed.
04:17:938 (2)-^ fixed.
04:43:730 (1)-slider like this

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fixed.


I suggest you use this hit sound http://www.mediafire.com/?elo5z1hnwbhnunn only for "Kiai parts"
I'll be thinking about this one^


Good map

Goodluck KiKo!!!!!!!!! aka cousin lol

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from ingame. Hello~ >w<

General:
approachcircle.png is 130x130. you'd better make it128x128. fixed.

kiai times are different:
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:21:047, ends on 02:50:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:57:633, ends on 04:26:901
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 02:21:047, ends on 02:50:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:57:633, ends on 04:32:572
Kiai #3: Starts on 04:32:755, ends on 04:44:462
Fixed~ Kiai times are now consistent :3

Normal:
Issues
OD 5 is a little high for a diff like this, I suggest -1 at least. fixed.

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:48:852 (4,5,6) - spacing here seems a little smaller compared with others. coolXD fixed.
02:25:803 (2) - maybe make the spacing more consistent. (many places are similar like this, maybe try to make them more beautiful? fixed.
02:27:633 (1,2) - this rhythm pattern feels a little weird, I still prefer slider first then note. (some pattern are similar with this, although I thought they maybe a little werid, but maybe just me and they are totally acceptable so I am gonna to mention them again. made changes.
02:32:023 (6) - 1/4 beats didn't fit here imo. 02:38:242 (2) - this is much better. nah it is also acceptable though. no change :<
04:43:730 (6) - slow down slider isn't quite safe in a normal diff like this.... at least add a new combo? added NC, fixed.

Hitsound
00:36:413 (1) - you started to use claps on the 1st and 3rd white tick, which feel a little weird, cuz you always using 2nd and 4th white ticks clap before and after 00:41:535 (1). So I think it is better to keep the same hitsound pattern here. fixed.
01:33:852 (4) - 01:39:706 (4) - I am not quite sure why you use silence slider tail here, cuz it didn't give me a very good feeling about the silence. added some volume. fixed.
01:34:218 (1) - 01:40:072 (1) - Do you make these spinners have a different volumn on purpose? cuz it is much better to have a same volumn imo of these spinners. fixed.
01:56:169 (3,4,5,6) - I didn't quite agree with the hitsound pattern you got here, 2 finishes seems too much. So here is my ideas: ① delete the finish on 3. add whistle on 5, and delete whistle on 6. or: ② delete the finish on 3, add finish on 5, silence 6. You maybe want to try these^^; made some changes >w<
03:31:291 (1) - why volumn 100? too loud.. made some changes >w<



Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:29:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ...too early to use a pattern like these imo. Deleted some notes~
00:43:364 (1) - this is too far away.... fixed.
00:47:389 (1) - .... owo?

Hitsound
I really think maybe add claps during the kiai make be better, whistle are too weak imo.
00:57:633 (1) - missing clap? I did that for some purpose :3
03:08:608 (2) - whistle? fixed.
03:16:657 (2) - ^(not gonna mention these, just try to make your whistle more consistent. fixed.
03:18:852 (5) - add finish on 03:19:584? fixed.

Aleks719 wrote:

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh
Electricity was turned off and i lost my long mod :<

i will write all shorter:

Folder
remove hidden folder "originals" with approach circle from map's folder
remove thumbs.db from SB folder

hitcircle.png is not a circle. note is bigger than circle

cool, fixed all. and for hitcircle, I'm gonna delete it :< I just copied this from other vocaloid maps but you said it's not a circle, so I think deleting it would be better :3

SB
I wrote a lot of text here...
sb is good, but code is so messy and contains tons of useless lines. also loops can make it even shorter. Use notepad please.
Write me in game for fixing or i could remake code for you later, but only if you can't
I don't know how to use notepad in storyboarding... TAT

General
Turn off letterboxes, cuz of SB in breaks no change for the first break cause there's no SB there :3, and I think that's the only break with letterbox? (I'm not really sure what letterbox means)
Tick rate 2 in Hard please fixed~
I got offset 552 (-8 from yours). Resnap objects, kiai, sections, sb. I need help for this one, for I don't quite know things about resnapping ><
Not sure in these tags : "hatsune miku vocaloid". fixed~

Recheck is possible after theses fixes.

I'm not yet finished fixing all because I need to ask some questions><
Maybe I'll ask you sometime when I see you in-game.
Anyways thanks for modding

1. Song folder - SB - q.png「闇闇に飲まれないように」　⇒change 「暗闇に飲まれないように」、 v.png「そうやって消えて?くなる」　⇒change「そうやって消えて無くなる」 http://puu.sh/gJ0C
2. Song Setup - Source - Vocaloid2⇒ maybe 「JimmyThumb P」 is correct. and vocaloid2 move to tags. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26222

1. 00:29:828 (1) - spacing too far? (0.99x)
2. 00:41:535 (7) - add NC ( too long NC for normal diff >< )
3. 01:11:535 - remove green line
4. 01:25:803 (5) - add NC ?
5. 01:33:852 (4,1) - Suggestion of rhythm: 4slider end 01:34:218 , and 1spinner start 01:34:401
6. 01:34:035 - remove green line
7. 01:39:706 (4,1) - 01:33:852 (4,1) same Suggestion
8. 01:39:889 - remove green line
9. 01:48:852 (4) - add NC ?
10. 02:20:316 - green line - hitsound S - I prefer use the S:1 ( same as hard diff )
11. 02:38:242 - remove green line
12. 02:47:755 (4) - add NC ?
13. 03:22:876 (5) - ^
14. 03:56:352 - remove green line
15. 03:56:901 - same 02:20:316
16. 04:24:341 (4) - add NC ?
17. 04:38:608 (3) - add NC and 04:40:438 (1) - remove NC

1. 00:27:267 (6) - add NC ?
2. 00:37:511 (4) - ^
3. 00:38:608 (7) - remove NC and 00:38:974 (1) - add NC ?
4. 00:41:169 (3) - add NC ( DS change point )
5. 00:42:999 - remove green line
6. 00:43:730 (2) - add whistle ( same as 03:27:267 (4) repeat of the slider)
7. 01:24:889 (3) - Suggestion of rhythm: http://puu.sh/gJlT ( same as 01:19:584 (2,3) )
8. 01:33:586 - remove green line
9. 01:34:218 (1) - Suggestion of rhythm:spinner start 01:34:401 and add note to 01:34:218
10. 01:39:889 - remove green line
11. 01:40:072 (1) - 01:34:218(1) same Suggestion
12. 01:50:864 - remove green line
13. 02:22:145 (1) - remove NC and 02:23:242 (2) - add NC
14. 02:32:572 (1) - remove NC and 02:32:755 (2) - add NC
15. 02:38:242 - remove green line
16. 03:21:962 (3) - 01:24:889 same Suggestion
17. 03:28:364 - move Break time http://puu.sh/gJtE ⇒move like this http://puu.sh/gJu4
18. 03:56:352 - remove green line ?
19. 03:58:730 (1) - remove NC and 03:59:827 (2) - add NC
20. 04:06:413 (4) - add NC ( same as 02:29:828 (1) )
21. 04:09:157 (1) - remove NC and 04:09:340 (2) - add NC
22. 04:30:742 (4) - add NC and 04:31:657 (1) - remove NC and 04:32:755 (3) - add NC ?

kosiga wrote:

hi~ Kirino Kousaka Hello!~

from m4m queue~ sorry for late lol I don't mind, It's okay

here my mod~

[General]

1. Song folder - SB - q.png「闇闇に飲まれないように」　⇒change 「暗闇に飲まれないように」、 v.png「そうやって消えて?くなる」　⇒change「そうやって消えて無くなる」 http://puu.sh/gJ0C hmm, I have to contact the one who made the lyrics for this XD
2. Song Setup - Source - Vocaloid2⇒ maybe 「JimmyThumb P」 is correct. and vocaloid2 move to tags. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26222

Fixed~

[Normal]

1. 00:29:828 (1) - spacing too far? (0.99x) Fixed~
2. 00:41:535 (7) - add NC ( too long NC for normal diff >< ) Fixed~
3. 01:11:535 - remove green line Fixed~
4. 01:25:803 (5) - add NC ? oh okXD Fixed~
5. 01:33:852 (4,1) - Suggestion of rhythm: 4slider end 01:34:218 , and 1spinner start 01:34:401 Fixed~
6. 01:34:035 - remove green line Fixed~
7. 01:39:706 (4,1) - 01:33:852 (4,1) same Suggestion Fixed~
8. 01:39:889 - remove green line Fixed~
9. 01:48:852 (4) - add NC ? oh okXD Fixed~
10. 02:20:316 - green line - hitsound S - I prefer use the S:1 ( same as hard diff ) Fixed~
11. 02:38:242 - remove green line Fixed~
12. 02:47:755 (4) - add NC ? Fixed~
13. 03:22:876 (5) - ^ Fixed~
14. 03:56:352 - remove green line Fixed~
15. 03:56:901 - same 02:20:316 Fixed~
16. 04:24:341 (4) - add NC ? Fixed~
17. 04:38:608 (3) - add NC and 04:40:438 (1) - remove NC Fixed~

[Hard]

1. 00:27:267 (6) - add NC ? Fixed~
2. 00:37:511 (4) - ^ Fixed~
3. 00:38:608 (7) - remove NC and 00:38:974 (1) - add NC ? [color=#F4000]made changes~[/color]
4. 00:41:169 (3) - add NC ( DS change point ) Fixed~
5. 00:42:999 - remove green line Fixed~
6. 00:43:730 (2) - add whistle ( same as 03:27:267 (4) repeat of the slider) Fixed~
7. 01:24:889 (3) - Suggestion of rhythm: http://puu.sh/gJlT ( same as 01:19:584 (2,3) ) Fixed~
8. 01:33:586 - remove green line Fixed~
9. 01:34:218 (1) - Suggestion of rhythm:spinner start 01:34:401 and add note to 01:34:218 Fixed~
10. 01:39:889 - remove green line Fixed~
11. 01:40:072 (1) - 01:34:218(1) same Suggestion Fixed~
12. 01:50:864 - remove green line Fixed~
13. 02:22:145 (1) - remove NC and 02:23:242 (2) - add NC Fixed~
14. 02:32:572 (1) - remove NC and 02:32:755 (2) - add NC Fixed~
15. 02:38:242 - remove green line Fixed~
16. 03:21:962 (3) - 01:24:889 same Suggestion Fixed~
17. 03:28:364 - move Break time http://puu.sh/gJtE ⇒move like this http://puu.sh/gJu4 Fixed~
18. 03:56:352 - remove green line ? Fixed~
19. 03:58:730 (1) - remove NC and 03:59:827 (2) - add NC Fixed~
20. 04:06:413 (4) - add NC ( same as 02:29:828 (1) ) Fixed~
21. 04:09:157 (1) - remove NC and 04:09:340 (2) - add NC Fixed~
22. 04:30:742 (4) - add NC and 04:31:657 (1) - remove NC and 04:32:755 (3) - add NC ? Fixed~

[SB]
Deficit: Suggestion/nazi

SPOILER

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M,0,146169,152023,462,330,397,331
F,0,146901,151291,1
F,0,151291,152023,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\n.png",320,240
F,0,152023,152755,0,1
M,0,152023,157877,179,330,244,328
F,0,152755,,1
F,0,152755,157145,1
F,0,157145,157877,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\o.png",320,240
F,0,157877,158608,0,1
M,0,157877,170316,439,304,267,299
F,0,158608,169584,1
F,0,169584,170316,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\p.png",320,240
F,0,187877,188608,0,1
M,0,187877,192999,224,355,270,353
F,0,188608,192267,1
F,0,192267,192999,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\q.png",320,240
F,0,192999,193730,0.0118399,1 ⇒ change F,0,192999,193730,0,1
M,0,192999,199584,359,342,279,341
F,0,193730,198852,1
F,0,198852,199584,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\r.png",320,240
F,0,199584,200316,0,1
M,0,199584,204706,295,287,342,285
F,0,200316,203974,1
F,0,203974,204706,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\s.png",320,240
F,0,204706,205438,0,1
M,0,204706,209096,414,306,364,305
F,0,205438,208364,1
F,0,208364,209096,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t.png",320,240
F,0,210560,211291,0,1
M,0,210560,216413,270,280,318,280
F,0,211291,215681,1
F,0,215681,216413,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\_w_1.png",320,240
F,0,20316,21047,0,1
M,0,20316,23974,159,90,208,90
F,0,21047,23242,1
F,0,23242,23974,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\u.png",320,240
F,0,216413,217145,0,1
M,0,216413,222267,338,409,306,408
F,0,217145,221535,1
F,0,221535,222267,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\v.png",320,240
F,0,222267,222999,0,1
M,0,222267,226657,303,332,337,333
F,0,222999,225925,1
F,0,225925,226657,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\w.png",320,240
F,0,226657,227389,0,1
M,0,226657,234706,420,408,329,408
F,0,227389,233974,1
F,0,233974,234706,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\x.png",320,240
F,0,236901,237633,0,1
M,0,236901,242023,237,280,295,278
F,0,237633,241291,1
F,0,241291,242023,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\y.png",320,240
F,0,242755,243486,0,1
M,0,242755,247877,410,317,352,315
F,0,243486,247145,1
F,0,247145,247877,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z.png",320,240
F,0,248608,249340,0.02208008,1 ⇒ change F,0,248608,249340,0,1
M,0,248608,253730,232,359,289,361
F,0,249340,252999,1
F,0,252999,253730,1,0.001600037 ⇒change F,0,252999,253730,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z+.png",320,240
F,0,254462,255194,0.005119934,1 ⇒change F,0,254462,255194,0,1
M,0,254462,259584,397,407,341,407
F,0,255194,258852,1
F,0,258852,259584,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,260316,261047,0,1
M,0,260316,265438,167,248,238,245
F,0,261047,264706,1
F,0,264706,265438,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,266169,266901,0,1
M,0,266169,271291,471,277,396,276
F,0,266901,270560,1
F,0,270560,271291,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,272023,272755,0,1
M,0,272023,277145,225,320,287,321
F,0,272755,276413,1
F,0,276413,277145,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,277877,278608,0,1
M,0,277877,282999,338,402,282,401
F,0,278608,282267,1
F,0,282267,282999,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\z++.png",320,240
F,0,283730,284462,0,1
M,0,283730,285925,399,277,412,276
F,0,284462,285194,1
F,0,285194,285925,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

and add Suggestion :
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"whitebg.png",320,240
F,0,47389,50316,0.5,0
For this SB stuff above, I'll have to ask some help from Aleks719 lolXD
That's all~

nice map~ Star☆~ Thanks >w<

Good luck ~

AngelEyE wrote:

sorry for mistake
LRC fixed

Aleks719 wrote:

irc help, some learning about SB, timing, stuff

http://puu.sh/gTit <= SB

part of irc mod

...
18:12 <Aleks719> : did you make full submit after new osb file?
18:12 <Kirino Kousaka> : yes :3
18:13 <Kirino Kousaka> : why? didn't it change? :<
18:13 <Aleks719> : no...
18:13 <Aleks719> : wait i'll redl
18:13 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok :3
18:13 <Kirino Kousaka> : maybe I should re upload to be sure :3
18:13 <Aleks719> : wait
18:13 <Aleks719> : i'm 1st
18:14 <Kirino Kousaka> : okXD
18:14 <Aleks719> : yes, old sb
18:14 <Aleks719> : check your osb
18:14 <Aleks719> : size of it?
18:14 <Aleks719> : in kb?
18:14 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok I'll re upload :<
18:14 <Aleks719> : wait
18:15 <Aleks719> : size of osb
18:15 <Aleks719> : ?
18:15 <Kirino Kousaka> : kb
18:15 <Kirino Kousaka> : 10.4 kb
18:15 <Aleks719> : yes
18:15 <Aleks719> : wrong
18:15 <Aleks719> : go to folder
18:15 <Kirino Kousaka> : I should fix it again ok wait
18:15 <Aleks719> : remove it
18:16 <Kirino Kousaka> : deleted.
18:16 <Aleks719> : i can send you mine again
18:16 <Aleks719> : if you lost link
18:16 <Aleks719> : or better in archive?
18:16 <Kirino Kousaka> : umm wait I'll just scroll upXD
18:16 <Aleks719> : ok
18:17 <Aleks719> : save as
18:17 <Aleks719> : save in your folder
18:17 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:17 <Aleks719> : page - save as
18:17 <Aleks719> : done?
18:19 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:19 <Aleks719> : quit from your map and go to it again.click on design : http://puu.sh/gTsO . How many "whitebg" you have?
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : 1
18:20 <Aleks719> : iyes
18:20 <Aleks719> : *yess
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : wow why one :<
18:20 <Aleks719> : now it works right
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : oh ok XD
18:20 <Aleks719> : no need in tons
18:20 <Aleks719> : weeeeell
18:20 <Aleks719> : now
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : I see :3
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : timing points~
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : XD
18:20 <Aleks719> : no
18:20 <Aleks719> : hitcircle
18:20 <Kirino Kousaka> : what :<
18:20 <Aleks719> : use this :
18:21 <Aleks719> : wait
18:21 <Aleks719> : i'll find
18:21 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:21 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/gTtz
18:22 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok fixed :3
18:22 <Aleks719> : welll
18:23 <Aleks719> : pink arrow...
18:23 <Kirino Kousaka> : why :<
18:23 <Aleks719> : ok
18:23 <Aleks719> : well
18:23 <Kirino Kousaka> : XD
18:23 <Aleks719> : Hard
18:23 <Aleks719> : open osu
18:23 <Aleks719> : in notepad
18:24 <Aleks719> : SliderMultiplier:1.99999990463257
18:24 <Kirino Kousaka> : opened
18:24 <Aleks719> : 2.0
18:24 <Aleks719> : instead of 1.99999999
18:24 <Aleks719> : neeeeeext
18:24 <Aleks719> : scroll
18:24 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:24 <Aleks719> : until colours
18:25 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok
18:25 <Aleks719> : add line " SliderBorder : 255,255,255 "
18:25 <Aleks719> : below colours
18:25 <Kirino Kousaka> : below Combo4?
18:25 <Aleks719> : yes http://puu.sh/gTuo
18:26 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:26 <Aleks719> : add same line for normal
18:26 <Aleks719> : in notepad
18:27 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:27 <Aleks719> : quit from map in osu
18:27 <Aleks719> : after that
18:28 <Aleks719> : save files
18:28 <Aleks719> : in notepad
18:28 <Kirino Kousaka> : saved.
18:28 <Aleks719> : after that full submit. call me back after~
18:28 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:34 <Kirino Kousaka> : done :3
18:37 <Aleks719> : looks correct now
18:38 <Aleks719> : weeeeeeell
18:38 <Aleks719> : diffs
18:38 <Kirino Kousaka> : thank goodness >w<
18:38 <Aleks719> : open normal
18:38 <Aleks719> : let's start from it
18:39 <Kirino Kousaka> : yay >w<
18:39 <Aleks719> : 01:34:210 - you tried to fix it,right?
18:40 <Kirino Kousaka> : yes :3
18:40 <Aleks719> : yes, you made all correct
18:40 <Aleks719> : i'll explain one more time
18:40 <Aleks719> : for future
18:40 <Kirino Kousaka> : oki :3
18:40 <Aleks719> : as example, next : 01:37:503 -
18:41 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/gTxX
18:41 <Aleks719> : you see, green line not at red, yes?
18:41 <Kirino Kousaka> : yes
18:42 <Aleks719> : set cursor on red
18:42 <Kirino Kousaka> : set :3
18:42 <Aleks719> : timing - timing setup panel
18:43 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok :3
18:43 <Aleks719> : well, use current time
18:43 <Aleks719> : and check in editor
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : oh shocks
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : EPIC.
18:44 <Aleks719> : lines should be
18:44 <Aleks719> : one on one
18:44 <Aleks719> :
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : now that's what I'm looking for.
18:44 <Kirino Kousaka> : >w<
18:44 <Aleks719> : fix others
18:44 <Aleks719> : and don't forget about sliders
18:45 <Kirino Kousaka> : one by one?
18:45 <Aleks719> : with slowdowns!
18:45 <Aleks719> : yes
18:45 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok orz
18:45 <Kirino Kousaka> : XD
18:45 <Aleks719> : when all will be fixed - standard submit
18:45 <Aleks719> : that's all
18:46 <Kirino Kousaka> : ok I'll call you when I'm done or when i have some question :3
18:46 <Aleks719> : oki

yay thanks for helping me and stars >w<
Really helpful

hoLysoup wrote:

marked. I will remember to mod this soon :>

Hanyuu wrote:

Normal:

01:34:393 (1) - finish fixed~
01:40:247 (1) - finish fixed~
01:56:893 (4) - whistle fixed~
01:57:625 (5) - a finish sound go here too because i think the custom sound is very fitting :3.
The timing section is very low volume though.. so ad a new one for this circle with 50% or something to make it better to hear if you want to give this a finish sound. fixed~
03:07:869 (1) - this clap sound removed~ XD fixed~

04:10:430 (3) - finish on start no change for this one :<
04:11:527 (4) - finish fixed~
04:14:454 (1) - finish fixed~

I think on this part you should just keep with the normal sound samples. It's a bit better here than the custom
04:34:576 (2) - finish on that middle part
04:37:503 (2) - ^
04:38:600 (1) - finish on end
fixed all^ and remapped/made some few changes on "04:41:161" up to the end.

Hard:

01:10:064 (2) - the standard finish on end of slider fixed~
01:16:649 (2) - forgot whistle at end :p fixed~
02:20:308 (1) - whistle on the start. It does not really matter i think but you did that in the normal diff so i thought i point it out . see also here 3:56:893 fixed~
02:31:466 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try a sound section with normal sample and 35% volume for those notes (remove whistles) see also here 4:07:869 fixed~
02:37:869 (1,2) - those sliders you used here arent fitting so good.
The #2 should be on the white tick and the #1 extended to the blue. As it is now #2 sounds to go off too early No change for this one cause I'm not so sure :<


Great map and i don't think there is really anything wrong with or to mod! Really? >w<
So i gave as much as advice to improve it anymore. I also added a custom soft hit sound in the attachement if you like to use it.
Okay that is not working i don't know why... here is a download link then: http://puu.sh/h7R8. Okay!~ fixed. :3
Unfortunetely i have no kudosus star to give for this map i would awww .___. thanks anyway

Try finding someone to approve :p I will~ >w<

hoLysoup wrote:

hihi~
I'm sorry I take so long~

[Hard]
Unrankable thing: you are using more than 3 SV in this difficulty please fix this.
02:20:308 (1) - it's right here, you should just use 0.75x. thanks!~ fixed!~

00:57:625 (1) - how come clap is missing here? this is intentional? yes it is... quite XD
01:10:064 (2) - NC this because the SV is quite slow compared to from start until now. 01:09:515 (1) - and then you can remove NC from this if you'd like or not it's both fine. Removed on "01:09:515 (1)". Fixed.
03:24:332 (6) - move the 2nd waypoint to x:160 y:268? makes the slider parallel to the long one. I find this a bit hard to do
03:54:698 (1) - for this spinner, my suggestion is that use 40% volume for the spinner and then silence the spinner end(5%). It creates a good effect for the upcoming kiai section. also 75% volume for this spinner is too loud. sure, fixed

[Normal]
Unrankable thing: you are using more than 3 SV in this difficulty please fix this.
03:56:893 (1) - it's right here, you should just use 0.75x. thanks!~ fixed!~

00:41:527 (1,2) - maybe move (2) away from (1)? for example move it somewhere on the right side because the rhythm could be confusing when the spacing seem close. Fixed!~
02:50:308 - make kiai end here please oops, my bad, I must have did something that caused this thanks~ fixed~
03:29:820 (1,2) - maybe remove these 2 beats..? because you always follow the vocals but these 2 don't :< it looks better if they're here, no change :<
03:54:698 (1) - same spinner suggestion as Hard diff Fixed!~
04:43:356 (7,1) - fix spacing please~ Aimod said there's nothing wrong with the spacing :<

ok that's all!
there's enough stars so I will save one :> aw okay
good luck! hai!~

wcx19911123 wrote:

yo

[General]
offset is really off to me , 562(+10) is much better fixed~
need to add vocaloid to tags fixed~
plz cancel letterbox during breaks , or it looks very weird at break time fixed~
hitsound is kinda quiet imo , volume up a bit? It seems fine to me :<

[Normal]
00:31:283 (4) - this direction is confusing , it is hard to know how many times the slider repeats made some changes~
02:19:576 - remove whistle here , it sound kinda odd to me fixed~
02:32:015 (7) - this kind of slider is hard to read for newbies imo , I suggest you not repeat it , or at least not stack it with circle fixed~ hitcircle unstacked.
04:08:600 (7) - ^ fixed~
04:31:649 (3) - yes , so something like this , this is much better than ^ okay~
04:43:722 (1) - I strongly suggest not to slow down the slider here , it doesn't fit the song at all and it is really confusing , even it has a slider tick fixed~

[Hard]
difficulty is too high , at least AR-1 and OD-1 plz Many suggests that I should have AR 8, only OD-1
00:47:381 - 01:10:064 - this part is too loud imo , volume down a bit plz fixed~
01:23:052 - add note? fixed~
02:22:137 (4) - this sldier's direction is confusing , too made some changes~
02:31:466 - 02:32:564 - there notes are too quiet imo , volume up a bit plz fixed~
03:20:125 - add note? fixed~
03:52:137 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try normal hitsound here? maybe volume down a bit fixed~
03:58:722 (4) - same as before made some changes~
04:08:052 - same.. fixed~

ok , diffs are rankble , but
I just think rhyme is really boring , you can try to follow more things , not only vocal or drums
and notes is really too closed to each other , I suggest you increase spacing a bit , and put some jumps somewhere(and don't jump randomly, jump to fit the song) , then I think the map would be much better
seems this need more works , anyway , good luck thanks~

M a n a wrote:

Random mod :3

[Hard]

OD-1? Because this is relax song and more fit IMO >< fixed!~
00:39:708 (2) - Maybe make it more pretier like this? fixed!~

SPOILER

00:57:635 (1) - Missing clap? okay fixed~ since there are lots of mods telling thisXD
01:12:086 (5,1) - Same as 03:09:159 (4,1) what? No change.
01:19:586 (2) - Same as 03:16:659 (2) ^
01:23:244 (3) - ^ ^
01:56:354 - Maybe break start at 01:57:635? I can't because they told me to get rid of letterboxes. No change.
02:32:025 (5) - Maybe add hitsound here? Added "whistle"~
03:09:159 (4,1) - Maybe make it like this? made some little changes~

SPOILER

03:16:659 (2) - ^ Sorry no change :<

SPOILER

03:20:318 (3) - ^ ^
03:54:708 (1) - Remove whistle? okay~
04:20:683~04:42:818 - The hitsounds are weird. Because at 03:56:903~04:19:952 you use only finish sound. and at this part you only use whistle sound ><. It sounds weird to me. Make it consistent? Hmm, I actually made this on purpose. I used finishes in the main part of the chorus as it's "climax" and my reason for putting these whistles instead of finishes in the ending part because it is like the "falling action" part of the map. No changes made.

[Normal]

01:30:927 (4) - Don't stack it? Previous mods says that I should make something like this, but I kinda agreed to your point. Fixed~
03:28:001 (4) - ^ ^
03:54:708 (1) - Remove whistle? Fixed~
Nice~

That's all~
Nice map! Thanks!~ >w<

Thanks for your mod M a n a!~
And don't worry about your 0 kd, you now have 1 left

[Hard] : project diva extend Vocaloid2
[Normal] : Vocaloid project diva extend Vocaloid2

NoHitter wrote:

Just a quick glance through...

[General]
Your tags in the two diffs are inconsistent. fixed!~
That soft-hitclap sounds "delayed" since it had some intro time before the main sound. I tried cropping it to make it sound more on time. Here. thanks! fixed!~

[Normal]
00:35:318 (5,6) - I suggest you spread this out instead of stacking. IMO it'll look better if you do.fixed!~
00:40:805 (6) - IMO remove the clap and just place the finish. fixed!~
00:42:086 (1) - Add whistle on repeat. It already has
00:43:001 () - Add note here? Sounds empty. fixed!~
00:44:464 () - I suggest you add a spinner with a finish here, and make it end at 00:47:391. It fits the song, and makes the break start at a more appropriate time IMO. fixed!~
01:30:927 (4) - Make this into a slider which extends to 01:31:293? maybe not, to follow the vocals
01:49:586 (3,4) - Perhaps rearrange the pattern? It doesn't look as neat IMO. May I suggest this? fixed!~
03:56:903 -> 04:26:171 - Copy paste D: lolwhy D:

[Hard]
00:44:464 () - Add a spinner like the one I suggested in Normal? The break's short anyway. Alternatively, just move the break to 00:44:464 like this fixed!~ but they said I should get rid of these, but I prefer having it.
01:13:366 (1) - Might as well turn off grid snap and distance snap and blanket this correctly. fixed!~
01:31:293 () - Remove break? It's just short anyway. fixed!~
03:10:440 (1) - Same as 01:13:366 (1). fixed!~
03:29:830 () - Map this part like in Normal? I think it's okay as it is
03:56:903 -> 04:26:171 - Copy paste... lol...

wmfchris wrote:

owo

[General]
Inconsistancy in tags

[Hard] : project diva extend Vocaloid2
[Normal] : Vocaloid project diva extend Vocaloid2

fixed!~
- try to have shorter breaks. I'll see...

[Hard]
00:28:001 (3) - left 1 grid fixed!~
00:44:098 (3) - ^ fixed!~
01:09:525 - the son indicates an 1/8 here, try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/283828 (ref to the timeline only, not the note arrangement) fixed!~
01:10:074 (1) - mute the slidertick fixed!~
01:31:110 - instead of break, making some 1/4 streams may works well here Good Idea~ fixed!~
03:18:854 (5) - remove whistle at the end, whistle at next (3) beginning fixed!~

I will try to point out some general problems rather than modding the rest:

Hitsound:
- whistles are often too loud for me, they may cover the music.
- Make some variation of sound according to music, people (especially taiko players) will fall asleep if you put them regularly for the whole song (making impression that the emotion of the song is the same all time which is not good)
- Sometimes the slidertick sounds nice with music, but you'll need some mute some of them like long vocals and they may not need that slidertick sound.

Pattern:
- Same as hitsound, make more variation (atm your diff has even less variation than the music ._.) like 1/8s as indicated, and take 00:47:391 - as example, instead of infinite streams, you may consider x xxx xxxxxxx x or some other variation. If you hear them carefully, there are soft and strong drum sounds, and they don't really fill up the 1/4 spaces. You can make up your own pattern referring to those music.

guess you'll need some remapping, but you've got some sense of mapping already, so good luck~

Starry wrote:

WOO! I love this song, So here is my mod

[Normal]

00:39:708 (3,4,5,6) - I recommend you put a slider here instead. It fits more. fixed!~
01:51:781 (1,2) - Remove note 2 and reverse 1, It'll make the next note easier to read and the flow will be better. fixed!~
01:54:708 (1) - Make this slider face down? The direction of the slider is confusing fixed!~
02:32:025 (7) - Finish? It feels like its missing. sure~ fixed!~
02:36:781 (7) - Flip Horizontally ( Ctrl + H) The position of this slider is nasty. made some changes~
03:51:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part really needs hit sounds. Consider putting them here. made some changes~

[Hard]

00:32:757 (1) - New combo here instead fixed!~
01:56:903 - 01:57:635 - Consider mapping this and putting this http://puu.sh/ouPO fixed!~
02:22:147 (4) - Make this straight? I don't see any reason on putting the slider facing that direction the reason why it's facing there is because it's part of the design. Sorry no change.
02:44:281 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can literally put a spinner on that whole thing, but that would be 1 long spinner. I think that's a good idea, fixed~
03:52:147 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as on Normal, Consider putting hit sounds (Great Place for Them) nope, it's good as it is. No change.

Your map has potential, Keep up the good work~ Thanks!

abalee wrote:

[Normal]

00:44:464 (1) - a normal soft-finish also fine i think. okay fixed!~

others' should be fine.

abalee wrote:

bubble.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Hello there hello :3
[General]
Wasn't this song also in Project Diva 2nd's DLC? if so maybe add that to tags as well. I'm really sorry but I don't know, this isn't highly necessary right? So maybe we don't need. :3

[Hard]
01:09:525 (1,2,1) - Not sure about this, kinda looks a bit clustered to me, a triple stack with the next circle and slider decently spaced would work way better imo I agree.XD Made some changes~
03:29:555 - Isn't this break kinda short, you could map some notes to the instruments imo. Mapped this part~
04:03:122 (7,2) - 2 sliders almost in a row with different ammount of repeats can be really unintuitive, if anything just make the 1st slider intro a triplet. I'm really not sure on what to do here now ma'am. No changes for now.

[Normal]
01:10:805 (1) - Remove this clap, finish itself is enough. Fixed!~
03:50:318 (X) - Add a note? Good idea, fixed!~

Sakura Hana wrote:

All fine now, wish i could do more for you but this is all i can do for now
Rebubbled~