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Sakakibara Yui & Sakuragawa Megu - Mahou no Kotoba

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Petal
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Petal
Self mod removed useless green lines and fixed hitsounds

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
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[Metadata]
Title:Mahou no Kotoba
TitleUnicode:マホウノコトバ
Artist:Sakakibara Yui & Sakuragawa Megu
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい＆櫻川めぐ
Creator:joker-
Version:Matha's Normal
Source:まほ×ろば-Witches spiritual home-
Tags:eroge
BeatmapID:1432814
BeatmapSetID:668026

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Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
Finally done!! also updated gds.
Ready for mod!
July - San
137 posts
Joined July 2016
July - San
Hihi

From mod req
M4M
My map
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/693013/#osu/1467462

(or you can mod this) 2map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597903


Matha's Normal

00:06:960 (1) - you must leave at least one white bar after a spinner, in easy and normal diff

00:41:245 (3) - NC Here

00:52:217 (3) - NC Here

01:03:017 (4) - This slider goes off the beat, and ends very late, I should finish here 01:03:531 -

01:08:674 (5) - NC?

01:36:103 (2) - NC

01:38:160 (2) - I think this slider should start here 01:37:988 -

01:38:845 (3) - To my taste it would be better if this slider ends here 01:39:874 -

sahuang's Insane

00:10:837 (5) - I think this circle is very unnecessary

00:35:423 (1) - NC Not here

00:35:765 (2) - Here nc

01:33:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo is very long, you should cut it..

Maybe NC here 01:33:675 (3) - ?

Little's Insane

For my taste, I think it would look good NC in these parts

01:07:645 (3) - NC

01:07:988 (5) - NC

01:08:331 (7) - NC

I repeat, for my taste.

Sorry, but I could not find anything else, great job guys, luck for the ranking :)
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao
from Q

im sick..

  • alacat's Easy
  1. remove unsnapped bookmark lol
  2. 00:35:074 (2,1) - better overlap please, look better like this https://puu.sh/ytVJc/a39ec7b455.png
  • Matha's Normal
  1. 00:26:674 (5,6) - this blanket look bad tbh lul, i know that you can't make better so just move 00:27:531 (6)
  2. 00:30:274 (3) - vocals who need to be clickable on the tail umm not good so just add a note 00:30:960 - and slider should be finish 00:30:788
  3. 01:03:017 (4) - like i said before ^ https://puu.sh/ytW4t/060f1f5e73.png sound so much better
  4. 01:12:788 (1,1,1) - it's not very a good to make this kind of combos on low diffs i think, it's can be uncomfortable for newbies to click on these notes
  5. 01:36:103 (2,3,4,5) - square doesn't look good just move circle 5 at x:175 y:212
  • Hard
  1. Remove combo color green it's doesn't fit with background xd
  2. 00:33:703 (3) - this isn't a 1/4 slider renverse for emphasis piano sounds
  • sahuang's Insane
  1. uninherited point with others diffs
  • Little's Insane
  1. omg this bg <3
  2. Remove combo color green too because it's doesn't fit with background xd
  3. 00:26:160 (1) - 1/2 slider fit better for this sound 00:26:331 - plus piano should be clickable on the white tick, like you did 00:31:645 (1,2)
  4. 01:23:417 (6) - 2 circles should be great because this slider doesn't represent the rhythm as well so it's preferable to replace it by circles
  5. 01:27:445 - you forgot a note for drums (should be similar to 00:10:217 (3,4,5) )
  • Sorcery
  1. looking good~
gl!~
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

July - San wrote:

Little's Insane

For my taste, I think it would look good NC in these parts That does make it easier to read. Added.

01:07:645 (3) - NC

01:07:988 (5) - NC

01:08:331 (7) - NC

I repeat, for my taste.

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • Little's Insane
  1. omg this bg <3
  2. Remove combo color green too because it's doesn't fit with background xd I'll leave combo colours up to joker-
  3. 00:26:160 (1) - 1/2 slider fit better for this sound 00:26:331 - plus piano should be clickable on the white tick, like you did 00:31:645 (1,2) I don't think so. There's nothing significant at that beat, and current rhythm gives better vocal emphasis, which is what i'm going for in this first phrase.
  4. 01:23:417 (6) - 2 circles should be great because this slider doesn't represent the rhythm as well so it's preferable to replace it by circles Slider feels better to me.
  5. 01:27:445 - you forgot a note for drums (should be similar to 00:10:217 (3,4,5) ) Intentionally omitted.
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/yvRcu/31f2a0e67f.zip
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
never give up

Matha's Normal
  1. 00:05:074 - add note ? I think that it becomes easy to play more by adding note to this place. Please correct the later placement at 00:05:417 (4,1,2) -
  2. 00:09:703 (1) - I want to move grid point behind slider to the left side. I think that the person becomes easy to look. For example, how about x25 y138 so?
  3. 00:20:674 (1,2) - "beep beep" I am the blanket Police. I want to let both slider have blanket. Specifically, please refer to the following image. Please use it or next code.
    img
    308,368,20674,6,0,P|340:231|187:197,1,315,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    249,281,22045,2,0,P|95:193|239:91,1,420,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:03:017 (4,5) - Some these sounds are strange. Please try the following rhythm.
  5. 01:13:303 (1,1) - Remove New combo. because I can understand this with direction(/me god), but it will become the cause that I confound it to a beginner player.
  6. 01:26:503 (1) - same as 00:09:703 (1) - here.
  7. 01:38:845 (3) - slider end 01:39:874 - or 01:40:217 - more better.
Hard
  1. 00:33:531 (2) - add whistle ? 恐らくここのピアノ？はフォローしてwhistleつけたほうがいい感じがしました。
  2. 00:38:160 (3,1) - これこのままでも全く問題がないんですが、下記の画像のような重ね方をすると、見栄えがよくなります。フローを保ったまま見栄えも整えていくと譜面としてのまとまりがよくなりますが、あえて崩しているのであればそのままでも全く問題の要素はありません。
    img
  3. 00:39:188 (2,3) - ここの赤線の音を1/1sliderで拾ってしまうのは少々勿体ないような気がしました。00:36:445 (3,4) - こちらで拾っているように、この個所の音取りも変更してみてはどうでしょう？例えばこんな感じとか・・・。
    img
  4. 00:45:360 (1,2,1) - ここの2の単発はタイミングが少し取りづらい感じがしました。これは２を削除して、00:45:360 (1) - ここをrepeatさせてみるっていうのはどうでしょうか？
  5. 01:22:217 (1,2,3,4) - ここの音取り、綺麗に音は拾えているんですが、表の音なのか裏の音なのかいまいちパットしないような印象がありました。下記のような音取りはどうでしょうか？
Sorcery
  1. 00:02:674 (3) - 過去postに裏の音を拾っているというような書き込みを見かけたので提案ですが、それぞれの音はしっかりとしていて、slider終点にもwhistleを入れて強調させるくらいなら、これを夫々単発２個に変更させたほうがフィットするように思えました。
  2. 00:05:417 (1,2) - これの重ね方も特にこだわりがないなら、画像のように重ねると綺麗だったりします。
    img
  3. 00:21:017 (1) - ここは見やすくするための new comboでしょうか？おそらくこの個所は new comboを入れないほうが好ましいですが、意図的なのであれば、そのままでも問題はありません。
  4. 01:16:045 (2,3,4,5) - ここの３連打からのスライダーのフローがあまり綺麗に感じませんでした。スライダー入り方を緩やかにしてみるとか、逆に音取り自体を変更してみるのはどうでしょう？ここら一体を落ち着いた感じにしているのであれば、少し空白を作ってもいいかもしれません。下記の音取りや配置方法など一度試してみてはどうでしょうか？

    img
  5. 01:23:760 (1,1) - 01:37:474 (1,1) - same as 00:21:017 (1) -
  6. 01:32:503 (4) - New combo入れ忘れかな？パターン的に多分全部ここは New combo 01:27:017 (1) - 00:15:703 (1) -
Good Luck!
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milr_
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milr_
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Half
286 posts
Joined December 2015
Half
Sorcery

00:05:417 (1) - i think should follow vocal sounds imo

00:43:303 (4,5,6) - how about this? https://puu.sh/zp24d/774cd79c9b.jpg

can u try to stack 01:04:388 (6,7,1) - to 01:03:703 (3) - 's sliders trail?

sahuang's Insane

00:03:898 (5,1) - how about this? https://puu.sh/zp2Kz/83e6a7f9f6.jpg

00:05:611 (1,2,3,4) - this slider is too overlapped and hard to see How about this? https://puu.sh/zp2QS/6232451ca9.jpg

00:28:055 (4,1) - this note also overlapped how about this? https://puu.sh/zp35A/b5775a99e2.jpg

00:36:451 (5) - NC

00:39:192 (5) - NC

other difficulty is perfect i think :)
Levia
2 posts
Joined May 2014
Levia
初mod失礼します、お手柔らかに
Sorcery

01:09:017 (3,1) - ここclapとwhistle逆のほうが曲に合ってる気がします

01:12:960 (2,3) - この部分だけ1/4スライダーにすればボーカルも上手くフォロー出来る気がしますがどうですか

01:02:160 (2,3) - ボーカル的に1/2のリバーススライダーとかが個人的に似合うとおもいます

駄文失礼しました-W- がんばってください！
Eir_DELETED
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • Hard
  1. Remove combo color green it's doesn't fit with background xd i dont wanna remove it cuz the combo colors come from the logo of this game xd
  2. 00:33:703 (3) - this isn't a 1/4 slider renverse for emphasis piano sounds sure!
gl!~

Half wrote:

Sorcery

00:05:417 (1) - i think should follow vocal sounds imo nah, rather i should ignore the vocal here especially cuz this part is really calm and im not mapping based on vocal at the whole in my map

00:43:303 (4,5,6) - how about this? good!https://puu.sh/zp24d/774cd79c9b.jpg

can u try to stack 01:04:388 (6,7,1) - to 01:03:703 (3) - 's sliders trail? trash stacked LOL fixed

other difficulty is perfect i think :)

Levia wrote:

初mod失礼します、お手柔らかに
Sorcery

01:09:017 (3,1) - ここclapとwhistle逆のほうが曲に合ってる気がします 全くその通りです、直しました

01:12:960 (2,3) - この部分だけ1/4スライダーにすればボーカルも上手くフォロー出来る気がしますがどうですか　この譜面のコンセプトとして、ボーカルに重きをおいてマッピングしていないのです。どのパートもそうなのですが、00:23:417 - ~ 00:34:045 - のaメロにおいてはボーカルをほぼ全無視した音取りとなっていて、その一貫性を譜面全体で作るためにもボーカルよりドラムやメロディーを最優先としたヒットサウンドつけやマッピングをやっています。なのでとりあえず保留でお願いします！！　そのせいでinsaneよりコンボ数が低いんだよなぁ！！！どおしてくれんだよ！こんないい声してる曲でボーカル無視するとかお前頭いかれてんだろ！！！remapしろ！！！といった苦情は常時受け付けております。

01:02:160 (2,3) - ボーカル的に1/2のリバーススライダーとかが個人的に似合うとおもいます　以上の理由でここもキープでお願いします！

駄文失礼しました-W- がんばってください！
@[ White Music ], Beom
Why did you guys waste your kds? jk, thanks for your kindness!!!

thanks guys!! they were seriously helpful for me!!!
Left
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Left
joker always helped me so free mod
[General]
sahu inheritied timeline check pls


[Top diff]
bg is too moe

00:09:188 (1,2) - this DS is too high so emphasis of 00:09:703 (1,2,3) - got messed up, which should have more impact.
00:57:531 (6,7,1) - how about grouping this three with NC instead?
00:59:417 (2,3) - 1/2 slider would work better i think
01:21:017 (1) - maybe i hope you can expand kiai time until here, 01:18:274 (1) - this part's beat is as intense as 01:10:045 (1) -
->also i hope 01:18:274 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this can be harder a bit
01:39:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - i hope you can reduce DS a bit.. but you wanna stack :)

[Hard]
00:22:045 (1) - why sliderend is like this, can extend to 00:23:245 -
01:05:074 (2,3) - and 01:06:445 (2) - be consistent i hope
01:18:274 (1) - same with top diff about difficulty
01:23:417 (5,6,1) - sound is not intense, but this gives too much emphasis with 3 clickables. 1/2 + circle would be better

[Normal]
00:44:845 (3,1) - breaktime?
01:38:845 (3) - maybe ending slider in 01:40:217 - would make better feeling

[Easy]
gg i can't find anything

good luck!
Lince Cosmico
339 posts
Joined February 2015
Lince Cosmico
I'll just post some thoughts I had on the last diff, so take this as a quick mod
Sorcery

- 00:01:988 (1) - This NC is pretty much innecessary, 00:01:988 (1,2,3) - takes part of the same rhythm and vocals than 00:01:474 (1) -
- 00:03:874 - This sound is pretty much notorious, it has piano on it and also a vocal, so I think you should map it
- 00:06:960 (1) - Cool slider, nice job, but sadly 00:09:188 (1) - this note is kinda hard to read, consider this as a "Hidden players problem n°1" (I tested it ingame with hidden and it is kinda hard to read, please consider putting it in other place). There's 171ms difference only (or around that) between the sliderend and the note, so it's uncomfortable to read tbh
Since you pointed a stack issue on my map, I'll point one for you in exchange 00:12:960 (1,3) - (don't take this wrong xD i'm just relationing it)
- 00:16:045 (2) - This one would play better if it was pointing from top to bottom (basically Ctrl+J and move it a bit up)
- 00:22:560 - Totally unnecessary green line (you change the volume but there are no notes to change)
- 00:28:903 (1) - Why did you suddenly reduce the spacing that much? I think you should stick to your previous spacing reduction instead of just using 0,3x
- 00:43:645 (6) - What do you think about adding a 3/4 slider here? (one that starts on this tic and ends on 00:43:903 - ) with lower SV, it would play really cool and emphasize the bg sounds. A break seems like it's not really emphasizing the sound even thought it's relevant
- 01:00:103 (6) - I think doing Ctrl+J here (keeping the same placement) would play a LOT better than the current one, siince the cursor movement wouldn't be that weird between this and the previous note, also It would fit 01:00:445 (1) - 's shape and make it seem a little more structurated
- 01:08:160 (4,5) - What's up with this spacing lol, It is higher than 01:09:188 (1,2) - even thought the last named is more intense
- 01:13:474 (7) - You could curve this a bit more, there's a grey anchor but it doesn't feel curved at all
- 01:13:645 (1,1) - Putting the 2nd slider on 01:13:645 (1) - 's position would improve the emphasizing on the break (between both notes) a lot, if you come to think, the song kinda "stops" there, so why would you need to move your cursor to 01:13:988 (1) - ? Exactly, The emphasis is lacking, even thought you made it correctly
- 01:14:331 (2,3,4) - I don't know how, but I can see that you could've executed this in a better way, it feels kinda weird to play it like that. Maybe it's because the cursor movement leads you to travel a higher space and then reduce it on 01:14:674 (4,5) -
- 01:15:531 - This is like the only section where you used different slidershapes (besides the heart one) on the whole map, can I ask why didn't you use these kind of shapes before to make the map less monotone and more interesting, and why are you using them now?
- 01:23:760 (1,1) - This is what I meant by "stop emphasis" :D gj
- 01:29:588 (2) - Moving this downwards would emphasize this pattern's flow imo, right now it feels kinda weird since your previous slider is pointing downwards
- 01:38:160 (3,5) - Fix stack

Sorry this ended up being a bit larger than what I expected, but I hope it helps you
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Eir_DELETED
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really appreciate you guys effort so much!!!
Gonna reply mod until this weekend
Lince Cosmico
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Joined February 2015
Lince Cosmico

joker- wrote:

really appreciate you guys effort so much!!!
Gonna reply mod until this weekend

o fuck you saw that shitpost with bad structure, aaaaaa i edited it it should be fine now
Eir_DELETED
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Eir_DELETED

Chekito wrote:

joker- wrote:

really appreciate you guys effort so much!!!
Gonna reply mod until this weekend

o fuck you saw that shitpost with bad structure, aaaaaa i edited it it should be fine now
Haha :D u dont worry about that at all. anyway, thanks a lot!
Ryuusei Aika
Elite Mapper
1,085 posts
Joined January 2016
Ryuusei Aika
:) Hello!
From my modding queue.

Annotation

Words in red means that is an unrankable issue (= violate the "Rules" in Ranking Critiria General / Ranking Critiria in osu!) that you MUST fix.

Words in bold black means that is an issue that I highly recommand you (= either violate the "Guidelines" in Ranking Criteria General / Ranking Criteria in osu!, or I believe this issue will influence a lot of the experience of playing) to fix.

Words in black means that is an personal issue and have no big influence on your map in my eyes.

The mark "^" means "here is the same question with whose at above".

General

  1. sahuang's Insane has inconsistent red line, please ask him to fix that.

alacat's Easy

  1. 00:56:331 (1,2) - Maybe make some changes for better visual ds? Like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/djxFsUF.png
  2. Nothing much to say, solid as usual!

Matha's Normal

  1. 00:06:960 (1) - Volume setting on green line conflicted with red line.
  2. 00:17:931 (1) - Nerf that NC? Just keep putting nc on every two long white lines should be good (also here has nothing special like sv changes etc.)
  3. 00:43:645 (6,1) - Flow here feels not quite natural, the cursor doesn't follow the trail of 00:43:988 (1) - fluently after clicking 00:43:645 (6) - . Something like this may work better: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/6LOI8lz.png
  4. 00:57:531 (4) - It is regretted that ending this slider with a strong beat on white line. For me, rhythm like this may emphasize the beat at 00:57:703 - more properly: changing 00:57:188 (3) - into a 1/1 slider and put a note at 00:57:703 - , just like what you have arranged for 00:56:331 (1,2) - .
  5. 01:13:303 (1,1) - I know you want to use NCs to emphasize, but that may cause read problems to new players (They may regarded them as a rhythm change, which are obviously not the case). Reconsider to cancel all those NCs for better reading?
  6. Interesting rhythm changes, just needs to fix some minal issues then it would be great!

Hard

  1. 00:11:931 (5) - Quite subjective but maybe just give more variety here should be better. As I heard the drum beat between 00:11:931 - and 00:12:103 - are much more intense, you can change this reverse slider into something like that: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/7oXLQ44.png
  2. 00:17:417 (5) - / 01:28:731 (5) - / 01:34:217 (5) - If you agree what I mentioned above, change them in the same way as I mentioned above too as there are the same issue.
  3. Clean map with nice flow, love slider-leniency-based patterns like 00:36:103 (2,3,4) - !

sahuang's Insane


  • (I modified the timing for properly mod your diff so maybe you need to firstly change the timing and resnap all notes, as if not the timestamps will all out of place)
  1. 00:27:515 (1,2,3,4) - Don't really get your idea of four notes with distance increasing here while the music here is kinda quite and identical (not like 00:28:201 (1,2,3,4) - , with piano sounds change their tunes). Something like this would work better imo: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/An1L8xQ.png
  2. 01:14:829 (4,5) - Rhythm here sounds wrong for me, the drum beats are 1/3 not 1/4 so maybe rhythm should be arranged like this: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/bYgeDrN.png
  3. 01:26:308 (1) - Nerf this NC will clearly told players that a rhythm change has happed for 01:26:136 (1,1) - (1/2, no longer 1/1 like 01:25:451 (1,1,1) - ), which would be better for reading imo.
  4. Good map with properly distance-changed notes and acute angle patterns!

Little's Insane

  1. 01:14:845 (4,5) - Rhythm here sounds wrong for me, the drum beats are 1/3 not 1/4. (Same as I mentioned in sahuang's Insane)
  2. Nothing much to say, perfectly arranged objects and jumps, clean patterns, love it!

Sorcery

  1. This map doesn't use much overlaps, so AR=9.2 (even 9.1) is enough for players to play. (9.3 is a little bit high for me)
  2. I have some general concerns about your 1/4 slider usages at the beginning (00:09:703 - 00:17:931 - ) and the end (01:26:503 - 01:34:731 - ). In those two parts, the distance between all 1/4 sliders and their following objects (means 00:10:560 (2,3) - / 00:16:045 (2,3) - etc.) are all a little bit too large (you can hear music decrease its intensity here, compared with, respectively, 00:09:703 (1,2,3) - / 00:15:188 (1,2,3) - etc.) so I suggest you to decrease those larger distances in order to represent better the intensity changes of music. As example, here are my two solutions for the two patterns I mentioned above: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/ECM5Aig.png / https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/z9JAXkA.png
  3. 01:14:845 (4,5) - Rhythm here sounds wrong for me, the drum beats are 1/3 not 1/4. (Same as I mentioned in sahuang's Insane)
  4. Nice diff with neatly arranged patterns, nearly every objects represent the music quite well, enjoy to play it!

To sum up: Solid and neat mapset, just need to pay a little bit more attentions on details.
Good luck, and have fun! :)
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
@half wrong diff? i didnt see your time stamps...

others mostly fixed

@Ryuusei Aika
00:27:531 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - circles seem not a problem to me as the spacing is low.
reest fixed thx

@joker help me copy hitsound

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58649
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 34406,39888,45371,48626,50853,53595,70203,70888,71231,71916,72259,72601
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Mahou no Kotoba
TitleUnicode:マホウノコトバ
Artist:Sakakibara Yui & Sakuragawa Megu
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい＆櫻川めぐ
Creator:joker-
Version:sahuang's Insane
Source:まほ×ろば-Witches spiritual home-
Tags:eroge
BeatmapID:1417005
BeatmapSetID:668026

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7.6
ApproachRate:8.6
SliderMultiplier:1.65
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Combo1 : 0,253,253
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Combo3 : 255,36,36
Combo4 : 72,255,19

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372,125,1988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Little
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Joined November 2012
Little
I wasn't satisfied with my diff, so I remapped it.
@Ryuusei Aika thanks for pointing out th 1/3 rhythm. Fixed in my diff.

http://puu.sh/zsq6b/bcce32574c.zip
alacat
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2011
alacat

Shunao wrote:

  • alacat's Easy
  1. remove unsnapped bookmark lol :arrow: ok
  2. 00:35:074 (2,1) - better overlap please, look better like this https://puu.sh/ytVJc/a39ec7b455.png :arrow: I feel that's not affected the visual for playing. Then, i'd prefer it to be a triangle shape around here

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

alacat's Easy

  1. 00:56:331 (1,2) - Maybe make some changes for better visual ds? Like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/djxFsUF.png :arrow: fixed!
Thanks ~

http://puu.sh/zstqW/75528a5c83.zip
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