03:07:417 (187417|3) - How about deleteing this? // This feels better for me
// Yes that's right03:31:109 (211109|0) - expand this till 03:31:263 // following the sound
// fixed03:33:263 (213263|3) - move to column 1 // just personal preference.
// donee03:33:417 (213417|1) - expand this till 03:33:648 // following the sound
// fixed this too~03:33:724 (213724|2) - move to column 3 // this too. just personal preference.
// prefer move this 03:33:417 (213417|2) - to col 2~03:40:263 (220263|1) - This has no sound. /* Compare this to 03:42:724 (222724|2) */ Consider adding drum hitsound or delete
// noo, there's a sound here, try to hear in 25% playback04:18:186 (258186|3,258186|1,258186|0,258340|3,258340|1,258494|3,258494|2,258494|0,258648|2,258648|0,258801|3,258801|1,258801|0,258955|3,258955|1,259109|3,259109|2,259109|0) - This part is nice but... 04:19:109 (259109|3,259109|2,259109|0,259263|2,259263|0,259417|3,259417|1,259417|0,259571|3,259571|1,259724|3,259724|2,259724|0,259878|2,259878|0,260032|3,260032|1,260032|0,260186|3,260186|1,260340|3,260340|2,260340|0) - I think you should make variation on this part. It feels awkward for me, considering change in the vocal.
// yeaaaa re-arranged that part~02:38:724 (158724|1) - and 02:48:571 - make them same please :v
// done :vGood map! But, I feel awkwardness in some parts. (because of the SV and flow) I didn't mention it because it could be just personal issues. You received and accepted lots of suggestions from various people's mods. So if you haven't test-played your map recently, it would be nice to play your map again! I just mentioned based on my experience. (If you've already played your map after accepting mod, slab me hard
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