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Sakakibara Yui & Sakuragawa Megu - Mahou no Kotoba

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Eir_DELETED
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Eir_DELETED
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年2月21日 at 19:53:16

Artist: Sakakibara Yui & Sakuragawa Megu
Title: Mahou no Kotoba
Source: まほ×ろば-Witches spiritual home-
Tags: eroge
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6373kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Easy (1.63 stars, 124 notes)
  2. Hard (3.25 stars, 270 notes)
  3. Little's Insane (4.82 stars, 386 notes)
  4. Matha's Normal (2.02 stars, 164 notes)
  5. sahuang's Insane (4.43 stars, 411 notes)
  6. Sorcery (5.33 stars, 409 notes)
Download: Sakakibara Yui & Sakuragawa Megu - Mahou no Kotoba
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For #5
Easy - alacat
Normal - - Matha -
Hard - me
Insane - sahuang
Insane - Little
Extra - me

Check the video
Last edited by Eir_DELETED , edited 55 times in total.
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
ex

00:03:212 (1) - i dont think this is needed? No such piano sound
00:09:038 - stop spinner here...1/4 makes few react time :o
00:36:108 (2,6) - stack these,id say 00:36:965 (6,1) - distance should be decreased a bit
00:43:561 - add circle do this http://puu.sh/xA5mN/6d80b9a3a8.jpg
ofc you can use slider for 00:43:646 (6) - up to you
00:53:584 (1) - why reduce sv? and it should be 1/1 slider imo because 3/2 skips many important beats
01:00:094 (6,1) - aesthetics here looks bad
01:10:031 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - overdone. you should follow the vocal instead, which makes a much more beautiful map.
01:39:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - the sound is so faint compared to 01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - but you didnt change spacing at all.
Ideally you want a smaller spacing http://puu.sh/xA5tP/c11f9891b7.jpg and feel free to change patterns

That should be all, nerfing this will give you 5.2-5.3, so just make it a 5.25 extra and then find an insane (i could do if you are not in much hurry)
Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

sahuang wrote:

ex

00:03:212 (1) - i dont think this is needed? No such piano sound eh? the piano sound can be heard in my ears. but well... There must be my broken ears!!! gotcha!
00:09:038 - stop spinner here...1/4 makes few react time :o indeed
00:36:108 (2,6) - stack these,id say 00:36:965 (6,1) - distance should be decreased a bit oki
00:43:561 - add circle do this http://puu.sh/xA5mN/6d80b9a3a8.jpg
ofc you can use slider for 00:43:646 (6) - up to you i'd prefer to insert a break time at 1 beat since there are too long 1/2 objects on the section between 00:34:395 - and 00:43:646 - and unused any 1/1 sliders regardless of unexcited part. so i wanna add 1/1 break for eased the intense and get players to notice changing point of the measure. i didnt read well, really my bad
00:53:584 (1) - why reduce sv? and it should be 1/1 slider imo because 3/2 skips many important beats. on the 00:53:584 - ~ 00:55:468 - , i seem this song is entered calm section temporarily compared with previous part. and i wanna express "toward kiai gradually" to use variable speed of sliders(00:55:640 (1,1,1) - ), so i reduced sv here. anyway, i changed the rhythm like this cool idea!
01:00:094 (6,1) - aesthetics here looks bad addressed
01:10:031 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - overdone. you should follow the vocal instead, which makes a much more beautiful map. i will reconsider the concept more and more and moreeeeeeee i will apply correctly when i get better idea!
01:39:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - the sound is so faint compared to 01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - but you didnt change spacing at all. okkk!!!
Ideally you want a smaller spacing http://puu.sh/xA5tP/c11f9891b7.jpg and feel free to change patterns

That should be all, nerfing this will give you 5.2-5.3, so just make it a 5.25 extra and then find an insane (i could do if you are not in much hurry)

I can't thank you enough ;w; i reallyyyyyyyyy appreciate for you<3
oh seriously? im glad if you can make gd! i will ask you later~
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  1. 01:10:888 - 01:11:231 - 01:11:916 - 01:12:259 - 01:12:601 - a circle could be put on each?maybe xd

    2017-09-15 20:39 Nanashima Asami: 01:10:888 - 01:11:231 - 01:11:916 - 01:12:259 - 01:12:601 - 
    2017-09-15 20:39 Nanashima Asami: かなあ
    2017-09-15 20:40 joker-: 神か！？
Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
thanks m8
they are helped a lot, which those ticks are audible buzz-drum

edit: done improvement at the 121212121212121212 accordingly dear my friends opinion. i determined to place 2 sliders at 01:10:374 - and 01:11:402 - cuz im following drums and main melodies at the whole. considering the consistency, im keeping rhythm pattern which is added circles follow drums but i removed circles that dont follow anything.
however i do think the issues have not only rhythm, but flow and distances also need more opinions. anyway, thanks guys!!!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
use the game CG plz 8-)

i like ↓↓↓

Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
sure! i will use the game CG when the game is released on someday.

you know very well who is the best girl in this game, ENTIRELY AGREE WITH YOU :D
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Here's my diff: http://f.ttle.li/rCIc.zip
Very busy with school now.. :(
Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
Thanks Little! Yeah I know what you mean. I'm also busy for school stuffs too LOL
I will update your diff later!
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
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Beomsan
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Petal
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1,170 posts
Joined November 2015
Petal
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Eir_DELETED
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Eir_DELETED
okay im back, i will make my hard when i had done gds!
Petal
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1,170 posts
Joined November 2015
Petal
Self mod removed useless green lines and fixed hitsounds

ddd
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:マホウノコトバ
Artist:Sakakibara Yui & Sakuragawa Megu
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい＆櫻川めぐ
Creator:joker-
Version:Matha's Normal
Source:まほ×ろば-Witches spiritual home-
Tags:eroge
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439,159,82903,2,0,L|304:136,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,162,83417,2,0,L|229:153,1,52.5,0|0,2:3|2:3,0:0:0:0:
182,150,83760,6,0,P|168:216|181:275,1,105,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,337,84445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,284,84788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
411,343,85131,1,6,0:0:0:0:
404,83,86503,6,0,L|412:27,2,52.5,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,124,87017,2,0,L|351:252,1,105,6|0,0:0|2:3,0:0:0:0:
344,279,87531,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,279,87703,2,0,P|283:290|212:256,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,245,88216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,245,88388,2,0,P|150:233|99:245,1,105,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,275,88903,2,0,L|51:199,1,52.5,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
28,176,89245,6,0,L|23:48,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,19,89760,2,0,P|85:40|171:32,1,105,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,14,90445,2,0,P|316:1|407:37,1,157.5,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,130,91303,1,2,0:0:0:0:
306,88,91645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,192,91988,6,0,L|367:220,2,52.5,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,171,92503,2,0,L|141:176,1,105,6|0,0:0|2:3,0:0:0:0:
111,199,93017,1,2,0:0:0:0:
111,199,93188,2,0,P|102:260|124:306,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,330,93703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,330,93874,2,0,P|210:340|259:322,1,105,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,289,94388,2,0,P|326:281|354:281,1,52.5,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
397,304,94731,6,0,L|412:73,1,210,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,96103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,80,96445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,176,96788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,208,97131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,284,97474,6,0,L|377:294,1,105,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,267,98160,2,0,P|425:197|462:103,1,157.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,81,98845,2,0,B|380:11|302:67|302:67|206:135|97:57,1,367.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100217,12,0,108445,0:0:0:0:
Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
Finally done!! also updated gds.
Ready for mod!
July - San
137 posts
Joined July 2016
July - San
Hihi

From mod req
M4M
My map
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/693013/#osu/1467462

(or you can mod this) 2map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597903


Matha's Normal

00:06:960 (1) - you must leave at least one white bar after a spinner, in easy and normal diff

00:41:245 (3) - NC Here

00:52:217 (3) - NC Here

01:03:017 (4) - This slider goes off the beat, and ends very late, I should finish here 01:03:531 -

01:08:674 (5) - NC?

01:36:103 (2) - NC

01:38:160 (2) - I think this slider should start here 01:37:988 -

01:38:845 (3) - To my taste it would be better if this slider ends here 01:39:874 -

sahuang's Insane

00:10:837 (5) - I think this circle is very unnecessary

00:35:423 (1) - NC Not here

00:35:765 (2) - Here nc

01:33:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo is very long, you should cut it..

Maybe NC here 01:33:675 (3) - ?

Little's Insane

For my taste, I think it would look good NC in these parts

01:07:645 (3) - NC

01:07:988 (5) - NC

01:08:331 (7) - NC

I repeat, for my taste.

Sorry, but I could not find anything else, great job guys, luck for the ranking :)
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao
from Q

im sick..

  • alacat's Easy
  1. remove unsnapped bookmark lol
  2. 00:35:074 (2,1) - better overlap please, look better like this https://puu.sh/ytVJc/a39ec7b455.png
  • Matha's Normal
  1. 00:26:674 (5,6) - this blanket look bad tbh lul, i know that you can't make better so just move 00:27:531 (6)
  2. 00:30:274 (3) - vocals who need to be clickable on the tail umm not good so just add a note 00:30:960 - and slider should be finish 00:30:788
  3. 01:03:017 (4) - like i said before ^ https://puu.sh/ytW4t/060f1f5e73.png sound so much better
  4. 01:12:788 (1,1,1) - it's not very a good to make this kind of combos on low diffs i think, it's can be uncomfortable for newbies to click on these notes
  5. 01:36:103 (2,3,4,5) - square doesn't look good just move circle 5 at x:175 y:212
  • Hard
  1. Remove combo color green it's doesn't fit with background xd
  2. 00:33:703 (3) - this isn't a 1/4 slider renverse for emphasis piano sounds
  • sahuang's Insane
  1. uninherited point with others diffs
  • Little's Insane
  1. omg this bg <3
  2. Remove combo color green too because it's doesn't fit with background xd
  3. 00:26:160 (1) - 1/2 slider fit better for this sound 00:26:331 - plus piano should be clickable on the white tick, like you did 00:31:645 (1,2)
  4. 01:23:417 (6) - 2 circles should be great because this slider doesn't represent the rhythm as well so it's preferable to replace it by circles
  5. 01:27:445 - you forgot a note for drums (should be similar to 00:10:217 (3,4,5) )
  • Sorcery
  1. looking good~
gl!~
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

July - San wrote:

Little's Insane

For my taste, I think it would look good NC in these parts That does make it easier to read. Added.

01:07:645 (3) - NC

01:07:988 (5) - NC

01:08:331 (7) - NC

I repeat, for my taste.

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • Little's Insane
  1. omg this bg <3
  2. Remove combo color green too because it's doesn't fit with background xd I'll leave combo colours up to joker-
  3. 00:26:160 (1) - 1/2 slider fit better for this sound 00:26:331 - plus piano should be clickable on the white tick, like you did 00:31:645 (1,2) I don't think so. There's nothing significant at that beat, and current rhythm gives better vocal emphasis, which is what i'm going for in this first phrase.
  4. 01:23:417 (6) - 2 circles should be great because this slider doesn't represent the rhythm as well so it's preferable to replace it by circles Slider feels better to me.
  5. 01:27:445 - you forgot a note for drums (should be similar to 00:10:217 (3,4,5) ) Intentionally omitted.
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/yvRcu/31f2a0e67f.zip
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
never give up

Matha's Normal
  1. 00:05:074 - add note ? I think that it becomes easy to play more by adding note to this place. Please correct the later placement at 00:05:417 (4,1,2) -
  2. 00:09:703 (1) - I want to move grid point behind slider to the left side. I think that the person becomes easy to look. For example, how about x25 y138 so?
  3. 00:20:674 (1,2) - "beep beep" I am the blanket Police. I want to let both slider have blanket. Specifically, please refer to the following image. Please use it or next code.
    img
    308,368,20674,6,0,P|340:231|187:197,1,315,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    249,281,22045,2,0,P|95:193|239:91,1,420,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:03:017 (4,5) - Some these sounds are strange. Please try the following rhythm.
  5. 01:13:303 (1,1) - Remove New combo. because I can understand this with direction(/me god), but it will become the cause that I confound it to a beginner player.
  6. 01:26:503 (1) - same as 00:09:703 (1) - here.
  7. 01:38:845 (3) - slider end 01:39:874 - or 01:40:217 - more better.
Hard
  1. 00:33:531 (2) - add whistle ? 恐らくここのピアノ？はフォローしてwhistleつけたほうがいい感じがしました。
  2. 00:38:160 (3,1) - これこのままでも全く問題がないんですが、下記の画像のような重ね方をすると、見栄えがよくなります。フローを保ったまま見栄えも整えていくと譜面としてのまとまりがよくなりますが、あえて崩しているのであればそのままでも全く問題の要素はありません。
    img
  3. 00:39:188 (2,3) - ここの赤線の音を1/1sliderで拾ってしまうのは少々勿体ないような気がしました。00:36:445 (3,4) - こちらで拾っているように、この個所の音取りも変更してみてはどうでしょう？例えばこんな感じとか・・・。
    img
  4. 00:45:360 (1,2,1) - ここの2の単発はタイミングが少し取りづらい感じがしました。これは２を削除して、00:45:360 (1) - ここをrepeatさせてみるっていうのはどうでしょうか？
  5. 01:22:217 (1,2,3,4) - ここの音取り、綺麗に音は拾えているんですが、表の音なのか裏の音なのかいまいちパットしないような印象がありました。下記のような音取りはどうでしょうか？
Sorcery
  1. 00:02:674 (3) - 過去postに裏の音を拾っているというような書き込みを見かけたので提案ですが、それぞれの音はしっかりとしていて、slider終点にもwhistleを入れて強調させるくらいなら、これを夫々単発２個に変更させたほうがフィットするように思えました。
  2. 00:05:417 (1,2) - これの重ね方も特にこだわりがないなら、画像のように重ねると綺麗だったりします。
    img
  3. 00:21:017 (1) - ここは見やすくするための new comboでしょうか？おそらくこの個所は new comboを入れないほうが好ましいですが、意図的なのであれば、そのままでも問題はありません。
  4. 01:16:045 (2,3,4,5) - ここの３連打からのスライダーのフローがあまり綺麗に感じませんでした。スライダー入り方を緩やかにしてみるとか、逆に音取り自体を変更してみるのはどうでしょう？ここら一体を落ち着いた感じにしているのであれば、少し空白を作ってもいいかもしれません。下記の音取りや配置方法など一度試してみてはどうでしょうか？

    img
  5. 01:23:760 (1,1) - 01:37:474 (1,1) - same as 00:21:017 (1) -
  6. 01:32:503 (4) - New combo入れ忘れかな？パターン的に多分全部ここは New combo 01:27:017 (1) - 00:15:703 (1) -
Good Luck!
Last edited by Satellite , edited 1 time in total.
Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
i wont give up definitely 4ever :^)
milr_
1,324 posts
Joined June 2014
milr_
☆
Half
286 posts
Joined December 2015
Half
Sorcery

00:05:417 (1) - i think should follow vocal sounds imo

00:43:303 (4,5,6) - how about this? https://puu.sh/zp24d/774cd79c9b.jpg

can u try to stack 01:04:388 (6,7,1) - to 01:03:703 (3) - 's sliders trail?

sahuang's Insane

00:03:898 (5,1) - how about this? https://puu.sh/zp2Kz/83e6a7f9f6.jpg

00:05:611 (1,2,3,4) - this slider is too overlapped and hard to see How about this? https://puu.sh/zp2QS/6232451ca9.jpg

00:28:055 (4,1) - this note also overlapped how about this? https://puu.sh/zp35A/b5775a99e2.jpg

00:36:451 (5) - NC

00:39:192 (5) - NC

other difficulty is perfect i think :)
Levia
2 posts
Joined May 2014
Levia
初mod失礼します、お手柔らかに
Sorcery

01:09:017 (3,1) - ここclapとwhistle逆のほうが曲に合ってる気がします

01:12:960 (2,3) - この部分だけ1/4スライダーにすればボーカルも上手くフォロー出来る気がしますがどうですか

01:02:160 (2,3) - ボーカル的に1/2のリバーススライダーとかが個人的に似合うとおもいます

駄文失礼しました-W- がんばってください！
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