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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 12. Oktober 2017 at 16:10:02

Artist: R3 Music Box
Title: FREEDOM DiVE
Source: BMS
Tags: Parousia xi cytus voez chunithm happy calm piano
BPM: 82,5
Filesize: 1974kb
Play Time: 00:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 8Key (1,08 stars, 135 notes)
  2. Normal - 8Key (1,71 stars, 276 notes)


Download: R3 Music Box - FREEDOM DiVE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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You won't get 800pp here
Easy by me | 100% Hitsounded
Normal by me | 100% Hitsounded
Check out R3 Music Box Youtube Channel
Background Image by Losno
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just giving a quick checkthrough for pitch relevance issues, idgaf bout kds

1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8 (lol)

Easy

00:10:234 (10234|1) - move to 4
00:16:780 (16780|6) - move to 5
00:17:143 (17143|4) - move to 7
00:20:052 (20052|2) - move to 8
00:20:416 (20416|7) - move to 7
00:40:052 (40052|6) - move to 3/4
00:40:416 (40416|3) - move to 6/7
00:49:612 (49612|1) - move to 7/8

Normal

00:09:871 (9871|4) - move to 8
00:10:234 (10234|5) - move to 7
00:33:507 (33507|7) - move to 5

Good luck on ranking this masterpiece! <3
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Weber wrote:

just giving a quick checkthrough for pitch relevance issues, idgaf bout kds

1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8 (lol)

Easy

00:10:234 (10234|1) - move to 4 Ye
00:16:780 (16780|6) - move to 5 ye
00:17:143 (17143|4) - move to 7 Same as above
00:20:052 (20052|2) - move to 8 ^
00:20:416 (20416|7) - move to 7 ^
00:40:052 (40052|6) - move to 3/4 3
00:40:416 (40416|3) - move to 6/7 6 (next one 7)
00:49:612 (49612|1) - move to 7/8 I make this one 5 because it's actually same pitch like 00:48:634 (48634|4) -

Normal

00:09:871 (9871|4) - move to 8 Oke
00:10:234 (10234|5) - move to 7 Oke
00:33:507 (33507|7) - move to 5 Oke

Good luck on ranking this masterpiece! <3 //Thank you very much!
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bg too high res heres version that wont make the file too big https://i.imgur.com/cpCq0v6.jpg kds pls
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why isnt this ranked yet
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it's should be "FREEDOM DiVE↓".
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Oh yeah. Kinda forgot that arrow thing oops.
Will fix it then, thanks :D
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Setup: you can add tags "calm piano"

1-9 / S+1-8

Easy
00:08:416 (8416|3,8780|3) - move to 6, it differs from 00:02:234 (2234|3,2962|3) - and you can emphasize they are different, and 3/4 jacks are on left hand, maybe it's not cool
00:07:689 (7689|4,8052|6) - *swap* would fit more, "main" piano is more noticeable than background sounds for pitch
00:49:612 - uuuu why no notes here


Normal
Hitsounds interrupt the actual music, you might want to reduce the hitsounds volume
00:18:234 - note to S column? (actually I don't really understand scratch-placing logic in this map)
00:40:416 (40416|5) - moving this to 4 would make pattern more symmetric and emphasize that 00:39:689 (39689|6,39689|4,40416|5,40416|2) - are same (almost)


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Hi and Bye mod

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

Easy
  1. 00:01:507 (1507|5) - to 5? same column as 00:00:053 (53|4) - for PR
  2. 00:13:871 (13871|5) - to 5? forms a different pattern from 00:11:689 (11689|3,12052|4,12416|5) -
    if it's to replicate 00:11:689 (11689|3,12052|4,12416|5) - but reversed, imo 00:12:052 - piano part is kinda different from 00:13:507 - part
  3. 00:38:234 (38234|2,38598|3) - to 4,6 respectively? hand balance
  4. 00:40:416 (40416|5) - to 5? same PR as 00:39:689 - therefore same column.
  5. 00:41:507 (41507|2) - to 2? column 2 is kinda empty
  6. 00:48:187 (48187|3,48634|4,49095|5,49612|4) - one column to right? 00:48:187 - same PR as 00:47:371 -
  7. 00:49:982 - add a note here, maybe 8? to layer the last piano sound so it doesnt end kinda abruptly
Normal
  1. 00:10:234 (10234|1) - to 5? same pattern as 00:08:780 (8780|4,8780|2,9507|3,9507|5) -
  2. 00:11:689 - https://i.gyazo.com/087c474d49d44a9d217 ... 903c1c.png? probably a better pattern to suit the PR
  3. 00:21:143 (21143|3,21507|5,21871|2) - to 6,4,6 respectively? makes 00:21:871 - a nice double stairs pattern too
  4. 00:28:234 - https://i.gyazo.com/9695bbbf5ef32850681 ... a4c5a6.png? a different pattern from the beginning section
  5. 00:32:416 (32416|2,32780|4) - to 5,4 respectively? for PR

good luck
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eyes wrote:



Setup: you can add tags "calm piano"

1-9 / S+1-8

Easy
00:08:416 (8416|3,8780|3) - move to 6, it differs from 00:02:234 (2234|3,2962|3) - and you can emphasize they are different, and 3/4 jacks are on left hand, maybe it's not cool I am 99% sure that these have the same pitch.
00:07:689 (7689|4,8052|6) - *swap* would fit more, "main" piano is more noticeable than background sounds for pitch applied
00:49:612 - uuuu why no notes here //Here is a note. A single note. I don't want to add 1/6 here. Spread.


Normal
Hitsounds interrupt the actual music, you might want to reduce the hitsounds volume Good point. I will hitsound this once again later
00:18:234 - note to S column? (actually I don't really understand scratch-placing logic in this map) Nope. There is one certain sound i follow in for the scratch which plays in the background
00:40:416 (40416|5) - moving this to 4 would make pattern more symmetric and emphasize that 00:39:689 (39689|6,39689|4,40416|5,40416|2) - are same (almost) Arranged a bit




Thank you! :)

ByeForNow wrote:

Hi and Bye mod

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

Easy
  1. 00:01:507 (1507|5) - to 5? same column as 00:00:053 (53|4) - for PR Oki
  2. 00:13:871 (13871|5) - to 5? forms a different pattern from 00:11:689 (11689|3,12052|4,12416|5) -
    if it's to replicate 00:11:689 (11689|3,12052|4,12416|5) - but reversed, imo 00:12:052 - piano part is kinda different from 00:13:507 - part Good catch
  3. 00:38:234 (38234|2,38598|3) - to 4,6 respectively? hand balance changed
  4. 00:40:416 (40416|5) - to 5? same PR as 00:39:689 - therefore same column.
  5. 00:41:507 (41507|2) - to 2? column 2 is kinda empty Accepted both
  6. 00:48:187 (48187|3,48634|4,49095|5,49612|4) - one column to right? 00:48:187 - same PR as 00:47:371 - accepted
  7. 00:49:982 - add a note here, maybe 8? to layer the last piano sound so it doesnt end kinda abruptlyNope. Won't add 1/6 notes into an Easy
Normal
  1. 00:10:234 (10234|1) - to 5? same pattern as 00:08:780 (8780|4,8780|2,9507|3,9507|5) - Okay
  2. 00:11:689 - https://i.gyazo.com/087c474d49d44a9d217 ... 903c1c.png? probably a better pattern to suit the PR That's pretty cool.
    Accepted!
  3. 00:21:143 (21143|3,21507|5,21871|2) - to 6,4,6 respectively? makes 00:21:871 - a nice double stairs pattern too Good catch!
  4. 00:28:234 - https://i.gyazo.com/9695bbbf5ef32850681 ... a4c5a6.png? a different pattern from the beginning section I give it a try
  5. 00:32:416 (32416|2,32780|4) - to 5,4 respectively? for PR Oki

good luck


Thank you :)
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Looks good, bubbled!
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hi c:
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cant wait for my 8pp
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is this 7+1 or 4+4k?
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shionelove wrote:

is this 7+1 or 4+4k?

Same thought
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I mean im sure this hates are not only for R3 ez short mapping but for uncomfortable scratches make me guess you haven't played any IIDX maps yet.
Honestly this map doesn't need any scratch,or only one for last note if you want to add.Anyway this map is ranked now,so i hope o!m never rank these "IIDX style" again.
thank you.
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shionelove wrote:

I mean im sure this hates are not only for R3 ez short mapping but for uncomfortable scratches make me guess you haven't played any IIDX maps yet.
Honestly this map doesn't need any scratch,or only one for last note if you want to add.Anyway this map is ranked now,so i hope o!m never rank these "IIDX style" again.
thank you.


You had the chance to raise your voice in this thread when the Map was qualified. I never mapped 7+1K before so i would be more than happy about every feedback, what is good, what is bad on my pattern. I don't mind honest feedback which try to improve my pattern.
Complaining after the Map got ranked and call it bad or call it "iidx style" while i never tried to copy any kind of style.
This doesn't help me, it doesn't help the map or the community.

Next time simply post maybe some pattern suggestion and explain me a bit in detail what exactly is bad.
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shionelove wrote:

I mean im sure this hates are not only for R3 ez short mapping but for uncomfortable scratches make me guess you haven't played any IIDX maps yet.
Honestly this map doesn't need any scratch,or only one for last note if you want to add.Anyway this map is ranked now,so i hope o!m never rank these "IIDX style" again.
thank you.


You had 7 days dude .-.
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Feerum wrote:

shionelove wrote:

I mean im sure this hates are not only for R3 ez short mapping but for uncomfortable scratches make me guess you haven't played any IIDX maps yet.
Honestly this map doesn't need any scratch,or only one for last note if you want to add.Anyway this map is ranked now,so i hope o!m never rank these "IIDX style" again.
thank you.


You had the chance to raise your voice in this thread when the Map was qualified. I never mapped 7+1K before so i would be more than happy about every feedback, what is good, what is bad on my pattern. I don't mind honest feedback which try to improve my pattern.
Complaining after the Map got ranked and call it bad or call it "iidx style" while i never tried to copy any kind of style.
This doesn't help me, it doesn't help the map or the community.

Next time simply post maybe some pattern suggestion and explain me a bit in detail what exactly is bad.

no one answered my question to confirm mapping style.

shionelove wrote:

is this 7+1 or 4+4k?

if it's 4+4k i have nothing to say,if not i have something.
and how did you think my feedback is just complaining?did you read actually?i said "Honestly this map doesn't need any scratch,or only one for last note if you want to add."
anyway i also have a fault i forgot to write the reason.Scratches should be on strong,not loud sounds such as cymbals samplings scratch sounds,and shouldn't be spammed unless song is kind of shakunetsu or something.here is the bad scratches from IIDX

this is one of the worst map in IIDX because some scratches are on snare sounds,and they are REALLY uncomfortable.

bad scratch patterns.and missed important sounds for scratches too.
these opinions are for 7+1k,so i had to confirm about style,but no one told me and 7 days gone.
and if you want to try new keymodes,why are there 3mods and bubbled then a BN instantly gave heart?
really bad attitude.

to Raveille:nice guardian
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