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Shunao

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-09-15T12:49:01+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 3 avril 2018 at 03:12:42

Artist: majiko
Title: Sarishinohara
Tags: みきとP mikitop CONTRAST akaito cut version ShogunMoon eLy Kalibe
BPM: 135
Filesize: 3891kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (2,31 stars, 280 notes)
Easy (1,29 stars, 113 notes)
eLy's Insane (3,95 stars, 398 notes)
Hard (3,12 stars, 370 notes)
Kalibe's Insane (4,18 stars, 387 notes)
Normal (1,75 stars, 226 notes)

Download: majiko - Sarishinohara
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beautiful banner by -Yukie-!~

Previous banner by Luisina!

#6

Easy by me

Normal by me

Advanced by me

Hard by me

Insane by eLy

Insane by Kalibe
Download Extra diff by [ L u k a s ] here

Metadata

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=77GFzel5Jl8
http://www.majiko.net/discography/?id=5

Last edited by Shunao 2018-04-03T01:13:05+00:00, edited 101 times in total.

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-09-15T13:06:57+00:00

I like the current artist name uwu

aha

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=77GFzel5Jl8

fk I'm late

Last edited by Chihara Minori 2017-09-15T13:11:52+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-09-15T13:08:37+00:00

changed w

edit: thanks for the link, i added some tags!~ c;

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2017-09-18T20:45:40+00:00

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-10-19T20:11:36+00:00

update from Log's irc

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54156
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 62822,68600
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Sarishinohara
TitleUnicode:サリシノハラ
Artist:Majiko
ArtistUnicode:まじ娘
Creator:ShogunMoon
Version:Lukas' Insane
Source:
Tags:みきとP mikito p CONTRAST
BeatmapID:1424842
BeatmapSetID:669138

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2017-10-19T20:14:39+00:00

irc'd with l u k a s

irc log

20:57 [ L u k a s ]: this map sux
20:57 *[ L u k a s ] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/s/669138 Majiko - Sarishinohara [Lukas' Insane]]
20:57 [ L u k a s ]: too pp
21:00 Log Off Now: lol
21:00 Log Off Now: free dt
21:00 Log Off Now: i swear the offset on that map is wrong tho
21:00 Log Off Now: feels like its 10ms too late
21:00 [ L u k a s ]: you checked it? owo
21:01 [ L u k a s ]: idk i didnt time it Sho did
21:01 Log Off Now: i just 94% acc fc'd it
21:01 Log Off Now: LOL
21:01 [ L u k a s ]: my diff?
21:01 Log Off Now: ya
21:01 [ L u k a s ]: okay damn
21:01 [ L u k a s ]: is it cool? :3
21:01 Log Off Now: ya
21:01 Log Off Now: altho i dont get ur emphasis on some parts
21:01 Log Off Now: lmfao
21:01 [ L u k a s ]: hm
21:01 [ L u k a s ]: ?
21:01 [ L u k a s ]: gimmick map
21:02 Log Off Now: holy
21:02 Log Off Now: 01:01:489 (1,2,1,2) -
21:02 Log Off Now: 01:15:266 (5,1,2,1) - nice copy paste
21:03 Log Off Now: u cant hide from m e
21:03 [ L u k a s ]: gimmick
21:03 Log Off Now: 01:34:600 (4,5) - yuge spacing here
21:03 [ L u k a s ]: omgggggggggggg
21:03 [ L u k a s ]: this is so cool with hs
21:04 Log Off Now: 01:34:822 (5,1) - tiny spacing here
21:04 Log Off Now: but the vocal is waaaaaaaay stronger on (5,1)
21:04 Log Off Now: 01:35:267 (1,2) - same with 01:35:711 (2,3) -
21:04 [ L u k a s ]: i wasn't emphasizing the vocals
21:04 [ L u k a s ]: but yeah
21:04 [ L u k a s ]: ima fix
21:04 Log Off Now: and smaller spacing here 01:38:822 (1,2,3) - than the rest of the kiai when the build here is where imo there should be yuge spacing
21:05 Log Off Now: 01:45:266 (4,5) - could all be circles
21:05 Log Off Now: for the v o c a l y a k n o w
21:05 Log Off Now: since theres no differenciation to what you're following there
21:05 Log Off Now: 01:45:932 (1,2) - if you do that ^ i would maybe make this a slider tho
21:05 [ L u k a s ]: i didn't make it too clear that i'm not trying to follow vocals
21:06 [ L u k a s ]: 00:22:378 - in this part i wasn't following strictly the vocals
21:06 Log Off Now: o
21:06 Log Off Now: ya you might wanna make it more obvious then lol
21:06 Log Off Now: 01:47:488 (8) - also make these two clickable
21:06 Log Off Now: 00:22:378 - ye i get this part you're not following vocals
21:06 [ L u k a s ]: why though
21:07 Log Off Now: because its the strongest part of that little drum fill
21:07 Log Off Now: or snare pattern
21:07 [ L u k a s ]: okie
21:07 Log Off Now: or ctrl + g the whole rhythm
21:07 Log Off Now: either or works imo
21:08 Log Off Now: 01:54:377 (7) - i would prefer if this wasn't extended to the blue tick since it looks like you're following the drums here with the triple
21:08 Log Off Now: but the bass kick is on the red tick here 01:54:600 -
21:09 [ L u k a s ]: y o u
21:09 Log Off Now: 01:56:600 (1,2,1) - mm idk how i feel about this being the same as the pattern before
21:09 [ L u k a s ]: nah i think it's better like this
21:09 Log Off Now: when theres no note here 01:56:822 -
21:09 [ L u k a s ]: emphasizing the held sound on 01:54:378 -
21:10 Log Off Now: in that case i would make it more obvious that you're following the synth
21:10 [ L u k a s ]: the sound on there is very quiet that's why spacing is smaller than 01:54:822 (1,2,1,2) -
21:10 [ L u k a s ]: well post your log ima tell shogun to give you kudos
21:10 Log Off Now: 01:54:822 (1,2,1,2) - yeah i get it on this one
21:11 Log Off Now: 01:56:600 (1,2,1,2) - its this one that doesnt have the sound
21:11 Log Off Now: or at least the bass kick that played before
21:12 Log Off Now: 00:33:489 (3,6) - also pls visual spacing
21:12 Log Off Now: triggers me
21:12 Log Off Now: touching overlap
21:12 Log Off Now: 00:41:488 (3) - fix stack
21:12 Log Off Now: 00:42:378 (3) - yea
21:12 [ L u k a s ]: not noticable in gameplay though
21:12 Log Off Now: it issssss
21:12 Log Off Now: o well barely it is
21:12 Log Off Now: and its still triggering
21:13 [ L u k a s ]: nah
21:13 Log Off Now: can u move just a tiny bit down pls <3
21:13 Log Off Now: x306:y243
21:13 [ L u k a s ]: is that all?
21:13 Log Off Now: apart from triggering stacks yeah
21:13 [ L u k a s ]: ok

Hikomori

840 posts

Joined November 2015

Hikomori 2017-10-25T05:08:39+00:00

if you want to link in the banner the source of the bg

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=44403643

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-10-28T20:54:06+00:00

[A L P H A] wrote:
if you want to link in the banner the source of the bg

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=44403643

i changed it xd

b00

186 posts

Joined January 2014

b00 2017-10-29T22:23:51+00:00

Lukas Insane
00:04:590 (1) - stacking this with 00:03:479 (3) - would be a lot more aesthetically pleasing.
00:06:590 (1) - this wave slider is sorta lacking in curviness

Try something like https://goo.gl/Pcd3YF
00:18:368 (6) - this slider has a sound on the red tick. Perhaps end it on that instead?
00:20:034 - missing a note here.
00:54:368 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - your kiai is using a lot of counter clock wise rotation. Try empathising certain notes by reversing that flow. Such as 00:56:146 (1) - and the downbeats
01:18:812 - this is missing a note here. same here 01:19:146 -
The patterning is fine for the most part. Its rather simple but it works.
eLy's Insane
00:08:812 (3) - this overlap is kinda off putting hehe
00:10:368 (2,3) - same with stuff like this. Try to keep them from overlapping or if you do overlap half way over the other note to keep things cute
00:50:812 (1) - this slider has a note on the white tick
00:55:257 (4) - making this go left would look better https://goo.gl/ux1E6r because it goes against the curve of 3.
Also why are you using 3 point sliders if their going to be straight! This hurts me inside. Pls fix
In general, stuff like 00:58:368 (3) - looks rather ugly just because its a diagonal straight slider. Making this curved would
be better or you can just angle it slightly +-15 degrees from 90
01:07:479 (4) - I think this could look better if you put the anchor in the middle and didn't bend it so much.https://goo.gl/U6DBTa
The patterning is also fine, just be careful with stuff like 01:22:146 (2,1,2,3) - and overlaps. It looks good otherwise
Hard
if your going to use a red anchor I would advise putting it in the middle ;P https://goo.gl/UjDboJ
00:07:034 (1) - this wave slider is missing curviness again! What I would advise you do is use the approach circle of two circles and match them to fit around the curve of the slider so you can get it to be exact
What you want to avoid is slightly miscurved stuff like this https://imgur.com/a/7X15M
00:16:559 - missing a note
00:17:034 (1) - reverse?
00:18:812 (1) - ^
obviously your using ds so your patterns are somewhat limited, but it looks good
01:31:479 (7,1) - this offbeat slider seems kinda werid. Try starting the slider where 7 is instead

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-10-29T23:19:48+00:00

modz

23:50 ShogunMoon: hey o/
23:50 My Angel Kanan: Hey owo
23:51 ShogunMoon: do u have time for modding a map :v
23:52 My Angel Kanan: this one?
23:52 *My Angel Kanan is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1424842 Majiko - Sarishinohara]
23:53 ShogunMoon: yup
23:53 My Angel Kanan: sure
23:54 *My Angel Kanan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1415357 Majiko - Sarishinohara [Easy]]
23:54 ShogunMoon: Thaaanks
23:57 My Angel Kanan: 00:10:812 (4) - This doesn't need to be clickable imo because it isn't so strong as 5 and doing 3 to a 2/1 or leave it as 1/1 would give more emphasis on the Drum.
23:57 My Angel Kanan: like here
23:57 My Angel Kanan: 00:13:479 (3,1) - 
23:59 ShogunMoon: ye fixed with a 2/3 slider renverse
00:02 My Angel Kanan: 01:40:146 (3) - 
00:02 My Angel Kanan: basically the same as the first point
00:03 My Angel Kanan: but this time i would say that a 2/1 Slider would be good for the vocal
00:06 My Angel Kanan: uw      u
00:07 ShogunMoon: it's fine imo its fit well with the music
00:08 My Angel Kanan: 01:53:701 (1,1,1,1) - 
00:08 My Angel Kanan: is the nc spam really necessary?
00:08 My Angel Kanan: atleast 1,2,1,2 would be okay
00:09 My Angel Kanan: but 1,1,1,1 would be maybe hard to read for beginners
00:10 ShogunMoon: removed nc here 01:56:590 (1)
00:11 My Angel Kanan: 01:53:701 (1) -  this one maybe too?
00:11 My Angel Kanan: if you nc the one slider you mentioned
00:11 My Angel Kanan: your nc patterning is broke 
00:11 My Angel Kanan: uw u
00:12 ShogunMoon: fixed too xdd
00:12 My Angel Kanan: okay
00:12 My Angel Kanan: im done with modding
00:12 My Angel Kanan: your map are too gud 
00:13 My Angel Kanan: owo
00:13 ShogunMoon: thx!!
00:13 ShogunMoon: now kd!
00:13 ShogunMoon: xdd
00:14 My Angel Kanan: ok
00:14 My Angel Kanan: uhm i checked normal
00:14 My Angel Kanan: 00:00:738 (1) - 
00:14 My Angel Kanan: this is 
00:14 My Angel Kanan: idk
00:15 My Angel Kanan: maybe delete this one to keep the diff more simple? xd
00:18 ShogunMoon: deleted

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-10-30T09:51:06+00:00

b00 wrote:
Lukas Insane
00:04:590 (1) - stacking this with 00:03:479 (3) - would be a lot more aesthetically pleasing. yes but it doesn't even show in game
00:06:590 (1) - this wave slider is sorta lacking in curviness Try something like https://goo.gl/Pcd3YF didn't wanna curve it too much.
it's short too so I think it's fitting that I keep it as it is
00:18:368 (6) - this slider has a sound on the red tick. Perhaps end it on that instead? if you listen very carefully at the beginning of the slider there's a sound that supports a hold slider so I wanted to emphasize that
00:20:034 - missing a note here. the part is very calm itself and I was ignoring the guitar or whatever the instrument in the background was but I emphasized the clicking sounds and decided to make a pause on there
00:54:368 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - your kiai is using a lot of counter clock wise rotation. Try empathising certain notes by reversing that flow. Such as 00:56:146 (1) - and the downbeats I emphasize certain circles and sliders with bigger spacing while trying to keep the flow as good as possible and make it comfortable to play owo
01:18:812 - this is missing a note here. same here 01:19:146 - There's already a circle on the first one though, I'm assuming you meant 1/4 rhythm that I ignored, fixed thanks
The patterning is fine for the most part. Its rather simple but it works.

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-10-30T14:34:37+00:00

b00 wrote:
Hard
if your going to use a red anchor I would advise putting it in the middle ;P https://goo.gl/UjDboJ i prefer keep this i like when this slider is like this
00:07:034 (1) - this wave slider is missing curviness again! What I would advise you do is use the approach circle of two circles and match them to fit around the curve of the slider so you can get it to be exact
What you want to avoid is slightly miscurved stuff like this https://imgur.com/a/7X15M i think it's fixed :v
00:16:559 - missing a note fixed
00:17:034 (1) - reverse? i prefer 1/1 slider for this part
00:18:812 (1) - ^ ^
obviously your using ds so your patterns are somewhat limited, but it looks good
01:31:479 (7,1) - this offbeat slider seems kinda werid. Try starting the slider where 7 is instead fixed

Thanks for modding!!

Venix

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1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-10-31T01:24:11+00:00

Hi there~ as requested

[General]

Spread between Hard and Normal feels a bit harsh, Hard one is basing on 1/2 rhythms at all when Normal is using many 1/1 sliders with occasional 1/2 circles/sliders, you probably need an Advanced diff between these two.

[Easy]
Seems like pretty clean one.

What are you think about mapping the beginning like on other diffs? It will work better for consistency I guess.
00:50:146 (4) - This 1/2 seems unnecessary and a bit hard to play for beginners, especially when you ignored 00:50:590 - this strong beat. What are you think about just putting circle 00:50:368 - here instead?
Overall, kiai time feels a bit too overgeneralized, 1/1 spam feels so boring. I prefer to use some different rhythms instead of using the same one in entire of kiai.

[eLy's Insane]

00:24:146 (1,2) - I don't get the reason why you rotated flow very strongly here, it feels a bit harsh during gameplay so I prefer to change it to something like you used before (00:22:368 (1,2) - here and 00:23:257 (1,2) - here) seems like a much better option.
00:54:368 (2) - Here you probably have one of the most important beats in music so why spacing is very small? It matters especially when you used high spacing 00:56:146 (1) - here, on the very similar beat. I prefer to increase the spacing between 00:54:146 (1,2) - these notes to keep consistency.
01:08:479 (9) - This note sounds a bit weird without clap hitsound.
01:41:034 (2,3) - // 01:42:812 (2,3) - I prefer to use at least similar spacing because the beats are almost the same.

Normal and Hard is nice, good luck!

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2017-10-31T07:21:47+00:00

b00

00:08:812 (3) - this overlap is kinda off putting hehe
00:10:368 (2,3) - same with stuff like this. Try to keep them from overlapping or if you do overlap half way over the other note to keep things cute

I do not change it because it is all intended

00:50:812 (1) - this slider has a note on the white tick

It does not change because it is in accordance with the guitar

00:55:257 (4) - making this go left would look better https://goo.gl/ux1E6r because it goes against the curve of 3.
Also why are you using 3 point sliders if their going to be straight! This hurts me inside. Pls fix
In general, stuff like 00:58:368 (3) - looks rather ugly just because its a diagonal straight slider. Making this curved would
be better or you can just angle it slightly +-15 degrees from 90

I changed the flow of the surroundings

01:07:479 (4) - I think this could look better if you put the anchor in the middle and didn't bend it so much.https://goo.gl/U6DBTa
The patterning is also fine, just be careful with stuff like 01:22:146 (2,1,2,3) - and overlaps. It looks good otherwise

I do not change it because I want to add sharpness to AIM

Venix

00:24:146 (1,2) - I don't get the reason why you rotated flow very strongly here, it feels a bit harsh during gameplay so I prefer to change it to something like you used before (00:22:368 (1,2) - here and 00:23:257 (1,2) - here) seems like a much better option.

fixed

00:54:368 (2) - Here you probably have one of the most important beats in music so why spacing is very small? It matters especially when you used high spacing 00:56:146 (1) - here, on the very similar beat. I prefer to increase the spacing between 00:54:146 (1,2) - these notes to keep consistency.

fixed

01:08:479 (9) - This note sounds a bit weird without clap hitsound.

add clap

01:41:034 (2,3) - // 01:42:812 (2,3) - I prefer to use at least similar spacing because the beats are almost the sam

keep

ty mod

http://puu.sh/yblWy/c2cfafde1a.zip

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-10-31T11:42:35+00:00

Venix wrote:
Hi there~ as requested

[General]
Spread between Hard and Normal feels a bit harsh, Hard one is basing on 1/2 rhythms at all when Normal is using many 1/1 sliders with occasional 1/2 circles/sliders, you probably need an Advanced diff between these two. :v
[Easy]
Seems like pretty clean one.
What are you think about mapping the beginning like on other diffs? It will work better for consistency I guess.
00:50:146 (4) - This 1/2 seems unnecessary and a bit hard to play for beginners, especially when you ignored 00:50:590 - this strong beat. What are you think about just putting circle 00:50:368 - here instead?
Overall, kiai time feels a bit too overgeneralized, 1/1 spam feels so boring. I prefer to use some different rhythms instead of using the same one in entire of kiai. but the most important vocals are on the head of the sliders that i mapped and more i follow some drums too, white ticks need to be mapped on the kiai part imo
Normal and Hard is nice, good luck!

No reply mean fixed ~

Thanks for modding!

Nokie-

171 posts

Joined July 2015

Nokie- 2017-10-31T12:17:07+00:00

Here from my queue!

The spread between normal and Hard may be a bit too wide, especially considering that there's only a 0.4 star gap between easy and normal. Not sure about this though.

mod

Easy

it's really good, so I'll be nitpicking

00:14:146 (1) - isn't a perfect wave. I made slight improvements here's the code if you want

80,184,14146,6,0,B|149:163|149:216|225:183,1,135,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:28:146 (3) - ^

404,188,88146,2,0,B|423:120|385:120|404:52,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:22:812 (1) - This slider doesn't look so good. Copying 01:24:590 (3) - looks better and makes more sense with the pattern imo

found nothing wrong with the Easy other than that. Good job!

Normal

01:02:146 (2) - should be removed imo

01:06:590 - you use 1/2 constantly throughout the map, but don't map this. Why?

found nothing wrong with the ~~Easy~~ Normal other than that. Good job!

Hard

00:00:738 (1) - not an issue with the object itself , but I don't know if having an object before the first timing point is rankable

eLy's Insane

00:00:729 (1) - same as on Hard difficulty (also note how the objects are 9ms apart? 00:00:738 (1) - / 00:00:729 (1) - )

00:32:923 (5) - don't think that circle is necessary. It only covers a held vocal that started on this 00:32:590 (4) - slider's tail

01:50:146 (3) - this shape seems out of place, since you seem to be using either full curves or just very slight curves up to this point

Lukas' Insane

00:00:812 (1,2) - same as on Hard and eLy's Insane

00:04:479 (6) - sounds overmapped to me

00:56:812 (2,3,4) - I think you accidentally snapped these to 1/6, should be landing on the blue ticks

01:14:368 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - not only is this entire section copy-pasted from 01:00:146 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - but it's in the exact same place too. Please do something about it.

01:02:146 (2) - 01:16:368 (2) - why are these two hit-sounded differently?

01:40:590 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is an exact copy-paste from 00:08:146 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please don't be so lazy.

01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - an exact copy-paste of 01:44:145 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

To be honest, all the other diffs felt like they had effort put into creating them, while this just feels like someone trying to get a map done the fastest and laziest way possible. It feels repetitive as hell ( I wonder why lol) and overall not half as nice as the other diffs.

Other than the Ctrl+C / Ctrl+V diff, a very nice set! Good luck with it!

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2017-10-31T18:33:06+00:00

WasserIstGut wrote:
eLy's Insane

00:00:729 (1) - same as on Hard difficulty (also note how the objects are 9ms apart? 00:00:738 (1) - / 00:00:729 (1) - )

Adjust to the modification of the shogunmoon.

00:32:923 (5) - don't think that circle is necessary. It only covers a held vocal that started on this 00:32:590 (4) - slider's tail

00:32:923 (5) - is following the sound of the guitar , no change

01:50:146 (3) - this shape seems out of place, since you seem to be using either full curves or just very slight curves up to this point

fix

ty mod http://puu.sh/ybGEu/91e5f0882a.zip

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-10-31T19:35:33+00:00

WasserIstGut wrote:
Lukas' Insane
00:00:812 (1,2) - same as on Hard and eLy's Insane you're judging my 'laziness' and yet you haven't even said the real point just "same as hard and ely's" not unrankable
00:04:479 (6) - sounds overmapped to me nope
00:56:812 (2,3,4) - I think you accidentally snapped these to 1/6, should be landing on the blue ticks
01:14:368 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - not only is this entire section copy-pasted from 01:00:146 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - but it's in the exact same place too. Please do something about it.
01:02:146 (2) - 01:16:368 (2) - why are these two hit-sounded differently?
01:40:590 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is an exact copy-paste from 00:08:146 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please don't be so lazy.
01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - an exact copy-paste of 01:44:145 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

To be honest, all the other diffs felt like they had effort put into creating them, while this just feels like someone trying to get a map done the fastest and laziest way possible. It feels repetitive as hell ( I wonder why lol) and overall not half as nice as the other diffs.

Other than the Ctrl+C / Ctrl+V diff, a very nice set! Good luck with it![/box]

the whole map's gimmick is to copy paste the literal same parts of the song and I don't think it's my "laziness" the song is even short so I don't see why I would have to copy paste other than for a sake of a gimmick. Please do not make assumptions based on what you think is true.

owo

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Nokie-

171 posts

Joined July 2015

Nokie- 2017-10-31T21:53:33+00:00

Whatever qualifies as a gimmick nowadays.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-11-01T19:03:59+00:00

WasserIstGut wrote:
Here from my queue!

The spread between normal and Hard may be a bit too wide, especially considering that there's only a 0.4 star gap between easy and normal. Not sure about this though. yea i know i make a advanced
mod
Easy

it's really good, so I'll be nitpicking

00:14:146 (1) - isn't a perfect wave. I made slight improvements here's the code if you want it's fine imo
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01:28:146 (3) - ^ ^
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01:22:812 (1) - This slider doesn't look so good. Copying 01:24:590 (3) - looks better and makes more sense with the pattern imo

found nothing wrong with the Easy other than that. Good job!

Normal

01:02:146 (2) - should be removed imo for the guitar

01:06:590 - you use 1/2 constantly throughout the map, but don't map this. Why? lol idk

found nothing wrong with the ~~Easy~~ Normal other than that. Good job!
Hard

00:00:738 (1) - not an issue with the object itself , but I don't know if having an object before the first timing point is rankable removed d

Other than the Ctrl+C / Ctrl+V diff, a very nice set! Good luck with it!

No reply mean fixed~

Thanks for modding!

Lafayla

Beatmap Nominator

348 posts

Joined December 2014

Lafayla 2017-11-02T16:16:38+00:00

Hello :3~
nm from my queue although i can hardly even call this mod because i barely found anything

Easy> no issues>
Normal> no issues>
advanced> no issues>
hard> no issues>

eLy's Insane>
00:00:812 (1) - eLy I wouldn't map this if I were you, it sounds weird because the melody begins on the 1/8 tick at 00:00:757 - with the snare coming in the blue tick before it, you probably wanted to have some variation bettween the different difficulties but... having the hitcircle there just sounds off,
Luka's mapped it to the red tick and made it less awkward by making it a burst, whether you want to apply a similar idea or just remove it entirely is up to you.

01:30:590 (3) - i like this because it leads into the blue tick percussion which keeps things i guess "fine" but then I see this 01:33:923 (5,1) - and this can be pretty awkward for people that do full alt like myself 01:33:923 (5,1) - I would make both of the rhythms the same, another alternative you can do is a slider from 01:33:923 - to 01:34:257 - , i think the former would be better because you map blue ticks sliders pretty often other than that nice diff

Lukas' Insane
00:52:590 (1) - meh this nc triggers me because it feels more mapped for the cymbals than it does for the voice, id just leave it part of combo
00:55:257 (3,4) - if you are going to nc every verse make sure its consistent, i personally think you should nc after every chorus line but this works fine too. i guess ~, just a big rip for follow lines, oh well
00:58:812 (3,4) - same thing
01:02:368 (3,4) -
01:04:368 (4) - nc would be better here to match your current nc pattern
01:09:479 (3,4) -
01:57:034 (1) - is this accidental nc?
01:59:479 - i think making this last crash a clickable would give better feel to ending

and thats it for mod
I'm sorry Shogun, even though you requested nm from me I didn't have mods for a single diff that you made LOL, as an apology take this star <3
Best wishes on the mapset :3

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-11-02T18:45:08+00:00

Lafayla wrote:
Hello :3~
nm from my queue although i can hardly even call this mod because i barely found anything

Easy> no issues>
Normal> no issues>
advanced> no issues>
hard> no issues>

I'm sorry Shogun, even though you requested nm from me I didn't have mods for a single diff that you made LOL, as an apology take this star <3 <33
Best wishes on the mapset :3

Thanks!! c:

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2017-11-03T09:48:50+00:00

Lafayla wrote:
eLy's Insane>
00:00:812 (1) - eLy I wouldn't map this if I were you, it sounds weird because the melody begins on the 1/8 tick at 00:00:757 - with the snare coming in the blue tick before it, you probably wanted to have some variation bettween the different difficulties but... having the hitcircle there just sounds off,
Luka's mapped it to the red tick and made it less awkward by making it a burst, whether you want to apply a similar idea or just remove it entirely is up to you.

see WasserIstGut's mod

01:30:590 (3) - i like this because it leads into the blue tick percussion which keeps things i guess "fine" but then I see this 01:33:923 (5,1) - and this can be pretty awkward for people that do full alt like myself 01:33:923 (5,1) - I would make both of the rhythms the same, another alternative you can do is a slider from 01:33:923 - to 01:34:257 - , i think the former would be better because you map blue ticks sliders pretty often other than that nice diff

I think that this degree is no problem because it is Insane

ty mod

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-11-03T09:53:17+00:00

Lafayla wrote:
Lukas' Insane
00:52:590 (1) - meh this nc triggers me because it feels more mapped for the cymbals than it does for the voice, id just leave it part of combo I don't see what's wrong with that nc
00:55:257 (3,4) - if you are going to nc every verse make sure its consistent, i personally think you should nc after every chorus line but this works fine too. i guess ~, just a big rip for follow lines, oh well ?
00:58:812 (3,4) - same thing ?
01:02:368 (3,4) -
01:04:368 (4) - nc would be better here to match your current nc pattern I don't think so
01:09:479 (3,4) -
01:57:034 (1) - is this accidental nc? oops fixed
01:59:479 - i think making this last crash a clickable would give better feel to ending same

updoot

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Rieri

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Rieri 2017-11-05T06:45:22+00:00

Hello~ NM from my queue

Easy

00:04:590 (4) - nc like the ending?
00:14:146 (1) - disable nc cuz u did for 01:53:701 (4) -

Advanced

01:17:479 (1) - make this a pointed slider also, cuz the pointed slider after looks sorta random
01:58:368 (1,2,3) - i would add emphasis on the finish, not the snare

Hard

01:56:590 (4,5) - similar sounds should have similar patterns 01:54:812 (1,2,3) -

there's nothing to actually point out.. clean mapset, good luck.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-11-05T16:58:20+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
Hello~ NM from my queue

Easy
00:04:590 (4) - nc like the ending?
00:14:146 (1) - disable nc cuz u did for 01:53:701 (4) - no because this slider 00:14:146 (1) is more intense than 01:53:701 (4) - there is a cymbals on the first slider but not on the second slider this is why i put a nc

Advanced
01:17:479 (1) - make this a pointed slider also, cuz the pointed slider after looks sorta random
01:58:368 (1,2,3) - i would add emphasis on the finish, not the snare

Hard
01:56:590 (4,5) - similar sounds should have similar patterns 01:54:812 (1,2,3) -

there's nothing to actually point out.. clean mapset, good luck.

no reply mean fixed!

Thanks for modding!~

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