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Lindsay Lohan - Ultimate

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Dino99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月19日 at 下午 08:18:33

Artist: Lindsay Lohan
Title: Ultimate
Source: Freaky Friday
BPM: 159
Filesize: 4717kb
Play Time: 02:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Basic (1.79 stars, 134 notes)
  2. Difficult (4.89 stars, 373 notes)
  3. Extreme (5 stars, 596 notes)
  4. Medium (4.11 stars, 225 notes)
Download: Lindsay Lohan - Ultimate
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd Map!!~~>w<

Basic ~100%~
Medium ~100%~
Difficult ~100%~
Extreme ~100%~

It's really a nice song~

Enjoy!!~~

10/22 SB finished~
10/22 Change The Diff Name Ultimate ----> Extreme

Special thanks Breeze for timing help!!

Thanks For Mod
sirjuyt
Strawberry
spboxer3
Raging Bull
DarkRingSystem
Beren
bakabaka
Shiki
vivicat
Nymph
DarknessAngel
Bobo
mjw5150
Deif
Megurine Luka
bossandy
yuca
sirjuyt
hey :D

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*Freaky Friday是出處? 不確定 :?
*"Slow!.png"似乎沒用到

[Ultimate]
00:20:393 (5) - 一些想法 :arrow: (5)刪掉,(4),(6)加clap,粉紅(1)加finish
00:23:790 (1) - 頭加whistle?
00:25:299 (1) - whistle?
00:26:808 (T) - 直接就跳100%音量感覺有點突兀,大概80%就好?
00:56:903 (7,1) - 似乎容易點快 :arrow: (6)加一折返,(7)去掉,加一個circle在00:56:997 ?
00:58:695 (9,10) - 去掉,然後改成加finish的轉盤?
01:17:374 (5) - clap?
01:18:129 (1) - 背景沒finish,這裡有點怪,改成whistle?
01:47:186 (3,4,5) - 這三個ds改1.5x,然後擺成這樣? :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164424
01:50:205 (10) - 感覺要抖快一點~
02:03:224 (1) - 頭加個whistle?
02:10:205 (1) - clap?
02:11:714 (1) - ^
02:12:846 (3) - New Combo?
02:13:601 (3) - ^
02:18:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 也許排正一點~
02:47:563 (3) - 抖快一點?
02:48:695 (T) - 改成normal的finish?
02:54:733 (1) - 一段break 之後只放一個轉盤? 可能break補完或是直接在02:48:695結束?

[Difficult]
00:20:016 (7) - 尾加clap?
00:26:808 (T) - 音量降低?
00:37:374 (9) - 頭加clap?
00:58:884 (9) - 換轉盤?
01:10:205 (4) - (4) or (7) 改成彎的?
01:28:695 (5) - 頭加clap?
02:03:224 (1) - 頭加個whistle?
02:07:752 (1) - clap
02:10:205 (1) - ^
02:11:714 (1) - ^
02:13:224 (1) - ^
02:47:374 (10,11) - 去掉,(9)加finish,加兩個circle在02:48:318,02:48:507
02:48:695 (T) - 改成normal的finish?
02:54:733 (1) - 同Ultimate

[Medium]
00:23:790 (1) - 縮短到00:25:299,00:26:054,00:26:431加circle
00:26:808 (T) - 音量?
00:37:374 (4) - 頭clap
00:59:639 (x) - 加circle?
01:09:073 (1,2) - 感覺不對點.. 這樣? :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164438
01:15:110 (1) - 同前面
01:50:959 (x) - 加circle?
02:10:582 (1) - 去NC
02:10:959 (2) - NC
02:11:714 (1) - 去NC
02:12:469 (1,2,3,4) - clap好像全打歪了0 0,加在頭,去掉尾
02:13:978 (5) - 尾clap
02:47:186 (5) - 換成一個circle,02:48:318加一個circle?
02:54:733 (1) - 同之前diff

[Basic]
00:56:997 (1) - 好像不用特別在這裡拉高音量
01:06:054 (1) - 頭finish
01:28:695 (2) - 沒加音效的全補成clap
01:48:318 (1) - 嗯 同00:56:997
02:45:676 (1) - ^
02:54:733 (T) - 然後這裡沒用到的綠線要刪掉

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nice
期待早日ranked :)
Topic Starter
Dino99

sirjuyt wrote:

hey :D

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*Freaky Friday是出處? 不確定 :? .....fixed....
*"Slow!.png"似乎沒用到忘記了>///<..(到時候會做SB~)
[Ultimate]
00:20:393 (5) - 一些想法 :arrow: (5)刪掉,(4),(6)加clap,粉紅(1)加finish .....不要><
00:23:790 (1) - 頭加whistle? fixed
00:25:299 (1) - whistle?fixed
00:26:808 (T) - 直接就跳100%音量感覺有點突兀,大概80%就好? NO....><
00:56:903 (7,1) - 似乎容易點快 :arrow: (6)加一折返,(7)去掉,加一個circle在00:56:997 ?NO...
00:58:695 (9,10) - 去掉,然後改成加finish的轉盤?NO....
01:17:374 (5) - clap?fixed
01:18:129 (1) - 背景沒finish,這裡有點怪,改成whistle?NO....
01:47:186 (3,4,5) - 這三個ds改1.5x,然後擺成這樣? :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164424我在想想...:P
01:50:205 (10) - 感覺要抖快一點~NO~ 故意的><
02:03:224 (1) - 頭加個whistle?fixed
02:10:205 (1) - clap?NO....
02:11:714 (1) - ^NO....
02:12:846 (3) - New Combo?NO....
02:13:601 (3) - ^NO....
02:18:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 也許排正一點~有正了啦>W<~
02:47:563 (3) - 抖快一點?故意...的
02:48:695 (T) - 改成normal的finish?fixed
02:54:733 (1) - 一段break 之後只放一個轉盤? 可能break補完或是直接在02:48:695結束?這樣就好:P

[Difficult]
00:20:016 (7) - 尾加clap?NO...
00:26:808 (T) - 音量降低?NO...
00:37:374 (9) - 頭加clap?fixed
00:58:884 (9) - 換轉盤?NO...
01:10:205 (4) - (4) or (7) 改成彎的?NO...
01:28:695 (5) - 頭加clap?fixed
02:03:224 (1) - 頭加個whistle?fixed
02:07:752 (1) - clap再想想...
02:10:205 (1) - ^
02:11:714 (1) - ^
02:13:224 (1) - ^
02:47:374 (10,11) - 去掉,(9)加finish,加兩個circle在02:48:318,02:48:507NO...
02:48:695 (T) - 改成normal的finish?fixed
02:54:733 (1) - 同Ultimate.....NO

[Medium]
00:23:790 (1) - 縮短到00:25:299,00:26:054,00:26:431加circlefixed
00:26:808 (T) - 音量?NO....
00:37:374 (4) - 頭clapfixed
00:59:639 (x) - 加circle?NO...
01:09:073 (1,2) - 感覺不對點.. 這樣? :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/164438再試試吧...:P
01:15:110 (1) - 同前面fixed
01:50:959 (x) - 加circle?NO...
02:10:582 (1) - 去NC
02:10:959 (2) - NC
02:11:714 (1) - 去NC
02:12:469 (1,2,3,4) - clap好像全打歪了0 0,加在頭,去掉尾fixed
02:13:978 (5) - 尾clapfixed
02:47:186 (5) - 換成一個circle,02:48:318加一個circle?NO..
02:54:733 (1) - 同之前diff><

[Basic]
00:56:997 (1) - 好像不用特別在這裡拉高音量 :P
01:06:054 (1) - 頭finishfixed
01:28:695 (2) - 沒加音效的全補成clapfixed
01:48:318 (1) - 嗯 同00:56:997 :P
02:45:676 (1) - ^ :p
02:54:733 (T) - 然後這裡沒用到的綠線要刪掉fixed

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nice
期待早日ranked :)
謝謝了~~ :D
Strawberry
Request in game
:P 抱歉我总是很慢

[General]
-有的地方听起来好像offset有点延后

[Basic]
01:18:884 (1,2) - 距离大一点?像这样摆

[Medium]
00:58:507 (3) - 多拉一个往返?
02:47:186 (5) - ^


[Difficult]
00:47:563 (8) - 前后接的都是slider 距离可以灵活一下 这个slider的首尾调换一下?
00:50:959 - 去掉NC 换成00:51:337 - +NC 因为是连打 有助于读谱
01:27:563 (2,4) - 也是可以ctrl+j转过来然后spacing x1.3这样
01:36:242 - 去掉NC 加在01:36:997 -

[Ultimate]
great diff!

Strawberry's Star~☆

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Dino99

Strawberry wrote:

Required in game
:P 抱歉我总是很慢

[General]
-有的地方听起来好像offset有点延后Really.....?? :?

[Basic]
01:18:884 (1,2) - 距离大一点?像这样摆不要...><

[Medium]
00:58:507 (3) - 多拉一个往返?
02:47:186 (5) - ^No...

[Difficult]
00:47:563 (8) - 前后接的都是slider 距离可以灵活一下 这个slider的首尾调换一下?No....@@
00:50:959 - 去掉NC 换成00:51:337 - +NC 因为是连打 有助于读谱No...><
01:27:563 (2,4) - 也是可以ctrl+j转过来然后spacing x1.3这样fixed
01:36:242 - 去掉NC 加在01:36:997 - No......

[Ultimate]
great diff! Thanks~ :D

Strawberry's Star~☆ :)

Good luck :)
~~謝啦@@~~
spboxer3
你這張真的做的很好!!
[General]
delete slow.png 多餘的圖片放在裡面是Unranked的

[Medium]
00:37:374 (4,5) - 對稱好些
Topic Starter
Dino99

spboxer3 wrote:

你這張真的做的很好!! 謝啦~ :D
[General]
delete slow.png 多餘的圖片放在裡面是Unranked的恩恩~正在試著做SB~!!

[Medium]
00:37:374 (4,5) - 對稱好些Fixed
;)
Raging Bull
All these are suggestions.

General:
Add some tags? Maybe the album name?
I think kiai time sounds better at 00:50:959, 01:42:280, and 02:39:639 since she sings a lot more stronger at that part.

Basic:
00:53:978 (1,2,3) - Is this suppose to be a blanket? It doesn't look that nice. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/166835
01:33:978 (2) - I would remove one repeat and add a note at 01:36:242 and NC to follow your NCing pattern at 00:44:922 (1).
02:07:940 (3,1) - The overlap here doesn't look to appealing. Perhaps you could move 1 somewhere else?
02:20:016 (3) - Minus one repeat and add note with NC at 02:21:525? Same reason as second suggestion


Medium:
00:50:582 (6) - Removing a repeat and adding a note at the next downbeat with NC sounds better to me imo. It starts the next verse that's why.
01:09:073 (1) - This repeat feels awkward since it doesn't follow anything compared to 01:10:582 (2). I'm not sure what you could do but just pointing it out in case you wanted an opinion or so.
02:06:431 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/1? I think the note appears fast after spinner for beginners. Shortening the spinner gives enough recovery time for beginners to hit next note.
02:12:469 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know, this kinda feels hard for me since it's kinda fast sliders. Perhaps replace 2,4 with 1 note? Idk. Go give it a try and see if you like it.
02:27:186 (6) - Like the first suggestion. I think it would be better place to NC.
02:54:733 (1) - o.o 10 seconds of spinning. Maybe just remove the spinner and end it where easy ends? The place where easy ends sounds pretty nice too.

Difficult:
00:47:940 (1,2,3) - The blanket could be better. Try using approach circle as a guide http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/166839
00:58:884 (9) - Maybe .75x? Using .5x and crunched up slider seems like a hold slider. I don't mind hold sliders tbh, but I think .75 would be better since it still has the same effect, but just slightly faster.
01:30:205 (1) - Idk why you're copy pasting already. I think you could try mapping differently...or at least change your slider shapes so they aren't that obvious.
01:39:261 (1,2,3) - Same note as first comment.
01:42:280 (10,1) - Switch NCs for consistency at 00:50:959 (1) and 02:39:639 (1)
02:54:733 (1) - Remove spinner and end it where easy ends?

Ultimate:
00:16:054 (6,3,5) - The overlap here doesn't look too good :( Maybe find another pattern?
01:50:205 (10) - Use .75x? Same reason like I mentioned in hard. You could make the red points closer instead if you want
02:39:261 (1) - ._. You're almost at the end D: Maybe you don't need to copy paste?
02:54:733 (1) - Remove spinner and end where easy ends?
Topic Starter
Dino99

Raging Bull wrote:

All these are suggestions.

General:
Add some tags? Maybe the album name? Ok~ I'll try to find it
I think kiai time sounds better at 00:50:959, 01:42:280, and 02:39:639 since she sings a lot more stronger at that part.no..

Basic:
00:53:978 (1,2,3) - Is this suppose to be a blanket? It doesn't look that nice. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/166835 I think it's ok
01:33:978 (2) - I would remove one repeat and add a note at 01:36:242 and NC to follow your NCing pattern at 00:44:922 (1).no...
02:07:940 (3,1) - The overlap here doesn't look to appealing. Perhaps you could move 1 somewhere else? Fixed
02:20:016 (3) - Minus one repeat and add note with NC at 02:21:525? Same reason as second suggestion no...

Medium:
00:50:582 (6) - Removing a repeat and adding a note at the next downbeat with NC sounds better to me imo. It starts the next verse that's why.no...
01:09:073 (1) - This repeat feels awkward since it doesn't follow anything compared to 01:10:582 (2). I'm not sure what you could do but just pointing it out in case you wanted an opinion or so. ><............
02:06:431 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/1? I think the note appears fast after spinner for beginners. Shortening the spinner gives enough recovery time for beginners to hit next note.Fixed
02:12:469 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know, this kinda feels hard for me since it's kinda fast sliders. Perhaps replace 2,4 with 1 note? Idk. Go give it a try and see if you like it.no...
02:27:186 (6) - Like the first suggestion. I think it would be better place to NC.no..
02:54:733 (1) - o.o 10 seconds of spinning. Maybe just remove the spinner and end it where easy ends? The place where easy ends sounds pretty nice too.But I really like this spinner at the end...=w= I'll think about it....

Difficult:
00:47:940 (1,2,3) - The blanket could be better. Try using approach circle as a guide http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/166839 I'll try to do better.
00:58:884 (9) - Maybe .75x? Using .5x and crunched up slider seems like a hold slider. I don't mind hold sliders tbh, but I think .75 would be better since it still has the same effect, but just slightly faster.no...
01:30:205 (1) - Idk why you're copy pasting already. I think you could try mapping differently...or at least change your slider shapes so they aren't that obvious.OK....I'll try
01:39:261 (1,2,3) - Same note as first comment.Same as the first..
01:42:280 (10,1) - Switch NCs for consistency at 00:50:959 (1) and 02:39:639 (1)no...
02:54:733 (1) - Remove spinner and end it where easy ends?

Ultimate:
00:16:054 (6,3,5) - The overlap here doesn't look too good :( Maybe find another pattern?no....
01:50:205 (10) - Use .75x? Same reason like I mentioned in hard. You could make the red points closer instead if you want no
02:39:261 (1) - ._. You're almost at the end D: Maybe you don't need to copy paste?OK.. I'll think about it..
02:54:733 (1) - Remove spinner and end where easy ends?
Thank you for modding~ :D
Raging Bull
wahh kudosu please
Topic Starter
Dino99

Raging Bull wrote:

wahh kudosu please
Sorry>< I forgot... :(
DarkRingSystem
:)
When I see Ultimate I think it would be Ultimate XD
he/she is one of my favorite mapper XDD

废话不说了

[Timing]
-10ms is fine to me

[Ultimate]
00:57:186 (1) - don''t overlap, just put it to another place, it will feel better
01:29:827 (X) - add a note ?
02:38:129 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然是在kiai中 但我觉得这两段连打表现力不强 打起来 相比较来说
不太顺手 或许是节奏不太适合 建议通过节奏的变化来表现这一段
02:09:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这一段渐强音效 我不建议 soft 和normal 混用 感觉怪怪的 orz

nice diff ~
[Difficult]
02:13:978 (1,2,3,4,5) - 结尾 节奏变化一下 会好玩许多
02:45:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ 这里也是 你也可以尝试一下 XD

[Medium]

Fine

[Basic]
01:19:639 (2) - 谜之距离

Good song! Good map! and Good luck XD~
Topic Starter
Dino99

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:)
When I see Ultimate I think it would be Ultimate XD
he/she is one of my favorite mapper XDD.......這是我編的....難度名稱改了= = 會被誤認....

废话不说了

[Timing]
-10ms is fine to me

[Ultimate]
00:57:186 (1) - don''t overlap, just put it to another place, it will feel better Fixed
01:29:827 (X) - add a note ?
02:38:129 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然是在kiai中 但我觉得这两段连打表现力不强 打起来 相比较来说
不太顺手 或许是节奏不太适合 建议通过节奏的变化来表现这一段 再試試...
02:09:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这一段渐强音效 我不建议 soft 和normal 混用 感觉怪怪的 orz 沒混用ㄚ... :?

nice diff ~
[Difficult]
02:13:978 (1,2,3,4,5) - 结尾 节奏变化一下 会好玩许多 OK~
02:45:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ 这里也是 你也可以尝试一下 XDOK

[Medium]

Fine

[Basic]
01:19:639 (2) - 谜之距离Fixed

Good song! Good map! and Good luck XD~
Thank you for modding~ :D
Beren
你好

[General]
用S音效的部分适当加whistle

[SB]
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,123412,123790,0.95392,0
改成
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,123412,123790,1,0

[Basic]
01:24:167 (1) - 尾部加finish

[Medium]
01:09:073 (1) - 不合拍
01:10:582 (2) - ^
01:17:374 (1) - 加finish
01:17:752 (2) - ^
01:18:129 (1) - 减finish

[Difficult]
fine

[Extreme]
fine

good luck~
Topic Starter
Dino99

Beren wrote:

你好

[General]
用S音效的部分适当加whistle

[SB]
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,123412,123790,0.95392,0
改成
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,123412,123790,1,0

[Basic]
01:24:167 (1) - 尾部加finish

[Medium]
01:09:073 (1) - 不合拍
01:10:582 (2) - ^
01:17:374 (1) - 加finish
01:17:752 (2) - ^
01:18:129 (1) - 减finish

[Difficult]
fine

[Extreme]
fine

good luck~
Fixed~ Thx :D
bakabaka
nice map!

mod in irc xP
Shiki
let's go!

[Basic]
00:14:733 (1,2) - 这两个的clap我觉得太早了 我感觉应该在00:26:808以后再放clap
00:20:771 (1,2) - ^
00:26:808 - 从这里开始音量有点吵 我感觉这段还不需要100%, 85%就可以了
01:18:884 (1,2) - 这两个间距太近了 把(1)换个位置如何??
01:18:129 - 音量用85%或90% 这段太响了
02:10:205 (2,3,4) - 我感觉这几个头部都可以闪光 要不然感觉不协调

[Medium]
前面的clap同上 00:26:808之后再放clap
00:26:808 - 音量85%
00:44:733 (x) - 这里加一个note 用60%的音量
00:58:507 (3) - 尾部的clap去掉?? 我感觉和finish叠在一起不好听
01:09:073 (1,2) - 这两个的折返那里我感觉加clap有点别扭 clap移到尾部 我感觉好一点
01:17:374 (1,2) - 这两个加上clap?
01:36:054 (x) - 同00:44:733

[Difficult]
前面的clap同上 00:26:808之后再放clap
00:26:808 - 音量85%
01:15:299 (1,5) - 这两个加whistle??
02:38:129 (1) - New combo here?
这个diff应该和前面的几个一起在02:48:695结束
后面的那个spinner我感觉有点多余

[Extreme]
前面的clap同上 00:26:808之后再放clap
00:24:544 (3) - 前面加whistle??
00:56:714 (6,7,1) - 我觉得短slider接跳不好 玩起来容易按慢 把短slider换成点或者repeat slider
02:06:431 (1) - New combo?
关于后面的spinner意见与[Difficult]一样.

lol 背景我一开始还以为是windows xp的蓝天白云

:) Good map~~ ☆~
Topic Starter
Dino99

bakabaka wrote:

nice map!

mod in irc xP
Thx~ All fixed
Topic Starter
Dino99

Shiki wrote:

let's go!

[Basic]
00:14:733 (1,2) - 这两个的clap我觉得太早了 我感觉应该在00:26:808以后再放clap Fixed
00:20:771 (1,2) - ^
00:26:808 - 从这里开始音量有点吵 我感觉这段还不需要100%, 85%就可以了
01:18:884 (1,2) - 这两个间距太近了 把(1)换个位置如何?? Fixed
01:18:129 - 音量用85%或90% 这段太响了
02:10:205 (2,3,4) - 我感觉这几个头部都可以闪光 要不然感觉不协调

[Medium]
前面的clap同上 00:26:808之后再放clap NO..
00:26:808 - 音量85%
00:44:733 (x) - 这里加一个note 用60%的音量
00:58:507 (3) - 尾部的clap去掉?? 我感觉和finish叠在一起不好听 Fixed
01:09:073 (1,2) - 这两个的折返那里我感觉加clap有点别扭 clap移到尾部 我感觉好一点 Fixed
01:17:374 (1,2) - 这两个加上clap? Fixed
01:36:054 (x) - 同00:44:733

[Difficult]
前面的clap同上 00:26:808之后再放clap
00:26:808 - 音量85%
01:15:299 (1,5) - 这两个加whistle?? Fixed
02:38:129 (1) - New combo here?
这个diff应该和前面的几个一起在02:48:695结束
后面的那个spinner我感觉有点多余 ><我真的很想要那個轉盤....:3333

[Extreme]
前面的clap同上 00:26:808之后再放clap
00:24:544 (3) - 前面加whistle?? Fixed
00:56:714 (6,7,1) - 我觉得短slider接跳不好 玩起来容易按慢 把短slider换成点或者repeat slider
02:06:431 (1) - New combo? Fixed
关于后面的spinner意见与[Difficult]一样.

lol 背景我一开始还以为是windows xp的蓝天白云 :3

:) Good map~~ ☆~
謝了!!~~@@ :D :D
vivicat
Hi~
All suggestion :)

[Basic]
fine.

[Medium]
00:16:620(3,4,5) - right 1 grid
01:38:507(5) - 尾部向上一格 横过来?
02:13:978(5) - 两个白点没对称喔
02:28:318(2) - left 1 grid
02:29:450(2) - right 1 grid

[Extreme]
01:28:695(1) - clap?
02:03:978(1) - 开头和最结尾whistle?
02:04:733(1,3) - ^
02:05:488(1,3) - ^

[Difficult]
01:25:676(7) - nc
02:04:733(1) - 开头和最结尾whistle?

nice map~good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Dino99

vivicat wrote:

Hi~
All suggestion :)

[Basic]
fine. ;)

[Medium]
00:16:620(3,4,5) - right 1 grid ~Fixed~
01:38:507(5) - 尾部向上一格 横过来?~Fixed~
02:13:978(5) - 两个白点没对称喔 ~Fixed~
02:28:318(2) - left 1 grid ~Fixed~
02:29:450(2) - right 1 grid ~Fixed~

[Extreme]
01:28:695(1) - clap? ~Fixed~
02:03:978(1) - 开头和最结尾whistle? ~Fixed~
02:04:733(1,3) - ^ ~Fixed~
02:05:488(1,3) - ^ ~Fixed~

[Difficult]
01:25:676(7) - nc ~Fixed~
02:04:733(1) - 开头和最结尾whistle? ~Fixed~

nice map~good luck ;)
Wow~~@@ All ~Fixed~

Thank you very much~ :D :D :D
Nymph
request from ingame~

General:
Please enable the display epilepsy warning,because the storyboard really hurt eyes.

Basic:
nothing to say.

Medium:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:17:374 (1,2,1) - I prefer you don't stack them here..

Difficult:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:56:997 (1) - Huh huge jump, I suggest to move it nearer.
01:24:167 (1) - same as above. just confused me, I just wonder, why other stuffs go with the distance snap,but only 00:56:997 and here goes with a big jump?


Extreme:
nothing want to nazi about.

最后只是随便一提……这闪光SB弄的我MOD完这个图 头都是痛的
DarknessAngel
[Extream]

01:34:922(x) - Add a note?

那個讓一整圈然後DS又不相同的排法,現在很少人用了...(因為打起來太困難而且不舒服)



就這樣,我沒什麼好說的
當我看到上一個MOD的人(我很喜歡他的MOD!)挑這麼少錯誤
我就知道我啥都挑不出來啊~
歌很好聽,加油RANKED吧
Topic Starter
Dino99

Nymph wrote:

request from ingame~

General:
Please enable the display epilepsy warning,because the storyboard really hurt eyes.

Basic:
nothing to say.

Medium:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:17:374 (1,2,1) - I prefer you don't stack them here..

Difficult:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:56:997 (1) - Huh huge jump, I suggest to move it nearer.
01:24:167 (1) - same as above. just confused me, I just wonder, why other stuffs go with the distance snap,but only 00:56:997 and here goes with a big jump?


Extreme:
nothing want to nazi about.

最后只是随便一提……这闪光SB弄的我MOD完这个图 头都是痛的
><~All fixed~
Topic Starter
Dino99

DarknessAngel wrote:

[Extream]

01:34:922(x) - Add a note?

那個讓一整圈然後DS又不相同的排法,現在很少人用了...(因為打起來太困難而且不舒服) lol



就這樣,我沒什麼好說的
當我看到上一個MOD的人(我很喜歡他的MOD!)挑這麼少錯誤
我就知道我啥都挑不出來啊~
歌很好聽,加油RANKED吧
Thx~ :D
Bobo_old
Yo, sorry I haven't modded yet.
Been busy with school work and other projects.
I'll try get around to it asap. Sorry :<


Nvm I have time now. ^^

-Basic-

00:56:997 (1) - Extend this to the red tick.
01:09:073 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:48:318 (1) - Extend this to the red tick.
02:45:676 (1) - Extend this to the red tick.
02:54:733 (1) - Place a spinner here like the other diffs so that all the diffs end at the same time

-Medium-

CS 3

00:27:563 (2,3) - Replace this with a repeat slider like (5).
00:42:280 (2) - Unstack.
00:48:695 (2,3) - Replace with a repeat slider.
02:06:431 (1) - Soft finish.
02:18:884 (2) - Unstack.

-Difficult-

00:58:884 (1) - This looks really ugly, I suggest you un crumple it a bit.
01:42:280 (10) - Start the new combo here like you have in the first kiai?
02:23:224 (5,6) - The spacing made me combo burst the first time I played this, I suggest adding a note at 02:23:412.

-Extreme-

I noticed when you were mapping this the diff was called "Ultimate" Why not rename it to that?

01:50:205 (1) - Uncrumple this a little.
02:49:386 (3) - That way you've done the slider points is unrakable I think... D;

Nice map. :3
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

Yo, sorry I haven't modded yet.
Been busy with school work and other projects.
I'll try get around to it asap. Sorry :<


Nvm I have time now. ^^

-Basic-

00:56:997 (1) - Extend this to the red tick.
01:09:073 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:48:318 (1) - Extend this to the red tick.
02:45:676 (1) - Extend this to the red tick.
02:54:733 (1) - Place a spinner here like the other diffs so that all the diffs end at the same time Fixed

-Medium-

CS 3

00:27:563 (2,3) - Replace this with a repeat slider like (5).
00:42:280 (2) - Unstack.
00:48:695 (2,3) - Replace with a repeat slider.
02:06:431 (1) - Soft finish.
02:18:884 (2) - Unstack.

-Difficult-

00:58:884 (1) - This looks really ugly, I suggest you un crumple it a bit.
01:42:280 (10) - Start the new combo here like you have in the first kiai? Fixed
02:23:224 (5,6) - The spacing made me combo burst the first time I played this, I suggest adding a note at 02:23:412 Fixed

-Extreme-

I noticed when you were mapping this the diff was called "Ultimate" Why not rename it to that? Because have a player named Ultimate... Maybe someone will think this diff is by him :33
01:50:205 (1) - Uncrumple this a little.
02:49:386 (3) - That way you've done the slider points is unrakable I think... D; Really:3

Nice map. :3
Thank you @@~ :D :D
Bobo_old

12BARRY21 wrote:

Because have a player named Ultimate... Maybe someone will think this diff is by him :33
Lolwat really?
Basic
Medium
Difficult
Extreme

People aren't that stupid dw, I still think you should rename it.
Only give kuds for modding or timing help.
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

12BARRY21 wrote:

Because have a player named Ultimate... Maybe someone will think this diff is by him :33
Lolwat really?
Basic
Medium
Difficult
Extreme

People aren't that stupid dw, I still think you should rename it.
It doesn't matter:33 Extreme is good too.... Sorry for my insist
mjw5150
as your req~

[Difficult]
02:23:035 - 这里隔着1拍感觉很怪呢 加个note?

[Extreme]
02:07:752 - 这里加个note 然后spin往后移1/2?

好吧 我承认我酱油了><
Topic Starter
Dino99

mjw5150 wrote:

as your req~

[Difficult]
02:23:035 - 这里隔着1拍感觉很怪呢 加个note?

[Extreme]
02:07:752 - 这里加个note 然后spin往后移1/2?

好吧 我承认我酱油了><
Thx~ :) :) :) :) :)
Deif
Hi there o/

General:

Yeah, I think it's better to have a random pic than having Lindsay's face lololol

Storyboard:

Pretty simple, but it really fits well the melody. I've been checking the OSB file and [Event] section in some difficulties... why they have completely different Flashes effects? o.o If that wasn't intentional, please copy this code in the OSB file and all your diffs:

SPOILER
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,26808,27186,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,38129,38507,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,38884,39261,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,45299,45676,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,58884,59261,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,60016,60771,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,78129,78507,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,89450,89827,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,90205,90582,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,96620,96997,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,102280,102657,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,110205,110582,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,111337,112091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,123412,123790,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,129450,129827,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,130959,131337,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,132469,132846,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,133978,134356,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,134733,135110,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,135488,135865,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,141903,142280,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,147563,147940,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,153978,154356,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,159639,160016,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,167186,167280,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,167374,167469,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,167563,167940,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,168695,169827,1,0

OR, it can be reduced to:

SPOILER
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,26808,27186,1,0
F,0,38129,38507,1,0
F,0,38884,39261,1,0
F,0,45299,45676,1,0
F,0,58884,59261,1,0
F,0,60016,60771,1,0
F,0,78129,78507,1,0
F,0,89450,89827,1,0
F,0,90205,90582,1,0
F,0,96620,96997,1,0
F,0,102280,102657,1,0
F,0,110205,110582,1,0
F,0,111337,112091,1,0
F,0,123412,123790,1,0
F,0,129450,129827,1,0
F,0,130959,131337,1,0
F,0,132469,132846,1,0
F,0,133978,134356,1,0
F,0,134733,135110,1,0
F,0,135488,135865,1,0
F,0,141903,142280,1,0
F,0,147563,147940,1,0
F,0,153978,154356,1,0
F,0,159639,160016,1,0
F,0,167186,167280,1,0
F,0,167374,167469,1,0
F,0,167563,167940,1,0
F,0,168695,169827,1,0

Oh, and if you reduce the effect from "F,0,beginning,end,1,0" to "F,0,beginning,end,0.8,0", or similar... many eyes would be glad ^^

Basic:

Looks great!

Medium:

Looks great!

Difficult:

01:37:186 (2,3,4) - Can you try something different than stacking all those notes-slider?
02:03:224 (1) - Quite hard to hit properly after the break period, but I think that slider is the best option...

Extreme:

02:22:280 (3) - New combo there, the jump is over.

Those are the sliders AIbot doesn't like (and should be changed):
- 01:50:205 (1)
- 02:47:563 (3)


I can only suggest a few things to improve your map, but it's really great. Well done ^^
Megurine Luka
Hi. /me from in game pm

[General]

Seems none
S Clap的声音对我来说有点略响,刚听到的时候被吓了一跳。
http://puu.sh/7Jlq
↑ 帮你降低了音量。如果你也觉得很响的话就用这个吧。

我是觉得你的timing还是需要提前。用25%听medium的01:17:374 (1,2,1,2) 就会听出明显的offset
不知道你有没有改DRS的-10的建议。如果没有的话我觉得-10应该是正确的。如果改过之后还是这样的话我个人建议你再-10左右。
或者你可以找BAT来听听看比较好

[Easy]

fine~

[Normal]

00:58:507 (3) - 多一个折返然后在00:59:450 (x) - 加个到00:59:639的短slider?
02:47:186 (5) - ^


[Hard]

00:42:657 (3) - 还是用弯的slider吧
00:46:431 (6) - 这里之后 用这个节奏试试看
01:50:205 (1) - 第一次打的时候被坑到了。建议加个SB提醒?
02:12:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的Timing off非常明显啊o.o
02:38:129 (4,5,6) - 下移1 grid
02:40:205 (x) - 这里加个circle然后去掉02:40:582 (4)
02:47:752 (x) -

[Insane]

fine
Topic Starter
Dino99

Deif wrote:

Hi there o/

General:

Yeah, I think it's better to have a random pic than having Lindsay's face lololol ><......

Storyboard:

Pretty simple, but it really fits well the melody. I've been checking the OSB file and [Event] section in some difficulties... why they have completely different Flashes effects? o.o If that wasn't intentional, please copy this code in the OSB file and all your diffs: that was intentional :?
SPOILER
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,26808,27186,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,38129,38507,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,38884,39261,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,45299,45676,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,58884,59261,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,60016,60771,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,78129,78507,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,89450,89827,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,90205,90582,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,96620,96997,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,102280,102657,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,110205,110582,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,111337,112091,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,123412,123790,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,129450,129827,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,130959,131337,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,132469,132846,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,133978,134356,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,134733,135110,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,135488,135865,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,141903,142280,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,147563,147940,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,153978,154356,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,159639,160016,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,167186,167280,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,167374,167469,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,167563,167940,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,168695,169827,1,0

OR, it can be reduced to:

SPOILER
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
F,0,26808,27186,1,0
F,0,38129,38507,1,0
F,0,38884,39261,1,0
F,0,45299,45676,1,0
F,0,58884,59261,1,0
F,0,60016,60771,1,0
F,0,78129,78507,1,0
F,0,89450,89827,1,0
F,0,90205,90582,1,0
F,0,96620,96997,1,0
F,0,102280,102657,1,0
F,0,110205,110582,1,0
F,0,111337,112091,1,0
F,0,123412,123790,1,0
F,0,129450,129827,1,0
F,0,130959,131337,1,0
F,0,132469,132846,1,0
F,0,133978,134356,1,0
F,0,134733,135110,1,0
F,0,135488,135865,1,0
F,0,141903,142280,1,0
F,0,147563,147940,1,0
F,0,153978,154356,1,0
F,0,159639,160016,1,0
F,0,167186,167280,1,0
F,0,167374,167469,1,0
F,0,167563,167940,1,0
F,0,168695,169827,1,0

Oh, and if you reduce the effect from "F,0,beginning,end,1,0" to "F,0,beginning,end,0.8,0", or similar... many eyes would be glad ^^ lol...

Basic:

Looks great! Thx~

Medium:

Looks great! Thx~

Difficult:

01:37:186 (2,3,4) - Can you try something different than stacking all those notes-slider? No...
02:03:224 (1) - Quite hard to hit properly after the break period, but I think that slider is the best option... Yes..

Extreme:

02:22:280 (3) - New combo there, the jump is over.

Those are the sliders AIbot doesn't like (and should be changed):
- 01:50:205 (1)
- 02:47:563 (3) Fixed


I can only suggest a few things to improve your map, but it's really great. Well done ^^
~Thanks~ :)
Topic Starter
Dino99

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. /me from in game pm

[General]

Seems none
S Clap的声音对我来说有点略响,刚听到的时候被吓了一跳。 還好啦... :P
http://puu.sh/7Jlq
↑ 帮你降低了音量。如果你也觉得很响的话就用这个吧。再試試吧...

我是觉得你的timing还是需要提前。用25%听medium的01:17:374 (1,2,1,2) 就会听出明显的offset
不知道你有没有改DRS的-10的建议。如果没有的话我觉得-10应该是正确的。如果改过之后还是这样的话我个人建议你再-10左右。
或者你可以找BAT来听听看比较好 恩....在看看=w=

[Easy]

fine~ :)

[Normal]

00:58:507 (3) - 多一个折返然后在00:59:450 (x) - 加个到00:59:639的短slider? no..
02:47:186 (5) - ^ no


[Hard]

00:42:657 (3) - 还是用弯的slider吧 no..
00:46:431 (6) - 这里之后 用这个节奏试试看 我覺得這樣比較好...
01:50:205 (1) - 第一次打的时候被坑到了。建议加个SB提醒?><.... 恩.....晚點再加..
02:12:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的Timing off非常明显啊o.o lol:? :?:
02:38:129 (4,5,6) - 下移1 grid no
02:40:205 (x) - 这里加个circle然后去掉02:40:582 (4) no
02:47:752 (x) - no..

[Insane]

fine
:D :D :D

Thank you @@" :D :D :D
AIR315
Good map~

Star~~~~~~~~~~~

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