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Camellia - Introduction - ENTRANS OF DA JUNGLE [Taiko]

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Nifty
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 6, 2017 at 5:23:42 PM

Artist: Camellia
Title: Introduction - ENTRANS OF DA JUNGLE
Tags: C92 wub invaidas from da jungle neurofunk dnb drum and bass Nwolf
BPM: 172
Filesize: 5368kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.17 stars, 254 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.59 stars, 795 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.37 stars, 173 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.98 stars, 450 notes)
  5. Nwolf's Inner Oni (5.06 stars, 917 notes)
  6. Oni (3.8 stars, 698 notes)
Download: Camellia - Introduction - ENTRANS OF DA JUNGLE
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Ladies Night
SΞCTOR #712
M4M Request / Taiko

General Suggestions
  • Inconsistent Values
  1. 00:00:720 - Not entirely sure why your entire mapset except Nwolf's Inner Oni has two stacked Timing/Inherited Points here that have different Volume values and don't really affect any notes for the most part.
  2. 00:41:185 - You could remove the red Timing Point here for the rest of the mapset like Nwolf did for his difficulty for consistency sake and considering there's no BPM shift or need to reset the metronome here.
    Tags
  3. You can replace Drumstep with Neurofunk since the first drop is Jungle (Old School D'n'b) and the second drop sounds like Neurofunk.
Kantan
    1. 01:07:348 (41,42) - CTRL+G these two notes, the k would be better off emphasizing the vocal samples here like earlier at 01:04:558 (37,38) instead of switching it up.
    2. 01:25:837 (68) - Note here could be a Don finisher like you did earlier at 01:14:674 (53) since the bassline kinda repeats itself with the vocals.
    3. 01:58:279 - Add k, could make this pattern here a 5-plet considering it's the Kiai section and build onto the vocal samples like you did earlier at 01:24:441 and also the synthesized stabs here don't really appear anywhere else so it's rather apt.
    4. 01:59:325 - Another Don finisher you can add since the bassline repeats itself along with the vocals.
Futsuu
  1. 01:08:744 (54) - Change to k, would build onto the rhythm from the kat before and contrast it from the beats coming up at 01:09:092.
  2. 01:25:837 (98) - Could change this into a Don finisher for more impact if you feel like it.
  3. 01:59:325 (183) - Same thing like above about the Don finisher.
Muzukashii
  1. 01:25:662 (145) - Change to k, would emphasize the higher pitch from the vocal sample and the instruments playing in the background.
  2. 01:25:837 - Could make this a Don finisher for more impact and it would add onto my previous suggestion.
  3. 01:59:325 (303) - Same suggestion as mentioned above about the Don finisher.
Oni
  1. 01:18:773 (161) - Change to k, would better emphasize the don next to it with the bass by contrasting it with a kat here.
  2. 01:25:837 (197) - Change to Don finisher, would better emphasize the bassline along with the vocals here since it repeats.
  3. 01:29:936 (219) - Change to k, would better represent the bass if you contrast the don next to it with a kat here.
  4. 01:59:325 (107) - Can change this into a Don finisher for more impact if you wished.
Topic Starter
Nifty
Voyage's mod: response
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Voyage wrote:

SΞCTOR #712
M4M Request / Taiko

General Suggestions
  • Inconsistent Values
  1. 00:00:720 - Not entirely sure why your entire mapset except Nwolf's Inner Oni has two stacked Timing/Inherited Points here that have different Volume values and don't really affect any notes for the most part. It's to make the barlines in the intro as slow as the barlines in the beginning of the map, I find those 200 bpm barlines look stupid when the beginning is so slow
  2. 00:41:185 - You could remove the red Timing Point here for the rest of the mapset like Nwolf did for his difficulty for consistency sake and considering there's no BPM shift or need to reset the metronome here. o ty for reminding me
    Tags
  3. You can replace Drumstep with Neurofunk since the first drop is Jungle (Old School D'n'b) and the second drop sounds like Neurofunk. of course, I'm kinda new to the genre
Kantan
    1. 01:07:348 (41,42) - CTRL+G these two notes, the k would be better off emphasizing the vocal samples here like earlier at 01:04:558 (37,38) instead of switching it up. sure
    2. 01:25:837 (68) - Note here could be a Don finisher like you did earlier at 01:14:674 (53) since the bassline kinda repeats itself with the vocals.
    3. 01:58:279 - Add k, could make this pattern here a 5-plet considering it's the Kiai section and build onto the vocal samples like you did earlier at 01:24:441 and also the synthesized stabs here don't really appear anywhere else so it's rather apt.
    4. 01:59:325 - Another Don finisher you can add since the bassline repeats itself along with the vocals.
      accepted all, added same finishers as in futsuu (I modded that first for some reason)
[b]Futsuu
  1. 01:08:744 (54) - Change to k, would build onto the rhythm from the kat before and contrast it from the beats coming up at 01:09:092. oke
  2. 01:25:837 (98) - Could change this into a Don finisher for more impact if you feel like it.
  3. 01:59:325 (183) - Same thing like above about the Don finisher. added a couple more finishers after the kiai as well
Muzukashii
  1. 01:25:662 (145) - Change to k, would emphasize the higher pitch from the vocal sample and the instruments playing in the background.
  2. 01:25:837 - Could make this a Don finisher for more impact and it would add onto my previous suggestion.
  3. 01:59:325 (303) - Same suggestion as mentioned above about the Don finisher.
    accepted all, cool and nice
Oni
  1. 01:18:773 (161) - Change to k, would better emphasize the don next to it with the bass by contrasting it with a kat here.
  2. 01:25:837 (197) - Change to Don finisher, would better emphasize the bassline along with the vocals here since it repeats.
  3. 01:29:936 (219) - Change to k, would better represent the bass if you contrast the don next to it with a kat here.
  4. 01:59:325 (107) - Can change this into a Don finisher for more impact if you wished.
    all accepted again, you damn ace

applied finisher and consistency changes to inner and stuff too, ty
Kondou-Shinichi
powa of da wildane when
Topic Starter
Nifty

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

powa of da wildane when
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