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Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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BinJip
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BinJip
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 10월 15일 월요일 at 오후 12:45:08

Artist: Sakakibara Yui
Title: Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.)
Source: Renai 0 Kilometer
Tags: merchat7 ASa Project KDS galgame opening
BPM: 170
Filesize: 13472kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.38 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Hard (4.98 stars, 310 notes)
  3. Insane (4.8 stars, 388 notes)
  4. merchat7's Normal (4.34 stars, 152 notes)
  5. Taiko DS (4.83 stars, 669 notes)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PC Game 「恋愛０キロメートル」
Easy- Done
merchat7's Normal - Done ( By merchat7 )
Insane - Done
Taiko DS - Done ( By KDS )
Hard - Done
Last edited by BinJip , edited 73 times in total.
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
hello
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
oh this is too fast before game release ( It's release yesterday haha )

NokiaChan Petanko! 8-)
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip
Beatmap changed

Chata - Kozakai San Chi Wa Bobu No Ie -> Sakakibara Yui - Ren'ai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.)
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
Modded in IRC
bossandy
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2010
bossandy
There are many mistakes in this Beatmap
You need to remap Easy and Normal'srhythm
let rhythm like Insane diff
and you can Post my queue again when you remap
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

bossandy wrote:

There are many mistakes in this Beatmap
You need to remap Easy and Normal'srhythm
let rhythm like Insane diff
and you can Post my queue again when you remap

mistakes : hit sound?
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
Complete hitsounds easy and hard diff and forum pm or ingame pm

when you complete

but hitsound to quite in insane diff suggest to increase it. plz
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Easy:
00:04:816(1) - make this the same as the 1st slider if u ignore this do the opposite.
00:55:640(1) - this spinner is too sudden. beginners wont be able to react in time.
01:24:051(1) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point and 1 grid yp for the end point
01:32:169(1) - move 2 ticks up

Hard:
01:25:640(5) - NC

Insane:
00:06:757(5) - NC
00:21:757(5) - ^
01:03:581(5) - ^
01:36:757(1,2) - can u put a warning sign that this is gonna speed up?
01:48:404(5) - NC

This is the best i can do. i wish i can help with timing but i cant point it out. anyways GL :D
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
Hi
This is modder form thai mapper modding team.
regenz 'll mod your map

General

add ASa-Project to tags because it's company that make this game.

You should use software to edit your custom hit sound more lounder
and lounder all timing point at least 5-10 percent.

and i think normal hitsound are more fit for this map but if you want soft so... let it soft. haha
and where 's normal diff?


Easy

00:01:992 (1) - fin (fininsh hitsoud )
00:03:757 (3) - remove whistle
00:03:713 (3) - snap 1/8 in easy ?
00:03:757 (3,1) - intention wrong ds ?
00:36:228 (2,3) - remove fin
00:35:522 (1) - fin tail (fin at end of slider )
00:37:993 (2) - remove fin tail add at 00:38:698 (3) - head instead
01:41:037 (1) - intention 1/8 snap ?

Hard

vocal base map ?
highly suggest AR 7 AR 6 is too hard for this cluster diff
more than three unique slider speed adjust use in this diff 0.5 1.0 1.3 1.5 it's unrankable.
00:54:316 (5) - this is hidden under hit burst while playing
01:40:992 (1) - whistle head
01:42:228 (6) - whistle
01:49:463 (8) - fin

Insane

8-) you have more than 3 unique slider speed adjust 3 is maximum you have 0.5 1.0 1.2 1.5 2.0
00:37:816 (3) - remove clap
00:54:316 (5,7) - remove whistle


Please vote regenz If this mod helpful.

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks! Loli Nokiachan Banzai
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka
hi~ ></
from my modding queue~ :)


SPOILER
my mod is all suggestion :)


[overall]
hmm...I think that this offset doesn't suit.
try 215?

* This mod is before change offset.
If it accept for you to change offset, please change after fixed this mod.(ah,and all resnap note)


[General]
･BG is too large. 800x600 or 1024x768 is good.
･unchecked "Letterbox during breaks"


[Insane]
00:00:316 (1) - start change to 00:00:228
00:11:522 (4,5,6) - spacing?
00:25:110 (1) - remove new combo
00:35:698 (1) - add new combo
00:38:875 (8) - this note stack on 00:38:345 (7)
00:39:228~00:52:551 - hmm..? These are very oddly sound. were these put by 1/8? please put a note on white line or red line.
00:56:522 (8) - add new combo
00:58:463 (3) - ^
00:58:992 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:757 (1) - ^
01:24:978 (1) - mistake? please put on white line.
01:43:463 (7) - add new combo
01:48:404 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:640 (1) - end change to 01:51:581
01:51:669 (1,2,3,4,5) - choose all and (1) with 01:51:757 (put on white line).


[Hard]
AR,OD -1
00:07:287 (5,1) - It is from here that the sound of the song changed. makes you place 00:07:816(1) here.
In connection with it, let you shorten the kick slider of (5) to 00:07:463.
00:39:581~00:52:816 - It is the same of "insane", and has a very oddly sound.

put a note on white line or red line.
01:05:345 (6) - add new combo
01:06:228 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:757 (2) - add new combo
01:07:640 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:640 (1,1,2,3) - It is the same of "insane".


[Easy]
OD +1
you have to make diff's title continue. would you change the title of this diff into a "Normal"?
00:20:345 (2,3) - (2) and (3) are moved to 00:20:522.
00:39:404~00:52:816 - It is the same of "insane" and "Hard".
01:01:507 (1,2,3,4) - put a note on white line or red line.
01:20:169 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:463 (1) - put end to 01:52:287
cute song <3
fight~~
Suzully
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2010
Suzully
I think

1st offset:1988
2nd offset:52988

to adjust the metronome and +10 from current one.
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
brikel
메모장 열어서 타이밍 포인트 부분에
SPOILER
1988,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
35870,-200,4,2,1,55,0,0
36399,-200,4,1,1,55,0,0
37105,-200,4,2,1,55,0,0
38737,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
41604,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
44471,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
46987,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
52984,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,0
56517,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,55,0,0
57223,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
58635,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,1
58675,352.941176470588,4,2,1,55,1,1
96752,-50,4,2,1,55,0,1
97458,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,1
109635,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
넣으면 됨
00:52:544 (7,8) - 이 두개는 1/8에 놓이니까 주의 요망
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Neko mod Go ~

[Overall]
- Your Kiai Time is pretty long. I would suggest you to end it a bit earlier.
- I would suggest you to add an Normal diff since the difficulty jump from Easy to Hard is very high.

[Easy]
00:16:105 (1) - This slider looks pretty f*cked up. Looks better if you make the last slider-point parallel to the second-last one. Like this.
00:19:282 (1) - Move to 00:19:458. sounds a lot better.
00:28:811 (4) - Make this a Slider from 00:28:811 to 00:29:164 and a circle at 00:29:517. Like this.
00:32:870 (1) - End at 00:33:752
00:34:282 (2) - Replace this with a short slider from 00:34:105 to 00:34:282
00:34:811 (3) - Replace this with a short slider from 00:34:635 to 00:34:811
- The slow part looks pretty bad and it can also get confusing with such less spacing -
- Maybe use x0.75 BPM instead of x0.5 -
00:52:147 (1) - Move this to the red tick!
00:52:984 (2) - Replace with spinner that ends at 00:54:042
00:54:042 (1) - If ^ remove this
00:54:395 (2,3) - Replace these with a short slider from 00:54:572 to 00:54:748
00:55:101 (4) - Replace this with a short slider from 00:55:101 to 00:55:278
00:57:219 (1,2,3) - Replace this with a repeating slider since blue ticks are very confusing for beginners.
01:04:322 (1) - Boring! I think you can find something more fun and better fitting for this part.
01:14:733 - Add a Slider from 01:14:733 to 01:14:910
01:15:439 (1) - Replace this with a slider from 01:15:263 to 01:15:439
01:16:145 (3) - Replace with a 1 time repeating slider from 01:15:792 to 01:16:498. Like this.
01:33:969 (2) - end at 01:34:851
01:35:204 - if ^ add slider from 01:35:204 to 01:35:380
01:35:910 (1) - Replace with a slider from 01:35:733 to 01:35:910

[Hard]
HP Drain - 1
00:52:809 (3,4) - This 2 notes are pretty weird, i would suggest you to make a slider there.

[Insane]
I like this a lot!

Looks like the only big problem in this map is the Easy.
Good luck with this!
merchat7
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Joined December 2010
merchat7
I can make Normal if you want?
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

merchat7 wrote:

I can make Normal if you want?

OK, PLZ~
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Mod Request :P

General:
Sample Volume: 65%
Audio Lead-In: 0 because you don't start to map in the intro
Maybe the kiai has to end in 01:40:851 because is too long

Easy:
This Easy is quite difficult to be an Easy.
00:06:576 (x): For consistency add a note here.
Spacing
00:34:547 (2,3): Too Far
00:38:539 (2,3): too close
You have to fix this
01:14:733 (5): New Combo
01:15:263 (1): Remove New Combo

Hard:
00:20:870 (6,7,8): A slider sound better than notes
00:26:164 (x): Add a Note
00:34:811 (8): replace the note to slider. Starts: In (8) Ends: 00:35:164

Insane:
Unrankable Issue: More than 3 slider speeds are used in this diff.
00:25:105 (2): For consistency with Hard, you have to add a New Combo here or maybe Remove New Combo in Hard

Well, That's all. Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Unrankable Issue: More than 3 slider speeds are used in this diff.
This is rankable. But you may only use it if it fits to the song.
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
BPM / Offset
170.000 / -825
168.500 / 35880
170.000 / 58669

I couldn't mod due to timing was incorrect.
Call me again after fix the timing.


Lunatic Neko wrote:

Unrankable Issue: More than 3 slider speeds are used in this diff.
This is rankable. But you may only use it if it fits to the song.
Yeah, as Lunatic Neko told, it's rankable if it makes sense.
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
All right, timing seems good now, full mod in this time. >w<


[General]
01:49:492 - Add offset : BPM 166.000


[Insane]
00:01:998 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 1칸 오른쪽
00:30:057 (5) - 피니시 제거
00:46:206 (4,5) - 1칸 왼쪽
00:52:971 (9) - 1칸 아래?
00:53:951 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 스페이싱 이상합니다. 일정하게 되도록 고쳐보세요.
예시
00:59:727 (5) - 겹치는거 피하도록 2칸 내려보세요
01:05:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 정오각형 모양에 가깝게 위치 조정해주세요. 스페이싱 때문에 정오각형은 잘 안되는군요. =.=
SPOILER
256,64,65374,5,8
256,64,65551,2,0,B|256:192,1,108.000002574921,0|8
160,128,65904,1,0
192,232,66080,1,8
320,232,66257,1,4
352,128,66433,1,8
01:11:904 (1) - 구부림 없이 일직선으로 올려서 대칭하는게 나아보입니다.
01:23:021 (7,8) - 1칸 오른쪽
01:33:786 (1) - 01:33:963 부터 시작해야 보컬에 맞습니다


[Hard]
00:00:322 (1) - 00:00:233 부터 시작
00:11:704 (1,2,3,4,1) - 얘네들 위치가 조금 어색한데 아래처럼 바꿔보세요
SPOILER
00:12:233 (2) - x:128 y:64
00:12:586 (3) - x:0 y:192
00:12:939 (4) - x:128 y:320
00:51:725 (5) - Ctrl+R
01:05:727 (2,3) - 스택 부정확합니다.
01:10:669 (3) - 끝 점을 왼쪽으로 한 칸 옮기고
01:11:021 (4) - 이건 끝 점을 오른쪽으로 한 칸 옮기면 끝이 정확하게 겹쳐집니다.
01:47:904 (4) - 뉴콤보


[Easy]
00:36:592 (3) - 1번 슬라이더 끝이랑 안겹치게 옮겨주세요
01:17:551 (2) - 길이를 01:18:433 까지 늘이세요
01:23:021 (3,4) - 이지 박자를 거의 보컬에 맞추셨던데요, 각각 01:23:198, 01:23:551 로 옮기는게 나을것 같네요
01:29:551 (3) - 리듬이 어색합니다. 리버스 없애고 01:29:727 부터 시작. http://puu.sh/7VCM
01:41:021 (1) - 끝 스냅 에러
01:46:669 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거하는게 대칭면에서 더 나아보이네요.


화이팅이요~ ;)
저번에 오스플이랑 비슷하다고 한 이야기는
대칭패턴 느낌이 비슷하다는거지 단순히 대칭 썼기때문에는 아닙니다. ㅎ
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Hi mod here~
Easy:

SPOILER
00:07:635 (1) - Do not use finish!
00:12:939 (4) - spacing
00:12:939 (4) - remove whistle
00:13:292 (1) - add clap at the end
00:14:704 (2) - remove clap
00:16:116 (1) - Add clap in the middle
00:18:233 (3) - remove clap
00:18:586 (4) - add clap
00:18:939 (5) - remove clap
00:22:998 (3,4) - two slider add clap at the end
00:24:410 (X) - add a note?
00:24:586 (1) - add clap in the middle
00:25:998 (3) - remove clap
00:28:116 (2) - ^
00:28:822 (4) - add clap at the end
00:30:586 (1) - add clap at the begin and end
00:31:645 (2) - add clap in the middle
00:32:880 (1) - ugly slider lol
00:36:592 (3) - add whistle
00:38:016 (2) - Add whistle at the begin
00:39:974 (2) - add whistle?
00:42:289 (2) - add whistle
01:05:021 (2) - add whistle
01:12:786 (X) - add a note here
01:26:551 (1) - Do not use finish here~
01:32:374 (1) - ugly slider
Easy diff is too hard for beginner!! so many rhythm on red....
look my score lol It is not good score...

Hard:

SPOILER
00:07:282 ~ 00:08:517 plz change to this rhythm

So many finish on this diff... It sounds doesn't Comfortable. you can remove some finish sound on this diff

Insane:
SPOILER
fine~
but finish sound are too many plz remove some

Good luck~
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
GZ BinJip for find Savior(ykcarrot) of your timming help. haha 8-)
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
좀 길어 박스에 담았습니다

지극히 개인적인 스타일의 히트사운드니 잘선택해주세요..
mod
[General]
태그를 추가합시다
사운드가 너무 약한 느낌입니다 조금만 올려주세요

[Easy]

이지라 하기엔 좀 어려워보입니다
01:11:198 (2) - 01:32:374 (1) -
이런정도 구간에 노트를 좀더 추가해서 노말로 하는건 어떨까요

00:28:822 (4) - 시작부분 휘슬
00:30:233 (7) - whistle
00:55:642 (1) - 시작부분 휘슬
01:02:551 (2) - ^
01:07:139 (1) - 휘슬
01:17:551 (2) - 머리꼬리 휘슬
01:22:492 - 노트 추가후 휘슬
01:25:669 (4) - 시작부분 휘슬
01:28:139 (4) - 휘슬
01:29:727 (3) - ^
01:30:610 (4,5) - 슬라이더로 교체후 꼬리 피니시
01:36:257 (3) - 휘슬
01:36:786 (4) - 머리꼬리 휘슬
01:37:845 (5) - 휘슬
01:41:021 (1) - 시작부분 휘슬
01:41:904 (2) - 꼬리부분 피니시
01:43:845 (1) - 중앙 휘슬
01:46:669 (2) - ^


[Hard]

00:01:998 (1) - 시작부분 휘슬
00:07:822 (1) - 이것의 시작을 00:07:645 에서 그리고 00:08:527 노트추가
00:14:527 (3) - 꼬리 휘슬
00:16:116 (1) - 머리 휘슬
00:16:116 (1) - 꼬리 휘슬
00:18:763 (6) - ^
00:20:174 (4) - 머리휘슬
00:21:410 (1) - 꼬리휘슬
00:21:763 (2) - 머리휘슬
00:22:822 (5) - 꼬리휘슬
00:24:057 (6) - ^
00:25:822 (4) - 머리휘슬
00:27:057 (2) - 꼬리휘슬
00:28:645 (3) - 중앙휘슬
00:31:292 (2) - 중앙휘슬
00:31:822 (3) - 머리꼬리휘슬
00:32:880 (1) - ^
00:34:292 (6) - 휘슬
00:34:645 (7) - 피니시
00:34:822 (8) - 머리피니시
00:35:527 (2) - 휘슬
00:36:414 (4) - 꼬리 클랩
00:39:440 add note and clap
01:12:610 (3) - 꼬리 휘슬
01:14:021 (7) - 휘슬
01:36:786 (1) - 머리 휘슬
01:37:139 (2) - ^
제일 마지막 노트 오프셋은 01:52:236 이곳으로


[Insane]

00:20:174 (3) - 꼬리 휘슬
00:21:586 (4) - 휘슬
00:22:822 (4) - ^
00:23:704 (4) - ^
00:24:057 (6) - ^
00:24:410 (8) - ^
00:24:586 (10) - ^
00:25:822 (3) - 머리휘슬
00:27:410 (4) - 휘슬
00:28:116 (7) - 머리휘슬
00:28:822 (3) - 휘슬
00:29:527 (2) - ^
00:30:233 (6) - ^
00:31:822 (4) - 머리 휘슬
00:35:880 (2) - ^
00:38:906 (8) - 휘슬
00:39:440 (1) - 클랩
00:42:289 (2) - ^
00:48:877 (3) - 휘슬
00:51:725 (3) - ^
00:52:971 (9) - 클랩
01:36:786 (1) - 머리휘슬
01:37:139 (2) - ^
01:38:198 ~ 01:49:492 - 참 잘했어요

하드와 마찬가지로 마지막 부분의 bpm과 오프셋 다시잡아주세요
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
I'm in ur thread, modding ur maps.

General
All maps could need some tidying up for their spacing.

Insane
00:18:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move (2) to (4) and (4) to (2) or just like this pic: http://puu.sh/7W1c because it looks better.
00:32:969 (8,9) - don't like this Anti-jump. Also, add a note at 00:32:880 -
01:29:286 - add a note here?
01:31:845 (2,3,4,5) - unstack (5) or add an additonal note to make it a 5 note stream.
01:33:963 (1) - end this at 01:34:845 - silently?
01:52:202 (5) - move 2 grids down

Hard
00:14:527 (3,4) - arrange like this http://puu.sh/7W25
00:34:645 (7) - 1 grid up
01:08:021 (7) - move it a bit to the right?
01:18:080 (3,4) - remove (4) and add a repeat to (3)?
01:27:433 (3,4,5) - arrange like this? http://puu.sh/7W2o fix spacing of 01:28:669 (1) - afterwards

Easy
Rename to Normal

00:38:016 (2) - make the slider a light curve - like this? http://puu.sh/7W2N
01:04:316 (1) - ^
01:21:257 (1) - kick sliders with more than 1 repeats is never a good idea for the easiest diff.
01:35:198 (1) - 1 grid right + down
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
No BG thumbnail... this looks like the problem of my map

So, if you managed to fix it, please tell me, thanks ^^~

mod anyways

[Easy]
Yeah, rename to Normal ^^

If you want to make it <3.00 star rating... according to the ranking guideline...
Overall Difficulty -1 (It should be AR-1 or -2 (to be easier), you can AR+1 alternatively)
00:12:233 (2,3,4) - change to a slider with a reverse
00:14:704 (2,3,4) - ^
00:25:645 (2,3,4) - ^

Then it will be 2.99 SR~

About Star Rating: 1 slider = 2 circles, and 1 spinner = 3 circles in stars. So you can remove unnecessary notes and/or change 3-note or note-slider patterns into sliders in order to lower it.

[Hard] & [Insane]

*tries to find things to mod*

*gives up after watching about 1/2 of the map* www

---------

edit: ...just updated when I'm modding? >.<
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip
wow...

6min 3modding
Aki_Kannabi
29 posts
Joined May 2011
Aki_Kannabi
Ok ! This is Aki_kannabi Mod !
那么开始吧！

[Easy]

00:03:233 - 我认为新人对这类拍子恐怕比较棘手吧？换成滑条？
00:07:645 - （1）这个滑条缩短到 00:08:880 这并折返
00:10:116 - （2.3.4.1）取消
00:10:469 - 弄一个与 00:07:645 一样长度的滑条但不折返

以上因为你后面结尾处是两个这样的折返！这样弄我感觉能和结尾处有共鸣感

00:30:586 - 取消掉new combo感觉更容易掌握
00:39:618 - new combo 取消
01:09:963 - ^
01:11:904 - 在这 new combo
01:15:786 - 换成和 01:14:727 一样长度的滑条 不折返！
01:16:668 - 加长至 01:17:198 结束 不折返！
01:19:668 - new combo 取消
01:28:845 - new combo 取消
01:29:727 - 在这 new combo
01:32:374 - new combo 取消

new combo 作用在于新组合的表示，这将方便玩家对于这段组合的掌握及对下

一段组合的准备 。

[Hard]

00:11:704 - （1）new combo 取消
00:12:233 - （2.3.4.1）这为一个组合 即在（2）设置new combo 并将（1）的

new combo取消
00:17:174 - 取消new combo
00:17:351 - 设置 new combo！
00:24:586 - new combo 取消 并且这个与滑条结束端重叠我认为比较合适！
00:26:171 - 删除这个物件？因为这没歌词！
00:55:108 - new combo 取消
00:57:957 - 这两个滑条为一个组合
01:36:433 - 取消这个note
01:49:672 - 结束于 01:51:299
01:51:751 - （1）向前移动一格至白线处 （2）位于红线

[Insane]
00:12:233 - （1）重叠在之前滑条的结束端
00:36:592 - （2）Ds与后面的不一致啊 这个是1.07x 后面的1/2拍你都是2.07x的
要不这段减速段统一1.07x或2.07x
01:47:904 - new combo 取消
01:52:022 - 添加一个Circle
01:51:751 - 这个组合同 Hard 结尾
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Normal guest diff done, 1.2 slider velocity 4.22 star.

Don't forget to add me to tags, will polish the diff a bit later.

Download: Sakakibara Yui - Renai 0 Kilometer (Short Ver.) (BinJip) [merchat7's Normal].osu
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

Aki_Kannabi wrote:

Ok ! This is Aki_kannabi Mod !
那么开始吧！

[Easy]

00:03:233 - 我认为新人对这类拍子恐怕比较棘手吧？换成滑条？
00:07:645 - （1）这个滑条缩短到 00:08:880 这并折返
00:10:116 - （2.3.4.1）取消
00:10:469 - 弄一个与 00:07:645 一样长度的滑条但不折返

以上因为你后面结尾处是两个这样的折返！这样弄我感觉能和结尾处有共鸣感

00:30:586 - 取消掉new combo感觉更容易掌握
00:39:618 - new combo 取消
01:09:963 - ^
01:11:904 - 在这 new combo
01:15:786 - 换成和 01:14:727 一样长度的滑条 不折返！
01:16:668 - 加长至 01:17:198 结束 不折返！
01:19:668 - new combo 取消
01:28:845 - new combo 取消
01:29:727 - 在这 new combo
01:32:374 - new combo 取消

new combo 作用在于新组合的表示，这将方便玩家对于这段组合的掌握及对下

一段组合的准备 。

[Hard]

00:11:704 - （1）new combo 取消
00:12:233 - （2.3.4.1）这为一个组合 即在（2）设置new combo 并将（1）的

new combo取消
00:17:174 - 取消new combo
00:17:351 - 设置 new combo！
00:24:586 - new combo 取消 并且这个与滑条结束端重叠我认为比较合适！
00:26:171 - 删除这个物件？因为这没歌词！
00:55:108 - new combo 取消
00:57:957 - 这两个滑条为一个组合
01:36:433 - 取消这个note
01:49:672 - 结束于 01:51:299
01:51:751 - （1）向前移动一格至白线处 （2）位于红线

[Insane]
00:12:233 - （1）重叠在之前滑条的结束端
00:36:592 - （2）Ds与后面的不一致啊 这个是1.07x 后面的1/2拍你都是2.07x的
要不这段减速段统一1.07x或2.07x
01:47:904 - new combo 取消
01:52:022 - 添加一个Circle
01:51:751 - 这个组合同 Hard 结尾

C...Chinese modding very hard.. :(

thx, Aki_Kannabi
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Hinacle
konnichiwa~:3

All of them just a suggestion

mod
＜General＞
  1. add ASa Project to tag? (maker)
＜Easy＞
  1. 00:30:586 (4) - new combo
  2. 00:34:645 (3) - Maybe start it at 00:34:469 and end it at 00:34:822 Follows the voice now and sounds much better.
  3. 00:39:974 (1) - 1 grid left (grid size:small) I think that it look better
  4. 00:57:244 (1) - new combo
  5. 01:09:963 (4) - ^
  6. 01:20:198 (3) - add finish at end
  7. 01:49:492 (1) - add finish

＜merchat7's Normal＞
  1. 00:06:057 (1) - Remove new combo
  2. 01:26:374 (4) -moved 01:26:551? sounds much better
  3. 01:43:845 (2) - add finish at beginning
  4. 01:49:672 (1) - Start spinner at 01:49:492

＜Hard＞
  1. 00:07:645 (1) - add finish at beginning
  2. 00:10:116 (8) - add finish at end
  3. 01:28:139 (5) - ctrl+H. I think that it look better
  4. 01:29:198 (4) - 1 grid right (grid size:small)


＜Insane＞
  1. 00:07:645 (1) - add finish at beginning
  2. 01:11:904 (1) - looks a little strange. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/174241
  3. 01:51:932 (4) - Remove finish
  4. 01:52:022 (5) - add finish

Nice map and Nice song!!
ganbare~>w</
Aki_Kannabi
29 posts
Joined May 2011
Aki_Kannabi
sorry !! my English is very poor!!!
BinJip
759 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
BinJip

Hinacle wrote:

konnichiwa~:3

All of them just a suggestion

mod
＜General＞
  1. add ASa Project to tag? (maker)
＜Easy＞
  1. 00:30:586 (4) - new combo
  2. 00:34:645 (3) - Maybe start it at 00:34:469 and end it at 00:34:822 Follows the voice now and sounds much better.
  3. 00:39:974 (1) - 1 grid left (grid size:small) I think that it look better
  4. 00:57:244 (1) - new combo
  5. 01:09:963 (4) - ^
  6. 01:20:198 (3) - add finish at end
  7. 01:49:492 (1) - add finish

＜merchat7's Normal＞
  1. 00:06:057 (1) - Remove new combo
  2. 01:26:374 (4) -moved 01:26:551? sounds much better
  3. 01:43:845 (2) - add finish at beginning
  4. 01:49:672 (1) - Start spinner at 01:49:492

＜Hard＞
  1. 00:07:645 (1) - add finish at beginning
  2. 00:10:116 (8) - add finish at end
  3. 01:28:139 (5) - ctrl+H. I think that it look better
  4. 01:29:198 (4) - 1 grid right (grid size:small)


＜Insane＞
  1. 00:07:645 (1) - add finish at beginning
  2. 01:11:904 (1) - looks a little strange. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/174241
  3. 01:51:932 (4) - Remove finish
  4. 01:52:022 (5) - add finish

Nice map and Nice song!!
ganbare~>w</

All fixed

thx~!! Hinacle!!!!!!!!!!!
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
kiai time is a bit too long for this song

Easy

not bad slider design and note arrangement, but hitsounds is not as well as the other aspects of the map
i will give some suggestions to you in the end of the post

merchat7's Normal

fine..

Hard

465,157,7645,2,0,B|312:56|120:136,1,350,0|4

Insane

[00:24:057] 1 grid left

[hitsounds]

this set of hitsounds(particular the clap) is too week/low to hear. to make it more easily to be caught by ears, you may need heavier percussion or just increase the volume

and how about try to use normal-hitnormal?
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